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First Trial of Ymiden, Arc 719
Following Dreamscape Repair - Thread 1: Intaglio


It started just as it had the night before. Except for the screaming. Eliza found herself standing there, looking over a vast, still and colorless desert, shivering in response to unnatural cold, with Eberhardt perched on her shoulder. "Did you think of bringing a coat this time?" the tiny primate asked as it wrapped Eliza's long dark hair around itself like a cloak. "I could probably dream one up for us," the daughter of Ymiden muttered with a shake of her head. "I don't think it would make any difference." It struck her that it wasn't that kind of freezing, and it would take more than a warm cloak or a nice pair of mittens to cast off the cold.

Spread out before them was a barren landscape in grey scale. Though off in the distance, far off in the distance, there was a splash of color just out of reach. Painted caravans, colorful costumes, a campfire and good cooking that seemed as if the scent of it was carried on a breeze that didn't exist. Home grown, folksy music played in gitterns, fiddles and tambourines. And the jingling of small bells as if wrapped round somebody's ankles while they danced. It called to her, all of it, as if there was something, or someone there, that was reaching out to her. But yet, the night before when she'd dreamed, she'd walked, walked some more, and never gotten any closer.

"Hey, didn't we pass that tree already?" Eberhardt asked as she spotted a collection of gnarled twigs poking out of the parched ground. Its appearance made Eliza think of a skeletal hand reaching out from the grave. "It looks like all the others but maybe you're right. Except that I don't think we've passed it at all. I think it's more that we're walking and not getting anywhere. We're just, walking in place." Time to stop then and rethink things.

"Do you think the others have places like this to fix?" Eberhardt asked, and Eliza shrugged. "Probably not exactly like this. Maybe it's places unique to them and their own dreams." Which caused her realize that she'd been going at it all wrong. Walking was never going to get her there. Neither was wishing or dreaming herself there. She'd already tried that twice, and each time, she'd experienced a sensation of being bounced back to where she was now. As if there was something quite elastic, but also impenetrable between her and where she'd like to be.

Emea, and this place, was broken. What was broken could always be fixed. But what was fixed, in a sense, would always be flawed in some way. And if this was a dreamscape chosen for her, these dark and dreary surroundings weren't anything she'd ever dream of or surround herself with. She liked color too much. Maybe, she thought, it didn't need to be fixed, returned to it's former state, exactly how it once had been; so much as it needed to be healed, transformed through the healing, and born anew. Rebirth. Much like Auya had been transformed and reborn. As Ymiden's daughter, Eliza knew just a little something about that. Come to think of it, to breathe some life into this place, a little hope wouldn't hurt either. But first she needed some paint and a brush.
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"Why are you painting like that?" Eberhardt asked,a handful of bits later as Eliza sat on her knees and feet to work with a paintbrush in one hand, a pallet board in her other, and a pallet knife within easy reach. "You don't usually." Eliza sat back, looking down at the very small amount of progress she'd made so far; compared to a whole desert full of work left around them; and shrugged. "Impasto," she said.

It was a technique that she used now and then, but not very often. And when she did, she usually combined it with another technique that lacked the abundance of detail that was her usual preference. Her norm was that one might pick out the most diminutive of daisies from a sprawling meadow overflowing with more of the same. This time she'd chosen differently. In a sense, she'd allowed the spirit, whatever that spirit was, to guide her.

Impasto however was one where the paint was put on in thick layers with a very course brush. So thick in fact that the brushstrokes from the course brush, and the pallet knife marks as well, were clearly visible. She liked the technique, rare as she used it. But in this case she'd chosen it for different reasons. Her usual fixation on details, even in Emea, would have slowed her down immensely. Broad sweeping strokes were much better.

"It adds depth. Makes the shadows more...shadowy. The colors richer," she explained as she got back to work. A desert didn't need to be lacking in vibrancy and color, after all. And it didn't, in fact usually wasn't, completely void of life. Not her Emean desert anyway. Still, she thought as she stopped painting and stood, arching her back to work out the kinks. Even with these broad sweeping strokes, she'd be at it all night, and the one after that. "We need a little extra help, I think."

