Review Requests 4.0

[Djinn]

Peer Review Requests

PLEASE DON'T EDIT OR REMOVE REVIEW REQUESTS.

Welcome to the Request Thread! Here you may make requests for your finished threads to be reviewed. The Prophets here are more than happy to help! Posting your review requests here makes it easy for all Prophets and Reviewers to keep track of who asked for what and when so that we can all work together to ensure that your threads are reviewed quickly and fairly.

Please limit your requests to one thread per post... so if you have 5 threads you want reviewed, please make sure 5 individual requests are made.

Remember, although there is a section for Requested Knowledge in the template, please be aware that what you say are just guidelines. It is at the discretion of the person grading your thread whether or not they take into account your specific requests while they read the thread and come to their own conclusions about what your character deserves. Also, be aware that quantity does not necessarily equal quality, and may not equal more points. Once you reach expert or higher in any given skill it will get harder and harder to gain points for those skills as your character grows in competency. If you go into careful detail of your actions, you are more likely to get larger amounts of experience points.

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[b]Thread Name:[/b] (please provide a link to the thread)
[b]Character(s) Involved:[/b]
[b]Quick Summary:[/b]
[b]Requested Knowledge:[/b]
[b]Other Notes:[/b]
[b]Fame:[/b]
[b]Devotion:[/b] (Yes or no to indicate whether your character did something that warrants devotion points.)
[b]Magic XP:[/b] (indicate "yes" if you've used magic & would like the Peer Reviewer to note that earned XP can be put towards magic skills)
[b]Warning:[/b] (indicate if the thread is marked as "Mature", as well as any mature themes or extremes that might make the Peer Reviewer uncomfortable)

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[Faith Augustin]

Scalvoris

Stargazing and Swashbuckling
Padraig and Faith
Pad and Faith go on a nice, romantic evening date. He hires a boat, they stargaze. Of course, therefore, romance is ruined when pirates attack Scalvoris.
Devotion: No
Knowledge: Sword, seafaring, that kind of thing. As seen.
Magic: No.
Fame: We save the island!

Thank you so much for the review!

[Sabine]

City/Area Taken Place: Andaris, Rynmere
Thread Name: Secondhand News
Character(s) Involved: Sabine, Tristan Venora, Andráska Venora
Quick Summary: Sabine needs a story, and comes to the Blacksmith Arms for the latest gossip. She runs into Andraska & Tristan along the way and is suitably unimpressed.
Requested Knowledge: Locations, people, rumours, & skills (maybe Investigation, Persuasion, Negotiation, Storytelling, and whatever else is seen?). Would love it if all three of us could get these two rumours from Ashan 716: "No one has seen King Cassander since he got married to that witch, Freya..." and "I heard the Lord Commander told one of his Captains that the King was away on business".
Other Notes: I bought one of the rumours from the Ashan 716 rumour mill that Kingdom had set up at the time, and the other was on the list of "free rumours". This thread never really grew legs, which is entirely my fault for letting it fall off my radar. I connected with Tristan & Andraska, and they said I could go ahead & wrap it up since it happened in Ashan 716 and everyone has moved on to more current plots. Thank you very much for the review!
Fame: As seen.
Devotion: As seen.
Magic XP: N/A
Warning: N/A

[Xander Andaris]

City/Area Taken Place: Krome, Rynmere
Thread Name: [Krome]Hold the blade
Character(s) Involved: Xander
Quick Summary: Xander has a longsword lesson
Requested Knowledge: The five main guards that are described in the thread and half swording (Any other longsword knowledges) Besides that whatever is seen
Other Notes: Thanks in advance for this, it might not be the most exciting thread but I tried not to make it too boring, I acknowledge it is somewhat grindy but it ties into Xander's long arching plots and aims
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Warning: If you don't like detailed technical training threads this one will not be for you.

[Varthakh]

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: [Mature] Hunting Crocodiles
Character(s) Involved: Fridgar, Danielle Tobelle, Noth
Quick Summary: Pfft. Fridgar goes hunting, Danielle sasses him, Noth holds them at bow-point, Noth shoots Danielle, Fridgar man-handles Noth, Fridgar man-handles Danielle, Everyone is sad.
Requested Knowledge: Hunting, Medicine and Palenon for Fridgar| Intimidation and ranged combat for Noth| (pending danielle)
Other Notes: Fridgar treats Danielle for an arrow wound but is only competent in medicine, feel free to slap her with some nasty scars. Fridgar is also wounded, but I plan on dealing with it in a separate thread continuing from Danielle's departure.
Fame: Positive for Fridgar? Negative for Noth? A mix of both for Danielle for sassing everyone?
Devotion: Ilaren for Frid, if you count his fights with the crocodile and Noth as brawling.
Magic XP: Yes, fridgar blinked a couple of times. I'd like some Rupturing XP
Warning: Yes, Danielle the potty-mouth swears in almost every line of dialogue Also Fridgar gets gored with talons and it's not pretty. I think someone got shot? I dunno.

[Alistair]

City/Area Taken Place: Burhan, Rynmere
Thread Name: Cold Front
Character(s) Involved: Alistair
Quick Summary: Alistair and Talia (coven NPC) explore a Major Fracture and acquire some wells; Alistair learns about wells and Fractures
Requested Knowledge: Please, knowledges on wells and Fractures. Talia taught Ali A LOT here. If you could, please preface all well knowledges with "Ensorcelling: "
Thanks.
Other Notes: Please mention 5 Imedyte wells and 2 Emetyte wells as Alistair's loot. Talia receives the third Emetyte well. Thank you.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: No

[Alistair]

City/Area Taken Place: Ne'haer
Thread Name: A Business Proposition
Character(s) Involved: Alistair, Patrick
Quick Summary: Ali and Patrick discuss a potential 'business partnership' with some scrub
Requested Knowledge: Any
Other Notes: Suck a dick, Crowley!
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Magic XP: No
Warning: Ali is an elitist ass

[Mal]

City/Area Taken Place: Etzos
Thread Name: I Am Become Nothing
Character(s) Involved: Mal (Solo)
Quick Summary: Mal goes after an Ardor and massively oversteps in the process, together with compounding overstepping from the events in another thread.
Requested Knowledge: Unarmed Combat, Acrobatics, Tactics, Discipline, Flying, Endurance
Other Notes: Ardor Totem, talk to Plague if you're confused about the mutations and taking on this grade.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Karem
Magic XP: Becoming
Warning: Vomit, gore, sadness, strangeness.

[Violet]

City/Area Taken Place: Rynmere, on the road
Thread Name: Tent Invasion
Character(s) Involved: Malcolm, Violet
Quick Summary: Violet sneaks in Malcolm's tent when they make camp to attempt to seduce him
Requested Knowledge: Whatever you see, perhaps stealth and seduction for Vio and Discipline and whatever else for Malcolm. Maybe something related to the sleeping powder she put in his wine?
Other Notes: None
Fame: As you see
Devotion: None
Magic XP: None
Warning: Mature tag is for brief nudity, it's nothing major and lasts only two or three posts.

[Tei'serin Nji'ryn]

City/Area Taken Place: Treth/Ne'haer
Thread Name: [Treth] The Bell Tolls for Peace
Character(s) Involved: Tei'serin Nji'ryn, various NPCs
Quick Summary: Tei'serin works with others from the village to solve a problem.
Requested Knowledge: Any that applies. Maybe some for teaching?
Other Notes: Thanks in advance!
Fame: Maybe positive for keeping the kids entertained so the adults could work/doing a good deed?
Devotion: Yes, to Moseke for participating in a festival (Day of Armistice)
Magic XP: None used.
Warning: Not that I can think of.