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Eight Fingers, Like Spider-Legs on the Shoulder

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No hidden knives lay in wait for Zemos as the cycles passed, and his unfulfilled contract didn't seem to set any alarms off. He always intended to keep his end of the bargain, just on... his own time. Which was an elusive concept, at that. The Sev'ryn people, even those not devoted to Moseke, often saw things in terms of past and present, and the two were intertwined. Past impacted the present, and the present gave context to the past. Zemos would see the Emperor had his three splinterstones.

So it was as Zemos returned to his lowly shack in the back of a stone brick building in the Enchanted Quarter, and was met at the door by Lockley, who came literally out of nowhere. Zemos would never quite get used to his ability to turn invisible and then suddenly visible. It seemed like a useful talent, nonetheless.

"Hello Lockley!" Zemos's tone was chipper as usual, when greeting just about anyone. "What brings you to my neighborhood?"

Lockley's mouth slackened, and then straightened. "We wish to have our due now. You have the splinterstones"

Zemos chuckled, and reached into the folds of his robe, which held the very stones that the Emperor was after. "Indeed I do." He handed the three very potent and valuable wells to Lockle. "Then my contract is set?"

Lockley said nothing, but nodded.

"Good. I must get back to my experiments." Zemos said, but was stopped by Lockley's arm on the door. Zemos stared askance at him.

"We have a small bonus for you."

Zemos thought the way Lockley was acting was somewhat threatening, from someone he considered a peer and an ally. "Oh?"

"My magic. The Emperor wishes you to have it, for your service, although he asks that you do another task, to be discussed at a later date."

Giddy at the prospect of another magic to learn, and one as sublime as Glamour... Zemos nodded hsi head, almost without thinking. "Let's go inside!"

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Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

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Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Zemos was inside his shack with Lockley after a moment. Skeever didn't appear to be there, probably on some errand or another. Zemos shivered for a moment. In another moment, the hairs on the back of his neck stood on end. His fingers became clammy and cold. His heart raced. Something was invading his mind, he understood it not to be his own, and yet it was convincing enough to prompt him to shudder.

Then, Lockley coming in behind him, laid four fingers of each hand on Zemos' shoulders. Zemos slouched, his breath ragged, and yet continued to do nothing.

Eight Legs Brother-Father!
They have put their pincers upon us!
Will we be bled dry? Or coccoon,
Into the chyrsalis of a mighty moth?!


Zemos remained silent, but then screamed as Lockely swiftly and mercilessly dug his middle fingers into each eye.

No We Cannot See!
What is it Brother-Father?!
Is it Eight-Legs!


A sharp pain racked Zemos's body as he fell to his knees. He could feel etheric traces of arcana bleed from his eyes as suddenly despite not being able to see, visions were presented to him. He saw nothing but the Eight-Legged menace, spiders everywhere, venomous and deadly.

Razor sharp legs swiftly swept at him from all sides, and merciless dagger-like pincers rolled him into a cocoon. The silk burned him like acid, the smell of a familiar yet buried memory came to him. The scent of sterile cleanliness of Viden. The Bleached, White Halls.

No Brother-Father!
Do not go there!
Come back to Filth!
Come to The Plaguemother

We have need of you!
Feel beyond this false,
and immaculate lie.


Zemos would try, he knew this was an illusion, in his head, but maybe not? Perhaps the Eight-Legs had been in league with the Emperor all along... Perhaps...

But that didn't matter. Be it as it may, he knew what had preceded those torturous moments. That he'd been offere dan induction into the world of Glamour magic. This was just an attempt by the spark to take over immediately and subsume his will to become a true monster.

So with every ounce of determination Zemos pushed back agains the illusory veil. He slapped his way out of the cocoon, as if it wasn't there, because it wasn't. Then he tore through the gauntlet of spider legs and teeth and pincers, leaving the illusory prison of his mind. He saw beyond the illusions, disbelieved it, and came out the other side, groaning and clawing his way across the floor.

His eyes had not yet recovered, but miraculously appeared to regenerate slowly, as he could feel them growing back from when Lockley had blinded him.

"Lockley?" He called out to no answer.

Then a creak of the door of his hovel opened, and familiar footfalls entered. "Skeever?"

"Master, what happened?"

"Fetch me some ocular tinctures, healing tinctures." Zemos pointed in the general direction, his faculties slowly returning.

She did as asked, and he could hear her footfalls making the way over toward the medicine supply. In a few moments, she was back at his side, and pushed the phials into his hands. There, he took the dropper and aimed them for the general area of his eyes. Just the right amount.

This would ensure clean healing, perhaps. Or perhaps he didn't need it. But it was sensible to attempt a remedy in every contingency.

"Thank you Skeever."

"You didn't answer me, Master."

