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34th of Ashan 721

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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Fun with Tenses



34th of Ashan 721 Taleteller... of the Future??
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The Pilgrims Ascent has a strange chap sitting on the steps. Wearing strange clothes the man stops passers-by apparently randomly and tells them stories. These stories are of time past - things that he couldn't possibly know - and then of things to come.
Strifa had very much recovered from her uncharacteristic fit of shyness in the wake of Tom Barber of a few nights before. Today, they'd resolved to explore more of the city, and not just stick to the Dust Quarter. While the Dust Quarter was a nice place to lay low and minimize one's profile, curiosity won out over the women. Diana and Strifa gave into it. So they began climbing the Pilgrim's Ascent. Besides, it's not as if they were on the run from anyone.

Strifa was her usual chatty self on the way up to the Glass Quarter, where they were set to go. It took some time, but the young nurse student began acclimating to the style of spring dresses. She'd even begun to revel in it, wearing lower necklines and short-sleeved chemises beneath blue wool overdress and corset. Diana was happy her friend was getting used to the place.

Strifa kept chattering about little nothings, pointing out this person or that cart of goods and then cooing at the neighborhood stray animals. Diana just smiled, letting her chat away, filling the air with her background noise, lest Diana's thoughts be drawn back to those troublesome memories that couldn't belong to her. Of late they'd grown more frequent, terrors remembered upon waking in the night. Half-understood impressions of a time centuries ago, which was... insane. Nobody lived that long.

For DIana, she wore over a long-sleeved linen chemise, a thick and fitted gown of richly colored brown wool, slashed with splashes of orange color. Fitting the dress to her form, a leather corset wrapped around her midsection, while on her feet she wore thigh-high, soft calfskin boots. She didn't bother with jewelry that day. She had nobody she wanted to impress.

They had climbed all the way from the Earth Quarter, but must have gone too far for now the saw the Cathedral, and the places of the Lightning Knights and Priestesses. Diana turned to Strifa, "We've gone too far... We should turn around. I don't even know if they have shops in the Sky Quarter."

"Oh! Look at that building, it's taller than the any part of Viden's fortress!" Strifa chattered excitedly, pulling at Diana's arm like she were a stubborn beast of burden. "C'mon, let's see if the let people inside. It must be incredible in there!"

Diana shook her head, she didn't have a good feeling about entering it. She began drawing back from Strifa, wrestling herself out of the woman's grip and turning around, back to PIlgrim's Ascent. To her surprise, she heard a voice calling her. The voice hit her ears fully, and there was something familiar about it. She turned, to see an Eidisi man, dressed outrageously. Like some jester, or else as if he were from a foreign land. "Come, Daughter of longing and knowledge. Come and learn the secrets the Great Zarmanil has to tell!"

Diana eyed him skeptically, but it probably beat getting dragged to the Cathedral. She turned to Strifa, and nodded, "You go on and see the Temple. I'll be right here when you come back."

"You sure?" Strifa's eyebrows lifted, as she crossed her arms, disappointed to lose a follower.

"Yes." Diana managed a weak smile, "It's not everyday you mee the Great Zarmanil, after all."

Strifa grumbled, muttering, "Not everyday I get dragged into some safehouse to get murdered by a demented clown, but hey." Strifa sighed, and then started away, toward the Cathedral.
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34th Ashan


"Come Daughter of Ice and Moons. Come to the past, go to the future, it is all waiting for you, whichever way you take." Diana couldn't help some bemusement at the man's strange manner of addressing her. "Ask, and ye shall then know! Zarmanil can tell you!"

Diana smiled politely at him, but hopped on her heels uncomfortably, as she waited and wondered how long Strifa would take in the Cathedral. Hell, maybe the woman would join the Thunder Priestesses. The idea almost drew a groan from her throat, but she stifled it. If only to thwart whatever question that would prompt from the demented street crier.

"Just one question, fair Daughter of Treid. And Zarmanil will answer!"

Diana glanced at him. Did he call her daughter of Treid? No, that couldn't be right. She must've misheard. She dismissed it. "One question? Will I last at my new job? How about that? And do I have the slightest chance with..."

Zarmanil laughed superficially, like a marionette as she asked her questions. "That is not one question, but two and a half. And yet Zarmanil is generous with the truth that the future and past hold. He shall answer!"

Diana paused and almost retorted but again caught the comment in her teeth, as she ground them in frustration at the company she held.

"No, not one question, but two and a half-finished one. Your job is not a permanent one, greater destiny awaits you. And as for your chances with Doctor Tom Barber..."

