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Continuation of the Princess and the Pig series.

The home to the Induk Sweetwine and populated by fairies, this enchanted forest has many secrets

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The Wild Man Speaks

7 Saun 721

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Turtle Ridge was only a couple breaks’ walk away for the active Rangers, and those breaks largely passed without incident. Until Oram and Sh’ron saw the wolves.

Oram counted seven of them, interspersed among the trees on the hillside, grey and lean and alert, spread out in a shallow arc before the pair. They made no move. Choir froze when he saw them, tense and anxious, though neither he nor the wolves before them made any aggressive move or display.

There weren’t just wolves. Some eagles and hawks perched in the branches of the same trees the wolves prowled beneath, gazing steadily at the humans with intense yellow eyes. A curious weasel-like face rose above the underbrush to regard them as well. A marten, Oram realized after a moment.

Cautiously, the two Rangers and the song wolf edged closer together. Oram readied his spear while Sh’ron nocked and arrow.

”They won’t hurt ye unless I let ‘em,” called out a gruff voice from one of the larger trees in front of them. A large, crudely-be-leathered man with unkempt hair and beard emerged partly from behind it, glaring balefully at Sh’ron and his bow. ”Question is: why shouldn’t I let ‘em?”

Oram briefly considered reaching for one of his Ezere abilities, but decided to wait. He just spoke first. Lowering his spear, and resting it point-down on the ground, he said: ”I am Oram. This is Sh’ron. We are Rangers from Egilrun, and we’re here looking for a little girl from there named Priscilla. We want to take her home.” He glanced over at his partner and gestured for him to lower his bow. Reluctantly, Sh’ron did so.

He waited, even though the tension in the air urged him to keep talking, keep explaining. The traveler had a sense that this was a man with little patience for explanations.

For several trills neither man nor beast stirred. At last the wild man said slyly: ”What makes you think I’ve even seen such a girl, let alone have her?”

Oram suppressed an irritated frown. He hated when people played dumb like this; it was tedious. ”You are not the only person with friends in the Sweetwine,” the hunter declared, casting a meaningful look at the animals. He paused just a breath to see whether Argua -assuming this was Argua- would take the point, or whether he needed to persuade further.

The wild man took it. ”Heh,” he chuckled, his tone a mixture of mild annoyance and mild amusement. ”Lemme guess: fairies. Hope you didn’t eat any of their food.”

”Not this time,” Oram answered. ”I learned my lesson earlier.”

The wild man’s manner relaxed just a bit more. He finally emerged into full view from behind the tree. ”Heh! I bet you did. Well, yeah, fine. I got her. Paid a small fortune to ransom her from those thwarthides. Don’t expect me to just give her to you.”

An angry growl came from somebody’s throat at that; Oram wasn’t even sure if it was Sh’ron’s or Choir’s. He shot a nervous glance at both of them. Things were just starting to look up, but could still go badly awry for them. ”For now, I ask that you welcome us in peace,” he offered quickly, before either of his other party members could do anything rash, ”and simply let us see and speak to the girl, make sure she is alright. We can talk more then.”

The wild man looked expectantly at Sh’ron, who still had an arrow nocked, albeit pointed at the ground. To his credit, the Ranger took the hint and put the arrow away. ”We gave you our names,” he said as he did so, a bit defiantly. ”You never gave us yours.”

The wild man’s face held a blank look. ”Why, no, I suppose I didn’t,” he drawled blandly.

Oram cut in: ”The fairies said you were known as ‘Argua’. May we call you that?”

The wild man’s eyes swiveled back to the traveler and he grinned wolfishly. Then he shrugged. ”You can call me ‘King of Turtle Ridge’, if you like. Yeah, sure, Argua is fine. Welcome to my camp. Follow me, and I’ll show you the girl. You can speak to her, too, but I don’t know if she’ll talk back. She ain’t said a word since she arrived.” He turned then and made a curt, beckoning gesture, then began to stride swiftly up the hillside. As he did, the animals melted back into the woods.

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7 Saun 721

It was not hard to tell the difference between a recently and hastily-built camp and a long established one. The thwarthide camp had been the former. Argua’s site was clearly the latter. It was surrounded by a camouflaged wicker fence. There was a latrine dug outside its perimeter, on the opposite side of the camp from the stream that no doubt provided its water. The area within was well-cleared of brush, and contained a decent-sized wigwam. Stones had been stacked over the fire-pit to form a small hearth.

A thatch-roofed fly mounted on poles stood in front of that hearth, so that one might tend the fires in it and wait for food to cook while sheltered from rain or snow. Beneath that fly, just at the edge of the light cast by the fire from the makeshift hearth, huddled a small figure.

Oram and Sh’ron both went straight to the girl, ignoring any further niceties with Argua for the moment, notwithstanding they were guests in his camp. Priscilla, on seeing them, shrank back into herself, trying to make herself even smaller.

”You’re scaring her, almost as bad as me,” observed the wild man gruffly. Chastened, the rangers both stepped back. Oram turned back towards their host while Sh’ron continued to attend to Priscilla, with surprising gentleness for such a big man.

”Tell us how you found and came by her,” the traveler said, a bit more curt and demanding than was perhaps polite. Argua didn’t seem to care, and simply grunted.

”You already know that,” he pointed out. ”Found her with the thwarthides. They didn’t have enough bear hides for the stuff they wanted to barter for, so they offered me the girl. Like I need a young girl who can’t even cook or do much of anything. But I didn’t want to think of what they’d do to her if I left her with them, so I agreed to the trade.”

