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Azrael

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I See a Doorway, Its Hinges Slicked by Desire

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Woe had returned from the Empire chastened by his reckless shifts from one shell to another. He'd taken on so many totems in such a short period. Was there even a bit of Woe left, from all the facets he'd taken on? Even without a spark to pollute his soul, he felt diminished, less himself. Maybe he should have refrained from growing his newfound power for changing shape. The power itself, understandably, had a twisted potential even in lieu of an Emean parasite. Woe knew better, he should have known better. What was the saying? "Power is the most dangerous of cages?" And yet he'd found his way through the gate and thoroughly locked into its corruptive embrace.

He supposed he could fracture once more, and remove the taint, as he had Ziell's and his aunt's mark. As he'd left behind Lethroda and so offended Chamadarst that he'd withdrawn his Championship.

What lengths wouldn't Woe go to prove that he didn't give a damn about any of it at all, anymore? He thought he wanted a world that was predictable, salvageable. At the cost of integrity, at the cost of morality or anything at all, he would have seen it done. Perhaps that was his error, to want anything for others. Perhaps disunity was the guiding principle of mortalkind, and Immortals for that matter.

The past few seasons had given him much reason to ponder, and consider where he stood. So it was no surprise that he found his way through the gates of Chamadarst's Temple, to revisit the heart of his sin. That of pride. A desire to place himself above mortality, above terms of morality or grace or affection. Had he only ever been trying to prove to his mother, that he was just as swift to give unctuous liberty toward his grayness of heart? A repeat of the episode with Elisabeth, only reiterated for Winston in full view of the Immortals and heroes of Scalvoris, exposing his callous intent for consistency and safety?

Chrien was a menace, even now she was still every bit the force for destruction. Woe had nothing to prove to them. She deserved to be caught in a trap that would crush her, many times over. Cassion could stuff his saccharine story of redemption. Chrien was irredeemable. If Woe knew anything, it was his own domain of Redemption, and she to his mind could never occupy it.

Among his kin, the other mortalborn of the world, the other children of Divinity... Hart, Llyr, and so many others he'd met over the years, there had to be others who understood that such saccharine dichotomies bore no anchor in reality.

So as he stood in the midst of the Onyx King's temple, the place where many deals were wrought and recorded, he waited in shadow to watch as the faithful milled about, awaiting one who bore signs of being more than any mortal. If any place would attract the exceptional mortalborn kin, it would be Yaralon, and all came to the Temple of Chamadarst who wished to do business of significance.



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Why Yaralon? Why had he come back to one of the more brute cities he'd ever had the pleasure of enhancing? Why had he come back in the darkest and most dangerous season?

Why not?

He was not who he had been the last time he visited. He was just a man seeking treasures then. Now he was Edasha's son. He was Syroa's marked. He was the captain of The Courteous Slime and a friend of many he would never have thought he'd get along with. He was, in his positive moments, the best hope most had to get what they really wanted. He wanted to see places he'd been with fresh eyes. He wanted to experience familiar things with a new perspective. After all, Anona deserved to experience what Yaralon had to offer as well.

He could look for local drinks while in town and add them to The Courteous Slime's bar. He probably wouldn't buy enough to have a steady supply but maybe a few bottles to bring out on special occasions once he was back in Rharne. Things for his friends. The problem was that, he didn't exactly know where to go to find these things. It was probably his tenth trial in Yaralon, or maybe the eleventh? It was hard to tell time during the dark season. He'd spent most of his time on his ship or around the harbor but he hadn't been into the city for any significant span of time.

But he got an idea.

Chamadarst temple. Yaralon had four major shrines for the immortals but Chamadarst's was by far the most lavish. He hadn't visited it before. He'd seen it. He'd walked past it. He'd heard sounds from inside- but he'd never actually gone in. He wasn't much of a joiner and had no interest in getting marked with higher citizenship... so why would he have? Now though, he figured he might be able to make some use of the temple's services. Perhaps he'd be able to find someone willing to trade with him. Maybe, if he was lucky, he'd be able to find a steady supply of something good from the violent land.

It was probably mid trial when Azrael arrived but again, it was dark so it was hard to tell. He'd left his ship in the harbor. The spirits were entertaining his friends and he had no intention of bringing Zaza into the city where any stray blow might destroy him so he went out alone. The mercenaries manning the gate didn't pay him very much attention. They seemed focused on the ships looming just off the horizon. Azrael thought it was odd that they floated out there but he didn't pay it much mind.

