Review Request 2.1.2

[Finnegan O'Connor]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fratricide
City/Area: Hall of rule and Reprimand, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Loads of cussing, some violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Keeping A Straight Face While Being Yelled At
Acting: Acting Smarmy
Unarmed Combat: Throwing A Balled-Fist Punch
Unarmed Combat: Attempting To Break An Opponent's Grip On You
Unarmed Combat: Turning Your Head To Relieve Pressure On Your Throat
Running: Quick Bolt For The Door

Location: (Etzos) Hall Of Rule And Reprimand Holding Cell
Zipper O'Connor: Not Disappointed, Just Very Fucking Angry.
Zipper O'Connor: Scaring You
Zipper O'Connor: Using Violence To Interrogate You
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Some bruises I'd imagine.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Zane]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dead Man's Tale II
City/Area: Forests around Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Blood, death, lots of philosophy. This thread was mostly about Zane's mental state, thus not very long
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Blood trails
Final Moment: Seeing the deaths of multiple people broadens the picture
Investigation: Finding the scene of the crime
Investigation: Cause of death
Investigation: Time of death
Investigation: Ambush scene

Dead Man: Was ambushed by mages
Mages: Hunted by the dead man
Philosophy: Prejudice towards mages in Rynmere
Philosophy: Who is the bad guy?
Philosophy: Is it right to defend oneself against the law-enforcers?
Philosophy: Does ambush count as defending oneself if the ambushers are hunted by the ambushed party
Philosophy: What is right is decided upon by who is left

Loot: Nothing for Zane, lots of evidence for Iron Hand folks
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A I think
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Caius Gawyne]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Brokenness
City/Area: On the road between Venora and Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Blood, cauterization, cursing, and drug use. Also, a sort of proposal and professions of love. This is a fun thread.

Requested Rewards:

Darcyanna Venora

Skill Knowledge:
Medicine: Bloodloss can induce shock
Medicine: Using reevi for pain relief
Medicine: Keep the patient talking to know they are alive
Medicine: Cool to touch may also indicate shock
Surgery: Boiling for sterilisation
Surgery: Cauterising large wounds to stem blood flow rapidly
Surgery: Stitching 101
Surgery: Sterilising with antiseptic solution
Leadership: Directing others in a time of crisis

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Caius: Said I love you
Caius: Told him you love him too
Caius: Sort of kind of proposed
Caius: Wants to take you to Gawyne
Caius: Called you his Winter Rose
Caius: Was wounded by Pythera
Caius: Smoked reevi in the past
Caius: Has his trial of birth tattooed on his wrist
Caius: Is a talkative stoner

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewers request.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Caius Gawyne

Skill Knowledge (8+2=10):
Endurance: Being in shock from a severe injury
Endurance: Cleaning a wound hurts
Endurance: Cauterization is horrible
Endurance: Poor stitching is agony
Endurance: Talking to stay conscious
Endurance: Someone else's body warmth for comfort
Resistance: Reevi for pain relief
Resistance: Reevi turns you toward prophecy
Rhetoric: Confessions of love
Rhetoric: Almost a proposal

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Darcy: You told her you loved her
Darcy: Loves you, too
Darcy: Sort of kind of said yes
Darcy: Your Winter Rose
Darcy: Got you high for medicinal reasons
Darcy: Cauterized your wound (shared her pain)
Darcy: Has only darned a sock instead of done stitches
Darcy: Might have judged your comfort level with reevi
Darcy: Is amazing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: As previously outlined in this thread, Caius has a severe injury that will leave a scar from his shoulder to his sternum, clearly an ugly one given Darcyanna's skill with stitching. The hole in his shoulder has at least been cauterized, but chances are his stitches will need retreated once they return to Bellesoir, Venora. He has other nicks and cuts from dagger combat, but they are minor by comparison.
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Kirei Qe'Azour]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pies, Pies, and More Pies
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:


Skill Knowledge

Baking: is a dry heat method of preparing food
Baking: requires heat, and an enclosed space; usually this means an oven, but it can be done over a campfire too
Baking: is used to create flour based foods such as pastries, breads, cakes, biscuits, shortbread, and cookies
Baking: Technique; Chocolate work is working with chocolate. This can be making chocolates as a finished product, or drizzling it over something as a decoration.
Baking: Technique; Sugar work is almost a form of art where sugar is melted and then used to craft shapes and textures
Cooking: Technique; Preserving; uses one of a variety of methods to preserve ingredients; examples include making jams, jellies, and preserves (marmalade, chutney, etc.), salting or smoking meat, drying out fruits, canning things, and pickling things in vinegar



