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[Frontier] Staghawk pt. 2 - The Welcome

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The air was silent. That was unusual for the grasslands. Perhaps the plains were as wary of this newcomer as the Keha’al tribe, and as the young hunter that followed them. Whatever the case, there was a tension to this silence thick enough to cut with a knife.

Jinyel, the Keha’al leader had told him. The stranger is looking for his grandson: Jinyel.

Jinyel had never given the Keha’al his name. His tongue had been too twisted when he first met them, and now the name ‘Loshova’ was as comfortable as an old glove. This stranger from the Empire, he knew Jinyel’s name. Had Jinyel once given it to him? Would this stranger recognize him?

Would he recognise this stranger?

Three winged kahrunowak flew overhead. With an unknown Avriel, it never hurt to have more warriors in the air. The Avriel were known slavers, and the fact he came from Raskalarn’s land didn’t absolve him of that. Raskalar held slaves, too.

The meeting point waited between two low hills. All around, the grasslands stretched into golden infinity. The kahrunowak circled, marking their destination, meanwhile the ground-bound kahrun carried their riders to meet this lonely traveler.

The stranger was easy to spot amongst the grasses ― partly because he was Avriel, but mostly because he was Imperial. The black clothing of Raskalarn’s followers stood against the gold like obsidian against sand. Jinyel waited for some flash of remembrance, for something to stir in his heart where his wrecked dreamscape used to be, but there was nothing. Not as they drew closer, not as he saw the stranger’s features, not even when the stranger turned to look at them.

When the Avriel looked at him, Jinyel felt nothing at all.

“Hail!” called the Loktul, leader of the Keha’al. “At ease, stranger. We shall raise no weapon until you do.”

The Avriel made a chuffing sound and scanned the assembled group. He saw the Keha’al to Jinyel’s left, then to his right. And then his eye passed over Jinyel without even a pause of recognition.

“You are kind,” said the Avriel, his Common thickly accented with Atvian. The accent of a native Imperial, not an immigrant from Athart. “If you wish, I am happy to peace-bind my swords to prove I mean no harm. I honor your hospitality.”

Swords, plural. The Avriel carried a rapier on one side, a shortsword on the other, and both handles were well-used. Despite the dust, the man’s traveling clothes were cut sharp and dyed dark. Black dye was expensive to acquire and difficult to use; no one would wear black by accident. It was almost a military uniform, Jinyel thought, but with no chains or other signs of rank.

“Your offer is accepted,” said the Loktul, “and appreciated. You and you, see to his weapons.”

Instead of allowing the Avriel to bind his own weapons, two warriors dismounted to do the binding for him. The Avriel didn’t blink an eye as they invaded his space.

“Your name is Vex, is it not?” continued the Loktul. “I understand you are looking for someone.”

“Yes,” said the stranger. “Vex Halladrin is my name. I’m looking for my grandson, Jinyel.”

“You are welcome to rest with us,” said the Loktul. “But we have neither seen nor heard of another Avriel in these past seasons.”

“Oh, he doesn’t take after my good looks,” Vex assured them. “Takes more after his grandmother. Dark hair, Jinyel has.”

The Loktul blinked. “We… have seen many people with dark hair. We have many people with dark hair. None who are named Jinyel, however.”

“I understand. It’s a vague description. My grandson isn’t very good at standing out.”

Jinyel resisted the urge to raise an eyebrow. Could this be a misunderstanding? He’d never met anyone else with the same name as him, but that didn’t mean there wasn’t another Jinyel somewhere in the world. He barely remembered anything of the year he’d lived in the Empire ― if he’d somehow gained a grandfather in that time, surely such a grandfather would recognize him.

And yet.

The Avriel shook out his wings, looking once more over the Keha’al welcome party. Once again his gaze passed uncuriously over Jinyel.

“I would be most grateful for your hospitality,” said Vex, “though I cannot stay overlong. And who knows? You may not know of my grandson, but perhaps your stories and friendship will show me the way to him.”

The Loktul took one more glance at the newly peace-bound weapons, then nodded. “Fate deals a strange hand these days. Come, Vex of the East. Return to our camp, and we will see what can be done for you.”



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Jinyel rode close to the Loktul. The Avriel flew overhead, flanked by two of the kahrunowak riders. Every now and then Vex glanced down at the kahrun riders on the ground, and Jinyel felt the traveling party tense every time. Despite the polite words, they didn’t trust this Avriel. They hadn’t trusted Jinyel, either, when he first came to them, but this was different. This stranger was dressed as a Raskalarn agent.

Only when he knew the Avriel wasn’t looking did the Loktul ask Jinyel:

“You’ve never heard of the name Vex Halladrin?”

