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Continuation/conclusion of cow killer bounty.

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The Long Moo: An Oram Mednix Mystery

73 Ymiden 721

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Once more, Oram found himself on his way to the Viden Academy campus in Scalvoris Town, to seek the counsel of Professor Seams. Knowing the way, he would not need to ask anyone for directions, nor would he need to consult the various signs that marked the way. Nonetheless, and notwithstanding the fact that he did not have his reading spectacles on him at that moment, Oram scrutinized those signs as he rode from the Tolentino farm. From long experience he knew each of them, their import, and since getting the reading spectacles had been able to discern how the letters conveyed that import, representing in a series of letters the sounds of names and words. Trying to look at the signs now without those spectacles, it seemed to Oram that he could somewhat trace those sounds. But perhaps that was just his memory rather than his perception. He would need to study from some sort of primer to do this properly.

Whether he was actually reading the signs or not, or just pretending to from memory, Oram made his way to the Science faculty of the Academy, only to learn to his disappointment that Professor Seams was not available. However, when Oram showed the feather to the student assistant, her eyes widened and she said: ”I’m pretty sure that’s a pantheon feather. If I’m right, the folks at the Menagerie will be able to tell you as much as anybody here can about them.” So Oram next went to the Menagerie.

It was well into afternoon by the time Oram reached the Menagerie. He asked to speak to someone who handled air mounts, showing the feather to any and all who asked for an explanation. Eventually he got to none other than Elise Flarsdotter herself, a strange Naerykk woman who didn’t seem to like Oram much more than she seemed to like him. Simply he asked her: ”I found this at a nearby farm, caught in a raingutter of a barn roof.” Elise looked at it and said: ”You know what that is as well as I do, Ranger.”

Oram scowled at her. He did not, and was not in the mood to play games. With an aggravated sigh, he said: ”I don’t *know* what it is. I *think* that it is a pantheon feather. I would like to know what you think, and what if anything you could tell me beyond that about whatever creature left this feather.”

Elise made an impatient *tsk* and took the feather, examining it appraisingly. ”It is a pantheon feather, of course,” she declared simply. ”And I must say, it’s a big one. You say you found it here on Scalvoris? At a farm? I find that hard to believe. You see pantheons all the time over Scalvoris, but never this big. Those you see around Ishallr or Immortal’s Tongue are bigger, but pantheons that size almost never fly out this way.”

Oram took the feather back. ”I found this one at a farm just a few miles from here,” he informed her. ”Do you keep any pantheons this large here?”

”Yes,” assured Elise. ”We raise and train them as mounts for lighter Air troops. But I assure you, all ours are present and accounted for.”

”This one isn’t,” Oram pointed out.

The Naerykk looked at him sharply. ”I don’t know what you meant by that,” she said coldly, ”but know this: trying to catch a full-grown pantheon is dangerous, especially a big one. And I don’t accept grown pantheons, so don’t expect to be able to sell it to me, if you somehow do manage to catch one without getting yourself killed.”

Oram shook his head. ”I don’t plan to catch it. I’m going to kill it.”

Elise was indignant. ”Why!” she exclaimed. ”Why would you want to destroy such a beautiful creature?”

”Because the farmer whose cows it has been killing is paying me to,” Oram answered curtly. Not wishing to pursue the conversation any further, the hunter turned and left the Naerykk mid-sputter.

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It was time to return to the Tolentino farm. No, first it was time to eat. A lot. He had decided to make the trip on foot, as he did not wish to expose Mule to needless risk; regardless of whether the culprit of the recent cow killings were really a pantheon, it was still clearly a formidable beast, capable of taking down a full-grown heifer without leaving a trail of its coming or going. Any creature that could threaten a cow could threaten a mule. Mule did not know how to fight such predators; Oram did, at least better than his poor mount. Thus, Oram left the animal stabled at the travelers’ camp.

After stabling Mule, Oram figured out what he would need for his outing tonight. He would want his spear, in case the creature he sought decided to be unfriendly to him. He would want his crossbow, in case he got an opportunity at a good shot at whatever it was. He would want his duplicity suit, to help him hide. Lightstone lantern. A lightly-packed satchel. In short, most of his usual bow hunting attire.

The trip back to the Tolentino farm used up the rest of the daylight hours. A passing cart driven by a friendly merchant took the traveler part-way there. This saved energy but not much time, as the cart went no faster than Oram would have on foot. It was already evening when he arrived. He called at the farmhouse, finding the family at dinner, to inform Madsil that he had returned, that he would keep watch and scout out the farm. Grateful, the farmer asked if he would join the family for dinner but Oram declined. He asked if he might have a hunk of bread to take with him, which Madsil gladly gave.

Next, Oram needed to find a good vantage point. The trick was that, on one hand, he would want to set himself just within, and with his back to, a tree line, so that he could look out over open fields against the clear night sky while concealed himself, while on the other, whatever it was, be it pantheon or something else, might come from inside the forest and sneak up on him unawares.

I have Choir for that now Oram reminded himself. With that encouraging thought, he walked along the tree line where it ran closest to the barn. The Tolentino’s cows, the hunter noticed, were already all within; he could hear them milling and mooing about inside even here. The night was simply that quiet otherwise. Picking out a wide-trunked tree to sit against, he positioned himself in its shadow and waited. Choir he bade lie just on the other side of the tree, looking and listening into the woods.

