[Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring

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[Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring


19 Vhalar 721
Balthazar had a bad feeling almost immediately after Oram deflected his thrust with the spear and countered with his own. The spear was a little bit larger of a weapon than he was used to fighting with and it felt heavier after the impact against Oram's but Balthazar kept it in hand. The rubber tip came quickly towards his face but Balthazar managed to shift his head out of its path a moment before it would have struck him. He was having a little trouble adapting to the spear. Instinct told him to press inwards but with the spear in hand it wasn't going to do him any good to close the distance. Oram's first strike missed but he wasted little time before moving forward for another jab.

Oram seemed to have a better command of the distance between them but Balthazar still felt he could adapt to it. The spear in his hands made it a little more complicated but the basic principles of dodging and blocking with his body were the same. Balthazar stepped back when Oram stepped forward and brushed aside the first, low jab with the end of his spear and Oram shifted for a slightly higher jab the second time. Balthazar could tell that Oram was trying to feel him out but the mage couldn't do much to stop it. He was having a little more difficulty blocking Oram's jabs with the spear than he expected but then Oram alternated again for another strike.

The high thrust shifted into a downward chop and Balthazar saw an opportunity to strike back. He blocked with the shaft of the spear, holding it a little wider so he had command of where Oram's spear would strike, then he attempted to push Oram's spear to the right using the contact that had been made- hopefully opening Oram's midsection for a straight kick that Balthazar sent at him.


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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring

N’uh uh! You missed!

Strong to the weak; weak to the strong. It was something disapproving parents said of playground bullies, and disgruntled clerks of their officious supervisors.

It was also, with a slightly different and more technical meaning, an important principle for how to work from the bind in pole arm fighting. Because of the length of such weapons, it was common for two opponents to meet in a bind with significantly different leverages. In such cases, the rule of thumb was that the opponent with the stronger leverage should lean into that advantage, seeking to drive the opponent’s weapon even farther out of line to create an opening. The “weak” opponent, by contrast, should not try to contest that push directly, but rather yield to the strong, in a way that still enabled them to redirect their own weapon off the bind to advantage. It was crucial in binds to recognize quickly whether one was strong, weak, or equal, and then to decide promptly and act decisively.

Balthazar was the “strong” in this case; the point of the bind was closer in to his lead hand, and to his credit, the Yari did the right thing trying to press his edge in leverage to get Oram’s weapon out of the way. The hunter guessed that long sword fighters learned similar techniques.

Oram, being the “weak”, had less power at the bind but more movement off of it. He let Balthazar push, yielding and stepping back while allowing his own spear point to drop as well as move outward. Then, with a quick oar-like pivot, he rotated the weapon under Balthazar’s lead arm and then came back in for a thrust at his midsection. He had expected his opponent to perhaps bring his own weapon back in with a chop; he had not been expecting a kick.

A kick didn’t make much sense in the Chief Ranger’s mind, if the goal was to connect with his gut. Unless Balthazar’s leg were five feet long, that wasn’t going to happen. And it didn’t. When the Element’s foot extended, it did not strike Oram’s midsection. It struck his lead hand, just as Oram’s spear point connected with Balthazar’s own midsection, which drove the tip skidding up across the black plate along the sternum.

”Ow!” shouted Oram, and then he shouted some other things as well, because being kicked in the hand hurt. He raised that hand quickly and stepped back, gesturing that he wished to break off. Before he did any more fighting, he needed to make sure his hand was all right. Getting knocked around in a spar might be great training, but being well-trained didn’t matter if you’d broken all your fingers.

Oram withdrew to his "corner" and leaned his spear on his shoulder while he examined and flexed his hand. The scale armor he had summoned had mitons which covered the back and palms, and he was wearing fairly heavy leather gloves that protected the rest of his fingers. His bones, due to his connection with Faldrass, were supposed to be extremely tough, as well. He would see about that. The traveler flexed and examined, flexed and poked, until he was certain he had nothing wrong worse than some bruising. Satisfied, he looked up at Balthazar, and signaled that he was ready to continue, should the Yari wish.

