[Mature] The Aviary (Graded)

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[Mature] The Aviary (Graded)

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Preface: In New Tasks Pharan was instructed to meet with the son of a foreign merchant to show him around the city—and dig up any information that might help renegotiate a deal that was struck between the merchant's family and the Avriel during the previous cycle.
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“…but your father is well?” Pharan touched at the sleeve of his too-thin tunic to tug it down until it almost reached his fingertips. A sea gull, balancing on the ice-crusted bulkhead, mocked him with its tittering caw.

“The colder seasons are a burden on his health… but he is as well as anyone can hope.” Victoire Eddard Marchland, only son of Wendell Marchland, sported his father’s lean, elm-tree build and eyes so gray they almost appeared colorless. For the past half break, he had hovered at the edge of the landing pier, shouting and cursing at the sailors who lightened the ship moored at its far end. When he finally did shift his attention to Pharan, a smile rode his lips. It was an easy expression that seemed as if it belonged on his broad, clean-cut face.

Maybe he didn’t know that his guide understood enough Common that he spend the time waiting, trying to make sense of his colorful cussing.

Maybe he didn’t care.

“My father conveys his sincere apologies for not being able to make the journey in person,” he said, as he pushed away from the waterside. “He hopes the outcome of our last meeting won’t sour what has been a long, beneficial relationship for all sides so far.”

“I won’t try and say that we hadn’t hoped for more,” Pharan said as he fell in step beside the other man. “But surely we can make an arrangement everyone finds agreeable.”

By his side, Victoire absently waved at two men struggling with his luggage to go ahead. “You changed the leader of your side of the negotiations?”, he asked.

“Ambassador Ryvern is going to handle our side of the negotiations now,” Pharan confirmed as he led the way across wooden planks and towards the quay. “We didn’t anticipate you would arrive so early—there was no time to recall his predecessor from Nashaki.”

“The war?”

“Not to my knowledge,” Pharan said. “A trade deal or other.”

Victoire whistled. “Can’t be easy with all the saber rattling between them and the empire. But I imagine you got the contacts in the city.”

Pharan inclined his head. “The harbor’s still open,” was all he said.

“I guess it is true what they say… war does breed opportunities.”

“Nashaki is our ally,” Pharan replied with just as much affront as the statement required. His eyes found the small, heavy-bellied ship at the end of the docks, swaying in the sea’s perpetual pull. “War isn’t in our interest.”

“It’s beautiful, no?”

It took Pharan a moment to realize Victoire was talking about the ship. Again, he looked at it; at the ships beside it, straining against their anchor chains. He saw the variations in their builds, the different trappings of their hulls and rigging, but he realized he couldn’t put a name to either of them. He tried to see them as the products of apt craftmanship they probably were, but his mind turned them into little wooden coffins trust out onto the sea to sink or float.

“… she does seem like a formidable ship,” he said, hoping he conveyed enough genuine enthusiasm to be left off the hook—but Victoire wasn’t even listening. He had his face turned to the ship, expression unreadable.

“A recent addition to your father’s fleet?”, Pharan asked once the Victoire had finished his quiet observation.

“More a little, private indulgence of mine. One of three. The others are being finished in the dry docks back at home as we speak,” Victoire admitted as he loped up a set of stairs to duck into an alley and away from the cutting winds. Pharan followed, slower, struggling with the wind and his wings caught under the woolen cloak.

The tall buildings of the city proper rose around them. Here and there, cast-iron lanterns dotted the streets. Their light, sheen dimed by soot-covered glass, flooded near empty streets. The pallid blue twilight of the midday hours had become the gloomy, gray-purple haze of late afternoon.

“Your business in Rharne must have gone well,” Pharan said, as he caught up with the other man at the corner.

The momentarily look Victoire cast him, immediately told him he had been a mistake. He could see the other man’s eyes knit briefly at the admission he had been kept tabs on before he strode forward as if their eyes had never. “Well enough—I couldn’t complain,” he said easily enough.

Fool, Pharan cursed himself. He felt his smile fray around the edges, just a little. “Your business in Athart—”

“Can hopefully wait another day,” Victoire interrupted. “It has been almost a year since my last visit—I am curious about the city. What changed.”

Pharan nodded. “Of course,” he said, even as he willed the other man’s tangle into existence before his eyes. The threads, pulsing with subdued color, were strung taut. They looked orderly. Controlled, almost. “It’s not your first time visiting Athart,” he said, his voice casual.

It didn’t sound like a question, but this time Victoire only laughed.

“No. Not at all. I have been seen the city… well, a dozen times maybe, in the last three arcs,” he said as he pulled his coat tighter around himself.

“You speak Lorien well,” Pharan observed.

“I had a good teacher.”

A thread, flashing drab purple, unwound from the ball of emotions coiling around Victoire. Pharan nudged at it without thinking. “If the negotiations go well, I would think there is no reason why we shouldn’t welcome you in Athart more often. If only, to spare your father the long sea travels.”

Victoire cast him a glance Pharan couldn’t quite fathom. In the half-dark of the alley, he appeared, almost, amused.