Non Skill Knowledge

Recipe: pie crust
Recipe: apple pie
Recipe: peach pie
Reicpe: blackberry pie

Kirei: loves a good challenge

Andiron: is a bit of a snob
Andiron: is very dignified
Andiron: doesn't deal with Aris's pranks well
Andiron: has a very "unique" relationship with Aris

Aris: should never be allowed to bake anything
Aris: loves to laugh and joke around
Aris: enjoys pulling harmless pranks to lighten the mood
Aris: is incredibly loyal and would do anything for a friend
Aris: loves life
Aris: has a very carefree nature
Aris: takes Andiron's attitude as a challenge
Aris: has a very "unique" relationship with Andiron

Elyari: often acts like a mother to her apprentices


Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Hero's Death pt 2
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Deals with grief and death.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
None


Loot: +1 glowy pegasus (approved via PSF as a Fame legendary mount)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Yes please - she arranged the funeral of her friend (200gn deducted) and did a lot of devotion stuff for him etc. Thanks!
Collaboration: Nope

[Ilinis]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Why Did I Murder Niv?
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Flashbacks of violence, some instability from traumatic events, some language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: I can't think of any knowledge, but if you have any suggestions, that'd be great
Loot: (If applicable) -1 wine glass
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) Cuts to feet
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: (Yes/No) No
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) No

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The First Lamentation
City/Area: Etzos-ish. Travel between Etzos & Ne'haer (land).
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Flying: Get Used to Heights
Flying: How to Recover From an Aerial Fall
Flying: How to Adapt to Different Currents
Acrobatics: Twisting Mid-Air
Stealth: Easier If People Are Sleeping
Stealth: The Early Morning is a Great Time to Sneak Off
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Feathered Friend (Tarouz): A Literal Piece of Delroth
Arithzma: Attached to the Wings
Arithzma: Inside Your Mind, Waiting
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Gangui]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Planting saplings in Winter
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Gangui
Skill-Knowledges

Cooking: Warrior's Stew
Rhetoric: Social Farmers of Justice
Business Management: Orienting the Rookies
Detection: Finding things while blurry-eyed
Tactics: Improvising
Blades (Bastardsword): Repelling a horseback warrior
Leadership: Aligning the team quickly
Rhetoric: Repeating Slogans

Non-Skill Knowledges

Niv: Goes for the balls.
Frimen: Niv's responsibility.

Niv:
Ranged (short bow): Using arrows as a distraction
Ranged (short bow): Hit a man in the Kiwi's
Endurance: A mild episode of PTSD
Discipline: Conducting yourself in the prescence of Etzori
Meditation: Calming yourself during a PTSD episode
Ranged (short bow) Patience is key.
Ranged (short bow) A lucky shot.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Positive fame for Niv. She introduced herself to the group and affirmed her vows of honor, fought bandits, and helped Frimen. Positive Fame for Gangui. He fought bandits, helped Niv, and said positive words.
Collaboration: Yes, google doc.
Magic EXP: No.

[Ellen'wyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bonds of Sea and Fire Sort of...
City/Area: Foster's Landing
Notes/Warnings: Written in a GoogleDoc. This thread has suggestive themes. It starts off sweet and even a little romantic, but it goes belly up pretty fast.
Requested Rewards:

Ellen'wyn

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Unarmed (Brawling): Stomping on toes
Unarmed (Brawling): Biting
Unarmed (Brawling): Kick a man where it counts
Tactics: Fighting dirty is effective self-defense
Rhetoric: Arguing against bad ideas
Discipline: Resisting affection
Discipline: Maintaining a pokerface
Strength: Struggling against someone larger than you
Storytelling: Sharing your dreams

Non-Skill Knowledges
Emea: A realm with souls, spirits, and Immortals
Emea: You can visit in your dreams
Gangui: First kiss
Gangui: Comes on too way strong
Gangui: Wants to marry her and have babies
Gangui: Returned her stolen necklace

Gangui

Skill Knowledges: 9 max (4 posts)
Philosophy: Think to the future, live in the present
Philosophy: Morality combats evil, even in dreams
Seduction: A gentle kiss
Seduction: Proposing marriage
Seduction: Laying it on too strong doesn't work

Non-Skill Knowledges
Ellen'wyn: Gangui kissed her and he liked it.
Ellen'wyn: Won't marry Gangui... yet

Loot: Gangui's injured pride. Ellen got her necklace back.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Grader's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No