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As one approaches the City of Nashaki, trains of caravans lead through the sprawling outskirts to the numerous open city gates. The largest gate is on the west side and leads past the fortified walls into an octagon of eight districts. Each district features unique markets and is maintained by one of the eight Towers that rule Nashaki. In the city, heavily guarded, is the prized oasis that supports the Nashaki people to flourish in such an unforgiving land.
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No explosions, nor screams had woken Hyde up. He slept, hard, for breaks without stirring so much as a finger or foot out of place from where he'd crashed. The empty green glass had rolled to press against his cheek, and drool had gathered on the spot in a small puddle.

The midday sun, however, woke him when it streaked past the flimsy curtains. At first, he grumbled and turned his head the other way. The glass got in the way though. He almost chipped a tooth on the thing in his disgruntled still-asleep state. His hand flew out to move it aside, and the glass tumbled onto the floor. The impact caused a small crack to run through but it didn't shatter apart. Though he wanted to keep asleep, he woke in a start and lifted from the bed.

Dizzy, his head pounded in a rush of blood while he stumbled over to the wash basin. He threw up into the befouled water. There wasn't much to it but bile and gin. He leaned over, hand against the wall to help steady himself, while he finished the instinctual purge and then regained his breath.

Hyde closed his eyes, and focused on his breath, while he felt the terrible sensations of being awake again. The heat had gotten unbearable, layers of sweat clung to his skin. He could hear his pulse in his ears as his head ached with pressure from all sides of his skull. His throat felt raw, dry, and sticky with sour bile-tinted phlegm.

His muscles hurt too, from... whatever he did last night. He couldn't remember. In fact, while he rubbed at his face and stumbled toward the nightstand, he couldn't remember anything except the morning prior when he'd decided he would spend the trial drinking.

He picked up the bottle of gin and though it was warmer than lukewarm, he gulped down most of it like a thirsty man drinking water. Once done, he set it on the stand, then fell to sit on the edge of the bed. He leaned forward and cradled his head in both his hands while he waited for the alcohol to soak into his body so that he could have a chance to ignore the monstrous hangover.
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66 Ashan, 718 ‣ Nashaki
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The last time Saza’s heart beat this fast, he’d been running ahead of the caravan that’d brought him and a handful of his fellow soldiers back to the city. He’d hopped right off of the cart with Dion yelling after him to come back and be patient with the rest of them, but he’d taken off regardless, as soon as he’d seen the towers looming in the distance.

Now though, his heart didn’t race with excitement. The pounding in his chest was not punctuated with heavy, exhausted breaths at the end of a tiring run. He was at rest, lying on his back with his arms splayed out at his sides, and he could feel every rocking movement of his heart within the confines of his flesh. Always such an uncomfortable feeling, and it was one he didn’t know how to fix at times like these.

He wasn’t panicked, he wasn’t out of breath, he wasn’t doing anything at all but sleeping. Slumbering (mostly) at peace, with deep breaths filling his lungs and midday light filtering through the curtains to shine against his closed eyelids. His head was still propped up with the pillow he’d collected from the corner of the room, and though he had no blankets to insulate, he’d never been in any danger of getting cold.

When the room’s other occupant awoke, pulling himself up with a start and stumbling his way to the dirty washbasin, Saza didn’t stir. The previous night’s activities had left him far too exhausted for a bit of noise to wake him up. He did move his arm, pulling it close so that his hand rested over his chest and subconsciously tried to calm the heart within.

It wasn’t until a few good bits had passed since Hyde’s awakening that Saza shifted more, and the sleeping blond drew in an audible breath as he turned to lie on his side. His hair was a mess, but no more than it had been the night before, and covered his forehead as he slept. One hand reached towards the wall, calloused fingers touching against it and stopping there, while the other clung to the space just above his heart.

The poor thing raced and raced and in the end, the anxious discomfort of it was what finally pulled him back into the waking world. The biqaj breathed out a little huff, fingers curling into his shirt, before his eyes slowly drifted open. Blue eyes stared at the wall, half-lidded and confused, before Saza turned to the other side to get a look at the rest of the room.

Blue swirled with purple… then red… and settled there, as he furrowed his brow and pushed himself up to a seated position. Where was he?

And who was… that. Saza stared at the older man for a few solid trills before the hazy memory filtered back to him. Charcoal-Man? No, he’d given him some other name later on… but Saza could barely remember anything after the guy had left the tavern. Charcoal-Man… but what’d happened to the charcoal?

“He–” nope, that wasn’t working. Red irises seemed to darken in hue as he tried to push past his growing headache and use his words. Saza closed his eyes and pushed his hair out of his face, but his hand stayed behind to rub at his temple. He tried again, “Hyde? Right?”
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"He-- Hyde? Right?"

Hyde got up. Too quick, too hurried, with a swift turn of his feet while he moved to look at where the voice had come from. He paused when he saw... pointy ears? Eyes of shifting red colors? A biqaj? Shit. He glanced around the room some, and eased from the momentary shock of a voice when he'd thought himself alone. The older man shook his head, and regretted it when his headache thumped against the back of his eyes. He rubbed at one with the moon of his palm, and grumbled.