Assuming he was, Oram would ready his spear and wait for the next attack. It usually wasn’t a good idea to be passive in a fight, but Oram didn’t know a lot of fancy offensive tactics, and he was guessing that Balthazar did. Perhaps letting him try some would give the Chief Ranger a chance to learn a few things. He had already absorbed one important lesson: just because you were fighting with spears, didn’t mean that your opponent would only ever use his spear.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring


19 Vhalar 721
Sometimes it was good to be wearing armor. Balthazar didn't wear armor a lot. He didn't like the way it felt most of the time. Magically conjured armor, on the other hand, always seemed to fit rather well. Be it the tiara's armor or armor conjured when he embraced the elements. Regardless, he was just glad to be wearing armor when the tip of Oram's training spear struck his midsection and his foot struck Oram's lead hand. Oram seemed to be in pain for a few moments and gestured that he wanted to break off so Balthazar took a step back and put his hand over the spot where his armor had been struck. The blunt force of the spear hurt but it could have been worse. It was really the upward scrape caused by the kick that startled Balthazar a little. Almost took his eye out. Almost. So he was content to take a moment to collect themselves.

You forgot to magic. Fuego commented from the sidelines where he was watching the spar. Fuego wasn't wrong. When Balthazar learned to fight unarmed, he had modified his style to include the elements. A straight kick could propel a powerful blast of wind or fire to extend its range- only he hadn't done that here. In training it would have technically been illegal to do such a thing to Oram.

I haven't fought with a spear since before the war in Quacia, leave me alone. Balthazar replied telepathically to his spectating diri. He noticed Oram checking on his hand, evaluating it for damage. "If you're injured, I can help." He didn't mention that he could only help once but he would if the help was needed. If Oram injured Balthazar, he had another method of healing that he could use a little more frequently. Apart from making the offer, Balthazar said nothing to the Chief Ranger while he assessed his hand.

Instead Balthazar examined his spear and the length he was working with. The kick, unassisted by magic, managed to reach Oram's lead hand. A less durable opponent might have even had something in the hand broken. Effective... but harsh. Not long later, Oram signaled that he was prepared to begin again. Balthazar nodded, indicating the same. Oram didn't launch into an attack and Balthazar had to admit he didn't have any bright ideas for his next one. The spinning hadn't been as effective against Oram as it was against those who didn't know how to fight with a spear so he'd have to try and be more direct. Balthazar took a slow step forward, holding the spear only in his right hand for a few moments before moving it into both (high right hand being the lead hand) and thrusting it towards Oram. It was simple, but there was a lot of force behind it.
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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
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Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring

I bet I can poke your head through a hole *this* small…

Oram nodded in appreciation at Balthazar’s offer to help with his kicked hand, should he need it. The hunter also appreciated that the Yari did not press the point, nor fuss and fret over his welfare and comfort needlessly. Some space and a few trills of time to make sure his hand was alright was all the Chief Ranger needed needed.

On his next pass, Balthazar balanced the shaft of his weapon in one hand as he approached, then grasped with the other when he was ready to thrust. It was a good thrust when it came, with a lot of force behind it; however, once again, the Element picked an approach that telegraphed rather than disguised his attack. Oram had not bought the threat of a one-handed thrust, so he was looking for the other hand -indeed, Balthazar might very well have caught him off guard if he *had* thrust one-handed.

But he didn’t. And he didn’t.

As he backed up, absorbing the momentum of the assault, Oram brought his spear up to parry, pushing his opponent’s point just wide of his shoulder, then used a defensive chop to bring his own point back into the center line. He was now in a position to riposte, and riposte he did. Gripping the very back of his weapon firmly with his trail hand while only holding it loosely with his lead, Oram rotated bodily as he pushed hard with his trail and slid the shaft of his spear forward through his lead hand.

Some people compared the technique he was using to striking with a billiard cue; others described it with more vulgar and risque analogies. It had the advantage of achieving a lot of reach without extending the body much, at the cost of some force and a briefly over-extended weapon. It was imperative to strike and retract very quickly, as otherwise it left the shaft vulnerable and loosely-held. Oram had noticed that Balthazar was not afraid to use his hands and feet independently of the weapon, and he was not going to give his adversary a chance to grab his spear and wrest it away. A combination of speed and surprise should prevent that from happening, at least this once.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring


19 Vhalar 721
Balthazar didn't like spears. He was fairly sure that was the conclusion he was coming too. They were long. They were heavier than a sword and in his hands, at the moment, slower too. That wouldn't change unless he kept using one though so he would continue to practice in little moments. As soon as Oram parried his thrust, sending it wide of his shoulder, Balthazar moved backwards to avoid the defensive chop. He chose to disengage entirely until he could figure out his range. He thought he'd gone far enough. He really was not expecting the strike that Oram attempted. The point of the spear came right at him and Balthazar thought to try and parry it but he couldn't get his spear up to do so before being hit in the armored chest with the rubber tip.

