From the East [Rhakros] (Graded)

The eastern arm of the Etzori invasion force arrives at Rhakros

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"This's fuckin' mad, Kas!"

"Aye! Looks like!"

"We're gonna fuckin' die!"

"Might be!"

"Then why the fuck're youse smilin'?!"

Kasoria hadn't even noticed, truth be told. There was little time for self-reflection in the chaos that followed the first, chattering squeals the greeted them as the horde fell upon their... Flight, wasn't it? That's how many it had looked like when they set out from camp that morning. Veteran soldiers, serving since long before the siege. Pikemen with their long weapons raised high, swordsmen with their shields strapped to their arms. Archers and crossbowmen, arrows and bolts nocked or chambered. And of course, the crowd of ghostly beings that followed them, mingling within the ranks, ready to advance or retreat as the officers commanding blew out the signal on their whistles.

Two long for Forward, three short for Advance. Depending on what we find.

Turned out, what they found, Kasoria had come across before. His eyes widened as a living carpet of armored flesh and clattering insect legs came charging towards them. At the sight of the invaders, a hideous, crackling cry went up from the monsters. Some of them were eyeless, moving by vibration or sound alone. Some were taller, squatter, leaders or brood guardians perhaps, but none seemed to be the size of the beasts he'd killed in the Underground of Etzos.

"BRAAAAACE!"

He didn't have time to reflect, or question, or wonder. No time at all but draw his gladius, will a Shield to sprout from his forearm. It changed from shimmering, glowing ether into hardened quasi-material that covered him from elbow to fist, maybe a foot wide-

-and then they were upon the Etzori. A howling tide of ravenous, infuriated madness given flesh and far too many legs. Sheer weight of bodies and numbers smashed into the rough line of men and women. Clacking mandibles and slashing, clubbing limbs crushed bone and eviscerated mere humans. Unlike the rest of his fellows, Kasoria was a little more ready. He stood his ground and waited for the first to rear up-

-then thrust his gladius up and forwards, impaling the creature under what one could call a "chin". The enchanted blade skewered primitive but effective brain matter, and the beast dropped dead an instant after he withdrew it. But it was just one out of dozens, scores, even hundreds. Another replaced it just as quickly and Kasoria raised his Shield. The hammering foot slammed into the ether construct, and Kasoria found an instant of satisfaction in realizing the strain didn't even register with him. He was far past such concerns now, for so small a spell.

Aye. And it cost you.

He growled and dispelled the hateful, mocking voice. He had more important things to worry about. Like flitting back as the beast made to strike him again, blow falling short, cracking the cobblestone in front of him-

-and he wasted not a moment of opportunity, darting forwards and swinging at the same time. Severing the leg at a joint and sending the monster crashing awkwardly to the ground. But it had plenty of others, and would right itself if he didn't-

SHUNK

-but he did. Backhanding the gladius across the creature's face and ripping deep into the grotesuque features, somewhere between a gecko and a cockroach. Ichor spewed and eyes popped. It reared back and screamed and Kasoria thrust again. Buried the gladius into its face and twisted it before yanking it back out. Two down in a handful of trills, but still they came on. His Shield came back up, and he started bellowing orders.

"Don't face the cunts 'ead on! Take their legs out from under 'em! Pikemen?! Keep 'em back, the let the swords take over when yeh can't no more! Redson, Hogue?! Fuck did I just tell yeh?!"

Like ripples from a stone, his example and words spread across the line. Here the Etzori could see a man who knew what he was doing, and what he was doing was keeping him alive. What more evidence did they require? The line tightened and shifted, moving closer to him, starting with his own Block. Two-dozen surly bastards, already being whittled away by monsters but following their mage's orders. They were the rock that the monsters broke against. Man after man went down, but more abominations spilled their guts and lost their heads than humans, at the end of it. Kasoria kept bellowing, kept shouting, cursing, knowing he had to be their example, their champion, their-

Don't even fucking think it. Irony only goes so far.