The deep noise was the closest thing to a confirmation that the younger was about to get.

He leaned over and grabbed the gin bottle. Hyde took a swig of the little that remained, then he slumped over to the door. With slight trouble, he managed to get the door open. For a moment, he just held it there and gestured for the biqaj to leave. Hyde's caramel-brown eyes scanned over the youth's features and body and clothes and still nothing came to mind. He assumed that he must have allowed the young stranger in, though, given that they knew his name and were using the pillow. The Etzori didn't bother dwelling on possible reasons.

Hyde closed his eyes, adjusted his posture some, then his voice rumbled with all the dryness and soreness that he felt within his throat. "Food..."

Fingers pinched the bridge of his nose while he fought past the headache to remember anything at all. Something... something... nope, nothing. He let go of the door, regardless if the youth had gotten on his way or not, and went to get dressed. It was a tedious affair, while he tried to keep hold of the bottle and also get his pants on.

Hyde just fell against the bed on his back. Pants pulled to his hips, he finished the gin and stared at the sunlit ceiling. His eyes shut. He wanted to stay there and not bother with anything else ever again. Any lack of hospitality that the average person might have felt, didn't even occur to him in the moment. If he could just fall back asleep, then... maybe next time he woke, it wouldn't be so bad. If he woke.
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Yellow eyes widened in surprise as the human suddenly stood. Hyde turned to look at him, and Saza’s cheeks colored the lightest of silvery-blues as he registered that the older hadn’t known he was there. What had… happened, then? Hyde either couldn’t remember the previous night’s events (which would not surprise him, as he couldn’t remember them himself), or he’d expected the blond to be up and out of the room before he woke, and Saza wasn’t sure which the better option was. Were either of them good options?

Either way, he was sitting in a room that he realized he wasn’t meant to be sitting in. He watched the human get his bearings, and offered a slightly awkward smile in the hopes to smooth things over. He didn’t mean to impose, and he didn’t know if the older had really intended on him being there at all, but… it wasn’t the worst place to wake up in. It was cluttered, and he couldn’t remember how he’d gotten there, but he was glad to have slept in proper shelter.

Hyde managed to make it to the door, slumped and clearly struggling through his own hangover, and Saza pushed himself up a little more. The pillow was smacked behind him, returned to proper form, and he went to lean back against it… when Hyde gestured at the opened door for him to go.

Saza wasn’t sure why he was surprised by it – he didn’t even know the guy, after all. The only thing he could recall about the man was… charcoal, and even that was pushing it. The curly-haired youth frowned, “oh – uh, right. Sorry.”

Pushing himself up completely, Saza stood. He wiped his bony hands against his knees, knocking the dust from his trousers, and then straightened up to his full height again. Even once the human had adjusted his posture, the biqaj had a few good inches on him, he noted as he looked him over in a quick survey. Barely dressed, but he looked alright besides that. Saza couldn’t imagine anything bad had happened, but it bugged him a little not to know. Cool-toned with silver and violet and blue, the youth’s colorful gaze darted away, and he stepped closer to the door.

“Um… thanks for letting me sleep here,” even if you might not have meant to. His accented voice was quiet, and he dipped his head in a polite nod. At least Hyde hadn’t flipped out on him and thrown him out. Saza didn’t mind being told to leave – he’d flitted from house to house, tent to tent, box to box all his life. He just appreciated a bit of politeness.

Raising a hand in a little mock salute, Saza stepped through the opened door, and on his way through he said, “maybe I’ll see you around sometime.”

Whether that was something either of them would actually want, well, he was too hungover to know. He only knew that Hyde needed his room back, and he wasn’t going to encroach on another man’s space.

With his hands slipped into his pockets, he started down the hall. He glanced back when he heard the other man’s voice, a dry rumbling utterance of food, but he didn’t stop. He could agree with the simple sentiment – his stomach ached for sustenance, but he wasn’t a stranger to the feeling. He’d make it just fine. More than likely, Hyde hadn’t been talking to him anyway, since he’d just motioned for him to go. So, Saza continued.

His fingers clutched at a handful of things that hadn’t been in his pocket the night before – he pulled them all out and paused for a moment, as red eyes scanned over the items. A crumpled-up note (Dion’s handwriting?) and some nels… Saza glanced back at the room he’d come from again, and then to the other doors along the hall, making a note of which one Hyde was staying in. How had he gotten those nels? He hadn’t stolen them, had he?

Saza couldn’t see himself stealing. Not even when he was drunk. He wasn’t of the mind to take things away from anyone else. Even so, he couldn’t help but wonder how he’d gotten the coins. He resumed his walk down the dimly-lit hall, quickly descended the stairwell, and landed on the ground floor with a little hop.

The tavern wasn’t as busy as it’d been the last time he could remember looking at it. There were a few people about, sitting and treating themselves to meals and drinks and whatever else people spent their coin on. A serving girl stood behind the counter, leaned forward with her chin resting in her palm. Saza breathed out a sigh as he made his way over.

