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[Sacred Forest] Small Favors pt. I

12 of Ashan
From the Spirits Primer:
12th of Ashan
"A widespread phenomenon that allows, over the course of the day, even unmarked mortals the opportunity to partially see the Spirits that surround their world. They form as translucent flickers of light and darkness to those without the ability to see them already, and to most, often appear to dance through the air and across the ground. Many speculate that this might somehow be related to Daia."
The touch of Ashan was thick in the forest. Trees which had been skeletonized by winter now allowed their green to peep the air, in buds and shoots still new upon the branch. The air was warmer, the wind less bitter, with a bit more echo to the forest as animals shook off the Cylus chill. There was warmth again. There was green again. There was food again.

Unfortunately, budding shoots did not make a meal for an adult human.

Jinyel appreciated the season, of course. It was all a reminder that the world was still turning. It was all still here, those things which had existed since the dawn of time. The rabbits peered out of their burrows. The young bucks sized each other up, because their yearly tournament was just around the corner. Their mothers nipped their flanks to keep the peace, at least until their urge to fight was too powerful to control. The world was still breathing. Inhale. Exhale. Winter. Spring.

Jinyel took his camps where he could find them, and at noon on the twelfth of Ashan he pitched his horse beside a small, shallow stream in the forest floor. From the bend of trees, there had once been a pond here as wide across as a large house, but winter had drained it down to a trickle. It splashed through its rocks like music, and because it was both cold and moving, Jinyel knew it was safe to drink.

He brought his horse and mule to hitch beside the water, which they drank briefly and then whickered in unhappiness at the chill. For camp, Jinyel chose a spot at the edge of the basin, farther from where the stream currently ran, between the bend of two half-fallen willows. The trees created a natural shield against the wind, and concealment from predators on one side, which would put both Jinyel and his animals slightly at ease. Finding food would be another matter; the horses could graze the new shoots in the basin, but Jinyel could not. His rations had been drained by the winter, and though he had enough to survive for a few more days, there was emphasis on “few.” The rations were his safety net against starvation, and nowadays it was a thin, thin safety net.

He needed fresh food. That meant he couldn’t afford to rely solely upon the hunt, or the snares, or the gathering, but that he had to use all three. The stream was too small for fish, and the spring growth was too new to do anything but offer a few seasonings. And he knew nothing about cooking to use seasonings in the first place.

Luckily, running water was always a magnet for life. A quick trek around the edge of the basin revealed several burrows, some large and others small, and a tangle of bracken tall as a man with tiny pathways at the base. It was the bracken where Jinyel chose to lay his traps; rabbits preferred thick places like this to hide. He had two snares, and chose the two most well-worn entrances to set them. A medium chance of success, but Jinyel had to stack his chances if he wanted to eat something hot tonight.

With that done, he pulled the bow from his back and made ready to hunt. Or at least, he would have done that, if not for his horse’s terrified whinny from beside the stream.
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Jinyel knew it wasn’t dangerous as soon as he looked over. His horse pawed frantically at the rocks, but the mule only stood and watched. Even stupid mules tended to be smarter than ordinary horses, and Jinyel only worried about danger when his mule became worried. Not that he would ignore the horse, of course, but he knew now was a time to calm the gelding instead of moving them.

Instead of words, Jinyel hummed as he approached the horse. Low and steady, he held out his hands and caught the animal’s bridle. The horse hadn’t torn the reins ― yet ― and seemed only marginally willing to stay in place. Jinyel unhitched the horse and hummed a melody into its ear as he stroked its neck.

Eventually, the horse stopped prancing. It gave a nervous snort and looked wide-eyed at the stream, where the mule still drank placidly. There were no other animals in the basin, so the horse must have been startled by something in the water. A fish? The idea caught Jinyel’s interest. If a fish had somehow gotten into this thread of water, and it was large enough to startle a horse, it could very well be large enough to feed him for a day.

Jinyel let his horse loose for a moment ― as a herd creature, it wouldn’t dare wander far from the mule ― and knelt at the place it had drank. The sun was high, and the water was shallow, so it would be easy to see anything there. Because he saw nothing, Jinyel sighed in disappointment. A horse was a horse, and horses loved to be scared of nothing at all. There were things to do and resources to gather; as much as he wished there was a fish, he couldn’t eat wishes.

Jinyel almost stood. Before he could turn, something splashed him.

The water was an icy shock against his hand, and he gasped. He looked back at the stream, hopes again raised for a fish. But there was no fish there. The water danced and bobbed a bit oddly, but there was no shadow within.

But still, it managed to splash him again.

Jinyel would have thought it a trick of the eye if his hand didn’t go numb. The water flexed, somehow, like a branch pulled back, and then snapped forward to throw water at his knees.

To his horse’s credit, Jinyel was also deeply startled, and leaped back with a surprised shout. The water flexed again, and without throwing droplets at him, seemed to just… hover unnaturally over a rock. There were no eyes, there wasn’t even a body, but Jinyel had the stark feeling of being looked at.

Something really was in the water. Or perhaps, something was the water. The hunting official at the medical headquarters had said something about this, when Jinyel first sought permission to chase game the Sacred Forest. It was, of course, Sacred, and most of the Sacred-ness came from the spirits who dwelt within. Little spirits, big spirits, they were all as natural as the sun on the leaves and were to be treated with respect wherever found.

The little spirit splashed again. Just a bit, just for a moment, and then dipped down to the water. Jinyel got closer, because what harm could a few drops do? Even if this spirit turned angry, it seemed to live in the stream, and the worst a stream could do was get him wet.

The spirit seemed pleased by his curiosity. It rippled, creating a noticeable distortion, and began to move upstream. After a few yards it paused, and there was a swell as it seemed to “look back” at him again.

Did it want him to follow? That was a different thing entirely.

Jinyel looked back at his animals. By now, both were calm. He had his bow and knife with him, so he was fully armed. Upstream was a good direction to hunt. Was it so dangerous to follow a spirit in that direction, if he had already been planning to go there anyway?

Jinyel stood, took a breath, and pulled an arrow from his quiver. A stream wasn’t dangerous, but plenty of other things could be. If this spirit led him towards danger, he could always turn around and come back. For now, the situation had him too intrigued to turn away.

Jinyel put the arrow to his bow, held both of them low and ready in front of him, and followed the spirit.

Jinyel thought the stream would get bigger as he travelled, but it didn’t. If anything, the waterway got smaller. It was clearly supposed to be bigger, from how large the creek bed was, but the water spirit had to flex in some places just to keep moving.

After a few bits of walking, Jinyel discovered why.

Winter was a time of death, for plants and animals alike. It was common for a dead tree to go rotten from snow and rain, and here, on one side of the stream, a tree had broken at the base and fallen across the way. On the other side was a strong, sparkling pool, halfway turned into a mire of soggy wood, leaves, branches, and mud. It had all bonded together into a natural cement, which gathered against the fallen tree and allowed only a trickle of water to pass underneath.

The spirit tried to splash at the tree, but there was so little water, it managed only two drops.

Well. This was a problem even Jinyel could see.

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Uh oh, a natural dam. That could lead to problems for the surrounding terrain if it isn't cleared up. Good thing the spirit spoke up and coaxed Jinyel to follow! This was well written and flowed nicely. It's an interesting date to play with, for Jinyel to be aware of a spirit's' presence, and for it to warn him of a natural dam.

Good job!

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  • Field Craft: Running water is safer to drink
  • Field Craft: Cover and concealment
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  • Hunting: Rabbits hide in thickets
  • Field Craft: Use animals to gauge danger
  • Field Craft: mud and natural fibers can be used as cement
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