Mayhap that's why he was smiling. That or the simple, long-missed purity of such combat. No more nuance or subtlety. Not boredom or waiting, either. Life or Death, ever-circling, ever dodging and lunging in and out of your path. Kasoria hacked and heaved and the children of an Immortal died around him. A larger one came screaming at him and he flung out his Shield, infusing it with Backlash as it lunged-

-breaking the leg like a twig as it impacted on the energized Shield. It screeched and collapsed on its side, not getting a chance to rise before a trio of pikemen turned its underside into a bloody, spurting nightmare. Kasoria nodded curtly then went back to business, seeing the horde start to break and-

"Youse hear that?"

Instantly, Kasoria was alert. Fazil had surprisingly turned out to be a good soldier, cunning and canny and brave, at least in combat. But his ears were what set him apart. The man put a bat to shame. Kasoria stopped, and at the edge of his hearing... he could make it out. An almighty buzzing, so loud it was starting to drown out everything else. He swallowed and shouted his command as the sky started to darken. As a cloud of living, hissing bodies rose from Rhakros.

"Block Four! Block Four! IRREGULARS?!" That got their attention. Just over a dozen surviving South Etzos street daemons turned quickly to their mage and their Highmark. "Incomin' swarm! Close up t'me!"

They knew what that meant, and what to do. They huddled under him as he raised his arms to the sky, one still holding a gladius. Kasoria breathed deep and pulled as much water as he could from the well, as it were. This, unlike the Shield, would get some reaction. With a grunt he spewed out a dome of light from his hands. It rose like a fountain and then quickly flattened, forming a dome that shielded him and the men around him like a vast umbrella-

-just as the insects hammered into it. Kasoria grunted again as he felt countless impacts, each one tiny but impossible numbers drawing more and more effort from him. Beyond his protection, he saw ghosts go down in droves. Scores of them. Run through by a cloud of copper-carrying little bastards, as if cut apart by massed arrow fire. The ones with the remaining sense to heed him seemed to huddle closer to the living, knowing the frightening mage was protecting them from the same fate. Sweat poured from Kasoria's brow. He risked a glance around, and saw other bubbles in operation. Other mages were sending jets of flame into the sky, destroying great swathes of the swarm.

But there's always more. She throws legions against us, and we slaughter them. But we always take losses. Take losses in men and ghosts and don't get any more bodies. But she always has more.

Not now, you fucking idiot!


Fazil shuddered as the man next to him growled with effort. As terrifying as Kasoria had been before the Siege, as the Raggedy Man of Etzos, he was positively daemonic by this point. His jet black eyes seemed to spark with ether energy. The smoke forever surrounding him shuddered and hissed as it spun faster and faster. The long, thick black marks on his arms writhed like snakes or turgid arteries. Kasoria was... not just Kasoria anymore, as Fazil had always known him. He was something far worse, and the little man still said-

"Kas?! They're goin'!"

They were, and they did, but Kasoria waited until he saw other Barriers go down before doing the same. Once he saw that those men were not butchered immediately after, then he lowered his own. He slumped down to his knees, breathing heavy, chest heaving and the motions seeming to spread to his whole body. Someone thrust a bottle of something wet into his hand and he almost drained the fucking thing. Fates, how long could they keep this up? How many trials had it been? How many hundreds or thousands dead? The Flight was down to just over a hundred men. Sixty-something had died in this one minor battle.

This can't go on for much longer. We need to-

"The course of this last swarm needs to be backtracked if at all possible! It could very likely lead to Lisirra!"

Now that was sure to draw his attention. Struggling back to his feet, Kasoria formed up with the rest of the irregulars and nodded at the survivors. Once again, one face or two was not there to return it. But they were energized now. They could see the carpet of twitching bodies, glinting with copper, leading back to the center of the city. And at the middle, in her lair, her nest of horrors...

The Army roared, and all but charged down the streets where the swarm had emerged from and then died. Kasoria did not. He frowned. Because this was-

"Too easy."

"Eh?"