He took a step back and looked down at where Oram had hit him for a trill before looking up at Oram. "Did you just-" He cut himself off and tried to mimic the movement Oram had made to hit him again. He started by moving through the parry, then imitating the chop and the follow up riposte. Balthazar form was a little rough as he went through it but he was just copying what he'd seen and that was imperfect without his ability binding their skills. "Interesting. Never seen that with a spear." He shrugged and gestured for them to continue before moving on the offensive.

A straight thrust was easy to block and he could tell by now that Oram's knowledge of hand placement and footwork was giving him an edge with the weapon. Balthazar was just trying to hit the other man with the pointy stick and testing out what did and did not work. So in his next effort to hit the man with the pointy stick, he went for a downward chop towards Oram's midsection- left hand leading now so he could follow up with another hard thrust directly at Oram as soon as he could get his spear back in line after the chop.

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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring

'tis but a scratch

The slide-thrust seemed to take Balthazar by surprise, and he didn’t attempt an immediate counter; obviously, it was a technique one couldn’t perform with a sword, and the Element seemed to be more…well, in his element, using swords or hand-to-hand than polearms. Oram let himself feel a trill of satisfaction at his result before moving on to the next round.

Balthazar rallied quickly and attacked once more, this time starting with a downward chop. In response, the hunter again stepped back and slightly offline, and at the same time rotated his trail hand upwards so that his spear shaft angled from roughly level to his ear down to shin height. When his opponents spear struck his, Oram once more coiled the point up and counter-thrust. However, he didn’t correct for the fact that the bind this time was close to his lead hand, where his spear had the least rotation; he didn’t rotate laterally enough to overcome the strength of Balthazar’s immediate follow-up thrust, and the tip of the Element’s spear grazed the Chief Ranger’s ribs just a split second before his own spear point touched Balthazar’s left shoulder.

”Well done!” he congratulated, as he backed out of the point, tapping his rib to acknowledge the hit. ”You learn fast. I like to use chops because, as you probably know, they’re hard to read. They do tend to overextend you, though. Shall we go one more round?”

Assuming the Element was up to it, Oram would initiate the attack this time. He would start by thrusting high, then swing the butt of his spear up into Balthazar’s groin. The man was wearing armor, so a strike there probably wouldn’t be especially painful or even effective, but the hunter was counting on instinctive reaction to draw the man’s guard down so that he could then follow up by swinging the head of the weapon back down onto Balthazar’s head. Such an attack required that he shift both his hands higher up and get in closer than he usually preferred, but Oram recognized that it was important to push oneself try out new techniques. All the better to do so now, where mistake could be learned from and wouldn't get you killed.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring


19 Vhalar 721
Oram congratulated him but there didn't seem to be much satisfaction on the Element's face after their exchange. He looked towards his shoulder and then Oram's spear for a trill before looking back at his shoulder and slowly but subtly mimicking the movements that he had just gone through. He was still hit. He might have hit Oram closer to the center but the spear would have damaged his shoulder and stopped him from going forward effectively in a real fight. He should have been content with the small win but he felt he could do better. He should have been paying more attention to dodging and defending when he was striking. If he could be struck by the spear, he could knock it aside with his limbs. Oram was in the midst of explaining why he preferred to use chops when Balthazar was able to refocus on him.

The note about overextending was a good point that Balthazar hadn't thought of when he attacked the Chief Ranger who offered one more round. Balthazar weighed the offer against his desire to see the end of Elisabeth fighting the Tunawa. On one hand, more sparring was good. On the other, watching a Tunawa fight was always interesting. Ultimately Balthazar decided to practice with the spear more so he gave Oram a small nod in agreement before taking the spear into both hands again.

