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(Alistair) "For I am no longer that which I am."

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Patrick had spent the entire day more or less dealing with damage control after yesterday's episode. He'd honestly thought it an impossible task in the beginning, what with the way people would ask if something happened or if he was okay. Those that heard the loudness of his... whatever that thing was, were easier to persuade when he merely told them it was nothing; that he was just busy working out and had a few rough incidents. Those at work noticed his change in behavior right away, and were actually a bit harder to dissuade.

Merely the thought of Alistair and what he said before he left, practically brought Patrick on the verge of tears as he felt anger. So rather than share that the two had a 'disagreement' he merely shrugged his coworkers off, and they had little choice other than to give up and leave him be. Once he got home of course it was late and damn well close enough to bedtime, and the more Patrick thought on it the more he spited the words he'd been told. You are weak, but you don't have to be. You can be strong. You can embrace the magic that I've given you, and surpass your limits. Or you can illogically fear it and continue to tremble like a weeping bitch. It's all up to you.

Patrick slammed the door shut behind him. His jaw clenched tight as he choked on a sum of air he swallowed, why in Ilaren's name did those words hurt him so? Why oh why did he care so much? Because... that was Alistair. The man he believed to be good at heart, to be different from the rest of the world Patrick knew. So was his understanding and belief all a lie? Was what he and Alistair had a lie? He hadn't seen nor heard from the mage all day, and honestly it bothered Patrick greatly, even if the bartender would've rather avoided another 'talk' about magic. He didn't even need to bother to light up the lamp or hearth, seeing as how it had been late enough for him to just crash on his bed.

So Patrick somberly walked over with a tug at his shirt, and with the fabric pulled over his head, he then dropped it onto the floor. He slid off his boots at the heel, then sat at the bedside to remove his socks next. Finally after he unfastened his pants and slipped out of them, the man took to lie down underneath the blanket and try to sleep the horrors of yesterday away.
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"Hahaa..." the woman laughed. Alistair smiled, but bitterly; he did not truly indulge in this malevolent sense of humor, but acknowledged it for what it was: a part of her personality. One that he'd best indulge in for as long as he needed to. Though, as they were now, standing over the corpse of a young girl... hardly past twelve arcs... he could only wonder what about this deviance brought her such amusement. Why, specifically, was the greatest thrill for Ellasin... the thrill of the hunt?

"Can you believe it?" The woman started, almost fatigued. "That girl was an excellent runner. Faster than her mother!" She yelled this with a look of utter amusement, leaning down and pulling on the girl's arm. The woman brought out a knife, sawing off her hand from her arm as she corroded the flesh of her palm and fingers. Before one knew it, there it was, her prize; the hand of a child, skeletal form. A lucky charm.

"Come on, Ali," Ellasin grinned. "Come and take her mother's hand. You could use a bit of luck in your life, what with your choice of bachelors and all." She looked sheepishly at him, waving around the skeletal fingers and stroking the firm bones that were once her palm.

Alistair shook his head. "That's superstition," he said. "There's no magic in the bones of the dead."

"But isn't there?" the woman rose, fully, chipping a hole through the bone and beginning to tie through it with a string. It would be a second necklace, for a time. But as with all of her 'lucky charms', she grew bored within a few trials. Some helpless wanderer would have to replace the one she'd grown tired of, and in all likelihood, she'd invite Alistair along. For in their cyclical bond, she was hot, while he was cold. And she would not be satisfied until he was utterly frigid; tired of escorting her around as she murdered young ones and caused a mess in the woods.

The woman's irises sparkled, her violet hues meeting Alistair's eyes of the same shade. "There is power in the bones of the dead, Ali. It may not be direct, and it may not be cosmic. It may not even be lucky. But it brings power in a different sort of way, my dear - it reminds you of what you are. Before you ever imagine disregarding the frigidity of your heart, look to the bones. Watch them dangle from your neck in the mirror, or blow in the wind like chimes. They will always remind you of your evil. For the natural ally of Necromancy is malevolence, not benevolence. And you, I fear, are falling into the weakness of the latter."

She gestured for him to go to the mother's corpse. He knelt down as she did, and drew his carving knife. The man sighed. She was right - this didn't feel okay anymore. He'd never enjoyed senseless cruelty, but looking to the faces of the dead - especially the young girl - made him feel disorderly. It was a burn of cold flame to his heart, to view such heinous acts for the entertainment of another.