He looked to his side, and Fazil looked back into a mutated face without fear. Kasoria was hardly surprised. There'd be a whole generation of street scum from the Oh'Pee who'd not frighten easily in the arcs to come. Not after surviving this nightmare. He scratched under his chin and started walking after the rest of them. Not run. Walk.

"Summin' I read a while ago. If it looks too good, if the battle's goin' too well-"

"It's probably a trap?"

Kasoria blinked in shock. "Youse... You read-"

"Read? Nah, bollocks t'that. S'what Tiny Pete a' the Sidestreet Stranglers used t'tell us, when we went on raids an' shite."

Kasoria blinked and resisted the urge to fall over laughing. In this place, in this time, surrounded by fresh corpses and dying men and the carcasses of monsters unimaginable. Instead he shook his head and raised his arm. The Block continued after him... and he started to look for sneakier ways to follow the same trail as the rest. Alleys and side streets were more his domain, as it was for the rest of them. He didn't want to march into the same maw as the rest of the army, and yet... he couldn't really avoid it.

"You men?! Into formation! We shall end this war today!" The Shieldarm was as jittery with anticipation as everyone else. She rode up and down the column with her sword swinging, badgering and inspiring in equal measure. "Mage Kasoria? Up to the front with your scouts! Keep us appraised of what's up ahead! Fine me an entrance, Kasoria! Find me the hole that bitch is hiding in!"

"Aye, Shieldarm!"

He even snapped a salute, good little soldier that he was. But his face remained troubled as he set off. This didn't feel right.
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Maude was smart enough to not take part in the melee fight against the horse-sized insect monsters. She wouldn’t have stood a chance to survive that. Instead, she did as the other archers did. They stayed back and kept shooting at the legs of the grotesque beings. Maude kept shooting without thinking. Her only option was to endure what happened and continue to do her part. She endured the horror of fighting against horse-sized monster insects. She endured watching and hearing the death of monsters and men. She endured the gore and the stench and the merciless heat of the two suns.

Maude saw nothing pure in the battle. The inner fire that had cleansed her of everything unnecessary had been purifying. In contrast, the slaughterhouse around her was a nightmare of dirt, blood and other things that had nothing at all with purity to do.

Then the next attack came, from the air this time, insects carrying copper taking down ghosts in droves. Maude saw some mages of the Etzori army counter this with magic fire and clear the sky, while other mages sheltered the soldiers under domes of magic water. She ran in under a dome just in time. Like the others, she endured waiting helplessly until the chaos only mages were able to deal with was over and the Etzori could come out and count their dead.

There were far too many dead to count.

After the experience of igniting and turning herself into a flame, it felt like the humanity she had wanted to believe in had left her. She had stopped burning, but the feeling of the fire lived in her and it overshadowed the atrocities she was wading through. Maude didn’t know what it meant yet, but she felt like it changed things a great deal.

For example, she found that she was practical enough to take the opportunity to loot the dead. Had she been asked in advance if she would be able to do such a thing she wouldn’t have believed so. Now she knew. She needed a spare set of clothing, so she took it.

“I saw you when you burned.” It was Siobhan, the female highbow Maude had been working with when they had been shooting at the legs of the huge insects. “Aukari? I don’t care as long as we are on the same side.”

“I’m Etzori,” said Maude. She wasn’t going to admit anything.

Siobhan shrugged. “We’re going down to the centre of the city. See? The marks are already making ready to rush there, straight into the centre of Rhakros. The centre... reminds me of the bull’s eye on a training target for archers. It’s the place people aim at. Some hits will be in the periphery, but a skilled archer can put all their arrows in the centre.”

Maude felt clueless. She had used a training target when she had learnt to shoot with the crossbow but what this had to do with Rhakros eluded her. She looked at the highbow and waited.

“Let’s say Rhakros is a target, not for us, but for forces beyond what we can understand. Lissirra is an immortal.” The woman made a pause like she expected an answer but Maude didn’t know what to say.

Siobhan continued. “So far we have moved through the periphery and some attacks have hit us. Our losses have been big, but not so big that we have been forced to retire and regroup. We’re moving forward. Toward the centre.”

