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30th of Saun, 722

30th of Saun 722

With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.

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A Soldier's What's Fit For A Soldier

30th of Saun, 722
Westguard



They were young and lean and quick and they feared nothing. And if they did, they bloody well kept it to themselves.

Oh, to be young again. With as much balls as brains.

The sound of wood cracking into wood a dozen, a score, a hundred times over boomed off the walls of the garrison courtyard. Twenty young men and women were arrayed, paired off and facing each other. Two seasons ago, they'd all faced the same way and gone over the drills, the movements, the "katas", their teacher had told them. They'd sweated for breaks under the sun, in the rain, no matter when. Using those weighted wooden swords that were twice the bulk of the standard issue blades the Army used. Their teacher had set them straight on that.

"S'called 'conditioning'. At first, extra weight'll be harder. But then you'll get stronger. Get quicker. It'll get easier... an' then when yeh start usin' a real sword, it'll be double."

Of course, he hadn't let them use real swords yet, but they knew that trial was coming.

Their teacher watched them from the shade. Always moving but rarely in the sun. He sipped from a jug of water as he went, never looking at it, always with his eyes fixed on his students. The smallest among them, a girl named Edreine, was roughly his size. She'd had to work thrice as hard to prove herself, simply because she was in a woman, and this was soldiering. The boys and men all told her such... until the teacher spoke up, on their first parade, first trial. Barely an inch taller than her, a whole foot smaller than some of the other recruits... and even the beefiest bastard in the class turned white and remembered their place.

No. None of them put much stock in pure size anymore. Not after three seasons of him.

"SWITCH!"

At once the moving, circling pairs paused. Just for a fraction of a trill, long enough for their minds to reorient to the new task. If seen from above, it would look like ten miniature circling storms of movement had stalled, the commenced their merciless movement... but now the opposite side than before was on the defensive. Look down even closer, and one could see the dark trail of sweat and the black spatters of blood on the sand of the training yard. Long patterns and waves of crimson and black, painting it, splattering across it, on booted feet and exposed arms.

There was a yelp from down the yard and his eyes saw the boy falling before he'd hit the sand. Hopping, first. A crack to the leg, he'd wager. Guard too high, not minding his feet... ah, and that would be that ginger twat. Foley? Aye, that was it. But lo! The boy was learning, because he didn't pause or surrender. He rolled as he fell, coming up in a crouch and never letting hold of his sword. Now with his footing switch and his bad leg behind, he got up and squared off with Granner a second time.

Good.

Good. Yes. That word applied to all of them now. Not exceptional, not gifted, not amazing... but good. Fit for soldiering, as Old Peyt would say. Much was made of heroes and superlative warriors or yore, but Kasoria knew that battles and wars were not won by single souls. It was the masses of disciplined soldiery that won the day. Disciplined in the face of screaming enemies and fell mages and bellowing monsters. With training to match their courage, and leadership to use that massed, mailed, many-bodied weapon, they could do anything.

We did. At Rhakros.

"TIME!"

All movement stopped as if Ralaith had snapped his fingers. Then it started again. Slow. Cautious. Every half of every pair watching the other half, guard up. All twenty of them slowly sliding back into two straight lines facing each other... and only when they were there, did they slowly lower their weapons. Their teacher strode from the shade and into the blazing light of two merciless suns. Like the eyes of a cosmic giant studying him, judging him, much as he did them.

The little man took his time. Let them sweat some more. And sweat they did, and pant... but not tremble, nor shake, nor fall. They were hardened, now. After two seasons of his... education.

"Mark Warren? Front an' center!"

The recruit darted forward without hesitation. Knew what was coming, too. All of them had taken it at some point. Including him. His sword was held close to his side, and the moment his teacher's came up-

WHOOSH

-his own was on guard, held tight in one hand, his other balled into a fist. His teacher lunged, striking high-

CRACK

-his sword stopped it, blocked the blow and he gave his riposte-

-slashing down at his teacher, sword going through thin air as the smaller, older man twisted away-

-he backhanded instead, forcing his teacher to leap back away from the strike, and as he landed-

Warren charged in again, feinting low, left and right, before thrusting up diagonally, like he wanted to impale the older man through the breastbone-

But teacher was fast. There was a blur and his free hand smacked into his wrist as it rocketed up, knocking the blow off course and under teachers arm-

-he snapped his elbow to his side, trapping Warren's blade and then twisting to his side-

-spin of his body ripping it out of his hand and as he faced him again-

-the sword came spinning around for Warren's head and he ground his teeth and-

CRACK

Kasoria smiled thinly as he saw the boy's arm thrown up to the side, protecting his head... even if he nearly broke his forearm doing it. Panting and red-faced, Warren glared at him with somewhere between respect and fury. Then Kasoria's black eyes locked with his own, and the latter saw fit to flee elsewhere. All that was left was that... strange awe, they all seemed to hold for him. A deference built from fear and sick fascination. Never quite respect, but... useful. Almost gratifying.