”She looks hungry,” criticized Sh’ron. The wild man shrugged.

”She won’t eat. She won’t talk. I offered her both plenty of times. She just sits there like that, holding that linnaret pup. It’s a wonder she hasn’t squeezed it to death.”

Oram thought of something and turned towards the other ranger. ”Maybe she’d like some of that honey,” he suggested to Sh’ron. He pointed over to where they had downed their packs. ”It should be near the top now.” As Sh’ron went to get the jar, Oram looked once more at Argua.

”We haven’t heard of thwarthides coming this close to human settlements in a while,” Oram said. ”You said their hunting bear? That’s odd. Bear aren’t all that plentiful around here, either.”

Argua shook his head. ”I don’t know about that. They were hunting bear, alright. Why here? No idea. Judging from the pelts, all they’re finding is black bears, and not very big ones. But they’re harvesting and collecting the hides for some reason. Maybe they’ve wised up to the notion of a fur trade, maybe it’s a glory or pecking order thing. You’d have to ask them.”

A childish noise came from where Sh’ron was sitting with Priscilla. ”It’s good, huh?” the ranger urged quietly. ”Do you like it? Do you want more?”

Oram glanced over to see Priscilla, her mouth full of something, shaking and nodding her head in response to Sh’ron’s questions. She still wasn’t talking, but she was responding. And she was eating.

Argua noticed this, as well. ”What is that stuff?” he asked wonderingly.

”Grizzly bee royal honey. It’s pretty incre-”

”I know what that is!” the wild man snapped excitedly, his eyes widened as he looked back at Oram. ”That stuff’s rare, and it’s gotten more so of late. Not sure why. How did you even get it?!”

”A traveler named ‘Si’ gave it to me on my travels, when I was on Faldrass. Would you like to hear the story.”

The wild man waved a hand dismissively. ”Pass. Let me see that stuff!” He stalked over to Sh’ron and the girl, reaching eagerly for the jar. Sh’ron scowled but, after exchanging a look with Oram, relented and handed over the jar. Argua stuck two fingers in and scooped a generous portion into his mouth. His face lit up.

”That’s the real stuff!” he exclaimed, smacking his lips and licking his fingers enthusiastically. ”I haven’t even seen this stuff in a couple arcs!”

Oram, sensing an opportunity, offered: ”You can keep the jar if you let us take the girl.”

Argua looked up sharply from his admiration of the honey. ”You want me to give you the girl? For this?! That’s not a fair trade. Not at all. Unfair to you! He looked back at the jar, holding it up almost reverently. ”That’s really all you want? To take the girl? This is a treasure!”

Oram nodded. ”Priscilla is a treasure to those she left,” he assured.

Argua snorted skeptically. ”You sure you don’t want anything else?”

The hunter thought a trill. ”Maybe a bit more information. One more question.”

The wild man waved his hand eagerly. ”Ask!” he encouraged.

”Thanks. You said the thwarthides have been hunting bears. Have you seen other parties? Traded with any of them?”

”Seen, yes. Traded, no. Just those guys. But yeah, they’ve been hitting the woods east of here pretty hard.” Mild disgust replaced his earlier rapturous mood. ”I find skinned carcasses a lot. They don’t take anything other than the hide. Waste the rest. Shame.”

Sh’ron spoke encouragingly to Priscilla. ”We’re here to take you home. Are you ready to come home?”

The girl shook her head emphatically, and withdrew the linnaret she held protectively.

Thinking he knew what was going on, Oram amended: ”We don’t need to take you back to the farm. But I know a place with warm beds and nice people. They don’t kill anything, and they’ll let you keep your friend.” In response to the other Ranger’s questioning look, Oram mouthed the word Order. Understanding filled Sh’ron’s face.

”It’s true, they’re really nice there,” he said to the girl. ”Would you like to go there with us, to the nice people with the warm beds?” After a brief hesitation, Priscilla nodded.

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Player Name: Oram Mednix

Points awarded: 10 xp
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

[Discipline] No. Sudden. Moves.
[Engineering] Do-it-yourself stone fireplace!
[Fieldcraft] Make steady improvements to your campsite the longer you are there.
[Leadership] Getting a subordinate to stand down in a tense situation.
[Socialization] Getting your foot in the door for a chance to negotiate further.
[Stealth] Camouflaging your campsite.

Renown: 10 for recovering the girl after a successful negotiation with Argua.
Loot: Priscilla, information, Lost one jar of royal honey from your inventory.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Wealth Points: n/a

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: Short but sweet and effective conclusion to the search, although I have a feeling the troubles with the girl's recovery and perhaps the thwarthides themselves are only just beginning. Seems the Sweetwine isn't entirely safe to wander anymore, not that it really was, but y'know.

I wonder why these Thwarthides are hoarding bear pelts, or appear to be according to Argua. Could it be related to Oram's Bumblebear storyline? I've very much enjoyed this series thus far, and will definitely be reading the rest whether I get to review it.

I almost suspicious about the trade of a jar of royal honey for the girl, but given it's from grizzly bees (which is near priceless), and Argua's having no need for the girl, it was a believable trade. Argua was shrewd to take the girl, perhaps anticipating that people would come looking for her.

I do think Oram was wise not to use his Ezere peace-making abilities when talking sufficed. LIkely that would've alarmed Argua, and probably prompt him to send his animals to attack. So he did well all around. Great writing!

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