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3rd of Zi'da 719

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3rd Zi'da, 719


"Do you want to read some more?" Kirion asked as he and Maerin finished cleaning up the breakfast dishes.

Kirei felt a flash of guilt as she watched him. Aiden had to make breakfast for everyone again since she was unable to cook in her current form. Cooking was supposed to be her job, and she was failing her family because she had gotten herself stuck in a form that was mostly useless to them. But Aiden never complained about having to take care of Ru by himself, or about having to do all of the cooking...or about anything else for that matter. He truly was a wonderful friend, and Kirei felt a surge of love for him. Kirion appeared to be waiting for an answer, though, so she nodded once.

"I'll go get some paper to take notes for you!" Maerin cried excitedly.

She ran off to do just that, and Kirion went over to the bookcase. Kirei followed him. He slowly ran his fingers over the bindings of the books while Kirei watched him intently. When he reached the book she wanted, she made a huffing sound, and Kirion's hand froze.

"Is this the one you want?" he asked to be certain.

Kirei nodded again, and Kirion pulled the book off of the shelf. He placed it on the floor carefully so that Kirei would be able to read it. Then he opened it to the place where it was marked with a strip of leather.

"Is this good?"

It was where Kirei had left off reading the last time she had read this book, and she nodded to show Kirion that she wanted to continue from there. Maerin returned with paper and a quill pen to write with. Eris, Aerin, and Ryl were close on her heels.

"We want to help you too!" Eris protested.

"It should be our turn to help you this time since Kirion and Maerin helped you last time." Aerin added.

Kirei winced inwardly. Eris and Aerin were old enough to help her effectively, but Ryl wasn't, and there was no way to leave her out of anything that the two older girls did. Still, there had to be something that the three of them could do that would let them feel as though they were helping her. Kirei glanced at the bookcase, the beginnings of an idea stirring in her mind. She paced over to it a few trills later. Kirion followed her.

"Do you want another book?" he asked in confusion.

Kirei nodded. Kirion repeated his actions of running his fingers along the spines of the books until she "told" him to stop. This time, it was a recipe book that she was looking for. But how to communicate her idea to the kids? After a few trills of thought, she walked over to Ryl, and tugged at her skirt gently until she came with her over to where Kirion was standing. Then she looked at Kirion expectantly.

"You want me...to give the book to Ryl?" he asked uncertainly.

Kirei nodded, so he did just that. Curious, Eris and Aerin walked over to Ryl to see what kind of book it was.

"What do you want us to do with this?" Ryl asked at last.

Kirei walked over to where Maerin was setting up her paper so she could take notes. Then she stepped on one of the sheets of paper for a few trills before looking over at the girls once more. Would they understand what she was trying to say?

"I think..." Maerin said slowly, staring at Kirei carefully.

"I think that she wants you to take notes on that book instead?"

Kirei nodded, and purred happily. Eris ran off to get some paper and something to write with while Aerin and Ryl gathered around the book and made themselves comfortable. When Eris returned, they opened the book to get started. But after a few trills, Eris frowned.

"This is just a book of recipes. What are we supposed to take notes on?"

Kirei growled softly in frustration. How was she supposed to explain what she wanted them to do?

"Hey, Eris, come look at this. This chicken recipe looks like it would be really good." Aerin said excitedly.

Kirei purred loudly, drawing their attention to her. After a few trills, Kirion's eyes lit up with understanding.

"I think she wants you to look through that recipe book and find recipes that look good to you, and copy them down. That way when she changes back, she can cook them for us to try."

Kirion glanced at her to see if he had guessed right. Kirei nodded, and purred happily. He grinned. Now that the three girls were satisfied that they had a way to help Kirei too, they got to work quickly. That left Kirei free to get on with her own reading.





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Poaching is a method of cooking in which food is cooked in a liquid. As such, it is considered to be a moist heat cooking method. Heat is conducted from the pot or pan the food is being cooked in to the liquid, and finally from the liquid to the food. Poaching is different than simmering and boiling in that it uses a relatively low temperature. This makes it ideal for delicate foods such as eggs, poultry, fish, and fruit that might fall apart or dry out when cooked using other methods. Poaching is considered to be a healthy method of cooking because it does not use fat to cook or flavor the food.

The liquid that the food is poached in can be any number of things such as water, milk, stock, bouillon, or wine. A lot of flavor is transferred from the poaching liquid to the food. For maximum flavor, the poaching liquid can be reduced and used as the base for a sauce for the food that was cooked in it. Aromatics such as mirepox are also used for additional flavor.


Kirei paused to consider what she had read as well as to allow Maerin to catch up to her with her notes.

I think I really need to learn exactly what mirepoix is. I saw it used when making stock for soup back when I was working at Elyari's Hope, too. she mused.

She glanced at Maerin to see if she was ready to continue. Once the young girl signaled that she was, Kirei tapped the page "asking" Kirion to turn it for her so that she could continue reading.