The Chief Ranger launched into an attack that opened with a high thrust and Balthazar parried it with the top half of his spear rather than the middle so he could keep the tip aimed towards Oram. He had only just batted it aside when Oram swung the bottom half of his spear toward Balthazar's groin. He noticed immediately that Oram was getting closer but he didn't quite recognize that it was because he'd shifted his grip higher on the spear. All that mattered was that his opponent was getting into his reach. Rather than lower his own spear to defend against it, Balthazar brought up his leg in a sweeping motion to knock the butt of the spear away. As he blocked with his leg rather than his spear, he had the time to shift his grip higher on the spear. It allowed him to both block Oram's last strike towards his head and reach a similar grip as the Chief Ranger. Using that, as soon as he'd blocked the strike to his head, he drove the backside of his spear forward in a downward swinging motion towards Oram's chest.


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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: [Proving Grounds] Spectacular Spear Sparring

All right, we’ll call it a draw.

Trying out new things was a great way to learn; then again, some lessons were learned the hard way. Oram had, in a crucial moment, lost track of Balthazar’s tendency to fight unarmed, so it took him by surprise when the Element, rather than flinching in response to the attack to his crotch, brought up a leg to knock the spear butt aside. This had the effect of tilting the hunter’s spear so that his follow up attack came down at an angle towards Balthazar’s shoulder, rather than down onto his head.

It also had, a bit more fortunately for Oram, the effect of taking Balthazar off balance for just a moment, giving the hunter that fraction of a trill to adjust before his opponent regained his footing to block and then swing the back end of his spear arounds his chest. Oram was able to rotate his own spear to block the swing, which struck with enough force to send vibrations through the fingers of both his hands. He just managed to keep hold of his weapon, then push off forcefully.

Both men would have to take a step back from that bind, whereupon Oram would swing the point of spear once more out in front of him, reestablishing the reach of his weapon. He would want to learn some grappling or other unarmed techniques before trying something like that again, at least against a skilled opponent. Now that they squared off once more at a proper distance, they were at a standoff. Oram grinned at his opponent. ”Draw that time,” he observed.

A pause followed, during which he noticed the noise from the crowd watching the other fight. Apparently, Elisabeth and the tunawa were quite a draw, far more popular than Balthazar versus Oram. That suited the Chief Ranger just fine; he had not interest in being a performer, and his sparring with Balthazar had served its purpose, or at least the purpose he had had in mind. He furthermore sensed that the Element wanted to see how Elisabeth was getting on.

He took another step back and planted his spear upright. ”I think that’s enough, then?” he asked. ”Thank you for sparring with me.” He gave Balthazar a respectful salute. Truth be told, he was rather curious to see how the fight with the tunawa was going, as well.
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Player Name: Oram, his spear shaken

Points awarded: 15
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

1x Unarmed
2x Strength
1x Athletics
1x Endurance
1x Tactics
3x Combat Polearms & Staves

Renown: 5 for a public spar.
Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: minor bruises and bang ups from a training duel. Nothing serious bcuz you're both fireforged.
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Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level

Player Name: Balthazar; why sweep the leg when you can sweep a spear butt.

Points awarded: 15
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

Unarmed Combat - Using legs to sweep a practice polearm's butt end.
Polearms (Spear) - Lower grip extends the range
Polearms (Spear) - Mid grip is more versatile, but shortens range
Polearms (Spear) - Chops are hard for your opponent to predict
Polearms (Spear) - Basic spear parries
Polearms (Spear) - Basic chop and jab combo
Tactics - Use your opponents moves against them

Renown: 5 for a public spar.
Loot: 0
Injuries/Overstepping: nothing major.
Wealth Points: n/a

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: Well this was an interesting duel. I like a lot of the visualization going on during the match, but some parts were easier to imagine than others.

Balthazar: I changed your unarmed combat knowledge to something that makes more sense with the context of the thread. It's doubtful that blocking a spear with your leg is a valid technique in a real situation. Hopefully, the change I came up with is okay. Otherwise, it's always a pleasure to read about Balthazar in his element, fighting a duel.

Oram: Your descriptions and depiction of action was spot on in my opinion. Although at times I was a little confused which side you were deflecting or directing attacks to, I had little trouble filling in the blanks with my imagination. Well done!

Good writing all, in any event.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!
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