Review Request 2.1.2

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Spice Interrogation
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
Cooking: Prepare the area carefully.
Cooking: Consider safety when cooking outdoors
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Improvisation
Musical Instrument: GIttern: Use single notes to catch attention
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Can produce a bell-like noise.
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Singular notes melding one into another produces a good effect.
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Emphasising moments in a story
Storytelling: The maze
Strength: Unloading a heavy wagon
Strength: Working together to lift large and heavy items
Strength: Moving furniture


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

Vega

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: The difference between hair, and nice hair
Cosmetology: Use products on hair to make it nicer.
Detection: Noticing an unusual glow
Endurance: Moving from one task to another
Etiquette: Boys pay for dates
Investigation: Asking subtle questions.
Investigation: Lead in with an anecdote
Seduction: Promise a long soak in a bath
Strength: Unloading a heavy wagon
Strength: Working together to lift large and heavy items
Strength: Moving furniture


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

[Caius Gawyne]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Printer's Diri, Part Two: Pulling the Proof
City/Area: The Rynmere Gazette, Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Just two kids getting their hands dirty ... printing. It's a job thread. Get your mind out of the gutter.

Requested Rewards:

Caius Gawyne

Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Working through the heat
Printmaking: Letterpress: Using a composing stick
Printmaking: Letterpress: Matrices for moveable type
Printmaking: Letterpress: Composing the layout
Printmaking: Letterpress: Locking it up with a quoin
Printmaking: Letterpress: Locking up a chase in the press
Printmaking: Letterpress: Setting the frisket
Rhetoric: Verbally defending your Lady's honor

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

Darcyanna Venora

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Knowing the right "moment"
Medicine: Drugs don't fix a broken heart
Printmaking: How to handle the paper
Printmaking: Hanging the print to dry
Seduction: Scones will never be the same again
Rhetoric: Printmaking is an artform
Rhetoric: Apologies all around
Sociology: Saying sorry takes a lot of courage

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Academic Licence
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
Acting: Playing an Immortal
Acting: Playing Ymiden
Acting: Puffing out your chest
Acting: The power of improvisation
Storytelling: Storytelling through improvisation
Storytelling: Telling a story can help you learn it
Storytelling: Telling a story to teach
Storytelling: The story of how the Tunawa came to be
Storytelling: Moseke and Lisirra, warring sisters
Storytelling: The creation myth of the Sev'ryn

Immortal History: The creation story of the Sev'ryn
Immortal History: Lisirra and Moseke were once friends
Immortal History: Lisirra grew jealous of the humans
Immortal History: Lisirra wiped the humans out with a great plague
Immortal History: The creation story of the Tunawa
Immortal History: Ymiden created the Tunawa
Immortal History: Moseke searched for a way to revive her humans
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Ymiden to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Thetros to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Famula to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke revived her humans
Immortal History: Moseke's humans became Sev'ryn
Immortal History: The animal spirits bound to the Sev'ryn

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

Tio

Knowledge:
Acting: Playing an Immortal
Acting: Playing Lisirra
Acting: Playing Thetros
Acting: Pretending to have a beard
Acting: The power of improvisation
Leadership: Leading an acting rehearsal
Leadership: Encouraging improvisation
Research: Doing research the fun way
Research: Learning with a performance
Research: Educational plays
Rhetoric: Speaking an Immortal's lines
Rhetoric: Talking like Lisirra
Rhetoric: Talking like Thetros

Immortal History: The creation story of the Sev'ryn
Immortal History: Lisirra and Moseke were once friends
Immortal History: Lisirra grew jealous of the human
Immortal History: Lisirra wiped the humans out with a great plague
Immortal History: The creation story of the Tunawa
Immortal History: Ymiden created the Tunawa
Immortal History: Moseke searched for a way to revive her humans
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Ymiden to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Thetros to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Famula to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke revived her humans
Immortal History: Moseke's humans became Sev'ryn
Immortal History: The animal spirits bound to the Sev'ryn

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

Faith

Knowledge:
Acting: Improvisation is difficult
Acting: Really not a good learning tool
Acting: Moseke
Logistics: Preparing for an assignment, bring all the books.
Research: Doing research requires work, not fun
Research: Performance is not learning
Research: Ensure you have all the books, all the information
Teaching: You learn nothing from Improvised Acting.
Teaching: Questioning the educational relevance of assignment work
Teaching: Meeting a friend can be an opportunity for a lecture about medicine.