"Good. Yeh've got a spare arm. Only got one head. An' in battle, yeh'll have mail on yer arm. Back in line."

Warren hustled back to his place without so much as a wince. Kasoria swept his eyes across the group and flicked a glance up to the sky.

"Fight ain't over 'til the other cunt is dead or can't fight back. That's it. Nothing else. An' that goes fer you, too. You lose yer sword? Use yer dagger. Lose yer dagger? Batter 'm with yer shield. That breaks? Use yer fists, yer teeth, yer forehead, anything! You hold the line an' you fight fer yer fuckin' life..."

He paused. Looked at the faces of those young souls who'd been a daily sight for him, going on three seasons. They'd all seen horror and death. The plague and siege was not so long ago for many of them... but they'd not seen battle. No matter what they'd seen before, that would be a test. His lip curled up at one side. Aye, but they'd come a long way. Their eyes held that hunger now, that challenge put out to the world. They didn't shrink from pain now; they embraced it, charged towards it. He looked across every face and saw faced once ruddy and chubby now lean and hard and... ready?

Only one way to know.

"Cuz mark me now, the other wanker won't do anythin' less. Time's up, on about yer duties. Tomorrow? We're breakin' out the metal..."
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"Thrust!"

A bellow.

"Parry!"

A grunt.

"Counter!"

A hiss.

"Slash right!"

Someone fell over. Kasoria had been waiting for it, but he still sighed and cast his eyes to an uncaring sky.

"... Zander?" A chunky young man with a wispy mustache sheepishly got back to his feet. "Over-extended again, didn't yeh?"

"Y-Yes, Teacher!"

"Start over! Ten more rotations, courtesy of Recruit Zander, 'ere!"

A groan. Muttering like a gaggle of crows chattering through the yard... but they obeyed. They always obeyed. Most of them were young, and believers. They wanted to be soldiers, wanted to help and protect their homes. Steady pay wouldn't hurt, either, but Kasoria had seen the eyes of enough naïve "joiners" in his life to know the look. He was The Authority, not matter how the other officers seemed to disdain him, and so they obeyed. And given exactly who he was, even if he didn't have that going for him, well...

Humble Instructor Kasoria was fast discovering and appreciating how useful a reputation could be, if wielded properly.

About time it was good for something... something legit, anyway.

They went through the routine again, under with watchful eyes. They'd been at it for a break and there was no hint from their teacher they'd be letting up soon. First had been each movement, repeated until each was perfect. Then two of them together. Three. Four. Repeated. Reversed. Done blindfolded. With the offhand. After a three-league run and Fates help you if you if you dropped your weapon of forgot your form.

This was Zander's second time. The third would see him laid out from exhaustion for the rest of the trial, Kasoria swore to himself.

He marched up and down, hands clasped around the hilt of his own training sword behind his back. Now and then he'd pause and give some advice. Correct footwork. Stance. The importance of a swift thrust and a thorough slash, but not confusing those two for a thorough slash would be slow, and a swift slash might throw you off, if you missed). All around him the recruits went through his motions. The lessons he'd given them, the knowledge he'd compiled through a lifetimes of blood and shame and horror and brutality. Organized and separated from simple brawling and the endless methods of murder into what could be charitably called "dueling".

Mostly.

"Thrust an' jab!"

As one the recruits thrust with their swords, impaling their enemy, then in the same moment they pulled them back-

-snapped out a closed fist into the air ahead of them.

"Again!"

A twin roar came with each gesture, but still their teacher snarled.

"Speed, damnit! Speed an' accuracy! Half youse're still jabbin' into their foreheads! Nose or throat, dependin' what helmet they wear! AGAIN!"

They obeyed. Until their arms shook and their breathing was ragged. A season ago this class had been getting used to the... basics of swordfighting. Like how to properly hold one. The teacher had been patient, then. Gruffly so, but still. Now, though... now it seemed like a battle was bu breaks away and he needed them trained for it. Now every trial was war for them. It left them sweating and tired and angry and...

