Review Request 2.2.4

[Kisaik]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: All Shapes and Sizes
City/Area: Yaralon Arena
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, more or less. I tried to finish it on my own. Prae said it's okay to submit.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Kisaik

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[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (1/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (2/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (3/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (4/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (5/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (6/7)
[*]Blades: All Shapes and Sizes (7/7)
[*]Tactics: All Shapes and Sizes (1/1)

Skillplay

Blades: Novice
Rupturing: Competent
Tactics: Untrained
Acrobatics: Expert
Endurance: Novice
Unarmed Combat: Competent

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Oram Mednix]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: You make me feel so young…
City/Area: Scalvoris<Surrounding Waters and Landmarks
Notes/Warnings: Animal cruelty. Ugly mole rats.
Skills Used: Trap Making(Competent), Hunting(Novice), Fieldcraft(Novice), Detection(Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

[Discipline] Don’t skip steps in a process just because you’re frustrated.
[Trap Making] Making and setting a treadle snare
[Detection] Spotting a naked mole rat burrow
[Hunting] Using poison on quarry
[Fieldcraft] Stow food well away from your sleeping area if you want to keep critters out
[Hunting] How to skin a rat or a mole rat

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +1 point
Wealth Points: n/a, Wealth thread for Ashan 720
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Sintih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: First steps of a new trial
City/Area: Viden, Student Accommodation Housing
Notes/Warnings: Can be interpreted as a little depressive, perhaps?
Skills Used: Rupturing (75/11), Meditation (10/3), Medicine (0/1)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Location: Viden Student Accommodation
Location: Viden Student Accommodation: Student flat layout
Rupturing: Phasing to see the outside
Meditation: Cloud gazing to pass the time
Combat: Unarmed: The straight left punch
Medicine: Nursing a sprained wrist

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Scraped knuckles on the left hand, sprained left wrist
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: I don't think so as the magic usage is mostly passive. But I won't say no if you insist.

[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Quacian Botany: Shoots in the Stonework
City/Area: Emea/Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Eh not much. Some gore. He's lucid in dreaming, use of governing.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

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[*]Blades: Shoots in the Stonework (1/1)
[*]Endurance: Shoots in the Stonework (1/1)
[*]Intelligence: Quacian Botany: Shoots in the Stonework (1/2)
[*]Intelligence: Quacian Botany: Shoots in the Stonework (2/2)
[*]Acrobatics: Quacian Botany: Shoots in the Stonework (1/2)
[*]Acrobatics: Quacian Botany: Shoots in the Stonework (2/2)

Dreamwalking: Governing:  Can go awry without experience.
Dreamwalking: Lucidity:  You CAN get injured.
Dreamwalking: Governing:  Can stop time in the dream, sort of.

Skillplay

Whip: Master
Blades: Competent
Tactics; Expert
Acrobatics: Untrained
Endurance: Competent
Strength: Competent
Detection: Competent
Intelligence: Competent

Loot/Losses: Information, may be good or bad.
Injuries/Overstepping: wound on his left shoulder.
Renown: none
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Blood of a Lotharro, Part 4
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: The research for the Lotharro potion is already finished. The potion was delivered to the Order of the Adunih here. Since I have so many empty placeholders (which is something that I dislike), I decided to play with it a bit more regardless and write about what Doran's day was like when he worked on that particular potion. The thread might be a little on the short side.

Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/137k), Master Research (151x/71k), Master Discipline (151x/36k), Expert Endurance (76x/37k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Competent Etiquette (26x/32k), Competent Meditation (26x/11k), Competent Writing (26x/11k), Novice Resistance (10x/4k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline x2
Endurance x1
Meditation x1
Resistance x1
Writing x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Sintih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: First trial of school
City/Area: Viden, Institute of Arcana
Notes/Warnings: First day of Academy orientation
Skills Used: Rupturing (75/11)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Location: The Prime Atheneum
Location: Institute of Arcana / The Griseous Wing
Viden Academy: Rules and Regulations. All of them. Every. Single. One.
Rupturing: Blinking as far as the eye can see
Rupturing: Phasing to check the contents of a closed room
Professor Avan (NPC): Professor of Rupturing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: I don't think so as the magic usage is mostly passive. But I won't say no if you insist.

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[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: North Star
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Some bad language
Skills Used:
Deception (Expert), Intelligence (Expert), Psychology (Novice)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Deception x2
Intelligence x2
Psychology x2

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Martyn: Back in Westguard and Safe
NPC Jessye: Working in a Tavern
Westguard: Decimated But Recovering

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[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Real Page Turner
City/Area: Quacia, the Gleam
Notes/Warnings: Boring Grind thread. Heavy on exposition and internal thoughts.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

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[*]Hone: Rune of Strength:  Three lines, roughly in the shape of a heart.
[*]Hone: Rune of Strength:  Applied to the core of a body, can improve general mobility and flexibility.
[*]Hone: Rune of Touch: Useful for turning pages, who'd have thought?
[*]Hone: Touch Trigger:  Can be used to activate a rune by... touching it.
[*]Research:  Arcana:  Hone Grimoires are a treasure trove for the fledgling mage.
[*]Writing:  Tracing runes on paper before channeling them upon the body.

Skillplay

Discipline: Expert
Hone: Novice
Meditation: Expert
Research: Untrained
Writing: Untrained.

Loot/Losses:
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: Yes Hone xp please.

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[Rei'sari]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Starter Quest] Retreating into Music
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Musical Instrument; Percussion (glass flute) (Expert; 76/250 exp, 43 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Caregiving: seeing a family member suffering is worse than seeing the suffering of a stranger especially when there is little you can do to help ease that suffering
Musical Instrument; percussion (glass flute): x 5

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for giving a performance to her sister and friend while practicing, and impressing her sister with her skill
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Woe]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alms for the Affluent
City/Area: Quacia, Gleam
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

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[*]Persuasion: Alms for the Affluent (1/2)
[*]Persuasion: Alms for the Affluent (2/2)
[*]Rhetoric: Alms for the Affluent (1/2)
[*]Rhetoric: Alms for the Affluent (2/2)
[*]Writing: Alms for the Affluent (1/2)
[*]Writing: Alms for the Affluent (2/2)

Skillplay

Persuasion: Competent
Rhetoric: Untrained
Writing: Untrained
Tactics: Expert

Loot/Losses: stack of notes and list of potential contacts.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: 5-10 For seeking/getting a new job with a high ranking official.
Wealth Points: -1 wp for courier services.
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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