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Keama
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Lesson On Cause And Effect
City/Area: On the roads between Hiladrith and Etzos.
Notes/Warnings: Language
Requested Rewards:
Stealth: Don't Step On Branches
Stealth: Don't Walk Through Piles of Leaves
Field Craft: Dry Wood and Leaves Help A Fire Burn
Meditation: Listen To The Wind
Linguistics: Word Repetition Helps Memorization
Hunting: How To Skin A Rabbit

Non-Skill Knowledge
Emerson Wull: Upset About His Horse
Emerson Wull: Likes To Shout
Language: Common: How To Say I Love You
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 104
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Sinking Ship
City/Area: Scalv waters
Notes/Warnings: Cursing and storms
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill
Seafaring: Heave-to
Seafaring: Storm trysails
Seafaring: Knowing when your ship is sunk
Seafaring: Deciding the best course of action in sudden storms
Seafaring: Tying sailors together for safety
Caregiving: Giving up things you value for your kids

Non-skill
Ashan: Finally called you mom
Ashan: Looks to you for reassurance

Loot: -1 Sloop
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: 5 for trying to sail in a storm?
Wealth Points: NA
Collaboration: NA
Magic Experience?: NA
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 96
ન'ઊળઇ૯ ૧એ૪ઇ૮ ઔનઌઈઇ પઇ, પબ ઇબઇ૮ ૯રશ૧ મકઇ ૧એબ. --Korva
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Something New
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam, Ashvane Estate
Notes/Warnings: none.

Requested Rewards:
Becoming: Totems: Providing nutrition
Becoming: Balancing in a new form. (Acrobatics)
Becoming: Transforming can cause intense cravings.
Becoming: Listening to the whims of your spark
Becoming: Doesn’t cost any ether to maintain a form
Caregiving: Getting the boys dressed and ready for a walk.
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Asher: Took him a little bit to recognize me in a totem form.
Bjorn: Once Winston, once Bellator, now he is Bjorn.
Bjorn: Is having a difficult time, probably for many reasons.
Bjorn: Deserves my attention too.
Damien: Is avoiding me.
Becomer Spark: Wants me to be mother to Bjorn also.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5-10 (for taking the sons out for a walk in the Gleam while in a new totem form with two Revenants as guard).
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - Becoming (first time adjusting to a totem form, learning that balance isn't assumed, and more about the nature of his new spark).
Last edited by Llyr Llywelyn on Fri May 10, 2019 5:47 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 178
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Meeting of Minds
City/Area: Quacia, The Gleam, Ashvane Estate
Notes/Warnings: a lot of lecture dialogue from ol' mage mentors.

Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Alistair Knowledge
Research: Discussing theory
Research: Bringing together knowledgeable minds to cross-examine theory
Research: Citing well-received texts
Research: Listening to an informative lecture
Rhetoric: Speaking on more personal terms
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Lucretia Clement: Wise scholar
Lucretia Clement: Former Seeker
Lucretia Clement: Prolific author
Lucretia Clement: Rynmeren, Like Me
Zarik: Transformed into his sister
Zarik: Becoming apt at handling my miscellaneous needs
Zarik
Zarik Knowledge
Caregiving: Offering to prepare Alistair a meal, if hungry.
Caregiving: Prioritizing your child over your curiosity of an interesting subject.
Caregiving: Taking care of drinks and food so Alistair can speak with a guest.
Etiquette: Making a guest feel welcome.
Etiquette: Properly addressing a Rynmere Noble.
Etiquette: Treating a guest properly.
Logistics: Guiding people to visit in a proper room rather than in the foyer.
Logistics: Having Alistair spend time with Asher while you go elsewhere to transform.
Becoming: Transformations are best kept unseen in private spaces.
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Lucretia: from the Duchy of Gawyne in Rynmere.
Lucretia: Lucretia Rosalind Clement, eldest daughter of scholars Gregor Lencre Clement and Claude Logan Clement.
Lucretia: incapable of exhaustion during the act of discourse
Lucretia: Wrote 15+ volumes of Inquisitione Scintilla Meam
Lucretia: Used to be a Seeker in Rynmere.
Damien: Used to be a Black One for the Coven.
Alistair: Met Lucretia when he was younger.
Alistair: Prefers chai for tea.
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 (for Lucretia, known author and ex-seeker, meeting Damien Noch, ex-Black One, in Ashvane Estate with Zarik and Alistair to witness)
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 290
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Zip
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: The Trouble with Longpig
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Probably Cannibalism.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nein
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: Nope
Wealth Points: Um
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: yas
Magic Experience?: no
Reviewed by Strange
Last edited by Zip on Fri May 10, 2019 5:51 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 65
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Blud
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: I wasn't even awake for 75% of this
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nein
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: Nope
Wealth Points: Um
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: yas queen
Magic Experience?: no
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 70
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Reflection of a Soul
City/Area: Lake Lovalus, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: PSF approval to acquire the lake as an anchor here. Qit is a ghost in this, so just receives Ghost Exp.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing the lack of recognition in eyes
Detection: The feel of the Lake Lovalus Induk's touch
Discipline: Talking to your dead father
Meditation: Memories help the present
Meditation: Letting your emotions flow freely
Meditation: Feeling the bonds of your totemic spirits
Loot: New Anchor - Lake Lovalus
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 107
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Mads
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Dream Thread 2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none requested

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: no
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 33
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Mads
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Dream Thread 3
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none requested

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: no
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 33
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Dream Thread 4
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none requested

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: no
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 32
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