"Lockley, he..." Zemos began, but then shook his head. "The Emperor Beneath granted me power. I can only surmise this will come at a cost." Zemos didn't know if the Emperor had intended to create a monster, or just empower one of his followers. Perhaps both options were okay with him. Perhaps he favored one over the other? At any rate, Lockley was nowhere to be found, and would be unavailable to teach him the ways of Glamour.

Still, Zemos was clever, and had a good sense of himself and his place in the world. Through meditation, perhaps things would be revealed.

"Please stay nearby, while I heal." Zemos asked Skeever, as he rolled himself up into a cocoon in the corner, to shake off the lingering pain of initiation.

Skeever nodded, and stood by, in the shadows where she appeared to almost disappear.

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Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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A trial passed from the initiation, and Zemos recovered fairly well. His compound eyes once more functioned ordinarily, albeit with a strange new mutation that Skeever brought to his attention. He had small pupils in his compound eyes now, with eight lines stretching out from the central point, like a small arachnid. Upon learning this, the egg was the first to make its opinion known.

Mark of terror to our kin.
Don't let this change us Brother-Father.
We are still small but many.
The Hive will prevail
Over these base hunters.


Whatever that meant.

At any rate, Zemosr an something of a clinic out of his shack. For the poorer citizens of the Enchanted Burho. Mostly mercenaries happening by, saw the sign of a medic and attended if their wounds needed healing. Just such a one made their way inside now, suffering a sling wound.

He was in a great deal of pain, which would only get worse. Yet, as Zemos approached him, he could just about touch the pain, or feel as if he could. It was a strange sensation, and doubly so for the pain belonging to another. It was probably in his mind's eye only, but then it stood to reason that a glamourist would have the awareness of someone else's perception, perhaps?

In any case, he set to work, putting the pain-suppressing drug on the table... then he had an idea. He meditated, and tried to divine the method of altering the patient's sensations. With a bit of sleight of hand, Zemos held the pain killer in his palm, and pretended to administer it, in order to convince the patient tha the'd given him something to numb the pain. "For the pain." He said. And the mercenary nodded.

Zemos then began to alter the sensation around the wound, turning it into a more pleasant one, of fur or soft fabric. Something for which he was very familiar, being also a weaver of sorts.

The patient looked up, and frowned, "But I can still feel... it's just not painful. Like someone poking a cotton blanket into my body?"

Zemos smiled. "Yes, it's a special drug I've concocted, that chagnes the sensation so that you will be able to feel without pain, and tell me where the bullet is."

So saying, he reached in with the pliers, and dragged out the bullet. "YOu may want to look away, nontheless." So the mercenary obeyed, trusting the good Doctor.

Finally, after stitching up the wound, and sealing it with some cleansing agents. He wrapped a bandage around the mercenary's arm. And then he handed him the cleaned off sling bullet that had been retrieved.

The mercenary tilted his head. Zemos smiled "Some warriors like keeping trophies, even of their war wounds."

The man shrugged, but took the bullet anyway, and left them.

Skeever spoke from the shadowy corner where hse was observing the process. "How did you do that, without using the tincture?"

Zemos looked at her, his pupils dilating in his compound, glowing green eyes as they adjusted to the dark that she occupied. "Thank Lockley and the Emperor Beneath for that!"

This said, he got to work beginning to weave the Yithnai silk from the cocoon he'd rested in for days, into a usable twine on his spinning wheel.

By the end of the trial, he'd have a small spool of the yithnai thread that he could use either as that, or to weave into a greater fabric.

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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

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Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Re: Eight Fingers, Like Spider-Legs on the Shoulder

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Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Knowledge:
Glamour: Initiation: Involves damaging one of the sensory organs, in Zemos' case it is the eyes.
Glamour: Intiiation is unbearably excruciating, as horrifying stimuli assault one's senses, plying at the initiate's weaknesses
Glamour: The pain of initiation, depending on the level of the master, may be more or less convincing, and easier to overcome.
Discipline: k1
Glamour: Disbelieving the illusions can render them harmless and dispel them
Medicine: Using the right medicines to prevent further injury or illness.

Loot: 1 measure of Yithnai silk
Language -
Losses: 3 raw splinterstone wells
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: Zemos and the Egg are always a delight to read!

This was one of the more interesting magic initiations I’ve read recently. Glamour constitutes an interesting addition to the magic Zemos already has. I wonder what he’ll do with it!

It also sounded as if it hurt. A lot. Personally, I don’t want anybody to stick their fingers into my eyes!

The Egg often sounds very wise (and rather cryptic), but this time, it seemed to be on the verge of panicking. You also described Zemos’ reaction to the initiation very well in my opinion.

It was obvious that it took all of his willpower to push back against the illusory veil!

I’m glad that his eyes got get better and that he was able to do his job again!

Enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: You requested Yari, but Yari is not an option in the “Issue Rewards” section of the MCP!
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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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