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The man slept with a soundness he had no right to. If anything resembling justice truly existed, a man like him wouldn't have been able to even catnap without the nightmares coming to rend his peace. Maybe that had been the case, the first few arcs. Maybe then, enough of his conscience was left for him to feel unease, even shame for what he did.

Those trials were long gone to the point of being beyond memory but laughable fancy instead. He trafficked in weeping flesh and stiff little corpses and none of it so much as pricked his skin. It washed from him like water off a swimming fowl, and when he slept, he slept deep and untroubled.

His name was Bacohl, he led the Saccharine Knights, and he'd be damned if he apologized for anything.

So what woke him?

Something must have. His eyes snapped open and searched the room. Roved across the furnishings and the paintings on the wall and gently swishing curtains. The nights grew cold this time of arc, but Bacohl liked the chill on his skin. He always slept better, having an excuse to pack on another blanket, warm and toasty under the covers while the weak and stupid were out there shivering. But cold alone would not have woken him.

But... that was new.

The mercenary prince (self-styled) got to his feet and strode naked across the gloomy room. The moon was low, the shadows were deep, but his face was more curious than afraid. Beyond this room was an entire estate he owned as if he'd been born to it. Everyone there was either a killer in his name or property. Not the shirkers or neophytes, in the former, either. The Saccharine Knights were hardly a sprawling company, but they had their elite. Those dozen men were on this land whenever he was, and half of them were always awake.

There was something on his desk. A lumpen thing under a cloth. He was sure it hadn't been there when he fell asleep, and that smell...

Frowning now, hackles rising and infamous temper starting to rise. He swung his legs off the bed and walked over to the table. The object was getting oddly more recognizable. It looked about the size of a knight's helmet, maybe a little taller. The smell was coming from it, too. And as he got closer he could hear a... patter... like water dripping.

No. Not water.

Bacohl swallowed and reached out slowly. He pulled the cloth away... and stared into the eyes of Ledfoot, the man on guard outside his door.

Then he froze. Literally.

The air around him went from a bit chilly to hard as granite. He flexed his limbs against it and... nothing. He tried to open his mouth and found a band of hardened air wrapping around it before he could get it wide enough to cry out. From toes to crown, he was stilled like an insect in amber
and just as he began to get angry-

Tap

-a curved blade came to rest on his shoulder. His bloody blade. He could see his face in the silver sheen as the tapered blade came arcing around his field of vision, coming to a stop just in front of his nose. With a gentle twitch, the blade was flipped over. Whoever was there could open his throat up with another such twitch, and easily, too. He'd had that sword a while; he had it sharpened every day.

"We need t'talk, mate," a foreign voice said. "Dun' worry. This wun' take long..."
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"Ah, yer back again, are yeh?"

Kasoria couldn't help but grin at such an obvious question. There was, however, a certain charm to it, especially from one you assumed wouldn't remember you.

"Aye, 'less yer dreamin', old boy."

The publican gave him a grin and a shrug, placing the cleaned mug on the bar and slapping the rag over his shoulder. "You wouldn't show up in my dreams, stranger. Ain't pretty enough."

Kasoria staggered a step, hand over heart. "You wound me."

"Ah, m'sure. Black stuff? Pint of?"

"Bloody good memory."

"Part a' the job. Lookin' for yer man like before?"

"I see 'im."

The Pick And Shovel was more or less identical to the last time. Even the barflies were the same, and in the same seats (though that didn't surprise him much; they were creatures of languid habit). A new clutch of Saccharine Knights were fouling up one of the corner tables, laughing and drinking and smoking and grabbing at any female limb that came too close. Just the sight of them bought the words of the First Blades to the front of his mind. Their story of how these carousing thugs enslaved children, worked them to death in the mine, then threw them away like empty bottles of booze. His hands bunched into fists and-

Remember how that went last time. Batten it. Finish the job. Leave.

Fraxin was at his old table, too. Only now it wasn't strewn with papers of all kinds, and he wasn't alone. He was even smiling. No more grim and frowning determination, instead he looked almost affable. That didn't last much longer after he spied the dark little man with rampant mutations approaching his table, of course. But he still stood up and gave a quick bow of greeting. His comrade - a bearded man almost as broad as he was tall - lurched upright and did the same.

"Mister Kasoria. I'll admit, I wasn't expecting you to return."

"Oh? Why?"

Kasoria looked close for what their reactions could tell him. They exchanged a look... was anything carried in it? Guilt? Worry? Disappointment? No... just honest confusion, as far as he could tell. Maybe a hint of fear at this renowned monster and butcher of men immediately putting them on the defensive with his words. Finally the miner began, and that's what Kasoria had already clocked him as. The smudges of dirt and black nails gave it away, not to mention the face that was a touch too pale for one used to long, regular hours of sunlight.

"We, ah... thought you wouldn't be bothered, t'be honest, sir."

Kasoria thanked the bartender as his ale was brought over, and he took a seat. "Told yeh I was gonna find out what happened. When I did, jeh think I'd jus'... fuck off, wiv'out setting things back the way they were?" A long, grateful sip. How the hells this beaut made it all the way to some little village in Yaralon he had no fucking clue, but he was grateful. "Fates... tasty stuff, this."

