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Re: Settlement Progress Requests

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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Hopetoun] Blood On His Hands
Summary: Darius needs therapy! But despite that, he aids the surviving Havenites, offering them food and blankets, and even transport to the main island.
Need Being Met: Physical (for the Havenites); Belongingness (for the Hopetounians).
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Nice thread, but it doesn't directly address any of the needs of Hopetoun. However, generally contributes toward Physical and Belongingness imo.

1% to Physical
1% to Belongingness.

Good going!
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Hopetoun] Good Pirate, Bad Pirate
Summary: Darius and Liathen interrogate some surviving pirates in an attempt to gain information about the attack.
Need Being Met: Safety. (I think?)
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Doesn't directly conntribute to any specific need that exists in Hopetuon for Safety. 1% to Safety, however as the intelligence and assurance will put peoples' minds at ease.
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Hopetoun] Boom Or Bust
Summary: Darius makes plans to build a boom and other defensive structures.
Need Being Met: Physical, Safety.
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Towers and a Boom certainly add to the defensive infrastructure of Hopetoun. But it exacerbates the growing need for more military trained people among the settlement. Perhaps a Element Hall or even a local militia?

2% Physical
1% to Safety

Good job!

Also you have the towers as planned for. A boom only needs a source of metal, which as we've discussed you're pursuing in another thread.
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Seasonal Event] The Heart of Scalvoris.
Summary: Various Scalvorian entities get together to make plans about the pirates.
Need Being Met: Safety, Belongingness. (I'm not sure about this thread, to be honest - the link feels a little tenuous - but I'm adding it here, just in case.)
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MMMmmm no, sorry. This isn't specifically involving Hopetoun in any way beyond theoretical as far as I can tell. Good writing though, and if he pursues the issue with Hopetoun's administration in the coming seasons, that will surely count.
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Hopetoun] Scuttlebutt
Summary: Darius and the gang recover one Pirate Lord ship for their own, and sink another.
Need Being Met: Physical.
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This clears part of Physical need 03, in that Darius acquires a new ship. So it'll be worth more, but it doesn't entirely solve it. Darius still needs a greater docks/harbour area for his growing fleet.

3% to Physical Need

Good job!
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: A Matter Of Urgensea
Summary: Although this thread doesn't actually take place in Hopetoun, it does affect the settlement, as Darius meets with pre-coma Rand about the need for greater safety in the Hollow Sea.
Need Being Met: Safety.
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
This is Oh so very close to attending to need 01 of Safety, but the military that are sent to Hopetoun are needing a place to mobilize from and also the promised tutorial of Darius around the waters of Hopetoun. Reiterating the need for a Element Hall or Militia post for these men to stage any mobilization from.

2% Safety

Good job otherwise!
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Settlement Name: Hopetoun
Thread: [Hopetoun] The Regifting
Summary: Darius steps down from the barony and gets hugged by an Immortal!
Need Being Met: Belongingness. (This impact might seem less tangible than most, as the thread is about Darius ceasing his role elsewhere. However, I believe many settlers will see this action as Darius not allowing himself to be distracted by other tasks, and that he now appears focused on Hopetoun itself. And I think that in itself, will improve the sense of community for those folk.)
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This would indeed give the people of Hopetoun some solace in knowing how dedicated Darius is to leading them. However, it cuts directly against the need for a proxy or mayor or permanent council to oversee matters in his absence. So It doesn't fill any specific need for the settlement.

2% Belongingness.
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Settlement Name: Sweetsong
Thread: A Concern about Unnatural Affairs
Cycle, Season, and Arc: 28th of Vhalar 723
Participants: Nir'wei, Kisaik
Are you claiming an Order boost from all / some participants? Please clarify here +1 for prothing trustworthyness to the villagers.
Brief description of thread: Kisaik invites Nir'wei as councilor of natural affairs to assesss his capabilities of growing food and strange double spliced propagating plants whenever he wants, and the possible consequences of that.
Survival Skill Used (What Level if so): N/A
Survival Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many): N/A
Focus Skill Used (What level if so): Nir'wei uses fieldcraft but isn't a villager
Focus Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many): Master
Settlement Resources Used:
  • None
Intended Changes:See this guide.
  • As a non-automatic resource: Sweetwine Vine Tomato: A tomato plant that tastes like a person's favorite food and grows in low light (Enough to plant a couple more, not yet enough to call it a reliable resource)
 ! Message from: Winston
Approved, please add the following to your Settlement profile:
  • +1 Order
If the quantity is not enough to do more then replant them ("Enough to plant a couple more"), then I cannot approve this as a resource yet as people cannot actually have them yet. :-) Perhaps if you wish to follow-up with a larger cultivation, that could qualify? Let me know if you feel I have misunderstood this request.

Thanks for such detailed and clear requests.
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Settlement Name: Rosebay
Thread: Down by the Lakeside
Cycle, Season, and Arc: Saun, Hot 723
Participants: Dandelion, unnamed NPCs
Are you claiming an Order boost from all / some participants? Please clarify here Yes - solo
Brief description of thread: Laundry and swimming
Previous Threads: wool sheared
Survival Skill Used (What Level if so): No
Survival Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many):
Focus Skill Used (What level if so): No
Focus Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many):
Settlement Resources Used:
  • Wool
Intended Changes:See this guide.
  • The player completes an action that directly protects the settlers from harm. (rescues drowning child) +3 order
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Great story. Dandelion grows his order for Rosebay by 3 for saving the life of one of his settlers.

Please make the change to your Settlement Profile.
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Settlement Name: Rosebay
Thread: Boiled Cabbage
Cycle, Season, and Arc: Ashan, Rebirth cycle 723
Participants: Dandelion, Named NPC (Linnet)
Are you claiming an Order boost from all / some participants? Please clarify here Yes - solo
Brief description of thread: Making dye from cabbage, resubmitting
Previous Threads: Planned, grown, workshop set up, paid for as part of start up costs
Survival Skill Used (What Level if so): No
Survival Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many): n/a
Focus Skill Used (What level if so): Yes (gm)
Focus Skill Knowledge Claimed? (How many): 1
Settlement Resources Used:
  • Named NPCs
  • Red cabbage
Intended Changes:See this guide.
  • The player completes an action that proves they are trustworthy to the settlers. (helps with the regular work) (+1 order)
  • New secondary resource (cabbage dye) (+20 WP)
  • +3 Focus points
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Yup that'll do. +20 wp for the secondary resource (cabbage based dye), +3 Focus Points for using Leatherworking (Please include the name of the skill used next time, so I need not check your cs and settlement profile both.), and +1 order.

Please make these changes to your Settlement Profile.
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