He had become soft, and he dreaded that fact. He eagerly sawed away at the woman's limp hand, repeating in his mind that he would not become weak. Weakness, in the Coven, was a sin. To be anything less than strong was to be anything less than human. Alistair's staunch lack of empathy had propelled him far in the career that was militaristic magedom. But...

He had begun to feel empathy. He really had. This just didn't feel right. It was so... sad. Watching the girl scream for her mother, as he'd just observed... watching the woman die with tears in her eyes, feeling that she'd failed her child. Watching the girl's last moments... and Ellasin standing over them. It brought in him an immense, inner pain. By the time he'd burnt away at the woman's hand with his corrosive energy, his eyes had begun to tear up. He was astounded at the wet mask that had formed over his eyes; this was something he had only ever experienced in theory. Another sign of how his emotions had become more volatile.

"I won't wear it," he told Ellasin.
"That is fine," she said. "Unlike me, you actually have to mingle with society," the Lich remarked.

. . .

By the time it was late, they'd cleaned it all up; Ellasin and Alistair had hung each corpse from a tree, the mother's skeletal hand stuck into her daughter's mouth. Their blood smeared the leaves and dirt down below, and had trailed on for hundreds of meters before their corpses would come into view. They'd truly left a horror in the Stormlands, as they always did, wherever they had gone.

When it was all over, he said his goodbyes, and formed a compression portal to return to Patrick's home. He didn't know how ready he was to speak with the man again, but he didn't want to stay with the coven. He could hardly look at Ellasin, anymore. There was nothing behind her cruelty. Not an ideology, even. Not a justification. Just the fact that she enjoyed it. Just the fact that she wanted to hear their cries.

He stepped through the portal, face still, clearly torn from all he'd just underwent. As he walked through, a rupture in space opening as his path, he witnessed the Hound climb almost nakedly into bed. His eyes lingered for a moment, before Alistair quickly fell to his knees, palm against his forehead as his eyes closed shut. His vision had gone, and his head had begun to pound. What was this life that he had always lead?
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He had only just gotten comfortable when the blanket, as well as the room in general, felt a warp that blew the air around it for just a brief moment. By now Patrick had heard the sound of static tearing enough to know, that this phenomenon which occurred was the act of Rupturing. Usually done by, you guessed it, Alistair himself when he decided to walk in from elsewhere. Patrick had gone from tired to alert in seconds of the transition of event, and his eyes watched closely as Alistair appeared to walk in with a drop to his knees.

What had he done? At first Patrick wanted to get up and run to him, to be at his side after being so alone for the day. Yet he could only stand and remain, his eyes sincere as he looked down upon the man that was before him. "Alistair." He blankly called out as he watched for a moment, clearly the man had been through some ordeal of his own before he'd arrived. Whatever it was Patrick didn't want to know honestly, but to see the man he loved so... broken... it made him feel more sympathetic towards the mage than before. Finally he gave in to his impulses and walked lightly to the man, a kneel down next to Alistair occurred as his arms folded around the neck.

"What happened Al?" He whispered softly as he rested a hand over the noble's chest, the beat of his heart felt regular save for the heavy pounds. There existed substantial gravity on the man's shoulders, as Patrick could interpret that from their tether or connection.
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As the man called out his name, the Necromancer remained quiet, clenching his forehead and trying to cease the pounding in his skull. He took a breath. He tried to relax. The man, despite being a famed doctor, couldn't even tell the origin of this ache; whether it was by a natural hit to his health, or from the mental gymnastics he'd had to endure alongside the Lich-Mother. Perhaps it didn't matter.

What happened? he was asked by Patrick. As difficult as he found it to want to speak - or do anything other than fall asleep on the floor - he parted his lips. "Another day with the Coven," he replied, his expression soured. The man's usually tan skin seemed oddly pale. He was certainly feeling less than well, as if some sort of fever had come over him. And again hew as unsure of the cause of that, too; it could have been the cold winds of late Vhalar, or merely a manifestation of his anxiety as of late.

