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4th of Ymiden 718

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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4th Trial, Ymiden, Arc 718
South Etzos, Outer Perimeter
11th break


He was older now, and when he wanted to do something, he put some thought int it first. Which was not to say he'd been the opposite when he was younger... well, aside from a handful of occasions. One in particular that had changed the course of his life, in one blinding break of rage and hatred and fire and blood. There was no thinking there. His mind barely even worked, didn't even remember what had transpired until the next morning.

But the rest of his life, there had at least been a pause. A moment where he'd held himself back, tried to analyze and predict, use that tactical acumen that had been born in street fights and honed in the Black Guard.

Where he departed from many of his ilk, though, was that it wasn't just thinking. Not just folding his arms and frowning and puzzling it out. No. In his case, when possible and applicable, he opened a book.

"Fuck me, there's a lot of 'em, aren't there?"

The cat twisted around to peruse the painted-and-printed page the hairy little man was poring over, and quickly decided it wasn't worth her time. Kasoria snorted as Bella yawned nice and wide, making the empty socket on her right side pucker for a moment. Then she got up and lazily hopped off the table. He watched her saunter out the back door, side into the sun pouring into his tiny backyard. Then he looked over her and saw the training dummy on the wall. Still and silent and torn and waiting for him.

"Fine," he muttered, tearing a chunk off the roll that was his lunch. "Don't need yer help anyway."

He looked back down at the book he was reading. Well, "reading" was pushing it a little. It wasn't a novel or history that one devoured from front to back, raising grand battles and romances from the pages into the mind's eye. It was a textbook, really. A repository of useful information that could be picked apart as the situation allowed it. Kasoria smiled to himself and imagined if this... Algernon Hirsch (and what fucking sadist would name their boy "Algernon"?) ever imagined his great work of anatomy would be put to such a use as he intended.

"Car... Carotid... artery..."

He wiped his hand on his breeches and traced the line of red on the picture under it. A human was staring back at him, covering most of the page, and within him was what looked like a city's worth of streets and alleys and thoroughfares. That they were inked with red told even a casual viewer all they needed to know about their nature. He was on Chapter Four - Human Blood Channels - and he'd found what he was looking for.

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The big ones... on the side of the throat. Carotid. There we go.

He massaged his hairy neck, roughly where the lines were in the book. He could just barely feel a pulse under his fingers, when he paused long enough. But they weren't in front, where the breathing tube and speaking box were. No, they were at the side. Almost under the ears. He frowned and kept tracing down, following the flow of the ink and captured human innards until he found similarly thick, tempting targets.

"Fem... Femoral arteries."

Insides of the legs. Under the balls.

The assassin stood up and felt where the picture told him to, and was damned grateful he was inside. He could only imagine the queer looks he'd be getting if he did that in the bookstore. He couldn't feel a pulse, not through his breeches or the muscle of his legs... but he knew they were under both. He'd been in enough fights over twenty-five arcs that he'd seen every flowing tube a man possessed severed at one point or another. Now he could collect all those memories and give those tubes names, know where they were and what they went to.

He put down his roll, still chewing and knowing damn well that one of those fucking moggies would be all over it as soon as he was outside. It didn't matter. His hand came back up and when it did, there was the slight sound of metal and leather scraping across the wood. He looked down at the karambit in his hand, and measured as best he could the length and curve of that lade. Eight inches, maybe less. More than enough for what needed to be done.

He'd had the weapon a long time. Not as long as his gladius, not even close, but... it was different. This had been claimed, as a trophy from a man who'd given him a fucker of a fight with it. There were aged but still ugly scars criss-crossing his torso, made by the very blade he held in his hand. But he'd fought through the pain and the surprise and the spewing blood and tore the cunt apart. Then he took his knife.

Because it was a damn good weapon, and his own body was a testament to that.

"A'right," he said, wiping the crumbs from his beard and flipping the blade around his finger by the ring at the end of it. "No time like the present."

Clad in naught but his breeches, Kasoria strolled out into the blinding suns, ignoring the scampering creatures that snaked around his feet. Ignoring him in turn, focused instead on the soon-to-be-pilfered remains of his lunch. He looked over at the dummy. Flexed his fingers loose and then tight around the handle of the karambit. He blinked and for an instant, the image of that painting was superimposed over the dummy.

Carotid arteries. Side of the neck.

Femoral arteries. Insides of the thighs.