She couldn't exactly crawl on hands and knees, painting as she went, all the way to that caravan. Even at that, the daughter of Ymiden didn't think she could. There was more to it than that. But that was for later. At the moment, the barren landscape that surrounded her was in contrast to the colorful caravan and it's lively population. And it appeared to act as some sort of impassable barrier between her, and them.

First things first, however. Her canvas was far reaching, and Eberhardt was no help. The monkey had already climbed down off her shoulder, trudged through the wet paint and was covered in it. So if she couldn't get to it in a reasonable amount of time, she'd bring the canvas to her. It just took a little imagination to bend the terrain, pulling it closer, wrapping it around her until in essence, she was standing inside of it with her brushes in hand. It was much like standing inside a giant bubble or globe, and painting it, also from the inside. "That's better," she said, and got back to work.

Of course by the time she was done, both she and her tiny companion were covered with drips and smears of paint. But she smiled, admiring her work. And then? Reaching out, she gave her work a tiny poke with her nail, if as much a symbolic one was it was literal. And suddenly it popped, just as that soapy bubble might do. It exploded into a million, millions of drops and splatters of paint as the landscape unfurled again.

The results as the whole thing settled wasn't exactly as Eliza had intended it to look. She hadn't waited for the paint to dry. But if she was honest, she thought that she liked it better than what she'd planned. At least the far off hills were in the right place, compared to the brilliant blue skies and the wispy white clouds. She liked to think that her father had something to do with that. A Divine hand that was her Father's, with paintbrush gripped between his fingers. It did sort of look like a sunset, or sunrise. At any rate, she was pleased. "Pretty," Eberhardt observed, having climbed up to perch on her shoulder again.

"Maybe," Eliza agreed. "But it isn't enough." She knew that, somehow, without attempting to wish or dream herself there again. "It's a little like an undertaker painting a corpse's lips and cheeks for viewing, isn't it. It doesn't make them any more alive." Meaning, the landscape, or at least this bit of the dreamscape, was just as wounded as it had been before. Only prettier. To resolve that, she'd have to breathe some life into it. Doing that would require more than a selection of paintbrushes.
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"Something is missing," Eliza observed with a curious frown, while looking around them at what she'd accomplished. It was something more than the fact, that in spite of transforming a gray scale, three dimensional world into a more vibrant and colorful one, it was still for all intents and purposes, no more alive than it had been before. Then she smiled, reached out her hand, and in it appeared her sketchpad and a box of oil based crayons. She sat down on a small outcropping nearby, and began drawing.

It had occurred to her before, or she'd simply, somehow known, that somewhere along the way she'd been granted another domain to add to the three that she'd already possessed. Ironically, now, she was back to three after she'd sacrificed her gift for hindsight. "Self-serving twit," she muttered under her breath. In response to her strong choice of words, at least for Eliza, the impressionable Eberhardt's eyes grew wide and she clapped tiny hands over her mouth in response. It was clear who the mortalborn was referring to anyway. The one who in one single act had destroyed all that the others had worked for, and had rendered their sacrifices largely pointless.

Creativity was her new domain, heartwork the ability that went with it. But here in Emea, she didn't necessarily need to call on that ability. The nature of dreams, as they ordinarily were, was all that she needed. And what she needed, or rather wanted, was to populate this landscape with life. The drawing technique that Eliza used in this instance, could be considered a surreal one. It suited the surroundings, and Emea at large, the mortalborn thought. And why fill a dream with the expected and ordinary? So, instead, she sketched a vibrant blue bird with marigold tips on it's wings. Then gently blowing a puff of air across the surface of her paper, she set the bird free. Up it flew, where it circled the sun once, twice...and then, it froze in place and became part of a work of art that still had no real life in it.

Eliza gazed at the bird, frowned, sighed, but resolved not to give up. Eberhardt meanwhile was growing bored. "You never told me the story about Eberhardt and Valentina," the little monkey reminded the daughter of Ymiden. "You promised you would, but you didn't." Eliza grinned a little but didn't look up. Instead, she worked on a drawing, more a caricature really, of a desert going, bright orange elephant with verdant bands round its trunk and feet. "Are you sure you want to hear? You might not like the ending," she warned. Eberhardt was unconvinced.

