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Xander Andaris
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Venora, Novilane
Thread Name: [Venora] My Brother, Where Have You Gone?
Character(s) Involved: Xander and Alistair
Quick Summary: Xander and Alistair discuss their plans, Xander agrees to help Ali but finally realises he is going to lose his own dream.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance
Fame: Don't think so
Devotion: Maybe but I don't think so, keep an eye out for Ethelynda for Xander
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: None
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Duncan Oisin
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City/Area Taken Place: Venora, Rynmere
Thread Name: I May Be Crazy, Don't Mind Me
Character(s) Involved: Alistair and Duncan
Quick Summary: This wasn't how it was meant to end, IC or OOC...
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see fit, but specifically Gladius, Unarmed and Intimidation for Duncan. For Ali...
Other Notes: Thank you
Fame: Probably :D
Devotion: I think yes for Ali
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Two guys make-out and then break each other's hearts.


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"Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night,
and when you move fall like a thunderbolt"
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Duncan Oisin
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City/Area Taken Place: Andaris
Thread Name: All the fun for the Fair?
Character(s) Involved:Duncan, Pegasus
Quick Summary: A moded thread that died
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you find!
Other Notes: Veeerrrryyyy old. I'm cleaning out my closet.
Fame: Yes? I don't know.
Devotion: nope
Magic XP: nope
Warning: nope


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"Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night,
and when you move fall like a thunderbolt"
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Celeste Andaris
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Andaris, Rynmere

Fit for Purpose
Xander Krome and Celeste Andaris
Celeste declares that she wants to gain some muscle / tone, so Xander shows her some exercises to do. She is very grumbly, but does it. They end up rolling around in the grass.
Knowledge: Strength, Endurance, (also teaching for Xander). Others as seen?
Magic: Nope
Devotion: Xander is marked by Ethelynda (it's all about protecting Celeste for him awww)
Fame: As seen
No warning - although it's effectively a fade to black at the end, it's very pg13

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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Uthaldria
Thread Name: That Dying Sky
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Alistair
Quick Summary: Fridgali get ready to meet Ellasin
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Thanks platonic bae
Fame: Idk
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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Xander Andaris
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City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, Andaris, Astedia
Thread Name: [Astedia] Hands off
Character(s) Involved: Xander and two of his personal NPCs, Lian and Bron
Quick Summary: Xander goes to Drakengard with the intent to find a gift, instead he ends up finding an illegal underground Brothel which he decides foolishly to take down very under manned. It gets a bit crazy but in the end the guards show up and save his butt.
Requested Knowledge: Anything seen combat and tactics related, he uses the Serpent Hood ability from his Taithir mark so knowledge there would be great.
Other Notes: Thanks in advance and this is combat heavy so if you don't like that kinda thing I am sorry!
Fame: Yes positive for the rescue
Devotion: Yes, for Ethelynda (Devotion table), defending innocents, capturing bad people, rescuing innocents, prayer etc
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: Violence and some blood, nothing too graphic but I tagged it mature due to the context of an underground Brothel and kidnapping ring.
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Shirnrad, Gauthrel
Thread Name: Festering Rage
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Fridgar
Quick Summary: Alistair goes bitch mode, Fridgar takes it, Alistair feels bad and finds God. AMAZING.
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: Thanks bae who isn't at the platonic level
Fame: Probably bad fame for killing that horse
Devotion: Ymiden Devotion (+2 Forgiving, +1 Praying)... Syroa (Commit an act of fury +5), as contradictory as that seems, lol
Magic XP: Maybe Fridgar
Warning: I murdered a horse
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Alistair
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City/Area Taken Place: Uthaldria, Gauthrel
Thread Name: Clemency
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair commissions a shrine to Ymiden, and has a heartfelt convo with Kaiserion
Requested Knowledge: Anything
Other Notes: Thanks!
Fame: Idk
Devotion: Ymiden, for forgiving, and for creating a shrine to him
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: No you
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Aeon
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Profession: Hero :|
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Gauthrel, Uthaldria
A helping hand (haha)
Aeon saves Fridgar, Fridgar shows Aeon some magic tricks, they both get a baby scython (Fridgar gets 2 :O ). Bob's your uncle.
Knowledge: Hunting. Something about lurkers for Fridgar if possible. Anything else seen.
Fame: Fridgar uses magic, Aeon does some good things, I dunno, whatever
Devotion: Fridgar is marked by Illaren, but I don't think there's anything
Magic XP: Yes for Fridgar, no for Aeon
Warning: Nahh
Thank you!
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Aeodan
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Viden
Charting the Trajectory
Aeodan does some research and transcription of the Jourkadri Cuts language.
Knowledge: Linguistics, Research, Language: Jourkadri Cuts
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: I'm sure Yvithia would notice Aeodan trying to translate and transcribe a language.
Magic XP: No
Warning: No
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