"We're miners and merchants, Kasoria," Fraxin shot back, little more steel in his voice now. "We don't know how sellswords and... men of your type, are known to act. Once you found what you wanted to know, we assumed you'd go back to your... master."

Once, Kasoria would have bristled at the word. Purely out of pride, of course. He did have a master, long ago, and that man was dead. Held his leash for over a decade, he did, and as frank with each other as they were, as casual as their words could be, the man was never anything but his master. When he died, Kasoria forgot about Bangun Vorund, and he guessed most of the Oh'Pee did, too. But the Burned Emperor? Now there... was more of a client. Someone who held a marker he was bound to pay back.

And you're nearly there, so don't fuck this up.

"So," the big man said, eyes wide and almost eager. Clearly this kind of skullduggery wasn't common in his gloomy world. He was enjoying it. "What did you find-"

"I know about the children."

That had exactly the effect he predicted it would. Total, disbelieving, panicked silence. He could practically smell the sweat leaking out of both men now. Immediately, irrevocably thrown off their axis, unable to r'eturn to it without either lying or admitting. But the former might stoke his anger, and the second... might make him go even further. He watched them both now, over the rim of his mug. Fraxin, face reddening and looking away, guilt and fear stark on his usually composed face. The miner, though... he just looked sad. Staring into his drink and gripping it so hard his knuckles were whitening.

"... youse knew as well, didjeh?

The big man nodded slowly. "We all do. It's never... said. Never spoken. But we all hear them. Hear the chains. In the deep shafts, where the air is too thick. We... we tried..."

His voice trails off, too broken or too ashamed to dredge up the memories. So Kasoria turns to Fraxin, with an expression that says he won't be satisfied with that excuse from him. He is the village leader, after all. He is the man in charge not just of production and mining, but safety and secrets. The younger man takes a deep breath and finishes his drink. There was a lot of it left. Clearly he needed every drop.

"We used to use the mining guild alone. Steeper rates, but good work, solid returns. Then the Knights, they... offered another method. Cheaper labor, basically. We thought it was just slaves. Hardly a new idea, but not a smart one. Then someone saw, one trial. Saw a whole group of... kids... headed down. They never came back up. You know how it is. Small town, nothing stays secret. Soon everyone knew." He refilled his glass and took a gulp. He'd had this pent up too long. "Rabban and his miners, they were furious. But the Knights..."

He looked at Kasoria. The hint of accusation in his eyes. Ah. Men of his type. They'd persuaded the miners not to kick up a fuss. Stay quiet, keep your heads down, everyone makes money. Who cares about a bunch of kids that aren't yours? Better to stay silent and ashamed, then noisy and dead alongside your kin. The little man stares back, impassive as a panther.

"Anyway... we ignored it. Until the cave in."

"We knew who was in that shaft," Rabban said, voice rising a touch, or at least strengthening. This was fast going from confession to resolution. "We knew who'd died down there. Left to choke or bleed out in the dark. They told us to go back down, and we told them to fuck themselves sideways. No more. They made their threats again. We held firm. Wouldn't work that shaft, nor any close to it. We knew once we'd cleared the rubble and... and moved the bodies... they'd just bring more."

Kasoria blinked. That was all they had to fight with. Their refusal. Their defiance. Even a poxy pack of jumped-up gangers like the Saccharine Knights could crush untrained miners, traders, and laborers. But they were still thugs, and without violence as a solution, they were without a response. So they'd told Fraxin to fix it instead, and Targon had sent...

"Did Yaralon know about them?"

That drew a long pause. Fraxin shrugged and gave the right answer: "If they had, do you think they'd have cared, as long as the stone kept coming?"

Kasoria sighed. Good point.

"The shaft is cleared. The children are gone."

Rabban scrunched his eyes shut, but Fraxin cocked his head to one side. "What do you mean... gone?"

"The fuck do you think he means-"

"I wanna hear him say they're dead."

Rabban rolled his eyes and looked to Kasoria... then they widened. Because the little man had a little smirk now.

"They... are they?"

"They're gone," Kasoria said, sipping his drink. "They're not coming back."

Hope was a strange thing for him to give someone. So often it was the opposite. But that's what Kasoria saw growing behind the rough man's eyes as he understood what he meant. The kids weren't dead, weren't trapped, they were gone. Escaped, liberated, whatever word you'd want to use. He didn't need to drink himself half to death every night to drown the guilt anymore. Didn't need to keep coin from his purse and food from his family because his shame, his anger wouldn't allow him to work for those bastard false knights. But questions piled on behind the renewed optimism, and as he opened his mouth-

Kasoria raised a hand to silence him.

"No more questions. That's all yeh get. The kids're gone, an' there'll be no more kids inna mines, so youse can work all the shafts, like before."

The two Sutton men exchanged glances.

"That's... quite a statement to make, Kasoria."

"When I take me report back t'Yaralon, I'll let dem know why the production is down. Cuz of what the Knights were doin'. Worked inna short-term, but long-term? Dey had the best shafts in the mountain shut down, cuz real miners wouldn't work 'em anymore." He finished the last of his stout. Savored it, too. "The big lads, in Yaralon? They like profit right away, but they love guaranteed profit fer arcs t'come. They dun' use kids inna shafts, that's what they get. No more... labor troubles, y'ken?"