Never, Jinyel replied in sign language. His clothes are almost military.

“What do you mean by ‘almost’ military?”

The coat. The boots. The colors. Except there are no ranks. Then, so hesitantly that even the Loktul could tell something was off, Jinyel asked, Did he pass through any villages on the way here?

“Villages? I haven’t heard the scouts make mention, and he didn’t say―”

The Loktul shut his mouth when Vex Halladrin dipped out of the sky to soar low over them. The Avriel’s golden, hawk-like eyes flicked between the Loktul and Jinyel’s hands. Something flashed in those eyes. Light? Sparks? It was there and gone again before Jinyel could tell exactly what it was.

“It’s pleasing to see the common sign language so widespread,” Vex called down to them. “Alas, I do not know the language myself, but am close to those who do. Are there many in your tribe who speak it?”

Jinyel said nothing, signed or otherwise.

The Loktul took the development in stride, and called up to the Avriel, “Many hunters have a basic understanding, to communicate in ways no prey will hear.”

“Ah, hunting. Yes.” Vex smiled. “My grandson hunts, you know. Such an honorable task, to feed one’s family. That young man by your side must be quite a hunter, for his hands to move so quickly.”

A chill passed down Jinyel’s spine. Before coming here, he had discarded his old clothes to dress in borrowed Keha’al leathers, bright blue and green. Jinyel looked Keha’al. Didn’t he?

Was he overthinking Vex’s interest, or had Vex just tried to prod him?

“Indeed.” The Loktul was either growing more comfortable, or he was very good at pretending to grow comfortable. “His hands are some of our quickest. Our camp is just over this ridge. Return to our skyriders and they will loud you to your hosts.”

“Oh, will I not be hosted by anyone here?” asked Vex. “Nevermind, that was a presumptuous question. I suppose I am overeager to meet new people, and to find my grandson. It’s possible he might be going by a different name nowadays. I should greatly like to learn more about your people, Loktul, and about that young hunter at your side. I am unfortunately ill-trained in the art of animal pursuit, and his signs are so fluid. Perhaps he can give me instruction? I may be old, but I’m always ready to learn.”

Have you ever been to the Village of Running Water? Jinyel signed at the Avriel.

The Avriel saw the gesture, but didn’t respond to it. The Loktul didn’t see it, and everyone else on the ground was focused on their flying guest. Perhaps Vex was the only one who had noticed it at all.

“Here,” called the Loktul. “We are home.”

The camp welcomed them much in the same was the grasslands had ― quietly, and with the quiet tension of polite hosts who wondered if they were offering hospitality to a hungry tiger. But the Keha’al were nothing if not hospitable, even to hungry tigers.

On the ground, the kahrun riders halted. The skyriders flew to the elk herds, but Vex had no mount to settle. He flew down to down the groundriders.

He flew down to Jinyel.

“Oh dear,” said Vex as Jinyel began the slow process of dismounting. “Are you alright? You look terribly pained.”

For some reason, his concern sounded genuine. The grass stirred as the Avriel landed, approached, and reached out a hand―

“Don’t touch me.” It came from Jinyel as a snarl.

Vex recoiled. The Keha’al froze. There was a moment of stillness as all of them traded glances, wondering if the tension had finally broken. If the difference in manners between Avriel and human was about to break this delicate tension.

The Avriel’s eyes narrowed. Not in anger, Jinyel thought, because that would have been too easy to escape.

No. Vex’s frown was one of fascination.

“Well, well,” Vex murmured, so soft that only Jinyel could hear. “What big teeth you have, my dear.”

Eight wolf-like canines glittered from Jinyel’s mouth, trapping a foot-long tongue like a snake behind bars. The mouth of a grafter. The undeniable proof of magic.

Instead of dismounting, Jinyel spurred his kahrun toward the other side of camp. With a sign against his chest that only Vex could see, he replied:

All the better to bite you with.



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I wasn't sure how Jinyel would react to the reveal in the prior thread, so it was a treat to get to read about it here. I think all told Jinyel could've stood to be more paranoid about the Avriel's intentions, especially as he doesn't remember him.

Nevertheless, he's sufficiently brusque with the birdman, even though Vex seems fairly charismatic for his kind. I like the cat and mouse game of Jinyel trying to maneuver out of any such pairing with Vex, in a hunting tutorial or otherwise. It adds a sense of tension to this thread certainly.

It was clever to disguise his own sign which was meant for Vex, to tell him he was willing to bite him with those 'large teeth'. Although I'm unclear on whether Vex knows common sign. Either way, I wouldn't imagine the sign for biting is hard to interpret.

Great writing, looking forward to the continuation.

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