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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Balder  [Approved CS]

Balder
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Name: Balder, no given surname as of yet

Race: Lothar

Date of Birth: 7th Ashan, 692

Marks: Krorros (Favored)

Factions Joined: Imperial Army

Languages Spoken: Fluent Common, Broken Atvian









Appearance

Dark blonde hair and tattoos over his arms and torso, Balder is a powerfully built man, stood at a tall 6'10". His form is chiselled with some well-developed muscles after years of riding horses and using heavy armour/weapons, and his body is covered with thick hairs. In his mouth is a sharp set of teeth, his nails closer to claws and his skin is thick. As well as this, his eyes are an unnatural golden/orange colour, similar to that of some canines and other animals. Functionally, these eyes are no different, though the claws, fangs and skin give him some benefit in a fist fight.
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Personality


Balder is a man of code, even if his code is somewhat more lenient than many others. Everyone has their morals, and he believes firmly in his. First and foremost is the betterment of the Empire, and the will of Raskalarn, the Empress. Second, comes the well-being of himself, his comrades and the citizens. Finally, the justice on those that have done wrong. As this is the order he prioritizes, he will always ensure the will of the Empress is followed over anything else. He will also ensure that the safety of those that need protection come before revenge or justice, as it is far better to save those that need it than to punish those that deserve it.

As a part of this, he follows a code of honor, as shown below.

Code of Honor:


Do as the Empress would. Follow by her lead, live by her laws, fight with her ferocity.

Never lay harm to those under the protection of the Empire and her people.

Treat prisoners of war as citizens, for they are now unarmed. Should they try and escape, this rule folds, and they become enemies once more.

Be ready for anything. Learn to fight against all odds. With or without a mount, with or without weapons, with or without rest. Become unbreakable.

Bring honour to the Eternal Empire.


Outside of this code and his duties, Balder is a relaxed and laid back character. He can joke and drink, he is humble and chooses to only talk of his battles with those that ask or that fought alongside him. Manners are an important part of his character, being polite and giving respect to all that have earned it, even if they are simply slaves of the Empire. All those that work under the banner of Empress Raskalarn are given equal respect.
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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History



Starting as a young boy, Balder knew little of his family. His father was a brave and respected man that spent much of his time away in battle, and his mother wasn't a woman he had ever met, leaving when he was born to go and continue her life elsewhere. Rather than tell him he should pursue her, his father always insisted he respect his mother's decision, though it was clear from a young age that Balder's father missed and loved her deeply. As a result of this, and his father being a soldier himself, Balder was very quickly taught the values of duty and responsibility. It shaped him, whether he knew it or not, to believe duty came before much else. In turn, he became helpful at home, taking care of the house when his father wasn't around and even going out to buy groceries and supplies from the age of ten.

Whenever his father was home, he insisted on training Balder as best he could, starting with a sword and shield. The shield felt normal and fine, but it became clear quickly that the sword wasn't working. A small handful of weapons were tried and Balder struggled to grasp them, his father starting to think it might be easier to teach him a ranged weapon. So the pair went out to look for a fletcher to make a bow, and as they browsed markets and stared into shops, Balder noticed a weapon that stood out to him. Simply eleven years old, he gestured to the Flail a merchant was selling. His father explained that flails weren't used as often by infantry, though they could be, but sometimes by Cavalry. The Lothar's eyes lit up with excitement at the idea of it, riding through the enemies of the Empire, swinging his flail and blocking arrows with his shield.

Uncertain, but willing to let his son try, his father allowed Balder to purchase the flail and try it. While he was bad with it at first and struggled to use it properly, he insisted it was the weapon he wanted to use. Then, after some months went by, he found his element with the weapon. Time went by and he continued to train for years, hoping to one day be a good soldier as his father was. No matter how hard he trained, however, he knew deep down he wouldn't be good enough to fight those that had real battle experience. At least not until he had some of his own.

Then, at the age of seventeen, he was training at home one day when he was met with some soldiers of the Empire. His father had died on a mission, fighting bandits that had set up an ambush, killing over thirteen soldiers - his father included. As he had no mother, the soldiers asked if he was in need of someone to care for him. But with his Eighteenth arc around the corner, Balder declined. He mourned his father for some time, but continued with life as normal, and on his eighteenth birthday he enlisted as a private for the Imperial Army, where he has worked since.

As years went by he developed a fierce loyalty, as his father had, to the Imperial Army and all those he considers comrades in it. As his father was, he was humble, rarely talking about his accomplishments but often bringing up the prestige of those around him, lifting them up where he could. It helped with morale, and he quickly found himself popular with the other Privates. As well as this, Officers could see his father's ferocity and willingness to fight in his own training. They gave him lessons in riding, and he quickly joined the Cavalry, learning the basics of riding a horse swiftly and finding it meshed well with his training with a flail.

His first few battles went well, his time on a mount proving easy for the man as he picked up the skill quickly. Over the Arcs he fought bandits, traitors and anyone that the Army ordered him to, following the orders of his Empress and superiors. Despite a long time in the army, working with them for over ten years, he remained as a Private at his own request - wanting to experience the life as a foot soldier his father did before even considering attempting a promotion. Now, after some time, Balder is ready to push himself and to become the best he can be.