Oram rarely used Amoach, his Fire-Forged diri as a lookout; among other things, having two spirits inside his head at the same time relaying updates to him gave him a headache. Just remembering the time he was split into four distinct fairies inside the Emerald Tree still made him dizzy. On this night, however, he decided to risk it. He asked Amoach to position himself on the far side of the barn. That way, he would be able to detect something approaching from the ground on that direction, or flying in very low.

He sat and waited. And waited. And waited. Evening deepened into night and the air grew cooler, although in late Ymiden it was still quite balmy. Every once and a while, a mosquito came a long and tried to strike up a conversation, which Oram would promptly cut -or rather swat- short. Did diri get bored? Oram wondered. Did familiars? Even as he asked that, it seemed as if he could feel Choir growing more restless by degrees. Amoach, by contrast, seemed as implacable and phlegmatic as ever. Oram sat, letting his eyes go unfocused so that they would not wear out in the low light, waiting for something to move in his field of vision, but otherwise heeding nothing. Soon, the silhouette of the barn roof was not a feature he noticed any more. He felt his min-

A black silhouette flapped majestically across the field of stars. Oram’s eyes now did indeed focus. The silhouette looked like the the biggest owl he had ever seen; he thought of the Cylus owl he had hunted without success an arc ago. But this was Ymiden, and this was no owl.

Something is approaching the barn, Amoach warned him, a bit late. Wryly, Oram mentally thanked the diri for its vigilance, and told it to continue to concentrate on its side of the barn.

The huge flying form landed on the barn roof. It did look a bit like a giant owl, but its feet ended in paws, rather than talons, and it didn’t move like an owl once it had landed. It stalked along the roof with a fluidity that few birds attained when walking. It held its head low and, Oram realized, was smelling.

The beast stalked along the length of the barn, near the rain gutter, approaching Oram. When it got nearly to the closest corner, it raised its head and seemed to look right at him, clearly feline eyes gleaming gold in the moonlight. However, the creature did not react as if it actually saw him. Rather, after a few trills, it raised its head and looked partly away, still sniffing the air. It knew he was around here, somewhere. Oram’s heart pounded as he watched; he marveled that the sound didn’t give away his location to the pantheon -for he had by now determined that this was no doubt a pantheon.

A loud barking broke the silence. A dog is running towards us from the farmhouse Amoach warned. The pantheon, distracted by the sound, pulled upright and turned around to face away from Oram. The hunter used that moment to aim his crossbow, letting the star sight settle between the pantheon’s shoulders. Willing his breathing to calm down, the hunter fired.

The bolt struck, but not in the vital spot where he had aimed, for the pantheon chose that exact moment to take to wing. The bolt instead struck about two hands’ breadths lower than Oram had aimed. The creature let out a cry. It sounded a bit like the scream he had heard from the cougar up in the Scalvoris mountains last Saun, yet it was deeper, more dangerous sounding, and decidely not human. The pantheon jerked in mid flight, then seemed to recover, and flew off, over the farm house, towards the larger forest on the opposite side of the farm.

A man is coming announced Amoach, and a few trills later the dog fell silent. Oram waited for Madsil to come find him, but he never did. A couple bits later, the diri told him that man and dog had looked around vainly for a while, then went back into the house. I didn’t tell him where I was setting up, Oram realized, kicking himself. Satisfied at last that the pantheon wasn’t coming back tonight, he rose and went the farmhouse; he knocked on the door and was greeted by a now-awake Madsil. The farmer was astonished to see him. ”I thought you had gone home!” he exclaimed -quietly, as his family was asleep.

”Regrettably, no,” muttered the hunter. Then, with a graver expression, he said: ”It’s a pantheon. I saw it. I shot it. Hurt it, maybe not badly, but I hurt it. It flew off.”

The farmer gazed at him stupidly. ”A pantheon?” he repeated, not knowing what else to say. Oram could hardly blame him.

The hunter nodded. ”Biggest one I’ve ever seen, or even heard of. I’ll have to come back tomorrow when I’ve made more preparations.”

The farmer frowned. ”You can’t just go all the way back to Scalvoris tonight! That’s crazy. I’ll grab you a blanket or something.”

Oram waved his hands in refusal. ”I have a blanket. But I could use a spot of floor until the morning.”

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Knowledge:
[Combat: Ranged] x 1
[Field Craft] How not to wear out your eyes in low light.
[Hunting] Pantheon size-range, movements, and behavior.
[Hunting] The snarling cry of an angry, hurt pantheon.
[Meditation] Talking to more than one spirit of familiar while also trying to focus on one’s surroundings is mentally taxing.
[Research] Sometimes the “experts” will only tell you what you already know.

Renown: +5 - Farmer Madsil isn't the secret keeping type - that was a Pantheon, and a really big one at that! And, oh yeah, Oram was there!... :D

Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

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Have you ever considered contacting the Hallmark Channel? I truly think that "Oram Mednix Mysteries" is in order!

I have to agree with a few of the other reviewers when I say that Oram is well-suited to detective work. He's got the methodical mind and you write it really, really well. I enjoyed the light touches that indicate that life goes on beyond the immediate story, like thinking about how two spirits communicating with him is challenging. Sometimes we get focused on the story we are telling right then, and it's nice to have pieces that reflect what's happened to the character in recent times in the background - Oram should be thinking about how acquiring Choir impacts the way he does his work and his relationship with his diri.

As always, beautifully written. Most of the Oram stories I've reviewed were either collabs or npc heavy, so it was nice to get a shot of Oram with his thoughts. I laughed as Amoach kept giving Oram very obvious information.

Great job! Enjoy your rewards!



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