Eyes on The Queen

1st of Ashan 719

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1st Ashan 719

Rain fell light and gentle upon the cool stone pathway. All around there were small but artistically constructed buildings of stone and wood that glistened in the lamplight. Overhead, the thick grey clouds released a never-ending drizzle, the quiet sounds of the raindrops filling the peaceful atmosphere with one of nature’s oldest songs.

There had been only one umbrella, and though he’d offered, Fiona had insisted she had no need of it and that they’d be gone before a little bit of wet would even matter. That had been two breaks ago, and she was now thoroughly bedraggled. Mathias, on the other hand, was comfortably dry beneath the crimson, paper-like umbrella that he’d stopped attempting to offer to his stubbornly sodden companion a half break ago.

Little creatures watched them pass. They had round, bulbous heads, like a child’s ball, and rather than any recognizable features for a face, they had three holes of varying sizes: two for their eyes and one for a mouth. He’d decided upon that specific ratio about a break back, as the little creatures had a habit of singing short, haunting refrains from time to time. Two of their face holes would open and close in near unison, while their third remained open and gaping.

There was a very good possibility he was entirely wrong, of course, but he didn’t particularly care at that point.

The creatures had just finished, settling down into watchful silence, as he closed the distance between himself and Fiona, positioning his umbrella so that, should she finally wish it, she need only sidle just a bit close to find reprieve from the ubiquitous precipitation. “It would seem the path ends there.”

This particular dreamscape had a gestural, painterly quality. While the buildings and creatures and towering poles of bamboo were quite detailed, the farther into the distance something was, the more blurry and ultimately absent the object. For some time, it had seemed as though the path was never-ending, new buildings and plants gradually appearing before them and disappearing behind them.

Now, however, there loomed an ornately constructed tower before them that seemed to grow larger and more imposing with each step they took.

Fiona was… weirdly still, despite the rain making a mark on her, drenching her silk blouse, glistening her skin, soaking her short hair and hiding her eyes behind her matted bangs. There were no complaints, no fidgeting, none of the usual telltale signs that said she hated everything and absolutely didn’t want to be here if she had any other choice. She just walked on grimly, silently, and with no regard for his offered umbrella.

He exhaled slowly through his nose but didn’t press the issue. If she wanted to be wet then so be it.

The little creatures began their song again: a steady and regal triple meter in three fourths time. Though they formed words, of a kind, he couldn’t quite make out the individual syllables. The sound simply swelled and swayed and mingled with the peaceful patter of the raindrops. The closer they got to the tower, the louder the creatures’ song became until their voices were joined together in a booming, thunderous chorus.

Purple and white cracks appeared for a trill in the dark, starless sky, stark and blinding. The rain had become a deluge, tumbling down in large, heavy droplets that beat upon the ground like billions of leather boots headed into battle. The song swelled. The world seemed to shake. The tower loomed over them, its massive wooden doors stoically sealed shut behind a large, heavy wooden crossbeam.

Floop est insanum existimari velis!

Their words were clear now but loud enough that, even had they attempted to cover their ears - something which neither of them bothered doing anyway - they would have been unable to escape it.

Adjuva nos! Servo nobis!

With a final, deafening boom, the wooden crossbeam splintered and split. The rain stopped. The singing stopped. Everything just… stopped.

“This,” Fiona said. “Is a complete waste of time.”

He didn’t disagree, but neither did he feel the need to state it. Gesturing casually towards the now unsealed doors, he offered a disinterested, “Shall we?”

“We shall.” She began walking towards the doors, before turning her attention towards the frozen spectacle before her. “Do you think it’s a privilege to be able to see these sights?”

Though he’d fallen into step beside her, when she paused, so did he. The question set his lips in that familiar downward curve of confusion. “Are you referring to this dreamscape specifically or… Emea overall?”

“Both. There is ugliness in the common mind; smallness. Tiny wants, closeted fetishes, vulgar desires.” He didn’t need to see her eyes to see the memory of the fornicating carrots flashing before them. “But every once in awhile, a thousand different things that defy sense come together onto the canvas of the mind to create the sublime.”

“That is… quite poetically put.”
“And really fuckin’ pointless.” Whatever reverie in her voice had turned to dismissal. “The beauty is superficial. Purely aesthetic. It’s style, not substance, and it too will pass. Now Emea itself on the other hand…” She sighed. “Possibility, imagination, potential. Standing unfixed in contrast to rigid Idalos. You live in a city where you worship a god who has given no blessings, who has done nothing to avail you of the many hazards encroaching upon your city. Is that ideal? Would you change that if you could draw power from the primordial fuckin’ womb of the world and remake that flawed premise?”

