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Hunter. Hun-ter. Jinyel ran a finger over the letters after the ink had dried, desperately trying to tie each shape to a sound in his mouth. A part of him wanted to ask each letter, because Rickith had read them all so smoothly that he was certain to know what each of them sounded like.

But there simply was no time for learning small things. Not now, when the end was so close.

Now the annulment needed to be ‘notarized.’ Jinyel had no idea what that meant, but Rickith had been true to the path so far, and so Jinyel trusted that the clerk at the desk had the power to make it binding. And so he followed the alchemist back to the desk and the woman behind it.

The clerk examined their annulment paper with a raised eyebrow, and despite Rickith’s confidence, Jinyel couldn’t help a lurch of uncertainty. She spent so long in examination, he was certain they had done something wrong ― until she lifted her gaze once more, and asked for the final seal: the administrative fee.

Money meant a deal. A deal meant that things were satisfactory.

Jinyel let out a sigh of relief. Money was one of those resources he did not mind losing, because he couldn’t eat it or craft it into something useful. He pulled his coinpurse-turned-treasure-bag from his belt and dug through it, though it took several trills to get through his other various items: bits of coral, pearly abalone shards, interesting rocks he had picked up over the seasons. He accidentally handed the woman some yellow feathers amongst the nels, and she handed them back with a baffled look.

“We, er… we do not barter for services in government administration. I only need this many coins.”

She took far less money than he had expected and pushed the rest back to him.

“As of this moment, you are no longer married. Now, if that’s all you came in for, the hour really has grown rather late, and I―”

“More.” Wait. I need. “Another. I need another…” What’s the word? “Piece of paper for getting married. I need one of those, with empty spaces for the names.”

She tilted her head at him. “You want a… marriage license?

“License.” Yes. That thing. “How much for one of those?”

“I, well, a blank one is no trouble, we have a cabinet of blank files in the back, but… you don’t mean to marry yourself, do you? You’ve only just been separated.”

I need one. He slid the nels back at her. “How much?”

She slid the nels back. “No charge. Not until you file it, anyway, with the names of the married persons upon it. I suppose you can be separated from as many spouses as quickly as you like.”

Jinyel nodded his understanding, and with a look of trepidation the clerk provided him with a blank marriage license. Not trusting anyone to write upon it but himself, Jinyel brought the paper to Rickith.

This here. He pointed to the blank spaces. “This is where names go. There are no names on this?” Concern, double checking. “I need…” Embarrassment. Hesitation. “… to be sure. I need to know how to put the right names on it. The lines and loops which make my real name. Can you help me? I do not know how to write ‘Jinyel.’”


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As Jinyel shelled out the nels to her, Rickith patiently waited until they're dealings were done. Then Jinyel asked something that Rickith was not expecting whatsoever. He asked for a blank Marriage license. Was he planning on marrying someone so soon after becoming annulled? Rickith did not know, and it was not truly his business to know, though curiosity nearly got the better of him when Jinyel asked him how to write his name upon the marriage license the woman had handed him. "Let's go sit over there at that table again," he said, leading Jinyel back to the table they had been sitting at prior. Once they walked over there, Rickith would set his satchel down, and withdraw from it his journal, flipping it to a blank page, and taking out his pen as well.

"You need to know how to spell your name, Jinyel? Here, I'll show you..." he said, and then on the blank piece of paper in his journal, he would write out the name "Jinyel" on the paper, legible so that Jinyel was able to see it properly.

"That's how you would spell your name, based on how it sounds when I speak it," he said to the man, wondering whom he was planning on marrying again so quickly. But thinking again as a jealous pang went through his mind, he noted to himself that it was Jinyel's mind whom he'd want to marry, and so long as it was consensual and made Jinyel happy, Rickith wouldn't try to interfere at all. The man really didn't remember any of their time together, and as special as it had been to Rickith given what he had lost only trials beforehand, it wasn't anywhere near the forefront of Jinyel's own mind.
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Hunter. It was only barely a familiar word, with its six letters and vaguest meanings attached to them. Words were written from left to right, Jinyel was quickly learning. Hun-ter. Two sounds for six letters. Three letters for each sound ― a beginning, middle, and an end.

Hun. ‘H,’ for the breathy sound like wind out of his lungs. ‘U,’ for bun, run, done. ‘N,’ for the soft-stop at the end, for when and sun and on.

Ter. ‘T,’ for the hard-start, tree and torn and task. ‘E,’ for the short, pressed sound, were and cur and her. ‘R,’ for the stop so soft that it could run down to nothing at all, bore and tear and fire.

Hunter. A name that had guarded him well since it first came to him.

But ‘Jinyel’ was an entirely different set of sounds. There wasn’t a single part of it similar to Hunter. As the hunter followed the alchemist once more to the table and settled down beside him, this word was likewise entirely different from the one before.

J, gem, dragon, jar.

I, in, win, sin.

N, north, never, knot.

Y, yip, yearn, yonder.

E, well, threat, yet.

L, long, lever, lend.

JINYEL. It was only slightly more uniform than when he’d written ‘Hunter,’ if only because he approached it more as a sketch than a word. He used his fingers to level out two horizontal lines in Rickith’s notebook, top and bottom, and placed dots along those lines to organize the crowns and bases of each letter. Then it was simply a matter of connecting the dots, though his ‘J’ streaked a moment in the wrong direction before he looped it back around into an awkwardly large hook.