For the glory of the Eternal Empire.
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Skills & Knowledges



EDIT: This is now outdated, please view my profile to see my actual skill scores!

Skills
Skill Total Points Proficiency
Endurance (45/250) Competent
Etiquette (15/250) Novice
Mount: Horse (26/100) Competent
Shielded Combat: Heater Shield (15/250) Novice
Strength (15/250) Novice
Whips and Flails: Spiked Flail (26/250) Competent

Knowledges

Endurance

  • Endurance x5 (SP)
    Endurance: 6 (Magma Beast)

Etiquette

  • Etiquette x2 (SP)
  • Etiquette x2 (Approval)

Mount: Horse

  • Mount: Horse x11 (SP)

Shields: Heater

  • Shields x2 (SP)
  • Shields x2 (Approval)

Strength

  • Strength x2 (SP)
  • Strength x2 (Approval)
    Strength: 6 (Magma Beast)

Whips and Flails: Spikes Flail

  • Whips and Flails: Spiked Flail x11 (SP)
    Combat - Whips and Flails (Spiked Flail): 8 (Magma Beast)

Non-Skill

  • (SP) Immortal: Raskalarn
  • (SP) Immortal: Karem
  • (SP) Layout: Eternal Empire
  • (SP) Location: Eternal Empire
  • (SP) Laws: Eternal Empire
  • (SP) Customs & Festivals: Eternal Empire
  • (SP) Ranks and Titles: Imperial Army
  • (SP) Ranks and Titles: Eternal Empire
  • (SP) Blessing: Krorros
  • (SP) Blessing: Velduris

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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Re: Character Profile



Here is where you record all the skill points you receive (Startup XP, CS Approval Rewards and, of course, Thread Reviews!) and all the points you spend on your skills. Again, below is an example which you can edit.

Thread or Skill Name Points Adjustment Running Total
Whips and Flails: Spiked Flail 26 0
Mounts: Horse 26 0
Endurance (RB) 25 0
Etiquette 10 0
Shields: Heater 10 0
Strength 10 0
Etiquette (Approval) 5 0
Shields: Heater (Approval) 5 0
Strength (Approval) 5 0
The Magma Beast 20 20
Endurance 20 0
Shadows under the Palace 15 15
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Re: Character Profile

Krorros

Might of the Conqueror
A skill that is passive in nature, Might of the Conqueror provides the blessed with a small, but noticeable, boost to their strength and endurance, so that they might be able to more easily perform tasks they would otherwise struggle with.

Mortal Foe
The will of Raskalarn is one of the conqueror and equally strong individuals will stand in the way of such ambition. Mortal Foe allows the marked to identify a worthy opponent as their mortal foe, as someone who must be overcome at all costs. Once that foe is recognized, and only one may be active a time, a Marked will always be aware of when their mortal foe is near, or within the same city. They will always feel a tug toward that fated confrontation and when it occurs, fate intervenes in such a way as to separate the two for their duel. Once used, this ability cannot be again till Mortal Foe has been dismissed.

Krorros Skills I
The character is granted an extra three skill points which may be spent only on the following skills: Any Weapons Skill (Including Seige Weapons), Unarmed Combat, Discipline, or Leadership. Any skill points granted by this Mark can break the 250 (or 100 if fast track) point cap on skills. Within these skills, the points may be spent how the pc chooses.
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Re: Character Profile


  • Clothing
    • Casual warm weather clothes (Lighter fabrics, cotton, etc)
    • Casual cold-weather clothes (Jacket/coat, fur clothing, etc)
    • Imperial Army uniform (Non-combat)
  • Weapons
    • Lance (Standard issue cavalry, never used)
    • One-handed spiked flail (Average Quality)
    • Good quality steel longsword (Heirloom, hung up on his wall, his fathers old sword)
  • Armor
    • Chainmail shirt, helmet, greaves, gauntlets, round shield (Average quality, standard issue)
    • Heater Shield (Tier 6, basic Quality)
    • Scalemail armour (Tier 6, basic quality)
  • Mount Things
    • Average quality brown horse, "Groftnir" (Imperial Army)
Housing

With a house deep in Korlasir, Balder keeps his house comfortable and somewhat well decorated. While there isn't anything too exuberant or fancy, he at least has some furniture that is comfortable, some plants he cares for in his free time. While duty is an important part of his life, he understands the same is true for having a place to rest after a long day, so he can go into the next day with as much determination and energy as he did the day prior. Every day is a challenge, and his home is where he goes after that challenge has been crushed.
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Re: Character Profile



Current Wealth Tier:
Item Adjustment Total WP
Starting Package (City Dweller) Tier 5 (66 WP) 66
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Balder
Approved Character
Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Miscellaneous

Re: Character Profile


Item/ Thread Renown Total
Starting Renown 25 25
Magma Beast 10 35
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Balder
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Posts: 39
Joined: Fri Mar 11, 2022 5:05 pm
Race: Lotharro
Profession: Cavalryman
Renown: 50
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Wealth Tier: Tier 1

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Re: Character Profile



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