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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: And Now for Something Completely Different
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Sculpting
Transmutation: mending what is broken
Transmutation: Rock and stone are preferred qualities
Transmutation: Adjusting to having one's own self transmuted by mutation.
Aberration: Bonding closer with the Harvester through mutation.
Aberration: The more skilled you become, the stronger the addiction.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Alistair
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Profession: Wanderer
Renown: 1000
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Thread Name: To Prey on Mantis: Part Two
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Some dead peepol and violins.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Tactics: Advancing a perimeter
Tactics: Using a forest to your advantage
Tactics: Reversing an ambush
Tactics: Forcing your enemies to strike
Strength: Grappling your enemy's weapons with raw strength
Axes and Bludgeons: Skill free swinging

Hiladrith: The Sacrasav
Hiladrith: The Sacrasav: Often red of hair...?

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Gimme medium, yo. I'm submitting this as an impact thread; Alistair killed Hiladrathi Sacrasav, avenged his brethren, inscribed a message into their corpses, and then informed fleeing mages of both his deed and a place for them to go to.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Last edited by Alistair on Sun Jun 03, 2018 1:58 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 126
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Vega Dweeb
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Thread Name: Reflections on the Water
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Reflecting on having died. Bit rambly

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Climbing: Avoid friction burns when climbing with rope.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Pressure on the bow produces different depths of sound
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: The difference between good and exquisite is technique and emotion
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Allowing your emotion out through playing.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: The difference between jumpy and smooth bow technique
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Changes in pressure on the strings produces different sounds.


Loot: Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Vega Dweeb on Sun Jun 03, 2018 2:10 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 100
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Magic Arrow
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings:

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Ether missile
Transmutation: Sculpting
Transmutation: Sculpting stone
Transmutation: Ether missiles corrode as they hit.
Discipline: Calming yourself before a spell
Discipline: Gathering your thoughts.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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word count: 57
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Patrick
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Profession: Trouble
Renown: 575
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Thread Name: Prisoner of the Beast
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Doesn't look like either are posting, so I figured it best to go ahead and submit it for review.
Requested Rewards: None, this is a Sessfiend event

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe 5 or 10? Since he's pretty much 'discovered' but not outright.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Sun Jun 03, 2018 11:40 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 67
"Freedom is everything."


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Patrick
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Thread Name: What Have We Become
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Ditto
Requested Rewards: None but thanks