“You mean the place where a skilled archer puts all their arrows,” said Maude tentatively. There was something very disturbing with this chat. What did highbow Siobhan mean?

“Yeah, into the centre... but I’m not sure if all of us should rush straight into it like blindfolded pawns. I hope the higher officers will send in an advance guard to scout the place. Who knows what waits for us there, in the bullseye of Rhakros.”

It dawned on Maude that Siobhan was worried that the centre they were heading toward would be the place where Lissirra would focus all her destructive power in a small area where the whole Etzori army could be stuck down in a final massive attack worse than anything they had seen so far.

“Do you think she ... Lissirra ... has all the time let us advance towards the centre so she can ...” Maude wasn’t knowledgeable in military tactics and she didn’t have any other kind of battle experience either. There wasn’t a chance to get military jargon out of Maude. But, as a jester, she had seen a lot of tricks and illusions be performed by colleagues who made a living fooling people into seeing things that weren’t real. “Are you saying that the progress we have made at such a high cost is nothing else than an illusion? Are the progress and the victories we won only a trick to make us rush into the centre of Rhakros so it’s easier to kill us all?”

“I don’t know. But it’s a well-known military truth that a series of victories can make people over-estimate themselves and think that they are invincible. People tend to think that things will continue to be as they have been before, but then the trend breaks ... and that’s when they fail.”

It went silent. Maude was putting the spare clothing she had looted into her backpack. The dead body had belonged to a field medic. There were many neat rolls of bandage and a metal bottle with alcohol for cleaning of wounds. Maude took those too, as it seemed good to have them in case of injuries. Siobhan watched her without comments.

“What can we do?” Maude felt bad for asking. It was probable that all they could do was continue forward and follow their orders.

“I told my superiors what I’m thinking. That’s what I could do. I can’t know if they will mention it to their superiors or if that will lead to anything from higher up. I know that I want you at my side though if we need to burn something up.”

And if we need to cope alone, after a major disaster. If we lose. Siobhan hadn’t said it, but the words were there in the air between them, soundless like an insect sitting on a wall, getting ready to fly and buzz.

Maude nodded. She found it better to stick with highbow Siobhan than to be alone. She had made it this far. Now, someone had a reason to try and keep Maude alive. If Maude would reciprocate remained to be seen. Her goals had been simple, but the war had made them complex. It felt like they all were blindfolded pawns. The ramifications of her actions were impossible for her to foresee.

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Come and get your Loot!

(There's plenty more where that came from)


KASORIA:
XP Rewards: 20

These points CAN be used for magic (Abrogation).

Skill-Knowledges:

  • Abrogation: Dire need brings swift, instinctive casting
  • Abrogation: A shield of magic force is lighter than metal or wood
  • Climbing: Giant spiders' webs make things easy
  • Deception: False salt to give the appearance of a ghost barrier
  • Detection: The calm departure of most civilians puts suspicion on the rest
  • Detection: The clumsiness of the newly ghost-possessed
  • Discipline: Obey orders, don't rush off and fall for the lure
  • Endurance: Fight after fight, trial after trial
  • Endurance: The heat of Saun under normal circumstances
  • Endurance: The JUNGLE heat of Saun
  • Etiquette (Military): The newly established rank of "Broomsman"
  • Deception: False salt to give the appearance of a ghost barrier
  • Intelligence: Both sides have to balance tactics vs ghosts and living
  • Intelligence: Sintra's spiders are truly allies
  • Intimidation: Promise of punishment to come if mistakes are repeated
  • Intimidation: The metallic scraping of flexing metal gauntlets
  • Intimidation: When killing rage replaces fear
  • Leadership: Making "bait" of yourself while rescuing the Commander
  • Leadership: Military terminology to get response without rank
  • Leadership: Shows itself best in life and death situations
  • Logistics: Geared up for a jungle campaign
  • Logistics: Street thugs make undisciplined soldiers
  • Politics: This is war against an Immortal, not between Immortals
  • Psychology: Don't feel sorry for the collateral casualties
  • Tactics: Getting the Commander to reveal himself
  • Tactics: The lure of revenge to lead to an ambush
  • Tactics: Salt to "herd" enemy ghosts where you want
  • Unarmed Combat: Spiking your gear with copper to fight ghosts
  • Unarmed Combat: Making a gauntlet into an impromptu Cestus