“Still here?” asked the barmaid, to which Saza only shrugged. He was shocked enough with himself; he certainly didn’t have an explanation for anyone else. He already knew that Dion would kill him for apparently leaving him hanging.

The biqaj sat down at the counter, reached into his pocket again, and slid a few nels across the counter. Such a small action, but it was enough to wound the young soldier’s cheap heart. It just didn’t feel right to keep them long, when he didn’t even feel like he’d earned them. He set his arms down on the surface and rested his head upon them, eyes closed to block out the light.

“I’d like some water please,” he requested, voice a little muffled, “and take some food to that weird guy in the fourth room.”

The coins were swept into the barmaid’s hand, and she raised her thin brows, but complied.
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Awkward smile. Hyde didn't watch the frizzy-haired youth, but he did see that and it stuck in his mind. He wasn't sure why, though. The gratitude and politeness and a possibility of seeing each other again (why?) brought a quiet grunt in acknowledged response. As soon as the biqaj had gotten through, he let the door shut and returned to fall against the bed.

Eyes shut, he tried to sleep more. His empty stomach ached almost as much as his head though, and he swore he could feel his liver sobbing in the corner of his body.

There he stayed until he heard a knock on the door. He tilted his head somewhat to look at it, then rested back against the bed with a grumble. The knock repeated.

"Mister Hyde?" called the somewhat familiar voice of the wench.

"What?" he called back, though he rolled onto his side when she simply opened the unlocked door and peeked in. He lifted himself up, and squinted at the tray she brought in and set on the nightstand. "Food?"

She nodded, glanced around the room. Without a word, she left in a hurry while shutting the door behind.

Hyde sat at the bed's edge and picked up one of the slices of bread. He pulled the crust off, then chewed on it with some caution. For as much as he knew, this inn didn't have complimentary breakfast. He thought of the frizzy-haired, pointy-eared, colorful-eyed stranger. If he had nel to spend on food, why had he stayed in Hyde's room? Regardless, Hyde ate the bread while he focused on just getting through his hangover and the heat of the trial. Whatever mystery hid in the darkness of his black-out, he would let it be. One more to add to the rest. Gods knew he had enough of those.
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A glass of lukewarm water had been set before him bits ago, and he’d downed most of it before the barmaid walked away. It didn’t help the persistent pounding in his head, not yet, but it at least helped soothe the sore dryness of his throat. When the server passed him by again, carrying a plate full of whatever-the-hell they served in the establishment (he didn’t know, he hadn’t ever eaten much cooked food), Saza’s tired, half-lidded gaze followed the dish until it disappeared into the darkness of the stairwell.

He finished the rest of his water after that. It was gone in one quick sip, and the emptied glass was set down with a little clink. Saza wiped his wrist against his mouth to dry it, and glared down at his tanned skin when he realized that there’d been a big, dark smudge across it. He could remember doing that – wiping his fingertip in the weird mixture in that tin, wiping it off on his wrist afterwards. The smudge was transferred to his lips, and he turned his head, wiping his mouth against his shoulder.

Dion would be expecting him. If the pesky little human hadn’t left the room he’d rented yet, Saza would consider it a good thing. If he’d already left, however… the biqaj didn’t want to deal with the snark that he knew would follow. Dion was just like that. He was mean-spirited, and abrasive, and half of the time the blond didn’t even know why they were friends, and half of the time he recalled how much worse the other man used to be before they were friends – and that was a good enough reminder to keep things cordial.

Saza swung his legs to the side and slipped out of the stool. He was already on his way towards the door when the barmaid returned, hands no longer occupied, and she returned to her spot behind the counter. “Thanks,” the biqaj called over his shoulder, and he threw her a wave before he pushed through the door.

Now, where had Dion wanted him to go? Saza pulled the note from his pocket and looked over it again, over the poorly-imitated handwriting and the given location. He squinted against the light as he glanced down the street. Just down the road, he thought, and if it wasn’t… well, it wasn’t as if he had anything else to do, until they packed up and went back to the fortress. What were a few directionless trials?
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Hyde:

Knowledge:
Detection x2
Resistance x3
Endurance x3

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: A monstrous hangover.
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Points: 15

Saza:

Knowledge:
Etiquette x3
Detection x3
Endurance x2

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Exhaustion. Confusion.
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

Points: 15

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Comments: Oh my! Hyde definitely has an interesting relationship with alcohol. Drinking more is one way to get rid of/ignore the monstrous hangover. That was rather entertaining to read!

I liked in how much detail you described his being drunk (and the consequences of drinking so much).

Saza has an interesting, but fitting nickname for Hyde – Charcoal-Man. I’m still not entirely sure why he carries that charcoal around though.

Saza’s confusion after waking up was well-described.

I wonder if he’ll eventually remember …

(He doesn’t seem to be quite as drunk as Hyde though!).

Amyway, enjoy your rewards!

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