Pharan turned his attention back to the streets. Cyclus was a poor season to walk around the city. Any season was a terrible season to walk (all things considered), but lacking flight as a possible alternative, he had to make due. There was a tavern frequented by Avriel and human both he knew Ryvern enjoyed for his diplomatic endeavors. Their wines were expensive but rich and the food just on the right side of exotic to entertain visitors. And the people running the place were used to the manners and occasional outbursts of strangers. He corrected his course but stopped when he noticed Victoire didn’t follow him.

“They probably gave you a few places they want me to see—but there was one place I hoped to pay a visit to.”
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“She would come down if you asked,” Victoire said with a grin. The man was lazing on a low chaise lounge before an even lower table, a cup of wine in one hand. A plate, overwrought with fruit and cheese and tiny meaty morsels, filled the space between them. The later had been a recent addition, a hasty try to cater to tastes not usually served in the silk draped halls.

Pharan pursed his lips. On the table, a girl danced to the distant sound of a lyre and her wings, green, blue and golden like a bird of paradise’s, shifted behind her. She was no Avriel—he could see it. Her wings were too stiff, the feathers did not follow her movement the way they should have. To anyone but his kind, the costume would look real enough.

He took another sip of wine.

From the outside, the Aviary had looked like most buildings crowding the human sector: small, humble and as unable to resist gravity as the creatures inhabiting it. A mere two stories high and fashioned from gray, wet stone, it had cowered between two of its more stocky neighbors, leaning on one as if drunk. There had been no door plate. No sign the building was used at all safe for a shimmer of sickly yellow filtering through a crack in the door. No name but the one Victoire had given him. He would have walked past it, had it not been for his wave.

Now he knew why the place did not advertise its presence. He couldn’t think of an Avriel who wouldn’t have taken offense in the ridiculous mummery. Pharan only felt a curious void where he had taken the strings of annoyance and affront and dragged them deep into his tangle. He would pay for his moments of clarity the way he always did: later.

In the time since their arrival, the formal atmosphere had lapsed, making room for the near-amicable banter of two men indulging too heavily on wine. Two or three times Victoire had vanished upstairs, leaving Pharan with food he didn’t touch and wine that was as opulent as it was red. Divorced from the strongest of his feelings, the wait, the ruffle of his pride, stung more than it should have. He ignored the stares of his fellow patrons. He couldn't have cared less whose guilty pleasures he disturbed.

Pharan rubbed his temple. In the last break, he had turned down the advanced of a girl with eyes the color of the sea at noon and a cocoa-skinned young man who would have cost him half the wage of a short season. The triumph over his baser instincts tasted bittersweet.

“Why don’t you ask her?” Victoire’s voice drifted over from the side.

“The ambassador likes his guests well entertained… but I doubt he would approve if I asked him to pay my whores,” Pharan said with a wry smile. Victoire laughed.

A young woman, barefoot and clothed in too little silk, leaned over to refill his half-empty cup. Her wings, rich brown like wild honey and entirely artificial brushed his shoulder as she made her way over to his companion.

“How you enjoy working for the ambassador?”

“He can be demanding and hard to gauge—but I rather work for him than some others,” Pharan said carefully, looking into his wine without lifting the cup. “He is a good man.”

The girl had sat down by Victoire’s side, looking oddly demure. The man grinned at her act. “Living to please old men never pays in my experience. Good or not", he said.

Pharan smiled. “At least the ambassador is not my father.”

Victoire eyed him for two, three trills then a smile started to tug at the corner of his mouth as well. “Wouldn’t know that begging for scraps is any easier if you chose the man you are bowing to.”

“Maybe you should try, then”, Pharan said as he raised his cup without drinking. The wine was warm against his lips. “You are the one who's here to do his old man a favor.”

Victoire grunted. He reached out a hand to the slave girl sitting by his side. She smacked it away with a playful expression. He didn’t seem to mind. “I am not only here to do my father a favor,” he said, his eyes on the young woman.

Irritation bloomed in Pharan’s stomach. He tugged it away, unsure what it might grow into. “The negotiations—”

“—are my father’s. When they come to a favorable end, he will take the credit. And if they don’t… well, he will find someone to take the blame.” Victoire sat up.

On the other end of the table, Pharan leaned back. A while ago someone had dragged a small taboret into the room for him after his wings kept knocking against the back of his chair. The piece appeared as if it had been harried from the kitchens, all unadorned wood and hard surfaces smoothed from use. Pharan didn’t mind. While the lack of proper cushioning was a minor annoyance, his discomfort also kept him on the tip of his toes.

“Good you have your own ships then,” he said, turning his earthenware mug between his fingers. It was a shot into the blue.

At first, Victoire gave no answer. “With the war afoot in the Hotlands I might turn a good profit in the port of Nashaki, it’s true,” he said finally, reaching for the pitcher with wine a slave had sat down as the talked.

“Food?”, Pharan asked.

“Or weapons.”

Pharan leaned forward. “You have contacts in the city?”