The temple wasn't a very far walk beyond the Gold Gate but that was probably by design given how much commerce passed through the harbor. The temple was positioned perfectly to give easy access to visiting traders- lest they wander too far into the city and find out it isn't all as pleasant as Chamadarst's place. The massive gilded doors were open for the public and several people who were wearing decorative robes and carrying metal rods with a ring of nels at either end were passing in and out of it. There were a few guards posted at the entrance which Azrael noticed but he assumed there had to be more inside. A massive temple would be guarded, right?

Nobody seemed to pay him any mind when he walked in. Everybody seemed to already know what they were doing and where they were going but he didn't so, whether he intended to or not, he stood out in the crowd. Not even in the fun way he preferred.
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  • Transformer's Toolbox [Minor]: Azrael can make superficial changes to his appearance (hair, nails, skin, eye, and voice.)
  • Ever Alluring I: Azrael seems to endure harsh conditions better than others and everyone, despite sexual orientation, is just a bit curious what he would be like in bed.

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  • Darksight: Azrael's perception of light and dark have been flipped, allowing him to see more clearly in an absence of light than in the day.
  • Crow's Embla: So long as he doesn't mention proper names of people, either his own or that of others, he will be able to fit into any setting that he visits in Melrath. Once he uses a proper name of any person (even if it's made up) within another's hearing range, the effect is null until the next trial.

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The time for waiting in shadows was over. Woe was here with a purpose, and loitering behind a marble beam wasn't going to get him any closer to the fulfillment of his purpose here.

So he stepped forward, and held his hand palm up toward a nearby altar, which was not just an altar really, but a lectern holding a ledger. Woe knew what he had to do. He wrote down an initial offering. Then he spoke his terms, adjusting from the deal they'd struck an arc ago.

"By prompting me to repay you, you've taught me the error of my position." He spoke to Chamadarst of course. "Here is all the wealth, with interest, that I've earned with your blessing. With it, I offer an alternative."

Woe had tried serving his own interests. But something about it felt wrong. His life was hollow of purpose, without direction or conviction. He had no great goal to serve, no ambition, and no principles. Serving a hollow master, that of his own person, had taught him just how lost he was without Chamadarst's principles guiding his hand. He wasn't an anti-Immortal zealot, or an objector to worship of their kind.

He was a blunt instrument, and needed something or someone to wield him. He'd known no greater master than Chamadarst himself.

"So with that amount and interest, I propose that I resume my course as your Champion." Woe said, frowning down at his open palm, holding the onyx mark. "This is my opening offer."

Now it was time for Chamadarst to give a counteroffer, if he was of a mind to.
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And there it was. Woe couldn't but notice the sudden absence of the divine mark that had graced his palm for the past half decade. Chamadarst didn't offer an easy way back into his graces, nor did he make it cheap to extract Woe from the debted compact he'd taken on. Woe knew at once the price had been paid, his purse feeling ever so lighter.

"Well nothing for it. Time to get back to work." Woe murmured to himself. Thus divested of his connection to Chamadarst, at least in this incarnation, he left the Temple and went about his own business. Free to do so without the mark of a master.

He returned to the camp later on, and planned an eventual return to Scalvoris. Although he'd abandoned the Immortals as having a hand in his designs, the designs had not been abandoned wholesale. His aims hadn't changed, just the allies he had to count on along the way had grown fewer.

So once returned to the camp, he made the necessary adjustments, and logistical moves to ensure that his people got back to Scalvoris. They would return within the arc, but in the meantime Woe made his lonesome way back to the northern road, to enter into the Eternal Empire. He still had much to learn along the way, and the Eternal Empire would be one of many laboratories to pursue this agenda.

The road to the Eternal Empire was carved in rock, through the Crags of Yaralon, and toward the Sacred Forest.
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Notes/Warnings: A little short, but I'd like for this to be canon.


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Hello Woe. A pitty that there couldn’t have been more to this thread. It is good that Woe was able to clear his debt with Chamadarst and move on. Maybe the Immortal will mark Woe again or maybe he will find a different path. It will be interesting to read. It was a good thread and an important part to get down. Thank you for the Read. Fate

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Hello Azrael. It would have been interesting to see Azrael and Woe interact but life happens. Hopefully they will encounter each other again and see what mischievous they can get into. Thank you for the Read. Fate.

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