Immortal History: The creation story of the Sev'ryn
Immortal History: Lisirra and Moseke were once friends
Immortal History: Lisirra grew jealous of the human
Immortal History: Lisirra wiped the humans out with a great plague
Immortal History: The creation story of the Tunawa
Immortal History: Ymiden created the Tunawa
Immortal History: Moseke searched for a way to revive her humans
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Ymiden to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Thetros to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke consulted Famula to revive her people
Immortal History: Moseke revived her humans
Immortal History: Moseke's humans became Sev'ryn
Immortal History: The animal spirits bound to the Sev'ryn

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

[Maebella]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [The White Fox Inn] Making Friends?
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope, it's not that exciting
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Skill (6 for solo, under 1 page)
  • Etiquette: Be considerate of other's feelings
  • Linguistics: Some words carry nasty connotations
  • Etiquette: Show polite interest in conversation
  • Etiquette: When someone shows interest in you, return it
  • Linguistics: The theory of language families
  • Etiquette: Making a polite exit
• Non-skill
  • Location: The White Fox Inn
  • Insult: Icicle up your ass
  • Classmates: Spreading nasty things about Mae
  • NPC - Caesia: Linguistics student
  • NPC - Jevan Cordale: Mae's classmate
  • NPC - Caesia: Jevan's girlfriend

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Um, an injury to her purse? -5CN (I think) for a cup of tea
Fame: I don't think so, no
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Sen'Nuk]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Pathless Woods
City/Area: Some of it inside Desnind, some of it in the wilds out on in Makubwa Lori
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
~Knowledge: (8 skill Knowledge max + Bonus of 6 for a total of 14)~
1.Leather Working: Leather is easier to sew with bigger needles.
2.Socialization: It’s okay to talk about yourself sometimes.
3.Socialization: Communication is key to not end up alone.
4.Socialization: Using commonalities to make chatting easier.
5.Socialization: Awkward conversations are better than none.
6.Strength: Carrying your hunting gear.
7.Socialization: Humming to fill the silence.
8.Hunting: Preparation by Making a List, Checking it twice
9.Negotiation: Nothing to trade? Have money to pay.
10.Endurance: Toughing it out over tired feet.
11.Hunting: Keeping Hydrated Helps the Hunter’s mind
12.Hunting: Be careful, even of your prey.
13.Hunting: Not the only thing hunting in the wilds.
14.Hunting: Can’t track when there is no light

~Non-Skill Knowledges~
Toscun’Ahesesi: Hunting Humor Isn’t Lost on this Girl
Toscun: Trusts me enough to make a request to hunt with me.
Toscun: Clearing up the murky waters, it’s what friends do. (Toscun gives her thoughts on why people avoid Sen)
Toscun: An optimistic outlook.
Toscun: Feeling connected to Nature.
Qan'Dun: My Leather Working Mentor
Qan’Dun: Requires breaks for his Pupil.
Desnind: The Stew - the Mixing pot of socializing
Desnind: Shop Location - The Fletcher’s Place
Desnind: The Hunter’s Pit - A gathering place
Desnind: Makubwa Lori - The Dangerous Wilds
Moseke: The Gifter of Life
Toscun’s Mother: My Tanning Teacher


Loot: 40 Normal Quality Arrows (-1gn and 2sn from the ledger)
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor Wound: Finger Pricks from Needles. (2 Days of soreness, bleeding stopped almost instantly)
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

OFFTOPIC

This is my first time grading my own thread. Coming back to all this newness, I figured i needed to try and practice. Trying to take it slow, so I just hope I did well filling it out.. If I did something wrong PLEASE tell me or if I missed something! The Thread is a bit short stopped,
but I did my best to finish it up cleanly!

!	Message from: Djinn
	I got this.

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Spirit of the Lemon Tree
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Spirit impersonation.

Requested Rewards:

Niv

Skill Knowledge:
Deception: impersonating the spirit of a lemon tree.
Steath: Your clothes can give you away.
Stealth: crouching down to become harder to see.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

Kali'rial

Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Coping with the heat
Endurance: Suggesting alternate ways of dealing with extreme weather conditions
Rhetoric: Lemon trees should never be allowed in the galley again
Detection: Using questions to validate your thoughts
Detection: Searching for the unseen
Detection: Picking up on subtle clues that all is not what it seems

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

Pash Raj'oriq

Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Knowing your own pet plants
Detection: Recognizing false tree spirits
Endurance: Dealing with Saun's heat
Gardening: Talking to plants helps them grow
Linguistics: Noticing familiar voices
Linguistics: Recognizing speech patterns
Rhetoric: Bantering with a fake tree spirit
Rhetoric: Sorting out the truth from the lemons

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's discretion!
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Birth of the Skylance Pirates
City/Area: Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Hiring employees
Business Management: Recruiting a right hand man
Business Management: The importance of an accountant
Business Management: Having.contacts in the right places
Business Management: A business philosophy
Leadership: Inspiring speeches to bring a group together