It was a line of shit, but Kasoria knew how to sell it. Just the right mix of ruthless pragmatism and what they wanted to hear. He was Kasoria, after all. He walked in circles they did not, knew things they'd didn't. He didn't like to trade on his infamy, but for this... he would stoop. He'd been trawling mine shafts and plains and villages and castles and he was fucking done with it. He wanted this to be over, and if this was what got the miners back down and filling those carts headed back to Targon, so be it. Besides, he might be right. Maybe Targon would be shocked, or at least annoyed by the delay those idiot knights had caused. Maybe he would-

Bullshitting yourself, now?

"So... what happens next?"

Kasoria got to his feet, leaving a gold coin on the table. Damn well worth it.

"Rabban? You an' yer pals get back down inna shaft an' get workin'. Yeh've got a season or two a' loss t'make up fer, an' believe me, the nobs back inna city have noticed. Fraxin? Keep the gears movin' an' all dat shite. Like I told yeh, the knight wun' give yeh bother. Might take a few tentrials a'fore word gets t'them about the... new restrictions, on who goes inna mines, but between now an' then, they'll jus' be happy all the shafts are busy again."

The other men got up with him, in a way they didn't when he arrived. As if something had changed in that time, to earn their respect. Maybe just their gratitude, for having this weight off their shoulders. The little man looked at them both and nodded.

"Ain't one fer long goodbyes, so..."
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True to his words, ten bits later Kasoria on his way out of town atop a horse. His own one, that's he'd arrived from Yaralon on. Not the rented beast he'd put in the care of the tavern's stable, trusting them to shuttle it back to Evonshire.

He still had to name the bloody thing. Well... something to think about on the ride.

Night was creeping in, slow and relentless. Suns not so much setting as dimming; bright smudges on the far horizon simply getting more hazy, less revealing of the world. Shadows were growing long and deep and by the time he was a few leagues away, Sutton would be naught but a smattering of lamps and firelit windows amidst the darkness. Yaralon was ahead of him. Provisions were in his saddlebags, and he report he had to give Targon was already being mentally drafted.

Everything was taken care of. His task was over. The mystery was solved, and the Burned Emperor would be in the good graces of Etzos again (more or less).

But satisfaction was not in the little man's black eyes as he cantered away from the mining town. Not since the squirming worm of unease in him had been swelled by what he'd heard leaving the stable behind the Pick And Shovel. A pair of slurring Saccharine Knights jawing and bragging, swaying on their feet and boasting without looking where they were going-

"-gotta putta work in, y'know? Den y'get t'go to duh runch... ranch, aye, s'ranch, outside town? Up by the mountain? Aye, go...URP... go there an' dats where the boss sleeps. Fuckin'... fuckin' sweet gig, heartell.

"An' how-how-urgh-how would youse know? Still out 'ere drinkin' rotgut wiv the likesh a' me-"

"Oi?! Yer fuckin' new so I'll let that slid-FUCK!"

The big talker ran straight into Kasoria's horse and the dumb beast barely noticed. It just looked down at him with the same detached, vaguely contemptuous expression its owner wore. The sellsword scrambled back to his feet and drew his sword, buoyed on by the snickering of his friend. Curses tumbled from his wet lips and as he got the thing halfway out-

Kasoria appeared from the other side. Clad in tight layers against the cold of coming night, hood up but still revealing his black eyes, the steady pulse of his ether mutations. Even drunk and riled the two knew him; one boon to him being well-known, he guessed, and feared enough that even inebriation was slapped out of them by the sight of him flashing a pulse of Brilliance into his eyes. They burned blue-white for a moment, framed by his lank hair... and he rested his hand on his own blade.

"S... Sorry-"

"Fuck off. Now."

They had, quickly and without another word. But he felt no satisfaction there, either. Because he'd been listening. Because it answered a question he wasn't supposed to be asking. Helping with a plan they had no clue of, and he'd barely acknowledged as real. Even if he wanted to stay, even if he wanted the Saccharine Knights to stop using children in the mines, it wasn't like he could find them. Oh, he would, after a while. But him staying around would be noticed. Even a pack of strutting idiots would begin to wonder why he was still hanging around, and it wouldn't take them long to work it out. So he had to go, because he couldn't just go right up to the boss of the company where he slept and-

Not anymore, you can't. Ranch. Outside town. By the mountain. That's where the boss sleeps.

Kasoria had put it in the back of his mind. Like he'd done for a hundred other gnawing, unwanted, unpleasant facts. This was where he'd fucked up in the first place, in the Burho Beneath. Not thinking ahead, letting his emotions control him, being so bent on immediate satisfaction that he'd fucked not just himself but his people. He'd lost control in a place where self-possession mattered most. The whole trip out of Sutton, he'd reined in his instincts. He told himself that it was not his fight anymore, not his problem, and it wasn't like he hadn't done plenty already. This was a matter for the First Blades, and they were clearly handling it. Besides, once Targon got all the details, he likely wouldn't allow those false knights to go using child slaves, if this was the kind of drama that came with it-

Or he'll tell them to kill the miners until they get back down there. And next time, you won't be here to say different.

The horse stopped moving. He sat atop it and stared at the distant smudge on the horizon. Yaralon. Where he was a dead man walking but also where his people were waiting for him. They were his way out of this city, this land, this continent. Now he could go back to them, and if not reunite, then at least tag along. He didn't need to stay. He didn't need to involve himself.

