Review Requests 2.2.6

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Vega
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ Too Much of a Good Thing~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I'm trying out Vega's new Psychology Capstone Shurrup An' Get On Vega has absolutely no interest in sitting down and talking things through. For her, the best therapy is time working on something. Intensely practical, Vega has found her therapy in helping out in Hopetoun, for example, as it allows her time and headspace to work things through. She is able to help people do the same and, as such, working with someone on a "project" (defined here as something which has a physical outcome, be it needlework, hunting, woodwork, or even building a wall - something physical, though not necessarily demanding) she is able to work with them psychologically. Thus, building a wall together (as an example) acts as therapy for the individual and helps them as much as a series of sessions of therapy would normally. It should be noted that this is not taking therapy outdoors - it's Vega's ability to get to the heart of the matter, say it how it is, and promote a sense of achievement at the end. and I thought this was an interesting means of doing so. Sorry if it's boring!
Vega

Skills Used:
  • Logistics (Competent)
  • Psychology (GM)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: In order to know what resources you have, you just have to count them.
Logistics: If you have a system, you can test it
Logistics: Having a list only helps until someone changes something.
Logistics: If something goes wrong, you need names and dates to track down a problem
Psychology: Belonging isn't a place, it's a sense.
Psychology: Shared trauma can unite people.

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: If you think so?
Wealth Points: Nope


Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Praetorum
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: A Boxful of Nails
City/Area: Rharne Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Smithing (Competent), Endurance (Expert), Strength (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Smithing: A Boxful of Nails x5
Endurance: A Boxful of Nails x1

Loot: A box of nails
Injuries/Overstepping: Some muscle ache
Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Mab Prell
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: A Deer's Dula
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, The Menagerie
Notes/Warnings: Birthing scene
Skills Used:
Animal Husbandry (10XP, Novice)
Animal Training (10XP, Novice)
Attunement (10XP, Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Animal Husbandry: Deer Dula
Attunement: Note of Exhaustion
Attunement: Note of Devotion
Attunement: Note of Instinct
Attunement: Hafrein Frequency
Attunement: Frequency of Motherhood


Non-Skill Knowledges:
Hafrein: Rumoured to Have Impressive Awareness of Surroundings
Blodwen Golly: Rides the Hafrein Delilah


Loot: M/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Whatever is appropriate
Wealth Points:N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes! First magic using thread - let me know if I did something wrong.

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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: It's Not About the Destination...
City/Area: Between Egilrun and Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Ummm...don't think so! Just a nice ride in the countryside...
Woe
Skills Used:
Novice: Mount
Competent: Endurance
Expert: Discipline, Investigation, Detection, Meditation, Empathy, Attunement.
Grandmaster: Psychology

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: x 2
Investigation: Vigilante justice is a disruption of the peace.
Investigation: x2
Mount (Ground): Regaining control of a bolting Destiar.
Mount (Ground): x 5

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Natalia
Skills Used:
Mount (Land) - Novice
Endurance - Novice
Discipline - Competent
Detection - Novice
Socialization - Novice
Cosmetology - Novice
Deception - Novice
Meditation - Novice

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Mount (Land) - Grabbing another's reins is dangerous
Mount (Land) - Calming your mount after upset
Mount (Land) - Crossing reins can send mixed signals to mount
Mount (Land) - Keeping your mount away from another mount in distress
Detection - Noting when you don't recognize someone
Detection - Noting when someone is lost in thought
Endurance - Riding a horse a great distance
Cosmetology - Noting when someone else wears flattering colors
Deception - If you are going to lie, make sure it's with widely known information
Discipline - Keeping calm under duress
Discipline - Quelling negative emotions by focusing on something else
Meditation - Using breathing to focus

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes


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Devin
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Another Meeting with the Builders
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Part 3 in a series of threads about planning the new manor on Faldrass.

Herman is a NPC for Saoire's Dream. Miranda and Marvin are Flavor NPCs, although they may eventually become proper NPCs with a writeup.

Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/130k), Master Cosmetology (154x/82k), Master Detection (151x/50k), Expert Discipline (80x/48k), Expert Endurance (76x/36k), Competent Cooking (31x/45k), Competent Logistics (26x/12k), Competent Etiquette (26x/48k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Making whipped cream
Cooking: Using spices as food coloring
Discipline: Struggling to suppress a grin
Endurance: Whisking can make your hands hurt
Logistics: Planning the interior of your new manor
Logistics: When planning a meal, consider the possibility of your guests wanting seconds

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5, for inviting the builders and discussing the manor with them.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 156

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6




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Thread Name: The Word Burglar
City/Area: Faldrass, Saoire's Dream, Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: Not really. Stella is an NPC from Saoire's Dream.
Kalortah
Skills Used:

Novice: Larceny, Writing, Storytelling, Teaching.
Competent: Deception, Seduction, Socialization.
Expert: Detection.
Master: Intimidation.
GM: Singing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Larceny: Plagiarism: Stealing words and ideas from a student.
Storytelling: The Starling and the Black Cat: A tale of larceny.
Storytelling: Stories can have a moral.
Writing: x 3

Loot: Stella's Rhyming scheme.
Injuries/Overstepping: none

Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No



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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Milian Le Moigne
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Doran
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Grading Exams
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Ymiden 721 Wealth Thread. Doran grades the exams of newbie alchemy students which is probably not very exciting, but part of his job as a professor.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/200k), GM Science (100x/120k), GM Detection (250x/80k), Master Meditation (155x/76k), Master Discipline (151x/76k), Expert Teaching (79x/79k), Expert Socialization (76x/83k), Competent Writing (30x/34k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Golden Salamander acid can be used to make items fireproof
Discipline: Resisting the temptation to shake your head
Meditation: Clearing your mind of (somewhat) unpleasant thoughts
Science: Binders are used to thicken a liquid
Teaching: Grading an exam
Teaching: Talking about an exam helps students understand their mistakes better

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Probably not.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 137

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N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Vega
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: ~~~~Little Bird~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None. Thank you for reviewing!
Vega

Skills Used:
  • Caregiving (Competent)
  • Psychology (GM)
  • Woodworking (GM) - as she's designing stuff.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: No knowledge requested.

Loot: None - this is a set-up for a thread later.

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope

Renown: Maybe? Not sure?

Wealth Points: Nope.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Praetorum
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Fun with Funds and Finances
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Finances
Skills Used: Math (Untrained), Socialization (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Math x3
Socialization x3

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Math induced headache? Probably not
Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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word count: 47
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Devin
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Profession: Baron Smooglethorn
Renown: 1145
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Letters on the Beach
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I only requested 4 knowledges on purpose. Aidan is a Personal NPC. The letters were also posted in the appropriate letter threads (Saoire & Darius).
Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/130k), Master Cosmetology (154x/82k), Master Detection (151x/50k), Expert Discipline (80x/48k), Competent Etiquette (26x/48k), Novice Writing (20x/17k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Flowers can make great hair ornaments
Detection: A shimmer of white in the orange sand
Etiquette: You can’t go completely wrong by addressing a female Immortal as a lady
Writing: Writing a letter to an Immortal

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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word count: 118

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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