"Don't say I didn't warn you," Eliza said, and then told her the story. She'd heard it herself from Poppy, or maybe it was her uncle Littleberry Perch, over a century ago. And they'd heard it themselves from their own grandfathers or uncles. "Eberhardt and Valentina were explorers. Two women, unmarried and unattached, who set off together to search for a mythical world filled with all sorts of fantastical beasts, rivers running with molten gold, diamonds in the places of stars in the sky...And there were dragons there, so they were told," she added as she sat back to admire yet another drawing, this time a large pink creature with the sleek upper body of a prowling cat, but the legs of a ostrich. She blew a puff of air across the page, and set it free. Eventually it froze in place like the others.

"They traveled on foot, all across Idalos just the two of them, in search of that place. From Scalvoris to Rharne, from Desnind to Viden...."

"So did they find it? Were there really rivers full of gold there?" Eberhardt asked, always eager to get to the best part. Eliza grinned again, remembering that her little friend might not like how it ended. "Valentina and Eberhardt had a lot of grand adventures along the way. They hunted beasts in the high mountains in the north, half man half beast, covered in white hair from head to toe," she said, and Eberhardt scoffed. "There's no such thing!" the little creature insisted. "Whose story is this anyway?" Eliza said before she continued. "They rode the rapids through deep canyons, they dined with kings and wore fine gowns while dancing with dukes and princes"

But then one trial, after traveling for no less than two arcs, they were sure they were close to finding that which they'd set out to find, Eliza explained. It might only have been a break's walk away. They were walking together near the edge of a deep ravine. "More of a crevice or canyon really, with a deep slow moving river running through it. Eberhardt, as usual, was walking so close to the edge, that Valentina feared she would fall into the canyon. She called her back, and Eberhardt scoffed at her. Said she was always too careful and too fearful."...."And then what?"[/b] the monkey asked.

"And then," Eliza said, "just as Valentina had thought might happen, a stone twisted out from under Eberhardt's foot. The edge of the cliff crumbled and Eberhardt fell and landed with a loud splash in the river down below. Valentina cried out, rushed to the edge and looked over in search of her friend." Eberhardt's grip on Eliza's shoulder had grown a little too tight for her liking, "and then what!? She was alright, wasn't she?" Eliza paused, setting her catbird free and then she sat back. "The last thing she heard was a surprised yelp from Eberhardt, and the last she saw was a great beast snatching her up and dragging her under. She was never seen again."

She left out the bit about the water turning blood red and rushing away with the tide. It was a step too far, she'd thought, even when she'd first heard the story. If Eberhardt would have let her, Eliza would have added that Valentina was so grieved by the loss of her friend that she'd given up the search for that mythical world, no matter how close it was, and had returned home alone. She'd died decades later. Alone with a houseful of cats, as a lonely and bitter old spinster.

"What kind of story is that?!" Eberhardt protested and wailed. "You named me after the one that died?" Eliza shook her head. "Eberhardt was the bolder, more adventurous one. She died having no regrets, and history remembered her better. Valentina had plenty, and she was mostly forgotten." Eberhardt was only mildly appeased. In fact, maybe a little bit flattered after all. "But what was the point then?" she asked. "The point," Eliza said, "is that it's the adventure along the way, and not the prize at the end that matters. Not all big adventures end with grand rewards, discoveries and wealth. Sometimes," she added, setting her last drawing free...which was a great gold and silver spiny lizard with a toothy grin, which resided in a canyon at the water's edge, "you just trip over a rock, fall into a river and get eaten by a giant crocodile."
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Starting off, you opened this thread brilliantly. I loved how she came the realization that Emea wasn't needing to be "fixed", so much as born anew, and you presented a unique spin. From that post alone, I'm really intrigued by Eliza, and how she thinks. Eberhardt was also very cute, using her hair as a covering. I thought that detail very charming, and you create a wonderful dreamy feeling, i.e the bubble exploding in painted color. Last but not least, her little tale... what a great finishing line.

Despite being longer than most solos, this read brilliantly. 10/10 would write with Eliza if given the chance. ;)

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Painting: Impasto: technique using thick layers of paint and course brushes/other tools
Painting: painting inside a bubble is it's own challenge
Drawing: Surrealism
Drawing: bringing drawings to life in Emea
Drawing: caricatures
Storytelling: Eberhardt and Valentina

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