Men with swords and no rules don't care about blood or tears. They care about force, and how much of it they need to get what they want. They won't care about words. They won't care about distant prattling from a city they hardly see. They can't have miners talking back. They'll have to send a message.

Kasoria closed his eyes, and took in a long, slow breath. Tasted the clean air of the open plains, dusted with distant campfire smoke.

You know that. Because it's what you would do. Once upon, it's what you did, when told. So, how does this end, old man?

He tightened his hands on the reins. Plans were birthed and grew and were discarded one after another in a sparse few bits. All he knew and had learned since Targon had tasked him trials ago was rolled into a new future. A new strategy. One that was surgical, almost-bloodless, and depended on terror to do what sheer force would struggle with. It could work, too. But it had to be done tonight.

Kasoria sighed out the breath, and a single world.

"Fuck."

He swung the nameless horse around, and started back towards Sutton, as the suns burrowed into the horizon.
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He was anticipating a fortress. From a distance, he supposed that's what it was. But observed closer, with the right eyes, he could see different.

Won't even need magic for this.

It was a ranch, and he'd seen the like before. Etzos didn't have the open plains, savannahs and scrubby deserts of Yaralon, but it had farms that specialized in livestock. They had fields and pastures, ringed by fences or, when too large, simply patrolled by ranch hands. They had barns and stables and ranch houses and Kasoria had filed the tedious information away without seeking to illuminate it further. He was a city boy, and even after his arcs in Westguard, educating himself on agriculture had not been essential for his survival.

It was a ranch, true. There were men on it, too. Men with spears and swords and axes. But there were no walls. There were no towers. He left Nameless tied up to a tree and crawled half a league to a hillock where he could observe the place. For a solid break, he did just that. Watched the knots of sellswords, saw the patterns of patrol... from a single group. The others were just... milling. Unorganized. Without any purpose. And as the night wore on, he heard laughter, music... and finally, silence. A handful of torches in the dark, but aside from them, the ranch slept.

The heart of their company, and not even half a dozen pairs of eyes guard them from annihilation.

Oh, but that thought tempted him. His Sparks hissed and whispered and egged him on, especially the misanthropic Abro. He battened it back down, remembering his true purpose here. Not slaughter: intimidation through precisely-deployed horror. He didn't need to cause so great an offence to "the boss" that retaliation would have to be made. Without him present for it, that revenge would be wrought upon Sutton. The opposite of all he wanted.

Aye, so altruistic, yeh are.

"Dis time," he muttered to himself, pulling the hood down lower, and tugging the fabric of his collar higher over his mouth and nose. "I actually fuckin' am..."

A hundred yards was crossed quickly, but carefully. The circles of illumination from torches and candles had been marked by him long before, and he snaked his way between them through the patches of sheer night. Keeping low, keeping covered, so his mutations would not shimmer or flash from under his layers of cloth. His eyes were always working left and right, alert for any unexpected silhouette looming from the dark or appearing early on their patrol. But there was nothing. The closer he got, the less he saw. Once he was over the fence (a trifling matter), and flattened his back against the nearest barn, he pricked his ears, ready to hear the hidden, secret sounds he knew just had to be in this inner perimeter...

Nothing. They're not expecting an attack. Not from anyone.

That's what happens when you rely on fear, and live on easy meat that can't fight back. Blunts you for when someone who isn't afraid comes along.


Kasoria flitted from shadow to shadow until he was at the main house. A two-level molded brick of sand, mud, and stone, squatting in the landscape and surveying it for leagues around. As he observed it, he could see the lone figure on top, cumbersome crossbow contraption held loosely in his arms. It was almost a relief, to see this bare level of competence at work. Still, it was only a matter of waiting for the sentry to move to the other side of the flat roof and there was his chance-

-to run from the shadows, summoning his Sovereign, already calculating the jump to the balcony on the second floor and once he was close-

Now.

-he leaped, but not just with his born muscles. Ether blasted from his feet and he arced swiftly but silently through the air. He caught onto the iron railings and let his body go limp rather than smash into them, rattling and shaking and causing clamor. He jumped over onto the platform and huddled down low, head jerking left and right to see if anyone had saw... before turning his gaze inside.

The room was empty... and none too large. Servants, perhaps? It mattered not. He saw the latch hold it shut, and slide his dagger through the gap between the doors. Using the thin metal to lift it... open... and he was inside.

Kasoria closed the door behind him, like he'd never even been there. Then he savored a moment or two, standing in the dark of the empty room, eyes closed, listening to the muted jabber and slumber and servitude of a place that had no idea he was there.

Focus. Find the boss. Deliver the message.
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He'd learned over the arcs that people got the wrong idea about being stealthy. They thought it was all about camouflage, sneakiness, hiding in shadows, not being seen. Which was a big chunk of it, to be sure. But he'd learned that being where people didn't think you'd be, was as much use as simply not being visible to their eyes.

Tonight was another example of the lesson. All eyes still waking were looking outward. Anticipating an attack from the shadows surrounding the ranch. Rival sellswords, bandit gangs, goblins, a myriad of beasts... it was always from the exterior. The enemy beyond the camp fire men always were wary for. But one man, careful enough, could get past those eyes, slip through the blind spots... and once there, walk as a man free and without suspect.