"Ellasin..." he bit his lower lip, frowning. "That woman is so cruel," the man whispered. "All she ever does is come into my life and try to ruin everything I've built since she'd gone. She reminds me of my shame, over and again. Whenever I think I've begun to be able to feel anything, she hollows me. It's her effect. She chills things around her, whether flesh and skin or hearts and minds. And I have the privilege of being bound to her forever. You know how you and I are connected? How you can feel me - know where I am? She and I have that bond, too. I would never be able to hide from her. I can never leave the Coven. Because of that damn initiation all those years ago, I'm stuck living this abomination of a life. All because she wants me to be her... Reyard. Her Rupturing legend. The herald of her invasions." He spoke bitterly, cursing the name as it came to his head. Reyard. The man that got away.

The one who shamed Ellasin, who'd managed to escape her, realizing what she was. A mage more powerful than even she - yet one that was long gone, vanishing with the winds. And he was born here. In Rharne's Earth Quarter.

Patrick wouldn't understand what Alistair had meant by the herald of her invasions. But Alistair knew. When a Rupturer became skilled enough, reaching their apex of their ability, they could open the Rend. A portal so massive it could transport an army in moments, or flood a city. Alistair had already written a near-perfect invasion strategem using the Rend. When the day came where he mastered the magic, the deaths of millions were likely to follow. The Coven had grown so large that its only option, now, was to go on the offensive. No longer could they hide in the shadows. And he would be a cog in that great, deadly machine. The beginning of the end - a world where the undead replaced the living.

"I'm tired of living this bastard's life," he shook his head. The man opened his eyes, looking to Patrick. He seemed genuinely concerned. In fact, he could feel his concern. Despite all that Ali had made him go through. It was inspiring just how much other people could care, while when Patrick was in tears, Ali could only remark on his weakness and leave him to his broken heart. He felt guilty for that. He didn't know where all that anger had come from. The mage gripped the hand Patrick had placed on his chest, his fingertips stroking Patrick's wrist. He wanted to be forgiven.

"I'm sorry for what I did to you," he narrowed his eyes, lowering his gaze to the ground. To Patrick's bare feet. "I would say I don't know why I did it, but I do know. It's because..."

Because I'm lonely.

He didn't say any of those words, like he should have. Instead, he bit his tongue. He sat there. He stayed quiet. He continued to stroke the man's wrist, mind absently wandering to ideas of the future in store. How much longer would he be able to play with this ruse - this idea that in the Coven, all was wondrous and he was fine?
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It had evolved into something bigger than Patrick ever thought, first this Ellasin came into his life because of her connection with Alistair, and now apparently there was something known as this 'Coven' to worry about? Patrick could only surmise that the witch was its leader, being as powerful as she presented herself yesterday. And what was this about her Reyard? Some sort of Herald of Invasions?

Both were cryptic and ominous to Patrick and he didn't like either of them, already he'd felt disgust deep within his gut over this. Magic. This whole thing had been the reason for his hate, for fear of what could truly lurk within the shadows. A cult. An organization of the lot dedicated to their own purpose, syndicating themselves for the role in life they intended to play. Alistair was part of this cult? It couldn't have been out of personal interest though... could it? No. Patrick didn't want to believe that, to him it seemed Alistair wanted nothing more to do with these people. These... freaks. By now the bartender had considered what he'd been told, it had been in his mind all day after what transpired yesterday.

He was a human, he would be a human. No matter what came afterwards, no matter what sort of complication or obstacle; Patrick was still going to be human by the end of the day. It was his choice, his own right to decide. Nothing would take that away from him, not even the machinations of the supernatural that were at work. "Alistair..." The noble apologized to him, after admitting just how tired he was of his current way of life. He trailed off in his explanation, knowing that he did because of... because of love. Patrick felt it deep down. This bond between them where they shared feelings, this allowed him to interpret that Alistair did that. There existed love there, profound love that no mere words could describe.

So how could Patrick meet with this? How could not reciprocate what Alistair felt, when he too had his own sense of boundless desire for the man. "Alistair. I'm the one who's sorry..." He admitted as he rested a chin on the man's shoulder. "My entire life I've lived afraid of what mages were, without ever knowing a single one t' prove what I believed wrong. Until I met you. What you did hurt yes, but I'm different now because o' it. Now? Now the only thing I want more is t' be with you." He admitted as he felt his eye burn just a little, he silently cursed the tears that started to well within his vision. "I want t' help you Alistair. T' become stronger and in turn save you, let me set you free from that hag somehow. Let me release you from her cursed clutches!" His words came off like both a plea and demand, his sincerity somehow met with a fire deep inside.