He stared at her for several trills, eyes empty but mind weighing what it was she’d said. “...no.” Before she could, no doubt, reprimand him for what was assuredly his inability to conceive of a goal beyond what was before him, he calmly elaborated. “If I could draw power from the ‘primordial fucking womb of the world’, as you call it, I believe I would simply… remove it.”

His grey-green gaze slowly moved from her face to settle on the scene around him. “All of it.” Frozen, it really did seem like a painting. “You have been asking me to find a purpose; a reason for being,” he continued, tone just slightly more invested than it usually was. “Whatever I decide upon. Whatever I… discover,” His face turned, eyes locking with Fiona’s. “I would not waste my time or effort remaking something that is fundamentally flawed.” He shrugged, the umbrella bobbing slightly. “I would make something... new.”

“Careful. You’re dangerously close to having a hint of an aspiration there.”

“That is sarcas-”

“YES. FUCK YOU, YES.”

Mathias nodded, indifferent to Fiona’s mood. “Then I am on the correct path, it would seem.”

“Sure.” Fiona said. She seemed to have lost interest in going through the door and much more intent on continuing the conversation. “What was your people’s word for a field mage? Hexer?”

“Are you referring to a... hexaceiro?” He’d never heard the term “field mage” before, but there were plenty of things Fiona said that he hadn’t studied. At the very least, it wasn’t too difficult to draw a general definition from the two words separately. “A hexhawker?”

“Your nation has no organized mage corps?”

“It does not.”

“How does anything get done?”

Mathias blinked. “When you say ‘anything’... what are you referring to specifically?” Did the mages of Etzos replace the general populace as the city’s specialized workforce? Reimancers as engineers? Etherists as smiths and other artisans? Empaths soothing the mundane citizens into placid roles of general and stupid labor?
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“Magic is a commodity. Etzos is no utopia but it has moved past the petty superstition to fully embrace the practicalities of magic in both domestic civil enforcement and military affairs.” Fiona said. “Your people can’t even push back fungi.”

“I suppose there is some magical regulation under the Seekers…” he murmured, considering. “But they are unaffiliated with the monarchy. Who,” he continued, “Do not seem to share Etzos’ sentiment regarding the ‘practicalities of magic’, as you say. Magic is considered… a tool, I suppose, but a personal one.”

“A personal one.” He could hear the sneer in her voice. “The Seekers are relics. I hear your king is a corpse with a tiny pecker and servants who pretend he is anything otherwise. Would you not fix any of that? Do you not have the urge to rebuild your failed state of superstition and cannibalism and failed state-wide magic programs and cannibalism and all-devouring fungi and meatless cuisine and cannibalism and I’m really, really not over the cannibalism, my dear. It’s a mark of a failed society when you have to eat your neighbour to survive.”

“I suppose I should clarify: Graciana and I never based our diets upon survival.” It did seem to be a recurring theme with Fiona; one he failed to comprehend. “As for this revisitation?” He shook his head. “I feel nothing. You know this. The people of Quacia, the king, the-” He blinked. “Oh. You have been referring to the creep as ‘fungi’. I see.” He nodded. “It is… somewhat fungal, yes.” Completing the thought, however, he finished with an unpassionate, “I would simply remove them.”

“Lame. Expected but lame.” Fiona said. “In the absence of an Attuner, an Abrogator is sometimes used as a sensor for magic. Do you have any experience in…” she was clearly fishing for a word that was much, much smaller than her first choice. “... spying.”

“Spying?” he echoed. “Within a magical capacity?”

“With or without. Is information another thing you have chosen to deprive yourself of?”

“I can detect magic, if that is what you are wondering about specifically,” he replied. “As for mundane means, I gather what information I need and retain whatever else I learn along the way.”

“Your definition of ‘need’ is presumably worrisome, but please, tell me more. Impress me. Tell me you had a sizable network of street informants and fellow hawkers to draw from for direction at the very least.”

He blinked. “Children, mostly. Other mages do not typically find abrogants amenable.” An understatement, and one that Fiona herself had proven true the first time they’d met. “Graciana had a formal network that I utilized as well, but I assume that is something you would not consider to be ‘impressive’.”

“Less impressive now that she’s gone,” Fiona said. “And you seem to have neither the ability nor will to inherit it.”