Because he was where they felt safest. Where they weren't expecting a threat. They'd had it easy too long, and forgot the golden rule.

There us no "safe". Not in this life.

Kasoria walked slowly down the hallway. Listening. Ears pricked for spoken words, snores, laughter, muttering... any sign of life. As he made his way, he was mentally mapping the floor he was on. Marking in his head rooms occupied or empty. From the outside, he could guess where the master's suite was: the grand balcony jutting from the front of the second floor, overlooking the main gate, seemed like the best bet. Another corner and he guessed there'd be a door to-

He stopped. Liquid sloshed in a bottle. Lips smacked and a man sighed. Deep and long.

Big fella.

Kasoria moved slow, and careful. Moving with glacial intent until one eye was peering around the corner, throwing knife already out of its sheath... and blinking as he saw the lumbering brute occupying a seat far too small for him outside a pair of double doors. An ax was across his knees; short swords hung at his hips. Even at this late break, he was in armor, bronzed metal covering his limbs and torso and head. The bottle in his hand was bound in rope and as large as his forearm; Kasoria could smell the liquor from where he stood, and the big bastard didn't look even tipsy.

He slid his gaze back behind the corner. Best to do it quick, quiet, and from a distance. Accuracy could be done, but impact, through armor, and a skull like a bull's...

So cheat.

Kasoria closed his eyes a moment, and summoned his Sovereign. The flighty Spark came at once and poured into his fingers, rushing into the throwing knife. Loading it. Infusing it.

Enhancing it.

The rest was so familiar his mind barely had any say. His limbs and muscles moved of their own accord, stepping out, raising, pulling back, and giving a low whistle that just barely carried across the hallway, all at once.

The man turned, fleshy face and piggy eyes revealing themselves. Eyes that popped in surprise as that rangy arm whipped forward-

-lungs filling with air for a roar of alarm-

-no-

SHUNK

-a squeak-

-as a ten ounce knife slammed through his eye socket with the force of a ten pound hammer.

Even Kasoria winced at the impact; it struck so deep he heard it pierce the man's skull and TINK onto the inside of the bronze helmet at the back of his skull. For a bizarre, impossible moment, the man just sat there. Eyes... well, eye still staring. Mouth open. Shaking with fury and disbelief, so much that Kasoria thought he might actually get up. But then his body realized the brain was long gone. Skewered, impaled, already dead. The light died in his remaining eye, and he started to fall-

Kasoria threw out his other arm, wrapping the big man in layers of Abrogative energy in but a blink, holding him there-

Shite!

-snapped his throwing hand closed and deploying his Sovereign again, Reaching out and grabbing the ax and bottle before they clattered to the ground. Instead, they paused mere inched above the floor... and he lowered them the rest of the way. Beads of sweat on his brow as the big man became dead weight and, of course, far heavier. He walked towards him and held him in mid-air, opening a door further down from the master bedroom... seeing no-one inside.

Good enough.

Kasoria was far stronger than a little old man had any right to be; many a young pup with a broad back and no wrinkles to his face had found that out the hard way. But no-one found moving nigh-on three hundred pounds of dead weight, wrapped in about forty pounds of armor, an easy thing. By the time he dragged the hulking bodyguard into the bedroom and closed the door, he was swallowing his pants, bent over and breathing air back into his parched lungs.

He went back for the ax, and the bottle. Leaving nothing outside, save an empty chair. A few moments later, there was a muted, meaty sound. Something between a branch cracking and a a steak being ripped open. Not long after, Kasoria came out, with a bulky, round item wrapped in a cloth. Along with the other thing he'd found in the dead man's pocket.

The key to the door.
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"You're a fucking dead man, Kasoria."

My, how original.

A low chuckle answered Bacohl's opening salvo. "F'yose had any idea how many times I've 'eard dat, yeh wouldnae bother, mate."

"I'm going to-"

THUNK

The next answer was a rap of the sword against the side of his head. The flat of it, cold and hard, shattering the vision on his right side into black stars and painful throbbing red. But he could not fall. He couldn't even twist his head around and away out of instinct. His body was frozen in place, held there without apparent effort by the man who sauntered in front of his now. Sword resting on his own shoulder now, lighting tapping.

"Yeh'll do nothin', cunt, 'cept lissen. I know 'bout the kids yeh shoved down those mines. I know they were why the miners didnae want fuck all t'do with yeh, even after those wankers youse call knights tried t'muscle them." The little man snorted and shook his head, contempt etched on his craggy face. "Well, they'll go down now. Cuz I've fixed it for yeh. Went down lookin' fer those kids... an' found what was left of 'em."

Kasoria's face lost anything save anger. Smoldering, acidic, rancid disgust. As if the naked man in front of him was unfit to even breath his air. He channeled the face of every man he saw at Rhakros, who beheld the mutations of Lisirra's Marks. Every time he'd trawled the depths of the Oh'Pee and shook the hands of men who traded flesh, young and lithe and unwilling, and had to resist the urge to choke them on their own members. It had to sell, the anger and the hate and the grief under it; the sorrow of a man who'd seen so much young death and been unable to stop it.