It made him uneasy, that hook. Too large and unlike the others. Like seashells woven together into a garment that was only adequate, if it had even been that. Mistakes that seemed small to his eye, but which were actually mountains to someone else. Careful effort that was never quite a success, never quite worthy. Never quite ‘Yes, this is what I wanted. This will be enough.’

And so he did not write his name on the certificate. He didn’t dare mark that paper with ink until he knew how to write ‘Jinyel’ in a way that would be enough.

Jinyel did not have paper, but he had the money to get a notebook like this. He had seen them in every city he’d visited, though he’d never had use of them. For now, he rolled the sleeve up one arm to carry the marks so he wouldn’t forget.

Graft: Energize: Create Flesh: Scar.

Jinyel’s eyes sparked gold. It was a simple spell, but a delicate one; the skin on his forearm rippled in answer, darkening in lines to mimic the lines on the paper. Soon, his arm was decorated with ‘JINYEL,’ and below it, ‘HUNTER.’

Thank you. Jinyel rolled his sleeve back down to hide his names. His eyes lost their glow, and he turned plain grey irises upon Rickith once more. You have saved me. “I am in your debt. I have no time to repay it here and now; I must go to Faldrass as soon as I find paper to practice these names.”

He stood, handing back Rickith’s pen and notebook.

“But you may call upon me, and I will lend aid as swiftly as I can. As a healer I can mend your flesh, or… do other things to it, beyond what other healers can do. If you cannot find me, then find Woe Morandi. If you speak of him anywhere in Scalvoris, he will hear of it, and his agents can carry your message to me. They know me only as Hunter, so that is the name you must use to find me.”

He pulled his cloak tighter, and for a moment he stared through the wall toward the volcanic island that held his sun.

Now I depart, swiftly. “Our debt is spoken. After I reach Faldrass, I will come if you call and render whatever service you ask. Until we meet again, Rickith of Scalvoris. This memory will be written in stronger stone than that of the Sacred Forest.”


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As Rickith watched Jinyel work on the letters to make see how he was writing them, he remained silent, intent to let Jinyel work on it himself. Learning to read and write took time, it was not something that could be done overnight. Rickith knew this himself with the schooling his mother had put him through while he was growing up. Learning to read and write at a very young age, it came naturally to him, but it seemed to Jinyel that it would not be as natural for him, given his apparent age, and the fact he'd never really had any learning or practice with reading and writing, or so it seemed.

When Jinyel seemed to try tracing the lines through the dots, Rickith could see that he was having difficulty with it, perhaps making it perfect? He then saw a glint of gold within Jinyel's eyes, and that put a surprised look upon Rickith's face. He had never seen anyone's eyes glow golden like that, but then something else caught his eye. Jinyel's rolled up sleeve, Rickith saw the names Jinyel and Hunter appear in what looked like scarring upon Jinyel's arm. Is that magic? he thought to himself, before Jinyel rolled up his sleeve and looked back towards Rickith, handing him back his journal and pen.

"I've never seen anyone do that before..." he commented towards Jinyel, before Jinyel began to speak of his debt to Rickith. Nodding, Rickith said, "Restoring your memories is the debt that you owe me or at least making the attempt to. I have to do some more research on memorberries, and figure out when and how to harvest them before working on a potion to restore one's memories. I don't think that they probably bloom in Cylus, so perhaps you can come by the lab I work at some time in Ashan to see me, and we can work on the potion together to see if we can get your former memories restored..."

"If I need you before then, I can call on you, if I find out anything else during my research..." he then said to Jinyel. "It was good to see you again, and I'm happy that you're seemingly in good health... I understand you have important business in Faldrass, so I'll let you get to that. I can make my way home from here, The inn is not too far away, and the cold doesn't bother me too much..." As he spoke, Jinyel probably realized by now that Rickith hadn't even been wearing a coat or anything, just his normal tunic, leather pants, and shoes. The mark of Ezere kept Rickith warm enough in the cold bite of Cylus, so he wasn't concerned about freezing to death in the colder months anymore.

He wouldn't mention anything further on the marriage license. What Jinyel did with himself, or others was none of Rickith's business, even if he did have a certain fondness for the man. It was probably best to keep any relationship with him a platonic one, given the fact they both lived two very different lifestyles, and opposites may attract in science such as magnets, but perhaps not so much in sociology...
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Thread: Well Met By Moonlight
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Do you want this to be considered for Mark Progression? Maybe? Jin is freeing himself from an unwanted marriage, and Rickith is sowing peace by helping with the annulment so Jin doesn't end the marriage by widowing himself
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Hello Jinyel. This was a very emotional thread and you wrote him very well as he struggles with his missing memories and trying to rebuild a relationship. His honesty about his missing memory is a good thing and he works on being patient with people. You play his frustration at the situation he is in well as he struggles through emotions that seem on the verge of overwhelming him. I wish him the best as he tries to untangle his life from the webs of other people. Thank you for the Read. Fate.

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  • Annulments aren’t that simple. That paperwork just started the process. A judge must actually decided if there was fraud involved in the marriage and must make it official. A court date is set for Ashan 27th 726. Messages are sent to the parties involved based upon their address on the marriage licenses. If it is a no show the annulment will be voided and a fine issued for wasting the courts time.

Rickith Lanza

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Hello Rickith. Rickith was very calm and sweet through this whole thread. He literally had chaos descend upon him. He managed it well and worked with his friend as they tried to figure out how to solve the problem. I love how he makes helping his friend get his memories back a goal and he insists that having Jinyl let Rickith try and restore his friends memory as payment. Hopefully it will work. Thank you for the Read. Fate.

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  • Alchemy: Memorberries can help retrieve lost memories
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