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[Inn For Dinner] I Do Not Feel Fear

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Ohh, dangerous and hurt Pash. I really enjoyed reading this thread and I wish I knew how it ended! Shame for an abandoned thread, but lovely description. I particularly like your use of small details - and the seafaring analogies you use are fabulously illustrative and provocative of imagery. Lovely writing!

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XP: 15 (may be used for Empathy)

Fame: +8 (good guy, good deeds etc)

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Deception: A toast when you don't care
Detection: Suspicious behavior
Detection: The not so tame intentions of strangers
Empathy: That feeling of someone else in your tangle
Empathy: The Biqaj tangle
Empathy: Warm colors of amusement and pride
Rhetoric: Speaking up for a stranger
Rhetoric: Broody conversation
Resistance: Lukewarm ale is a slow way to drown
Resistance: The burn of whiskey
Keegan - upon your (hopeful!) return, please just put your half of this up for review and we'll get to it asap.
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Re: [Inn For Dinner] I Do Not Feel Fear

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Really wish we could see an end to this thread - I've now become quite invested in Keegan. She's an interesting character, to say the least, and I can relate to her a little. She doesn't wanna be where she is, but she most so she is. You gave a nice bit to read (maybe finish it off as a solo or some such?) and I do hope to get a chance to read more Keegan threads.

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Empathy: Fear Knot
Empathy: The Plait of Heartache

Acting: Playing the Part
Deception: Fake Drink
Deception: Poisoned Sleight of Hand
Detection: Identifying the Right Target
Discipline: Finding Composure After Mistakes
Persuasion: Let me buy you a drink
Poisons: The Puck Lily

Renown: None for this, dear
Loot: None!
Points: 15/15
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