The first two were easy. Hate and anger were old friends; he could stamp them across his face easy enough. Grief, though... that took work. For that, he forced himself to see Martyn's face down there in the dark. Dressed in filthy rags with black lungs and blood on his lips, gasping in the dark as he swung a pick until he finally collapsed.

"The miners'll go back down. Cuz there won't be anymore kids in the shafts. No-one but men, that you pay, at guild rates. An' if they so much as sniff a wee one down there... all this happens again. The mines close. The flow stops. The nobs in Yaralon get pissy, and who will they blame?" Kasoria managed a wintery smile. "Probably the dumb fuck who says he's running Sutton, but can't, not even with two score blades at his call."

He watched Bacohl's eye twitch as he gave a rough guess as to the "strength" of the Saccharine Knighs. Fates, the descriptor was enough to make him roll his eyes. So far, none but the master himself looked like they could last more than ten trills against anyone with a shred of real training. A patrol from Heaven's Fall could purge the whole ranch and every false knight in Sutton in a full trial, he was sure of it.

Maybe that's what should happen. If not them, then you.

Kasoria widened his smile a touch, as if Bacohl's reaction amused him. He had to make the mercenary chief understand just how meaningless any sort of resistance weas now. How pointless his defiance was, and how costly it could be. Already his trusted bodyguard was dead, and he slept through it. He was awake, because Kasoria wanted to talk. He could have died in his sleep just as easily... and Kasoria knew the man knew that, too.

He's still hiding behind bluster. Still doesn't understand.

He will.


"I... don't take orders... from y-"

THUNK

"Yeah, ya fuckin' do. Cuz this wuzn't hard, mate. Gettin' over the fence? Dodgin' yer lads? Getting inside? Makin' that-" he pointed the sword at Ledfoot's head, mouth open in a dead-eyed groan "-into a nice wee present for yeh?" He took a few steps closer. "Youse see any sweat on me brow, mate? I coulda' jus' killed every man pledged to yeh then had this chat, an' none of 'em coulda' stopped me. Jus' like youse can't."

That brought the defiance and the bravado surging back up. Kasoria felt strong muscles flex and fight against his power. He pushed more ether out, keeping the exertion hidden. Instead just cocking his head to one side, like a dog looking at something curious.

"I've held Ithecals with this, Baccy Boy. Youse ain't even raisin' me heartbeat. Now, I know what yer thinkin'. That soon as I'm gone, soon as mornin' comes, yeh'll put a bounty on me or come tearin' after me or blah blah fuckin' blah. All been done before, son. Hasn't ever worked, an' every cunt that tried ended up wiv' his head staked inna' field or on a wall somewhere."

He leaned even closer. Pressing the blade against Bacohl's bare chest. Just enough to draw blood, feeling a shiver of queer pain as his own Shackles were distorted by the moment's penetration. Bacohl gritted his teeth but couldn't hold back a whimper.

"It wun' be a duel, Baccy Boy." His voice was serious now. Cold and distant and dead. Fate's own words, describing a future already written. "It won't even be a fight. It'll be like this. One trial, one night, yeh'll be walkin' about or pissin' or fuckin' an'-"

THUNK

"No chance t'draw yer sword. No grand last stand. No final battle against the Raggedy Man for bards t'sing about. Jus' another dead cunt his lads find the next day, who died with a clean blade an' shit in his breeches. An' I've made a few friends in Sutton, Baccy Boy. Well... that's pushin' it, but they dislike youse a far fuckin' bit more'n they dislike me. An' they know, if any of your "knights" starts beatin' down on 'em fer not minin', if any kids go down into the dark, if anyone on yer word starts askin' questions an' pullin' out fingernails-"

The tip of the sword rested against Bacohl's cheek. A half-ounce of pressure, and he could feel the scar there threatening to split open yet again. He looked down it and saw all dark joviality and black amusement was gone from this thing's voice. All he could see now were obsidian stones, deep in a face carved from brown oak. There was no bravado there. No threats to crow or brag about. He'd made this speech a hundred times before. Some men had listened, and lived. Many had not, and-

Heads. Spikes. Gone.

"Word'll find m. Anywhere inna' word, it'll find me. An' I'll come back, Baccy. Look me in the eye, warrior-" no word he'd spoken before was thick with such bilious contempt "-an' tell me any of youse would stop me. That I wouldnae burn this place t'ash an' gut yer lads like pigs a'fore I take yer head fer last."

A quarter-ounce. Something hideous and feral and hungry lurked behind those black eyes. Something that desperately wanted any reason to be let out. Bacohl swallowed hard, and Kasoria saw the bravado flicker.

"Tell. Me."

"I... I..."

This was it. Kasoria knew it. The fork in the road. He had to break this man now. He had to understand just how high the stakes were, and retaliating against the villages for tonight or going back to child slaves was just not worth the profit. Because if he came back, a severed head and a few bruises would be a fuck from Chrien herself by comparison. There was no upside to defying the Raggedy Man of Etzos, and once again, Kasoria relied on his fame yet again. He wasn't just some scratcher from the Oh'Pee anymore. He was the warrior that had made Sintra bleed. He was the killer who waged war on Immortals. The engine of death that wielded magic and metal so deftly that whole companies of men watered the ground he stood upon with their blood.

The question was simple: did Bacohl really think, in his most honest moments, his sub-standard pack of drifters and second-raters could succeed, where demigods and their minions had failed?