There are two different ways to poach food. Shallow poaching is a moist heat cooking method that requires the use of a shallow cooking vessel such as a sautoire. This method is great for cooking boneless, naturally tender, single serving sized, sliced or diced pieces of meat, poultry or fish. In order to prepare the pan for shallow poaching, the inside of the pan must first be smeared with butter. Once that is done, add the desired aromatics to the bottom of the pan. The food to be shallow poached is then placed into the pan, and finally, cold poaching liquid is poured into the pan until the food is partially submerged. When using this cooking method, the liquid should never be allowed to boil, but it should be kept as close to boiling temperature as possible.

Deep poaching is similar to shallow poaching, but it requires that the food be fully submerged in the poaching liquid. The pot used for this cooking method should be deep enough to hold the food, liquid, and aromatics comfortably, with enough room to allow the liquid to expand as it heats. There should also be enough space so that the surface can be skimmed if necessary.


Kirei paused to glance at the children to see how they were doing. Aerin noticed her, and grinned.

"We've found five recipes that look really good so far. Eris and Ryl are copying them down now. Do you want us to keep going?"

Kirei nodded, and gave her adopted daughter a purr of approval and gratitude. Aerin giggled happily as she turned back to her task. A quick glance at Maerin told her that she was still busy taking notes so she let her be. Then she turned to Kirion who seemed to be waiting for direction from her.

"Are you ready for me to turn the page again?" he asked.

Kirei hesitated for a trill, then tapped her paw on the ground twice for "no." As much as she wanted to keep reading so that she could learn more techniques that would make her more valuable to her employer when she was able to work as a chef again, there was really only so much she could learn by just reading about different techniques. If she wanted to truly learn them, she would have to practice them...and that simply wasn't possible for her just now. So it was time to stop reading and focus on what she could do to earn a living; go hunting and bring something back for Cally's.



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"You're going to go hunting now, aren't you?" Kirion asked.

Kirei nodded. Maerin was still taking notes, so he left the book where it was so she could finish. After asking Eris if they needed any more paper, he went to open the door to let Kirei go outside.

It was still hot out, and that was something that Kirei was mildly curious about. She knew that others were worried about the weather and what it might mean, and Kirei wondered about it too sometimes. But it wasn't like she could do anything about it, and the heat was going to work in her favor now. Everyone knew that the weather had caused an explosion in the animal population. Packs of Oh Deer, and herds of all manner of wild game were so over populated that they were encroaching on populated areas. For most people, that was a problem. For Kirei, on the other hand...it was a good thing. Overpopulation in the herds of game meant that some of the animals would be starving; weak. In other words...easy prey even for an inexperienced hunter like herself. It meant that there was a chance that she might be able to catch something other than rabbits for once.

Kirei gave herself over to her instincts completely as soon as she reached the woods, but she paid close attention to every scent, and sound that she picked up. Her instincts recognized them even if she didn't, and it was the only way for her to learn what scent was what. After about half a break, Kirei found a set of tracks that looked as though it had been made by something that had hooves. She tried to think of what might have made the tracks for several trills before her instincts told her that it was a deer. There were a few tufts of hair caught on the branches of a bush not far from the tracks. Perhaps the deer had paused to graze here before moving on?

Kirei felt a rush of excitement wash through her. Bringing back a deer would be much better than bringing back some more rabbits. Would she be able to catch one, though? Deer were a lot bigger than rabbits, and the males had large dangerous looking antlers. Kirei had no desire to be gored by the prey she was trying to catch. She likely would have decided against making the attempt had it not been for the fact that the overpopulation of the game herds would mean that there were several deer who were weak from hunger, and much less likely to be any threat to her.

Decision made, Kirei turned control back over to her instincts, and paid close attention to everything she did while under their control. Her instincts wanted to follow the trail and hunt the deer, so she did. The trail was clear, and easy to follow, making Kirei think that it had been used many times. Her experience following rabbit tracks in the past helped her to follow this trail now, but she was well aware that if she didn't have her instincts to guide her, she would be utterly lost.

As she followed the trail, Kirei paid close attention to her surroundings. Every rustle in the brush, or flicker of movement was of potential interest. But she noticed that her instincts seemed to take note of some of these things, and ignore others. A slight rustle of leaves with no nearby scent of an animal likely meant that it was only the wind, and therefore no interest to her. Kirei paid close attention to her instincts, and tried to figure out which things she needed to pay attention to. It was difficult since her instincts were fully engaged on following the trail, and after a while, Kirei gave up. She simply started to ignore anything that didn't trigger a response from her instincts.

The scent grew stronger the longer she followed the trail. After a while, she came to a clearing, and that was where she found the deer she'd been stalking. Kirei's instincts demanded that she drop to the ground, and she quickly did so. The deer was a doe, and she was grazing on some leaves on a bush in the center of the clearing.

Kirei crept closer to the doe, using the brush as cover as much as she could. Her instincts cautioned her to go slowly, and she had learned from experience to obey that urge. Rushing now would only startle her prey into fleeing before she could get close enough to strike.