Non-Skill Knowledges:

  • Immortal Domains: Might look like anything
  • NPC: Hinda Velora: Capable commander earning rank
  • PC: Maude: red-headed girl may be an aukari, but not your commander

Loot:

Sorry, not a real loot-heavy thread


Loss/Injuries:

the lives of many friends and acquaintances.


Renown: 20

Not at first, but your general desire to stay incognito is sort of impossible now.



MAUDE:

XP Rewards: X

These points can NOT be used for magic.

Skill-Knowledges:

  • Climbing: Giant spiders' webs make things easy
  • Deception: Act dead in a battle when the enemy sees you
  • Deception: False salt to give the appearance of a ghost barrier
  • Detection: In the press of battle, a sword might pierce 2 bodies at once
  • Detection: The calm departure of most civilians puts suspicion on the rest
  • Detection: The clumsiness of the newly ghost-possessed
  • Discipline: Knowing when rank matters, and when it doesn't
  • Discipline: Loyalty to Zanik to offset the urge to erupt
  • Discipline: Obey orders, don't rush off and fall for the lure
  • Discipline: Standing fast in the face of a crazed enemy's approach
  • Endurance: Fight after fight, trial after trial
  • Endurance: The JUNGLE heat of Saun (even for an aukari)
  • Endurance: Suppressing aukari Eruption in the fervor of battle
  • Etiquette (Military): "Boss" is a good substitute for rank if you don't know it
  • Etiquette (Military): The newly established rank of "Broomsman"
  • Intelligence: Sintra's spiders are truly allies
  • Leadership: Even when suggestions are ignored, make them anyway
  • Leadership: Unquestioning obedience is an example to other followers
  • Logistics: Copper and Salt hurt ghosts
  • Logistics: Geared up for a jungle campaign
  • Logistics: Many inexperienced soldiers die as "meat shields" for others
  • Logistics: The tide of war carries you along, ready or not
  • Politics: This is war against an Immortal, not between Immortals
  • Psychology: Accepting that you may not make much difference in battle
  • Psychology: Growing numb to the horror of battle
  • Ranged (X-bow): Any hit is a good hit
  • Ranged (X-bow): Covering fire for "The boss", rescuing the Commander
  • Ranged (X-bow): Sniping from height takes adjustment from ground level
  • Ranged (X-bow): Trying to shoot arrows instead of bolts is hit-and-miss
  • Ranged (X-bow): You don't need precision shooting into an enemy crowd
  • Tactics: Getting the Commander to reveal himself
  • Tactics: Self-ignition while running through swarms of insects
  • Tactics: The lure of revenge to lead to an ambush

Non-Skill Knowledges:

  • Immortal Domains: Might look like anything
  • Magic: Seeing Abrogation used aggressively
  • NPC: Hinda Velora: Capable commander earning rank
  • PC: Kasoria: 'The Raggedy Man', a notorious Etzos' figure

Loot:

Like I said above, not really oriented toward loot drops


Loss/Injuries:

Many potential friendships that will never be. :(


Renown: 20

You do not have the Raggedy Man's initial notoriety.
But like him, this event goes beyond old reputations.


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Awesome all the way around. I can pretty much assume Kas will be great, and he did not disappoint.
But Maude, while I think you were a bit hesitant at first, you found your footing and added a wonderful, and different, perspective.
Not just a copy with different wording. Well Done!
Kas has so many knowledges already, it's tough sometimes not to be redundant with such awards.
Not so with Maude :D which is why she got a few more :lol:
Now if I DID miss something, like maybe some loot item you snatched up that I forgot to mark down, or an obvious knowledge I glossed over, do not hesitate to let me know.
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