“Not yet—but war breeds opportunities. I will find something,” Victoire said. Before Pharan could say anything more, the other man leaned over to refill the Avriel's already well-filled cup. Wine drenched the thick, supple carpet.

“Enough of that. If you aren’t going to indulge in the slaves with me, at least join me on the wine. I hate drinking alone. It always makes me feel as if people pry on me.”
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R
yvern’s office had not changed in the two days since he left it. Candles and braziers still fought a losing battle against Cyclus’ perpetual twilight and if the stack of documents requiring the ambassador’s attention had dwindled in height, he couldn’t tell. Finding Ryvern still seated behind his desk gave Pharan a weird déjà vu of their last conversation. As if he had left the room only for a moment.

He halted an arm’s length before the other man’s desk.

Ryvern didn't look up. “You showed Marchland around?”, he asked.

“I did.” As much as the weather allowed and Victoire had been willing to part from wine and women. “I believe, he finds the city to his liking.”

“You are hurt.”

It took Pharan a trill to process the older Avriel’s words. He looked down at his hand, at the fresh cut that had joined the criss-cross pattern of old scars, the tell-tale marks of his magic that were so thin you almost had to know they were there to see them. “It’s nothing,” he said, closing his hand. Maybe he should have forced himself to eat at the Aviary after all. Maybe he would not have been preparing food at home when his pattern unwound to spit out all the minor grievances he had tied away until he could barely breathe. Maybe he would not have been holding a knife. Who knew.

“A small accident, that’s all.” He folded his arms behind his back.

Briefly, he believed to feel Ryvern’s eyes on him, dark, gauging. The moment passed, and the quiet scratching of a quill began to fill the silence. “What did our new friend have to say, then?”, Ryvern asked.

“Victoire is very much like we expected him to be. A knowledgeable captain. Maybe not as shrewd a merchant as his father, but he is careful with his words, guarded.” At least if you didn’t give his tangle a gentle nudge in the right direction. “He has a good grasp of Lorien. I wouldn’t suggest trying to use it to speak about him behind his back. He likes his wines red and heavy… but un-addled. From his homelands if possible.” Pharan pursed his lips. “He has a rather agreeable taste in food—fish and meats over fruit, anything… hearty. He prefers the company of girls over boys—if you want to pick slaves to please the eye. Blond if you got any.”

Ryvern nodded absently and Pharan continued to rattle down random observations, topics to avoid or bring up, little things he had picked up during their conversations. It was only when the other man made a dismissive gesture, he drew back from the desk. By the door though, he stopped again.

“It won’t work.”

The ambassador looked up from his writing.

“Using Victoire to negotiate better conditions in the absence of his father. He isn’t stupid. Unless he managed to get us to agree to even more favorable conditions his father would not look kindly at changes—or the one responsible for them. Victoire is not going to risk that.”

For a moment, silence spread between them.

“I sense you have another suggestion”, Ryvern said finally.

“Victoire has his own ships now. He hopes to turn a profit in the Hotlands—but with the war… who knows what will happen. We can offer him security Nashaki can’t. Not right now.”

“And we only need captains with free capacities—him or his father doesn’t matter.” Ryvern leaned back from his deck, fingers tapping against the polished wood. “That’s good.”

“Victoire doesn’t have his father’s contacts. We may offer to set him up with one of our partners in Nashaki as part of the deal”, Pharan added, straightening. “Keeping the arrangement from his father would be as much in our interest as in his. Maybe we just had… fewer goods we needed shipping than we thought at first.”

“Alright,” Ryvern said, watching him. “I will bring it up to the others.” A pause. “Anything else?”

Pharan hesitated. He thought of the Aviary, the slaves in their winged costumes. He knew Ryvern would oppose the notion of a place that suggested their people could be bought or sold even just for a few hours, show or not. He also knew the older Avriel would look the other way if cracking down on it endangered a potential business arrangement. He would claim to know nothing—at least until someone found out he had known about it all along.

Somehow, these things always found the light of day.

He bowed. “No… no that was everything. I will let you know if I happen to learn anything else of interest.”
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Knowledges
Linguistics: Common: Cursing like a sailor
Empathy: Knot: Suppresses a chosen emotion (for a time)
Negotiation: Know the other party
Negotiation: Realize when you are asking for the impossible
Negotiation: Focus on the goal, not the steps involved
Deception: Keeping an uncomfortable truth from a superior

Victoire Marchland (Flavor-NPC)
Victoire Marchland: Son of Wendel Marchland
Victoire Marchland: A captain and merchant to be
Victoire Marchland: Commands 3 ships
Victoire Marchland: Has a difficult relationship with his father

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Injuries: N/A
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Comments: Wow, that was a wonderful read. Extremely clean and crisp narrative and dialogue, and a very intricate/immersive scene. I loved the depth of the dialogue and the way in which the lore and world played into the interactions. I was also highly impressed with the aesthetics of it all (of course); it was very pleasant to read due to the appearance of the template/font/colors/etc. Also -- you could've totally split this into two solos but you didn't in order to finish the story. Highly commendable, great thread and enjoy your rewards!


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