You'll lose. You know it. Accept it, and live. Plenty of other ways to make coin. Because if not...

Kasoria kept his gaze hard and steady. Either one man died tonight, or they all did. If he was honest... he'd prefer the lot. The world would be better without them. But this was the path he was on now. One where even the guilty were spared to save the land from the damage and chaos a power vacuum could create. He'd seen that before, in the Oh'Pee, and knew it would be no different here. The Saccharine Cunts were scum, but they could be kept in line. The next pack could be even worse.

The choices we bloody make...
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Bachol's expressions never showed anything less than exactly the same hate with which Kasoria regarded him. Every moment that the outlander spoke as if he had any more authority than the sword in his hand, Bachol's expression twisted with even more hatred. However beneath the hatred there was something far more telling and far more useful for the tyrant mage enforcing his will on a foreign land. Fear. Bachol was pissed but he was afraid. He couldn't move and the sword smack had disoriented as much as it hurt. Everything else was besides the point. He didn't know who Kasoria was.

Why would he?

He was a little man who'd meet an even smaller end when his time was up. He'd scavenged, stolen and extorted for everything he had now and he'd done it in the only land that would allow him to survive that way- Yaralon. He was far from well informed about legendary murderers. However he knew Kasoria had been poking around the mines. In that much, he was familiar with the one threatening him now. He had been convinced that Kasoria wouldn't pursue the hunt. No one else had. Now it seemed he was wrong and he was having all his choice stripped away from him again. All his freedom, all of his life, reduced to a threat at the point of a blade by a man who didn't know their ways. A man who, even in a land of killers, was still a murderer.

It was fair for Bacohl to hate Kasoria, all things considered. Kasoria was a foreigner who had, at least one time that Bacohl knew, spit upon the way Yaralon worked. Knowing that the Burho Beneath was after Kasoria's head made it all a little easier to handle. Hope. It was strange because it motivated the pure and the wicked equally. Heaven's Fall hoped the children would prosper. Bacohl hoped he'd see Kasoria's head floating in a tunnel beneath Yaralon.

"I-" Bacohl stopped immediately when he remembered the pain from the first and second strike. There was no arguing. He was the animal in the trap here. Kasoria didn't understand the wicked way of their world. He only understood the wicked way of his world. The difference was that Bacohl could swallow any amount of his own pride to survive. He always had. Kasoria demanded he hire workers for the mines and pay them guild rates. Any of Bacohl's men would have laughed but the leader facing death did not. He was a roach. He would always do what he needed to do to survive. Kasoria seemed to come from a land with central leadership and so his demands were not perfect.

There was no such thing as a 'guild' rate despite the presence of a merchant guild. It was the Merchant Emperors and Empresses who set their prices and terms as they wished for who they wished. Guild membership was more or less for... record keeping and discount suggestions. At least, that was how Bacohl viewed it. It didn't matter though, not really. All that mattered was the one estimate Kasoria had gotten right. A single patrol from Heaven's Fall could wipe out all of the vagabonds in Sutton. Odd, right? They'd already acted once, so why didn't they go the step further that Kasoria was going now? Bacohl wasn't thinking about that. All he was considering were the numbers. His people couldn't do what the Burho Beneath had failed to do so far.

Not yet.

He would not forget the life Kasoria had taken so casually. To Kasoria, the guard was just a larger body in his way. To Bacohl, he was a brother, a father, a companion- maybe more. The hypocrisy of a murderer caring about lives being hurt and taken because they hadn't been around for as long as those he took himself made it harder for Bacohl to bite his tongue... but Kasoria's sword helped to ease the burden. When Kasoria pushed the blade into his chest and drew blood while spouting about how it wouldn't be a duel, Bacohl's eyes narrowed bitterly. A duel? This foreign dog couldn't possibly know the meaning of the word. Every word Kasoria said seemed to aggravate as much as it intimidated- but the sword digging into his flesh kept Bacohl quiet. This assassin didn't want a lesson on the structure and rules that encompassed dueling in their city. Rules that might very well have made Bacohl's actions legal. Kasoria just wanted to send an intimidating message across- and it was sending very loudly.

Once again the mercenary leader displayed the mind that had earned him his position. Willingness to admit defeat- even if every moment burned all the fibers of his being. Kasoria was fortunate in one regard- Bacohl had become a coward. He wouldn't die for any vision or view or amount of nels. Even his overwhelming pride was not worth his life. For everything he hated about his position now, the voices in the back of his mind told him to spin it and make something up to justify the changes. Something that made him look stronger. Ha. He'd never had to pretend before. He'd always been able to meet his foe with a blade or fist. Honorable. Always, even when not moral. Unlike this coward holding him with magic. Still...

"I-" He'd have nodded his head if he had the mobility for it within Kasoria's mystical grip. "-concede. No children."

However that was all he said. That was all he'd say. Either cut him loose or cut him down from there. He was not going to negotiate any further. Even in all his fear, he knew something Kasoria didn't know. He knew something that didn't come from arcs of experience. It was one of those irritating things that benefited the young and underserving. He knew the right people.