He walked slowly. With each step, his gait seemed to become more of a shamble. Foot dragging. Head low. Shoulders slumped... and blade behind his back, where it would usually be sheathed. He was not Kasoria, nor was he "The Raggedy Man" he'd heard those denizens of the underworld whisper about. He was nameless, faceless, without coin or status; he was the mask he wore in the night, and on the streets. Below attention and respect and, thus, suspicion. Even when he got close and looked up, his jaw was slack, eyes vacant.

Just another derelict, drunk, useless, beggar, only he got close and-

-his arm swung up-
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KRRSSSKK

Not bad. But not enough.

That was the little man's sole, silent judgement on the death blow he had just landed. The karambit blade flashed through the humid air, carved through cloth and wood and gouged a living white mark into the neck of the practice dummy. He frowned at the wound he'd made, trying to gauge if it would have sliced through the carotid. Probably, but... it was artistic, but not practical.

Kasoria snorted softly to himself and shook his head. Been reading too many books, boy.

But the thought festered in his mind, followed him around as he paced in front of the target, like a caged panther before his bars. The karambit spun around his thumb and slapped against his palm, over and over, keeping a rhythm only he was privy to. One blow was not enough. Well, it was enough, but it wasn't guaranteed. He didn't care about ending a man with one blow, as long as he was ended. That meant making sure he could fight back. And that meant-

He cocked his head to one side, and looked down at the blade. The double-edged blade. He pursed his lips for a moment and then started walking to the dummy. As soon as he was close enough his arm slashed out again, a blur of metal and flesh and muscle, striking up and to the side-

KRRSSSKK

-ripping a fresh gouge in the dummy's neck, just above the first one he left, and as the karambit passed in front of him he backhanded-

-curved edge of the blade slashing the front of the dummy's throat. Kasoria closed his eyes for a moment, out of instinct. The carotids may have been on the side, but he knew the jugular was in the front. That little strip of soft flesh, unprotected by bone or muscle. The blade cut deep enough that he would have been sprayed with blood, and his victim silenced from crying out.

Don't stop now!

One strike, then another, and as the blade was back out at his side, he crouched a little and slashed across the front of the dummy again-

-lower, carving through old coats and sweaters forgotten and donated and purchased again for his needs, feeling the thick, stubborn give of wood as the karambit scraped against the wood underneath it-

Where the stomach would be. He knew the ribs would be hard to pierce. Harder still not to get the blade stuck in them during the chaos of combat. But under them? Lots of soft spots, lots of tasty, vital organs. But most of all, that slash from one love handle to the other...

He'd seen what would happen after that. The way a stomach would yawn open like a hungry mouth, splitting and retching forth innards like hissing, steaming snakes. He'd fought plenty of tough fuckers in his time, but yet to meet the man who would fight while he was stumbling and sliding in his own guts. Trying to force them back in while he was coughing up bile. Looking down at them and forgetting he was even fighting, even in danger, before the killing blow-

CRACK

Kasoria punched put at the dummy, karambit curved enough that when it landed, it was razor-sharp steel that did the damage. Hammering into the inside of the swaying dummy's thigh, right under its wooden balls. Then he pivoted hard, up and to the side, barking out into the sky as he rose up and ripped the blade out and away-

KRRSSSKK

-tearing the breeches leg to shreds as he did, karmabit pulled free and leaving an inch-deep crevice where the femoral would be. Kasoria turned to face his work. Eyes still as his body, save for his slightly-heaving chest. Carotid. Jugular. Stomach. Femoral. He didn't know what to call that... but he knew it would work. Three arteries, and gutting the fucker. In... what...five trills? Four?

You can do better, he thought too himself. The blade spun. Slapped. Was hidden once again. Now get back to work.

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Blades (Karambit): Targeting Arteries
Blades (Karambit): Chaining Strikes Together
Blades (Karambit): Use BOTH Sides of the Blade
Blades (Karambit): Thumb Ring Keeps the Blade Secure in Hand
Medicine: Basic Outlay of Major Human Arteries
Tactics: Don't Just Strike Once, But As Often As You Can

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Mmm, no touching heart to hearts here, just good old murder practice. A joy to read; I can always clearly picture what he's doing and where he his, which is something I absolutely love about your writing. His small movements and ticks are really well written, and the content of your solos is always interesting, regardless of what it is you're writing about. It was a neat fusion of could-be-scholar with certain-killer, and the fact he spends time practicing (not just running around willy-nilly) only helps to better illustrate how very alive and real he is. Excited (and a little nervous) to see what the next step of his training is going to be. I'm sure there will be blood, haha.
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