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[Frontier] We Fly In Hindsight

Jinyel had planned to one day teach Elraya how to fly. The thairoch still believed itself crippled, and followed Jinyel through rocks, trees, and grassland with his wing-knuckles on the ground and his head held joyfully high. Jinyel had planned to stretch those wings out, or to teach Elraya to mimic motions and then flap his own arms, or any other number of other things to get the thairoch back in the sky. Jinyel had planned on having time.

He had not planned on wolves. Which was his own fault, really.

Jinyel and Elraya were an hour’s walk out from the village, on the hunt for spring fruits and vegetables now fully in bloom. Jinyel had laid traps the day before, and returned today to fight his traps torn to bloody shreds. That was the only warning he got before Elraya let out a screech of fury.

Because Elraya was much bigger than Jinyel, the young hunter was briefly spared the attention of predators. The thairoch was both injured and fattened from trials spent in recovery, which made him a much sweeter choice of prey. Jinyel had bow in hand and arrow to string before he’d even come back in sighting distance of Elraya, with twelve more arrows in the quiver if needed.

He’d left Elraya in a clearing, and two wolves let out startled barks when he emerged behind them.

Five wolves that he could see. Elraya in the center of the clearing, head low with wings and mane puffed out for intimidation. All wolves arranged in a circle around the thairoch, except for the two which had been startled by Jinyel’s arrival. Those two were young, unscarred, and cast confused glances at their elders searching for guidance on what do.

Their confusion lasted long enough for Jinyel to sprint past them at full speed. Another, older wolf leaped half-heartedly after him, but Elraya’s warning bellow was enough to keep that wolf at a distance.

Elraya accepted Jinyel into his personal space, and Jinyel clambered onto the thairoch’s back. Two more melted out of the forest to make seven. Now that he was in the middle of the pack, Jinyel saw a hundred other things he could have done instead of sprint into the middle of a hunting circle ― he could have climbed a tree, shot from safety, caused a distraction. Now he was unable to do any of it.

He only had thirteen arrows total. Against seven wolves, that offered few chances for mistakes. They were all arranged ten to twenty yards away, so they weren’t longshots, but the wolves also zigzagged as they tried to figure out how dangerous Elraya was. They had probably never hunted a thairoch before, considering most thairoch could fly away before a hunt ever got this far.

They had never hunted a thairoch before. The thought doused Jinyel like cold water ― We still have advantages ― and he managed to see through his panic. Wolves preferred to hunt running prey, and to attack from behind. Because Jinyel was perched on Elraya’s back, the thairoch could face the front while Jinyel faced the rear. That gave them a full circle of awareness.

Two of the older wolves herded their youngers sideways, to create a wide open spot in their circle. If Elraya had been a deer, that circle would have been a trap ― a direction to run, so the wolves could pounce on the flanks. But Elraya had also never been hunted by wolves before, and didn’t realize what they were doing, so he dug his knuckles into the ground and refused to move.

One of the youngers tried to attack from behind. It leaped onto Elraya’s back, and Jinyel loosed his arrow with a panicked yell. It found the wolf between the collarbone and shoulderblade, not a fatal shot, but one which crippled a foreleg.

The wolf tried to retreat with an agonized yelp, and through a haze of terror which bordered on madness, Jinyel decided that the most logical course of action would be to grab the wolf, drag it back onto Elraya, and strangle it before it could make another jump.

Three things happened, one after another:

One, Elraya had a reasonable reaction to a wolf on his back, and threw his wings to full span. With a mighty, unexpected heave of air, they all lifted off the ground.

Two, the wolf had a reasonable reaction to being shot and choked, and bit Jinyel’s calf.

Three, Elraya realized he could fly.

The thairoch’s wings beat the air again, this time with intent. Again he lifted from the ground. Jinyel and wolf were both thrown sideways. With one hand, Jinyel grabbed the thick scruff of fur which covered Elraya’s neck. With the other, he grabbed his bow and yanked it from the wolf’s jaws.

Elraya flapped again, and rose higher into the air. The wolf slid off his back, landing on the ground with an agonized cry. Jinyel hooked an arm through the bow and grabbed Elraya’s scruff with both hands. He’d already lost one bow and had been beaten black and blue to get this one ― he was not going to lose another.