In the end that would be what spelled the decision and doom before Kasoria. He was threatening a small man who had spent the majority of his life bullying a small portion of the world. Kasoria leaned into a terrifying fame that was only recently spreading through Yaralon- and what was spreading spoke more about ill respect for existing power than Kasoria's epic history. Efficiency was his enemy. Kasoria had come into Sutton and performed his investigation far faster than Bacohl could gather information about the interloper. All he knew was what happened within the borders he lived. Why would what happened anywhere else matter? Kasoria was not more to Bacohl than any other man on any other night. The difference was that Kasoria had succeeded where the others had failed. Kasoria had killed his good friend. If he could do it once, he could do it again.

So he spoke his words true. No children. Kasoria would know that Bacohl would hold to that single promise. However that was the only guarantee he would be able to see in the eyes of the man Kasoria was threatening.
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Kasoria knew how to spot a lie. There were a hundred tells; it all depended on the person. But if you caught a couple, the stench of deception would turn rank in your nose. All you had to do was keep watching... and be mindful of context.

He's not lying. No kids. But that's all. Nothing about retaliation. Nothing about some other way to cut corners. Nothing about forgetting any of this.

Well, what did you expect?


Kasoria gave a thin smile, mirthless and meaningless. Before he'd even come within a league of the ranch and concocted this plan, he'd known that whatever concessions he could get from this up=jumped thug would be minimal, and transient. He'd met countless examples of the breed throughout his life. They valued nothing, especially not their word. Everything they said and did was a means to get to the next deal, next trial, next moment. Nothing was sacred or held above dishonor. There was no difference in Kasoria's eyes between the lowest Oh'Pee sniff-peddler and this "mercenary captain" of fabled Yaralon.

But he'd got what he wanted. No more children.

Take the fucking win, you subborn old fuck.

"Good. Enjoy yer headache."

"What-"

CRACK

It was surgical, measured, and Bacohl was unconscious before his head had fully around. Kasoria shook the pain from his knuckles and slowly pulled back his ether, letting the sellsword slump down to the ground without a telltale thud. He tossed the sword on the bed and left without another word, taking the same route back to the balcony he'd entered through.

The night was still pitch, and deep, and quiet. No alarms had been raised, and Bacohl would be slumbering for another few bits at least. He leaped from the balcony and landed as soundlessly as a bird flitting from one branch to another. Even from twenty feet in the air. Then it was a familiar game, shadow to shadow, watching his step and his sounds, until he was over the fence and creeping away from the ranch.

The Etzori was untying Nameless from the tree he'd left him at when his ears pricked. Something like a smothered roar, a cry of anger and outrage muffled by distance, carried on the breeze. He smiled slowly, enjoying the moment of victory, the savoring of a foe beaten thoroughly and expertly. The older he got, that seemed to be the only real pleasure he had left. Apart from, of course...

The pipe sizzled in his hand as he stoked the little bowl of baccy at the end of it. The Saccharine Knights would be slow to react, and not know where to look. By the time they did, he would be leagues away, carried at a steady canter by Nameless. The little man patted the beast flanks and chuckled at the querulous whinny it gave him.

"Never youse mind, old son. Good night, is all. Fuckin' needed one."

Nameless snuffled, as if that cryptic human answer was enough for it. Then he turned its eyes back towards the civilized smear of Yaralon in the distance, and kept moving towards it.
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Notes/Warnings: Last Part! Kasoria, predictably, just can't let things go. No Knowledges wanted for this one, just XP and some Sutton-based consequences, all laid out within. Thanks in advance!


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Ah! The end his nigh! I mod bombed this earlier so I've read it before, but it was great to read again. I really enjoy the way that you play with time as you unveil the story here. Starting with Kasoria in Bacohl's room and then moving backwards in time to show the events that got him there is something not many people could pull off, but you did it well. If there was any confusion as I was reading it, it quickly went away as I got into the next post.

Kasoria made a bold move involving himself in this capacity given that the Burho Beneath already wants his head, but I am personally happy he did. It will cause some positive changes in Sutton. Hopefully leaving Bacohl alive may pan out for the better! As long as he changes his pants.

I enjoy how much this thread feels like the climax of the story. Throughout all the other parts I felt a sense of Kasoria trying hard not to involve himself and always getting involved despite himself. Here, it felt like he had finally commit to his choice to act and he did so in a way only he could have.

Fantastic thread, enjoy the rewards!

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Consequences

  • A Bold Move - Kasoria infiltrated the Saccharine Knight's stronghold (granted they aren't the most fortified group) and threatened their leader with death. He even killed a ranking member of the group to highlight the threat he was making. It will impact the coming seasons and the actions of the Saccharine Knights moving forward. This has a positive impact on Sutton and how the people are treated by the company for the remaining season until the next calendar.
  • Murderer - Yaralon is a land where the risk of death his high, but that is not typically due to murders in the streets- at least not until recently. Word will spread of what Kasoria did to the Saccharine Knight and how his head was used. Not all will respond positively to it. "A duel in secret is no duel at all, but rather a murder, a coward's way to handle things." This will impact his rumors in the State of Play, once I finish it.
  • No More Children - Whether he likes it or not, Bacohl will honor his word and there will be no more children found within the mines of Sutton Village. This isn't to say the new miners will be ethically sourced, but they will all be of working age.

    Word will also spread that the Saccharine Knights were using children for labor. Given that raising orphaned children is a community effort in Yaralon Proper, this will not be good for them.
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