Review Requests 2.2.7

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Kalortah
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: He uses his Tarouz abilities heavily here, please reference those, as the ones being used, Birdtongue lets him communicate with avians.


Thread: Honk if You Like My Look
City/Area: Korlasir

Renown: Don't think so?
Wealth Points: nah
Collaboration: no
Local Language Thread? Yes Atvian

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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

Aliases:
Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Crevil Arivuz'Arix
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Reflection
City/Area: Rharne - Zynyx Market
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Socialization, Stealth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Socialization:
1- How to get small discounts with trading
2 - Basic understanding of reading the room
3 - Noticing slight shifts in the people's perception of him

Stealth:
1 - Blending in with a crowd
2 - Ability to keep glowing equipment hidden underneath a cloak and cowl
3 - Keeping footsteps muffled while wearing plate
Loot: T4 Sloop (Average Quality) wiki/index.php?title=Category:The_Shoppe#Seafaring 5 Wealth Points (46-5) it will deduct me to Wealth Tier 3
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a? I don't think owning a ship warrants renown xD
Wealth Points: -5 WP
Collaboration: (Yes/No) no
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) no
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Last edited by Crevil Arivuz'Arix on Sat Sep 17, 2022 4:59 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 129
Injuries -None | Oversteps -None | Witchmark -None
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Dandelion
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) Includes Settlement NPCs Jack Lissky, Raven Fell, and Linnet Fell


Thread: [Rosebay] Hitting The Wall
City/Area: Towns and Settlements
Skills: Fieldcraft (gm), Engineering (comp), Strength (comp), Endurance (comp), Socialisation (comp), Leadership (nov), Storytelling (unt)

Knowledges
Fieldcraft: improvising a sundial
Strength: using a builder's ram
Storytelling: following a set pattern
Storytelling: telling something that happened to you
Leadership: leading by example
Leadership: keeping an eye on the rest of the group


Renown: (how much and for what?) Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: (how many and for what?) No
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: (Yes/No) No
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) No
Local Language Thread? (Yes - Name of Language / No) No
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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: This is part of Devin's Craft of Dreams plot. Mrs. Adams is a Smooglenuff Manor NPC. Devin received the small gift due to his Socialization capstone "Generosity Boomerang". Instead of getting the gift as loot, Devin gets a bonus to his wealth thread.


Thread: Rations
City/Area: Faldrass Island

Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Local Language Thread? no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: Foul language and some violence, but nothing fatal. This meandered a bit and the ending took forever, but I hope you enjoy it.


Thread: Who Better?
City/Area: Outlying Cities
Skills Used: Combat (Blades, One-Handed: Gladius) (Master), Tactics (Master), Abrogation (Master), Endurance (aster), Discipline (Master)

Skill Knowledges:
Abrogation - Shackle: Tripping Targets by Hardening the Air at their Feet
Politics: Collecting Favors By Not Making a Fuss
Tactics (Master): Keeping Track of Multiple Opponents Simultaneously
Tactics: Best Way to Kill a Mage? When They're Not Looking, or from Far Away
Tactics: Using Magic to Split up Your Group of Enemies

Non-Skill Knowledges:
NPC Jagdson: Personal Guard to Heinneheim, Tried to Kill Kasoria
NPC Nader: A Stiff Sod, But Protects His Men
NPC Nader: Believes Army Should be Better Prepared for Fighting Magic
NPC Shieldarm Heinneheim: High-Ranking Etzori Army Officer
NPC Shieldarm Heinneheim: Eventually Convinced the Army Needs to Learn More about Fighting Mages
NPC Shieldarm Heinneheim: Travels with a Personal Guard[/i]

Renown: Yes, for a very public demonstration
Magic Experience?: Yes
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Last edited by Kasoria on Sat Sep 10, 2022 2:03 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 183
Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Woe
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: Meh not really. Maybe a little bit of janky dialogue. Can I please get Adunih Points for this? This is his Ymiden Adunih thread.


Thread: [Old Dynaash] Thanks Woe, But Your Princess is in Another Castle
City/Area: The Imperial Regions

Renown: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Loot: Can I please get 2 Adunih Points for this? This is his Ymiden Adunih thread.
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Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Mutations/Scars/Markings

Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain

Current Cycle's Itinerary

Itinerary
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Max
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: Language. Suggestive content.
As Max’s player, I approved assumptive events that occurred in Kasoria’s final post.

Thread: In The Flesh
City/Area: Outlying Cities
Knowledge:

Kasoria:
None

Max:
Larceny: Flirting to Gain Access to Pockets

Renown: Yes, Kasoria’s use of magic.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes for Kasoria
Local Language Thread? No
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Leander
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: None (except maybe slightly graphic scenes with animal entrails)

Thread: Poisoned Pastures
City/Area: The Stormlands
Knowledge:

Rozkia:
Socialization x2
Detection x2
Investigation x2
Discipline x1
Intimidation x1


Leander:
Investigation: Asking the Right Questions
Investigation: Establishing a Hypothesis and Testing It
Investigation: Getting Your Hands Dirty
Leadership: Asking People to Do Things
Science (Biology): Anatomy of a Cow’s Digestive Tract
Science (Chemistry): Anticoagulants and their Signs
Science (Chemistry): Using a Reagent to Identify a Poison
Socialisation: Being Friendly to Strangers
Socialisation: Being Polite When You Don’t Want To Be
Rozkia: Can Be Useful

Renown: Some Renown wouldn't go amiss if deemed appropriate
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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Darius Baer Bottom
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: Nope!


Thread: [Hopetoun] Building Blocks
City/Area: Faldrass Island

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: (Yes/No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No)
Local Language Thread? (Yes - Name of Language / No)
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Max
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: At this point, it’s safe to always assume a Max thread mentions foul language and mentions of addiction/violence.


Thread: [Westguard] Whispers of a Savior
City/Area: Outlying Cities
No Knowledge Requested.

Skills Used:
Master: Unarmed Combat

Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? No
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