As Elraya rose into the sky, the wolves learned a valuable lesson about why four-legged predators did not waste energy hunting thairoch.
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Jinyel had seen skyriders before. Plenty of air cavalry units moved in and out of the Imperial Medical Headquarters, but until Elraya, he’d never dreamed of being a skyrider. Even after Elraya, he’d had no idea it would happen today.

Although, in due fairness, he wasn’t Elraya’s skyrider so much as Elraya’s terrified skypassenger.

The thairoch hovered in the air for a moment, working his wings, then surged forward at a speed unlike anything Jinyel had ever experienced on the ground. Jinyel knotted fingers into the animal’s fur with all his strength, swallowing bile as the ground dropped from below them. His stomach lurched as if they were falling, no matter the fact they moved forward instead of down. How did anyone ride an animal this way? How could anyone even communicate with an animal this way?

The thairoch let out a joyous bellow. The wind whipped Jinyel’s eyes, and tears blurred his vision. He had to close his eyes, or they’d dry up inside his skull. He buried his face into Elraya’s scruff. The higher they got, the harder it became to breathe. His arms shook with the effort of holding steady, and the wind pinned him flat on Elraya’s back.

The thairoch flew in a relatively straight line, which gave Jinyel time to adjust his grip and get a sense of his own body. When he spread out his knees to get better purchase against Elraya’s hips, he felt the thairoch shift to compensate. When he pulled himself a few inches higher on Elraya’s shoulders, it made their path shudder until the thairoch flattened out. Jinyel’s every movement affected them both, in a way wholly unlike a horse. A horse could go anywhere and its rider merely sit and wait, but there could be no such laziness on a thairoch. Flight was an action of both mount and rider together, where even stillness had to be done deliberately.

And so Jinyel stayed still with all of his strength, stiff as a board on the thairoch’s back until he heard a faraway shout. Elraya banked left, a movement which taught Jinyel suddenly and thoroughly about the nature of weight swung in a circle. The turn was so sharp that Elraya was nearly sideways, one wing pointed at the sky and the other to the ground, but Jinyel had no fear of falling off. Weight and movement together kept him impossibly pinned.

He cracked his eyes open. Elraya had flown them back to the village. Jinyel enjoyed a single moment of relief before Elraya tucked his wings and plummeted.

Jinyel’s body forgot how to scream. His lungs stopped moving. He could have sworn his soul followed three seconds behind them as the ground rushed up in greeting. He wondered if Elraya was going to crash headfirst into the earth, but those great wings flared out at the last moment and caught an updraft. Jinyel’s ears popped. Elraya swooped up, sawing at the air until they both hovered nearly upright, and then slammed onto something loud and wooden. Planks? Wall? Roof?

Barn. Abandoned barn. The barn in which Jinyel and Elraya had been living since they first came to the village.

Elraya had brought them home.

Jinyel staggered off the thairoch as soon as the animal settled. The wooden slats were overgrown with vines, which caught Jinyel’s clothes and kept him stable as he vomited over the edge of the roof.

Elraya let out a concerned chuff and nudged Jinyel’s foot. Jinyel spit out bile and sat back on trembling heels. They were alive. Being alive was an excellent outcome, considering where they had just been. When his stomach settled and his hands stopped shaking, he’d be very grateful to Elraya for saving them both.

The gratitude could come later, though. For now, he had to figure out how to get off the damned roof.
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Re: [Frontier] We Fly In Hindsight

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This was a fun and action paced scenario. It was clear that something bad was gonna happen when the wolves surrounded and targetted the thairoch as their prey. How was Jinyel gonna fight them off? Then he makes a further mistake of closing in and huddling on top of the creature, while the wolves contemplate their approach, instead of scattering them with his arrows.

It was a thrilling moment when the thairoch took to the air, though, and I felt great for the cute creature as it bellowed its triumph having taken to the wing. Jinyel's fright was well founded. Flying as a novice is not something to be undertaken lightly, and his reactions were all well-founded and understandable.

I loved the comparison to skyriders as opposed to a terrified skypassenger. Yes, being out of control of the mount while flying should be horrifying!

Great writing besides, and I hope Jinyel gets the hang of riding his Thairoc.
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    • Mount: Mount as a combat vantage point
    • Tactics: Resources vs. mistakes
    • Combat: Ranged: Crippleshot vs. killshot
    • Mount: Flying: Windblindness
    • Mount: Flying: Every movement counts
    • Mount: Flying: Physical symptoms of an airdive
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