He really had grown passionate over this man, and somehow he believed he'd do anything... to set him free.
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Alistair... the man whispered. The mage looked up to him, staring quietly into his eyes. He could sense a tenderness in him - a will to make it all better. That was the sort of man he was; one of a good heart. At least to the ones he cared about. A total inverse to Alistair, or so he believed, who pitied the ones who loved him most of all. They were doomed to a life of rejection. Duncan, Patrick... they could only watch as the one they cared for walked into the flames. That was how he saw it, inevitably; that was the future laid bare.

I'm the one who's sorry, Patrick told him. His head jerked to look at the man again, after a moment of gazing away. His eyes were confused, utterly; why would Patrick be apologetic? He couldn't understand. Alistair had doomed him to a fate he had never asked for. What he did was... of unimaginable foolishness. A lifetime of apologies would not have been enough. Perhaps he had finally begun to scorn magic, now, realizing the life it had led him towards. One where he was trailed after, always, by reminders of his guilt. Severed, skeletal hands. The scalps of innocents. The wails of the undead, ones that followed him only after he'd taken their lives.

He had given this life to Patrick, now. But he would not be a mentor like Ellasin was. Not a cruel mistress seeking only exploitation. He would teach him well, if he wished to learn. He'd be good to him. He wouldn't use the bond between them only for the sake of keeping the man dependent. Or at least, he could only hope. Seven knew just how bitter he'd be ten arcs from now. He'd already become a spiteful, bitter, weak-hearted man.

"You weren't wrong about mages," the man lowered himself, laying his back onto the ground. His eyes stared up at the ceiling, though he glanced on and off to his lover, who was beside him. "Most of them are pretty crappy," he admitted. The man almost laughed, thinking back on it, and what he'd said to Patrick last evening. The vast majority of mages don't sacrifice pregnant women or murder children. The fact that even ten percent did was quite problematic, he'd realized. And unfortunately he was a part of the small, child-murdering demographic himself.

It was refreshing, though, to know that the man had forgiven him so soon. That he'd considered his most important priority being with Alistair. That Alistair could have such an impact on someone - leave such a mark. And it was mutual. His greatest grief with Ellasin was always that she'd tried to push others away from him. And now . . . that included Patrick. Someone Alistair was, quite consciously, in love with. It couldn't go on like this anymore.

"I want to be with you, too," Alistair told him. His eyes moved from the ceiling to focus only on Patrick, before he rose from his back and planted a chaste kiss against his lips. "For a long time," he added, "as long as I can. And whatever that means." He moved to snuggle his beloved Hound, wrapping his arms around his chest as he leaned into him, the man whispering of how he'd become strong enough to set Alistair free of Ellasin's grasp. The thought warmed the heart, though in reality he knew how impossible of a goal that was. She was a Lich, a wielder of Aelothar . . . a mage like had never been known.

He wanted to be hopeful. But the man beside him would only be placing himself into insurmountable danger. He had to be clear.

"Listen to me, Patrick," he began, "I love you, and I want to be with you. But we will not be able to be together if we oppose my master. When I was residing in Ne'haer, not sixty trials ago, I met an ancient wraith who had opposed Ellasin for the same reasons as we do. In return, she tore his family apart, murdered his wife and corrupted his child with dark magic. A man who is in the coven even now - who's become one of my dearest friends. She bound his father to a phylactery and disallowed his spirit to go on; he became a ghost. A shadow dwelling in the forest for a century. The witches wrath is terrible, Patrick. And that man was a more powerful mage than I am, at a time where Ellasin was much weaker than she is now. You must understand - there is only one creature that can kill Ellasin as she is now. An Immortal." He said this with the truth that he knew: that she was the most powerful mage alive. That opposing her was wishing upon one's death.

...But he couldn't leave it at that, he knew. That was the logical response, but he'd forgotten something as he explained all this to his lover, who vowed to risk his life to restore the Venora's freedom. He'd forgotten the tenet of magic that he held most dearly. That to be a mage was to surpass one's limitations. It was to make the impossible, possible. And that even meant killing the Necromantress herself; the progenitor of the witch's vainglory. The pride that made mages mad with power.

"...If you still understand all of this, and want to help me strike her down - as I've been wanting to do - then..." He tightened his grasp on the man, arms circling around his warm body. It struck him that he felt a glory in having a lover who was like this; willing to risk it all for him. Risk-aversion was the lifestyle of Alistair's choice. But if Patrick really aimed to help finalize the Lich-Mother's demise, then Alistair had to stand alongside him. He couldn't be timid.