He blinked again. “Do you… have need of an intelligence network in Quacia?”

“I have need of an intelligence network everywhere,” Fiona said. “But more importantly, if we are to move on to the next phase, I will need someone who has the background and who is willing to take that background to the next level. You, rudimentary and informally trained as you are, have something vaguely resembling a foundation.”

“The next phase being?”

“We are standing in a hub of information, with access to every mind in the world, every thought and secret in every sleeping heart. We can go anywhere: the booze-cursed city of Rharne, the poisoned city of Rhakros, the beastlands of fuckin’ Ulthadria.” She wiped her matted hair away from her face, and her eyes were filled with a passion -not anger- he had never seen in her before. “Every door is open to a Dreamwalker. I’m talking about building a global surveillance network beyond anything the mundane or the magical has ever seen; the shadow behind every raised blade.”

Mathias didn’t feel anything, but he understood that she did. Thus far and for the foreseeable future, it was enough for him. “I see. Consider me someone willing then, however shaky the foundation.” He wasn’t really sure what she could have said that would have resulted in any different of a response. Maybe something completely out of character like a global philanthropy project.

A niggling feeling in the back of his mind suggested Fiona was rubbing off on him a little bit more than he should have been comfortable with.

“With the start of each intelligence enterprise, it is custom that we select new monikers. Code names, if you would call them that. When you address those around the world, they will have your name; but your name is not your name. I would also strongly urge you not to be clever and pick any of the following: aegis, shield, protector, blocker, barrier, defender, rampart, fortress and blah and blah and so on and so on. You know how it fuckin’ goes, Matty.”

“Like ‘Zipper’?”

“I guess,” She shrugged. “Complacency has turned it into me, rather than a face of me.”

“And I must choose? You will not make one for me?”

“Hello? What does it say about your commitment if you won’t even define yourself at this rudimentary level?”

Mathias nodded. “I see.” After a moment or two, he frowned. “Must I choose now, in this moment?”

“Think on it.” she said. She was patient, she was reasonable, she was as close to polite as he had ever seen her. “We’ll talk again when we find a dreamer that will lead us to our next destination.”

“Understood.”

“I too must shed Zipper. She’s served her purpose. Etzos will be my cage no longer.”

“Are you finished?” A small and frustrated voice whined through the stillness.

“You’ll be finished if you don’t cram it.” Fiona retorted. There she was again. Reason and tranquility had left her the moment a challenge emerged.

Curious enough, Mathias turned to face the now open doors behind them. There, in the small opening between them, stood a small, cerulean skinned child with long, striking white hair, and wide, haughty eyes.

“Excuse me?” Her voice rose with pricked pride.

“You are.” Fiona’s voice, in contrast, fell deeper and deeper into condescension with each word. “You are excused.”

The child’s already wide eyes seemed to widen even more with indignation.

“Is this not what you have been looking for?” Mathias asked as he calmly started at the child.

“Yeah.” Fiona said. “And I don’t much need her cooperation for what I’m about to do.”

“Stop ignoring me!” Her little blue hands had balled into little blue fists. “I am the queen, and you’ll pay me the respect I deserve!”

“And what would that be?” Mathias questioned.

“Your Majesty,” Fiona said, making a small, rigid bow. “I did not recognize you, my queen. Permit me to kneel so that I may show you the proper respect.”

“Hmph,” Little arms crossed over a little chest. “That’s better. You may kneel, scum.”

Fiona stepped forward until she was right in front of the little blue girl and, face expressionless, went down on one knee before the the ‘queen’. Mathias remained where he was, bright eyes curiously observing and seemingly forgotten by the child queen. She and Fiona were face level now, and the girl seemed pleased, puckering her lips repressed triumph and clearly trying very well hard to keep composed and not jump around in celebration.

Which was short lived when Fiona jammed her thumbs into her eyes and a high-pitch scream exploded through the dreamscape. The air boiled, the great tower rumbled, the stillness gave way to a pulse of steadily intensifying vibrations that tore and ripped and carved away the landscape. At the same time, a bright light, rather than blood, seeped out from the point where the fingers penetrated the eyes - and then Fiona removed her thumbs and pushed the child away and to the ground with a contemptuous shove.

“Brand applied. Let’s jump.”
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Ahh, so that's how you apply a brand, gouge a dreamchild's eyes out? In all seriousness, I feel unqualified to judge this thread, it's so well written. The balance of narrative flow and dialogue were well done. The idea of setting up a intelligence network through dreamwalking is an interesting concept.

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