Diana quirked a brow, but she supposed it wasn't out of the realm of possibility that one might've heard that Tom Barber had a new girl working for him. It wasn't exactly a secret, yet it was interesting that the crier seemed to understand she meant her chances with him specifically. Still, how many eligible clean-cut and handsome men did Rharne have? Not enough. Their faces were far too flat and battle-warped on average.

Ah but you are not convinced of Zarmanil's gift yet. Then tell me, why is it after sleep you recall yet another dark horror from the distant past of some other woman. A woman who is haunted by butchery and ignomy. A woman darker than the ones driving her as their thrall..."

Diana shot him a look, dumbstruck that he knew of her dreams. Okay, that definitely wasn't something he could've found out simply by keeping an ear to the ground. SHe hadn't told a soul about her dreams, or the 'memories' that came after. Yet still, she scanned what he said, trying to understand and figure out just how ambivalent the statement was. How it could be applied to other situations and people in general. Maybe it sounded more personal to her because her mind was already there, on the dark memories.

But Zarmanil didn't stop. "For you are Mortalborn Daughter of Treid. Empty Diana of Sleep." Zarmanil cackled like he couldn't help it. And for the first time in her waking moments, she considered pulling out one of those embersteel daggers hidden up her sleeve and driving it into his left armpit, just like Belne had taught her.


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34th Ashan




So, she hadn't misheard the part about being the Daughter of Treid. And this man seemed to know far too much about her. For a time, however, a few bits, there was silence, as others approached the eccentric fortune-teller, looking to have their futures or pasts read. Past for a first impression, future for obvious reasons. The answers he gave to these individuals were innocuous enough in comparison to the answers he'd given to Diana. Which made her angrier, wondering why this fop singled her out for uncomfortable statements about her past and future.

Another few bits and Strifa returned, winding her arm into Diana's and tapping her friend on the nose. Strifa stared at Diana for a moment, "What's wrong, Diana, you're pale as a ghost. Oh! Did you see him?"

"See who?"

"Your old man from Viden... I remember you and him going at it pretty heavily one night when I sneaked into your apartment in Viden... I saw him jumping up and down and presumed..."

"What?!" Diana was mortified, and yet she didn't remember this. She was pretty sure she would remember a night with Belne. What had he been doing in her apartment... "Strifa, this is important, when did you say he... Wait, did you ask me if I saw him here?"

Strifa looked with some concern on Diana, which made her want to slap the healer.

The crowd had dispersed at this point, and Zarmanil was looking on the pair, smiling in that unctuous and mysterious way he had about him. She would've found him annoying at worst if he wasn't making himself out to be a potentially dangerous stalker.

Diana unwound her arm from Strifa, and took the woman by the shoulders, looking into her eyes, "Strifa, this is important, where did you see Belne?"

"A few days ago, at the pier near the river. He..."

"Shit." Diana muttered, and pushed away from Strifa, heading down the steps with all haste toward her house in the Dust Quarter. She couldn't have Belne bedeviling her trail. And what was this nonsense about grinding in the night? She'd never touched the bastard and vice versa.

She made her lonely way back to her house, leaving Strifa with the fortune teller, and to wonder about what that entire outburst had been regarding.
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Knowledge:
Discipline: Not letting our upset show on the surface.
Discipline: Losing your calm only to regain it.
Endurance: Climbing stairs can take a lot of energy out of you.
Socialization: Standing stubborn when a friend tries to lead you astray.
Storytelling: Stories of the past and future can be told to impress the listener, if they happen to be correct.
Storytelling: Confidence men and soothsayers alike make obtuse references that may seem relevant to one's story, but they aren't.

Loot: Fortune told, Mortalborn status suspected.
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: I’m glad that at least Strifa is getting used to Rharne, and I enjoyed the description of your PC’s outfit, as always. I’ve been wondering how Diana was dealing with those memories that have begun to surface, so I’m glad that you mentioned it here.

Strifa is a well-realized NPC in my opinion. She is chatty and relatively cheerful, while Diana gives me the impression of being more quiet and thoughtful. I have to admit, I like her!

I wonder how Zarmanil knows what he knows. Does he have some sort of mark, or is he a Mortalborn himself? Either way, the interaction with him was well-written, and Diana’s reaction was very understandable. I wouldn’t really believe that strange man either!

I wonder what will happen when she realizes that he was right though and that she really is Treid’s daughter. I look forward to reading that thread!

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