"Then I'll help you," he told him. "I'll do whatever I can. I'll die fighting for my freedom. I'll die by your side."

And what a relief, it was, to say that as he did. To not even oppose the Lich for the sake of measuring power, but to do so in order to live life his own way. The path he wanted. The path that led to Patrick.
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The obstacle that resided in their way began to sound like a myth, a fable that had been brought to life by the tangible forces of magic itself. Ellasin was really this powerful? This spiteful? She really had the capacity to toil and flounder the way she did, without a care for any she caused turmoil for along the way? By the Seven she was an abomination! One that Patrick wanted gone from the world, the more and more he heard about her. Yet her power proved immense to challenge, according to Alistair anyway, and therefore the task to dispatch her... sounded impossible.

Yet magic or at least the idea of magic meant just that, to make the impossible a possibility did it not? No. To be human made that ideal a reality, magic was nothing more than a meager power to fuel that cause. A tool just like weapon. Dangerous as it was part of Pat somehow started to think it like that, and somehow the hatred he felt for magic became a fuel. He and Alistair were bound to one another now, their bond together could only strengthen in time, and therefore further his cause to release the man from Ellasin. She would meet her ultimate demise in time, and in doing so she'd fall harder than any foe. But did it take an Immortal? An actual Immortal to overcome her power?

His heart nearly dropped for a moment and this talk of dying for the cause didn't help, the thought of one or both of them not coming out of alive... scared Patrick immensely. "Death isn't an option for us." He reassured his lover as he became embraced by his arms. "We'll both become strong enough t' take her down, and then we'll be free of her wretched ways forever." The statement likely sounded as nothing more but an empty promise, but the fire that burned within Patrick felt only hotter. He'd never felt this passionate, this motivated, to overcome the dangers posed before him. No he wanted to do this, he wanted to face death and spit in its face. That was who he was, a man who always denied fate itself. He was in control of his own destiny, and he would always continue to do so until his last breath.

"T' die would be its own journey, one we make for ourselves." He reassured Alistair as he guided his lover to the bed. "After today; we live how we choose, both you and I." With the blanket brought to cover the two of them, Patrick embraced his lover once more with passion in his eyes, soft kisses were then placed on the neck of his lover as he once more felt the chest under his hand. He felt different even now because of this man, part of him had changed into this... other Patrick. This other person who completely decided to cast aside his chains, his weaknesses that only held him back. All his ties to his past, his struggles shared with Dom and then spent alone, they were all nothing but a memory of an old life now. No matter what happened to him in the future to come, Patrick was going to change and become somebody he wanted to be.

And right now he wanted to be Alistair's lover and protector, the dividing line that would break the man away from his own chains.
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Alistair:
  • Knowledge:
    • Necromancy: Natural Ally is Malevolence
    • Coven: Weakness if Viewed as a Sin
    • Coven: Using You for a Greater Purpose
    • Ellasin: Kill Her with an Immortal
    • Ellasin: Giving Love Advice?
    • Alistair: Becoming Warm and Cuddly
    • Patrick: Initiated out of Love
    • Patrick: Proclamation of Need to a Mage
    • Patrick: Did Not Say 'I Love You'


    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: -2 (Witness to Cruel Deed), +2 (Apologize for an Act), +2 (Say I Love You)

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    Structure: 5/5

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Patrick:

  • Knowledge:
    • Alistair: Called You a Weeping Bitch
    • Alistair: My Soft Spot
    • Alistair: Proclamation of Love to a Naked Man
    • Rupturing: The Domain Magic of Portal Making
    • Coven: Controlled by Ellasin
    • Coven: There is a Greater Plan
    • Ellasin: Kill Her with an Immortal
    • Ellasin: Initiator of Alistair


    Loot: None
    Injuries: None
    Fame: +2 (Apologize for an Act)

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 5/5
    Structure: 5/5

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Comments: Well done guys. I thought this was a joy to read. It may have been because I got to imagine Patrick naked during this entire conversation, but I suppose seeing Alistair have a heart tugged at my heartstrings as well. Technically this would be the SECOND time he wept, as he wept when he perceived Zvezdana to have died, but I'm not counting the times we see Alistair be human now am I? I look forward to watching your relationship blossom. Patali may have just become my favorite ship.

I am not deducting fame for an act of magic as Patrick has seen it and accepts it.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thank you!
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