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Your call
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Sun Jun 03, 2018 11:40 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 34
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Patrick
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Thread Name: Begging Forgiveness
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: May require a mod's input at the end.
Requested Rewards:
Tei'serin
General
  • Ancient Language: a beautiful language
  • Ancient Language: a language of power
  • Ancient Language: strange and unique
  • Cassion: wants four artifacts
  • Cassion: trying to make other Immortals get the artifacts for him?
  • Emea: Emean beings are fickle and can be uncontrollable
  • Emerath: an Emean being
  • Emerath: created the maze at someone's request
  • Moseke: fearsome when angry
  • Moseke: can move with amazing speed when she wants to
  • Moseke: angry with Ymiden
  • Moseke: has an agreement with Ymiden not to interfere with each other's Chosen
  • Niv: burned to death in the maze
  • Patrick: poisoned in the maze
  • Ymiden: in trouble with Moseke
  • Ymiden: has an agreement with Moseke not to interfere with each other's Chosen
Patrick
SKill
  • Linguistics: Exposure to Ancient Language
  • Linguistics: Ancient Language Sounds Powerful
General
  • Cassion: A Cousin To Ymiden?
  • Cassion: Hunting For Four Artifacts?
  • Immortals: Can Connect To Their Marked
  • Moseke: Immortal of Earth, Stone, Nature, Life
  • Moseke: A Motherly Figure
  • Moseke: Has A Nasty Temper
  • Niv: Burned Alive During Emerath's Game
  • Niv: Has Spunk For A Tunawa
  • Niv: Has A Chance For Rebirth
  • Tei'serin: Marked By Moseke
  • Tei'serin: Sacrificed During Emerath's Game
  • Personal: Scarred From The Maze?
  • Personal: Not A Hero, Certainly Not 'Hero" Material
  • Personal: Missing Your Older Brother
  • Personal: The Crippling Reality of Failure
  • Personal: A Chance For Redemption?
  • Ymiden: Can Take A Hit
  • Ymiden: Can Remove the Sessfiend Curse
  • Ymiden: Wants You To Learn True Forgiveness
Loot: Tei'serin - I think she gained another of Moseke's Favor?
Patrick - Ymiden's Band artifact
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Your call
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Mon Jun 04, 2018 6:09 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 291
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Patrick
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Thread Name: So Close and Yet
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Very emotional stuff dawg
Requested Rewards:
Faith
  • Zuuda: Ectoplasmic Blood: Allows you to control ectoplasm
  • Zuuda: Ectoplasmic Blood: Ectoplasm "feeds" souls
  • Zuuda: Ectoplasmic Blood: Souls can manifest, but it's exhausting to do.
Patrick
SKill
  • Discipline: Remembering Not to Talk to Ghosts in Public
  • Rhetoric: Talking To A Ghost Through A Medium
  • Rhetoric: Guessing What Ghosts or Spirits Are Saying
  • Discipline: Steadfast Mindsets and Firm Beliefs
  • Discipline: Endeavoring To Keep Personal Promises
  • Rhetoric: Never Going Back On Your Word
  • Rhetoric: The Antics of Fairness
  • Negotiation: Bartering On Behalf of One's Soul?
  • Discipline: Maintaining Composure In Emotional Situations
General
  • Personal: Slowly Grasping The Paranormal
  • Ecology: Ghosts and Ectoplasm
  • Ecology: The Process of Death
  • Pier and Pre: Twin Immortals of Judgement, Equality, Justice, Truth, Lies
  • Vri: Immortal of Death, Sadness, Remembrance, Love
  • Famula: Offers Something to Lingering Souls
  • Dominek: Refused to Cross-Over
  • Dominek: Has Watched For Two Arcs Now
  • Dominek: No Longer Remembers Lexi
  • Ecology: The Empty (Ghosts)
  • World: The Natural Order
  • Ecology: A Body Is Required to Reincarnate
  • Zuuda: Can Create Undead?
  • Zuuda: Ectoplasm Feeds Souls
  • Zuuda: Can Make Ghosts Manifest
  • Ecology: Ghosts Can Have their Existence Expanded
  • Dominek: Might Be Willing to Cross Over
  • Personal: Resurrection Requires a Lofty Price
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Your call
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Patrick on Mon Jun 04, 2018 6:05 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 230
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Thread Name: Plucking the Strings
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
Business Management: Ensuring that everyone is clear on what the rules are
Business Management: Create an ambience
Negotiation: Negotiating terms with an employee
Negotiation: Maybe don't mention the flirty waitress.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: She be maxed
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Devin
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Use a napkin instead of your sleeve
Etiquette: Sitting up straight helps you make a good impression
Musical Instrument (Lute): Tuning a lute
Musical Instrument (Lute): Playing a dance melody
Musical Instrument (Lute): Playing background music
Musical Instrument (Lute): Translating the images you see in your mind into music
Musical Instrument (Lute): Not all lutes have the same number of strings
Musical Instrument (Lute): Old lutes need to be handled with care
Persuasion: Giving people money helps you get what you want faster

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Yes please - new job in a very exclusive, well known restaurant.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Vega Dweeb
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Family Gatherings, Expectations and Naming Kittens
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Advanced bow technique allows you to make sounds like kittens mewling
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing something which sounds deliberately chaotic is tricky
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Recognising notes by ear
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Duplicating a tune simply by hearing it is surprisingly hard.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Making different sounds with the same notes.
Psychology: Some people gain immense pleasure from playing instruments.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
ImageDoran Cooney
word count: 98
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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