Unfortunately, she stepped on a twig as she reached the end of the brush. The doe's ears twitched, and she turned towards the sound. But instead of fleeing as Kirei had expected, the doe's eyes turned red. Small fangs descended from her upper jaw, and she made a strange snarling sound that filled Kirei with fear.

What...what is that?! she wondered frantically as her ears flattened against her head.

She snarled in warning, wanting no part of whatever strange creature she'd found. Instead of heeding the warning and fleeing, the doe charged her. That was it for Kirei. Both she and her instincts were in perfect agreement as she turned tail and ran for it. The brush offered her cover, but it also slowed her movements. Fortunately, the...whatever it was seemed content that it had chased her off. It didn't pursue her past the edge of the clearing.

When she had put enough distance between her and the creature to feel safe, Kirei stopped to catch her breath. Her mind raced as she tried to figure out what had just happened. It took several bits, but she remembered some stories she'd heard one of the hunters who worked for Cally's telling after they had brought in an Oh Deer. They matched what she had just seen, so Kirei realized that the doe much have been an Oh Deer instead of a normal one. Kirei had never seen one alive before, but she had had the opportunity to watch one of the other chefs prepare a dish using the meat once. Oh Deer meat was considered a delicacy, and was far too precious to allow a chef of her skills work with it, but it had been an honor to watch the other chef prepare and cook the meat.

Once she was feeling calmer, Kirei wondered if she should go back and try to bring the Oh Deer down. If she succeeded, it would be a huge benefit to Cally's. Even the thought of facing that thing again unnerved her. Deer shouldn't have fangs like that, and they were supposed to try and flee when attacked. They weren't supposed to attack you before you could attack them. And yet...nothing good ever came of avoiding your fears. How many times had she been punished when hesitating to obey an order when faced with something that frightened her when she was being trained as a slave in Athart? She knew that she should confront her fear now as she had been forced to when she was a child. But could she?

Yes, she could. The Oh Deer had fangs, but they were small ones. Kirei didn't think they could do too much damage even if the doe bit her. And if the doe charged her again, it would be running right into her teeth and claws. It wasn't as if she was facing a dangerous predator like a wolf or another caracal.

Decision made, Kirei carefully made her way back to the clearing. She was in luck, and the Oh Deer doe was still there. Kirei gave herself over to her instincts once more, and the hunt began. This time, she managed to creep into striking distance without making enough sound to alert her prey to her presence. When she was in position, she leaped onto the doe's back...only to find that her teeth and claws couldn't penetrate the Oh Deer's hide. Shocked, Kirei jumped clear, but the enraged doe charged her, and she had all she could to to scramble to stay clear of the doe's hooves. She managed to do so, but the doe managed to sink her fangs into her shoulder while she was trying not to get trampled.

The doe turned to charge again. Kirei's instincts screamed at her to flee, but Kirei didn't think that she could run fast enough to escape. So she held her ground, and reared up at the last trill. Teeth and claws sought the Oh Deer's throat, and unlike before, this time they did penetrate its hide. Instinct took control once more, and she ripped her teeth and claws out of the doe's throat, mangling it. The doe collapsed, blood pooling around its torn throat.

Kirei watched it die, and Kirei knew that it could easily have been her instead. It was only luck that had saved her from being trampled to death when her claws had failed to penetrate the Oh Deer's hide the first time she had attacked. A rustle in the bushes startled her into freezing, every muscle tense as she waited to see what had made the sound. When a stag entered the clearing, Kirei knew that it had to be an Oh Deer too. No other deer would enter a clearing that was filled with the scent of blood.

Kirei had no chance against a stag, and she knew it. She had barely managed to bring down a small doe. A stag that was equipped with sharp looking antlers was far more than she was willing to handle. So she backed away until she reached the edge of the clearing, then bolted. Her injured shoulder hurt with every step, but she wasn't taking any chances.

Fortunately, she didn't hear any signs of pursuit. Knowing that her bleeding shoulder needed tending to, and that she would need help to bring the deer home, she slowly made her way back home in search of the help she needed.

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Re: Luck Favors those who are Willing to Seek It

It's not often that I get to see someone actually write their character being hurt. It's rarer still that I see said person write with the intention of learning a lesson, or highlighting a flaw.

You've done both. That should speak volumes of you as a writer.

I see no issues with grammar and punctuation. The flow on this thread is actually pretty great, it's easy to read and keeps the reader's attention. Good job.

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Knowledges:
Cooking; 3 knowledges,
Discipline; 1 knowledge,
Hunting; 2 knowledges
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+5, consider your peers impressed. They'll have to believe you with a wound like that.
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Injuries:
Her right front shoulder was bitten by the Oh Deer. Given the small fangs it has, the wound is small, but deep. It will likely take the rest of the season to heal completely, but should heal well enough that she won't be left with a permanent limp.

In addition, treatment via Medicine and Caregiving will halve the recovery time. Painkillers will allow for relief of symptoms.

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