Yeah, Kasoria thought as he saw twenty pairs of hands move as one, with one purpose, one speed, and fire in every eye. Better.

"Time's up! Get yer water... when I tell ya to!"

No feet made to move. He'd tried that one before. Instead they stood at attention. Not flinching when he walked up and down the line, pointing with his stick.

"Trainin' ain't just here. It's where you make it, when you need it, which is all the fuckin' time, aye? You drill an' you train an' you repeat until yer muscles know the moves before your mind does. So when the battle comes an' all that fear an' anger shuts yer mind down the first time... yer body won't."

He stopped in front of Zander.

"Wuz hopin' fer a third time, recruit. Yeh didn't fall again."

The boy smiled and swelled noticeably. "No, sir!"

"Aye. We'll see about tomorrow. Dismissed!"
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"Hope yer not tired, gents... cuz the day ain't over."

The new gaggle didn't look at him with fear. Most met his eyes. They frowned. Looked at each other and whispered. Who was the old man? Short and slight and in plain uniform with only one sign of rank: the little wooden star on his collar that marked him as an instructor. Older, wiser heads noted the sword at his hip, slung at the perfect height for a quick draw. That was just the blade they could see. But he was still unassuming... until he got across the training yard.

Black eyes. Impossibly. Inhumanly. A light that seemed to worm its way under his skin at all times, like some great sickening luminescent worm forever prowling under his skin. He wore gloves, so they could not see the eyes set into his hands... but they could see the black chains coiling across his arms.

Mage.

Mutation.

Warrior.

It's him... Kasoria.


He saw the realization in their eyes. Like a pool of ice water had been dropped from a great height. Almost a whole arc, and some proud, petty part of him was still pickled by that part. Now that was over with, he unhooked his sword from his belt and held instead. They were already in shorts and sleeveless tops. The suns were fading, but being damn slow about it. The air was humid. Thick. But not as much as earlier, when his third- and second-season recruits had sweat buckets out under the glare.

These were but first-seasons. He could ease them in, as it were. But end of day did not mean end of work. That was the first lesson you were to get.

"Didja run this morn?" A general rumble of affirmation. "Stretches? Push ups? All dat?" Another rumble, and he nodded. "Good... then that was far back enough for yeh t'be ready for another."

A groan! Loud, and doleful! Without care or respect and it threatened to drown out his next words until-

CRACK

The bolt of ether flew across the yard and slammed into a water bottle without Kasoria even looking. He'd learned long ago that the "hurling" part of the Ether Bolt cast wasn't so much throwing it as directing it. Like any other expression of magic, it came from the mind, directed by the hands. Of course, one could say that of any cororeal discpline, but it was all the more true in magic. He'd already decided where he wanted it to go; the gesture of his outflung hand was just getting the vague direction right.

Besides, he comforted himself, remembering the throwing knives he used to wear. Fifteen feet? Pah. I'd have made it anyway.

The greenhorns snapped shut like steel damn traps in an instant. Watching as the pieces of ceramic bottle glowed and smoked and then started to fall apart. Corrosion, it was called. Didn't work on living matter, but anything else... well, it just depended on the power of the caster. Within a few trills the pieces of rotting ceramic had turned to dust and they turned back to Kasoria.

"Youse know me. Youse know what I am and what I can do. But what's I'm here t'do... is get ya t'be soldiers. So shut up yer boxes an' get ready fer a run. Cuz this is the last easy night, lads." He turned away from the setting suns, ready to run into the day that was ending, not the night o come. "One me! Class... go!"

As one, the class followed behind him, feet pounding on sand and stone and eventually mud as they left the garrison. Kasoria waited until they were a quarter-;league in before dropping back and letting them pass him. Then he took position behind, and watched. First trial for a new class. Time to see who was fit and who needed to run more, eat less, or both.

"Feet up an' breath regular, lads!" He cried out as he led the troops around Westguard. "We're jus' gettin' started..."
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Kasoria

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    • Teaching: Creating a Curriculum, Not Just a Lesson
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    • Teaching: Repetition is Crucial in Physical Education
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Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Notes:

Kasoria passing on his knowledge to others! I enjoyed this solo a great deal. You interjected a lot of different elements into it that went just beyond a 'teaching' others thread, which was a great choice in my opinion. There was teaching, obviously, but also Kas' thoughts on what was going on and even a few tidbits from his past.

I like how much detail about the training you piled into the piece as well. That always gives writing depth and elevates it. I think Kasoria is a very disciplined teacher, and that comes through clearly.

All in all, great writing and good job! Enjoy your rewards!


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