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Sinnammyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Stones and Birds (Sinna)
City/Area: In the wilds just outside Rynmere/Andaris
Notes/Warnings: If you count getting hit in the head by a giant rock? Sureee? Not really though. She does joke about losing limbs and stuff I guess.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (8 skill knowledge)
1.Flying: Birds will teach you if you listen
2.Animal Training: Sometimes, a little sternness before love
3.Animal Training: Calming A Freaked out Bird
4.Socialization: Size doesn't matter, you can still talk.
5.Endurance: Almost lost my head? No problem, I can still talk!
6.Flying: Words dissipate in the wind.
7.Socialization: It Helps to Introduce yourself.
8.Socialization: Try not to stay angry when you're hurting.

~Non-Skill Knowledge~
Oscar: Acts before he Thinks
Oscar: At least apologizes for things he's done
Oscar: Magic is amazing!
Oscar: Magic scares others.
Oscar: Good throwing arm. (rocks)
Oscar: Throwing rocks to have a better day.
Avery: My live wire of a mount.
Avery: Rocks and Flight don't go together
Tunawa: Can't use magic
Tunawa: We grow back, not sure how though.
Tunawa: Fire kills us.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Major Head injury from flying rock. (Thanks OSCAR jkjk) [Not sure how long it should affect her , could be permanent damage, for now we'll say about a season? Like.. 40-100 trials? You can yell at me if that's unreasonable or stupid but some of the side effects are, dizziness, blackouts, slight memory loss, headaches]
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Rat]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Backstage
City/Area: Rynmere Theatre, Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Bit o' violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

• Stealth: No one looks up
• Stealth: Giving a target a wide berth
• Endurance: Breathing through pain
• Unarmed Combat: Headbutt
• Unarmed Combat: Breaking a wrist to disarm an opponent
• Rupturing: Teleportation magic

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Stab wound on right shoulder, treated in thread.
Fame: +10, stopping the attempted assassination of Isadora Venora
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: None

[Velaine Krome]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Don't Step On My Foot
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Get's a bit steamy at the end?

Velaine Krome

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges
Dancing: The Waltz
Dancing: The Waltz Hand Positions
Dancing: The Waltz Foot Pattern
Dancing: The Two Step
Empathy: Hem to Block Off Emotions Temporarily
Empathy: Steel Blue of Grief
Empathy: Scarlet Red of Anger
Empathy: Don't Attract Suspicions
Politics: Keeping in the Good Graces of Your Future Mother-in-Law
Medicine: Ice to Soothe Pain
Psychology: Words Can Wound
Psychology: Importance of Letting Someone Speak Up
Seduction: The Press of Two Bodies Against Each Other
Seduction: Teasing Your Partner
Seduction: Playing Hard to Get

Non-Skill Knowledges
Nathaniel Endor: Can't Dance
Nathaniel Endor: Invites You to Endor
Nathaniel Endor: Wants You
Nathaniel Endor: Gentleman in Public, Not So Much in Private
Nathaniel Endor: Dominating When He Wants Something
Nathaniel Endor: Knows When to Back Down
Maderson Endor: Overreacts for No Reason
Maderson Endor: Possessive of His Son

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yeap!
Magic EXP: Yes please

Nathaniel Endor

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges
Etiquette: Nobles Get Married
Etiquette: Seek Out the Host First
Etiquette: Holding a Lady's Arm Delicately
Etiquette: Falling Face First Into Boobs is Inappropriate
Dancing: The Waltz
Dancing: The Waltz Hand Positions
Dancing: The Waltz Foot Pattern
Dancing: The Two Step
Politics: An Introduction of a Strong Pair
Politics: Acknowledging the Appropriate Titles
Politics: Respecting the Betrothal to Better One's House
Intelligence: Gravity is Counter Productive to Dancing
Endurance: Suffering a Sprain
Business Management: Placing the Business Before Noblehood
Seduction: The Luxury of Privacy
Seduction: Being Oneself in Private Settings
Seduction: Conceding when Cockblocked

Non-Skill Knowledges
Velaine Krome: Waltz Mentor
Velaine Krome: Betwitches Maderson Somehow
Velaine Krome: A Tease
Velaine Krome: Small and In Charge
Velaine Krome: Capable of Cockblocking
Maderson Endor: Concerned About Losing her Son
Maderson Endor: Strict Mentor
Maderson Endor: Seemingly Enchanted by Velaine
Cameron Endor: Betrothed to Maderson
Cameron Endor: Learned to Love Maderson

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Left Wrist - Sprained
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yeap
Magic EXP: Nope!