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Tristan Venora
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A Little Potion

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Zi'da 90, Arc 721

The kitchen still smelled faintly of hot chocolate, Tristan noticed, which made him smile. The plate with cookies still stood on the table. Ayla and he hadn’t managed to eat them all. He quickly grabbed a cookie and ate it, enjoying the sweet taste, of honey and strawberries, before he put the rest into a cabinet in order to save them for later, cleaned the table and washed his hands thoroughly. Hygiene was not only important in medicine; it was also important in alchemy. If you worked with dirty hands, or used dirty equipment, or worked in a dirty environment, for that matter, it could have all kinds of unpleasant consequences that Tristan was definitely not interested in dealing with!

His customer, a certain Mrs. Sands, had asked him if he would be willing to make something that would boost her and her family’s immune system. They were often a little sickly in Cylus because fresh fruit and vegetables were harder to come by, and it was so cold and dark and unpleasant. Tristan himself didn’t have that kind of problem because he could grow fresh fruit and vegetables in his greenhouse all arc long and could just make things warm with alchemy on top of it, but anyway, he had agreed immediately.

Nobody should have to be sick and feel bad in winter!

As he gathered all the tools and reagents that he would need, it occurred to him that the potion that he was making now would be a wonderful addition to the anti-winter potion that he had invented during the time in Melrath and that made sure that whoever drank it always felt pleasantly warm. Maybe, he would sell them as a set in the future – one potion to make you feel warm inside, and another one to keep you healthy when it was dark and cold.

He was sure that people would be interested!

Smiling at the idea that he had just had, he filled a bowl with hibiscus tea that he had bought at a store earlier that trial. Using alcohol as the base for his potion would have increased its shelf life considerably; Mrs. Sands had small children though, if he remembered correctly, and you did not give children alcohol. It was just not good for them. Besides, hibiscus tea was known to boost one’s immune system and had a pleasant taste.

Next, he put a bit of honey into a separate bowl. Honey would serve as the binder – a substance that made sure that the different reagents didn’t negate each other. It would also make the potion sweeter though, and it had all kinds of properties that were good for your health on its own.

He mixed the honey with a carefully measured amount of angelica root extract and orange peel oil, both substances that were known to boost your immune system and finally added something to strengthen the alchemical effect and make the potion just a bit more potent. Anybody could mix herbs and oils and such; an alchemist could give them power though!

Once all the reagents were in the same bowl, he stirred the mixture vigorously, and then came the …

… finishing touch!

Tristan didn’t only want to brew helpful potions, he also wanted to brew amazing and pretty (or amazingly pretty) potions. Once upon a time, when he had just started out as an alchemist, he had accidentally made things smoke or produce weird sounds, now, he could special effects on purpose – pleasant special effects rather than questionably smelling smoke and such!

A pinch of powder (that was safe to eat, of course) and some more stirring later, the hibiscus tea potion suddenly started to sparkle, softly and in pink, the colour of hibiscus blossoms – or roses, for that matter. Smiling slightly at the sight in front of him, he poured the potion into a number of separate vials, stoppered them – and tied a thin pink ribbon around each potion.

And then he labelled the vials so that Mrs. Sands wouldn’t forget what was in them before he put them all into a wooden box with a bit of padding (To make sure that the vials wouldn’t accidentally break.). His customer would likely store his potions together with other potions or medicines; he didn’t want her to accidentally ingest the wrong thing!

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After he had finished making his potion and cleaned up the kitchen, Tristan went upstairs – on his tiptoes in order to minimize the sound that he made – and took a peek into Ayla’s room. His mother was sitting in a chair and reading a book while the little girl was sound asleep in her bed, surrounded by her stuffed animals. He smiled at both of them and met his mother’s gaze for a moment before he made his way downstairs again.

As he did so, he thought that he heard Ayla murmur something, but a moment later, everything was quiet again. He was relieved. Ayla had apparently heard him as he had tried to sneak up the stairs in order to check on her, but it didn’t seem as if it had bothered her particularly!

He decided to keep himself busy by reading a book on alchemy in the living room until his customer arrived. Before long, a knock on the door could be heard though. He quickly went to answer it, in part so that Ayla wouldn’t wake up again due to the knocking and greeted at Mrs. Sands that stood outside before he gestured for her to enter the house and escorted her into the living room. Doing business in the hallway, right in front of the door, just wasn’t acceptable!

“Thank you”, the human woman who was in her forties, with brown hair and a somewhat frilly royal blue dress, replied as she took a seat on the couch in front of Tristan’s fireplace. She took the cup of tea that Tristan had brought for her and drank from it before she set it down again and cast a curious glance at the box with potions on the table.

“These are very pretty”, she remarked and smiled.

“What exactly did you put into the potions, if I may ask? May I?” she continued. When Tristan inclined his head, she took a vial and brought it to her nose in order to smell at it.

“Hibiscus tea, honey, angelica root extract and a hint of orange peel oil”, Tristan explained just as his customer let out a small sound of delight and abruptly held the vial up.

“It sparkles”, she observed.

“Indeed, it does”, Tristan replied and smirked, pleased by the fact that she liked the effect.

“And I can come again and get more if we are content?” Mrs. Sands asked, still smiling, and produced her wallet in order to give him the sum of money they had agreed on before she took the box.

“Anytime”, Tristan replied. “I hope that you’ll enjoy your potions”, he added as he led her back to the door. He had just reached for the door handle when he suddenly noticed that Mrs. Sands was looking at something in the hallway behind them. When he turned around, he saw Mistral, his cat, standing there. He was watching his customer from out of sulfur-yellow eyes.

“What a beauty!” Mrs. Sands cooed.

Mistral who had once been compared to a failed necromantic experiment meowed, but not in a friendly way.

“And he has personality too”, Mrs. Sands observed and smiled. “I like cats that have personality and aren’t everybody’s friends! I’ve always been a bit suspicious of pets that are nice to strangers! What’s his name, if I may ask, Mister Venora?” she wanted to know.

“Mistral”, Tristan replied and glanced at the cat that was sitting there and watching the stranger very closely now.

“That’s a fitting name”, Mrs. Sands decided and looked at the cat as well. “Well, Mistral, I have to get going now. My family are waiting for me. I hope to meet your owner and you again sometime though!” she said, waved and walked out of the door.

Mistral looked most displeased, as if he had understood her and was not happy with pretty much being called someone’s possession.

He did not have an owner, and he was not a pet, thank you very much!

Tristan decided to improve his feline friend’s mood by serving him a small bowl of tuna – it was almost time for Mistral to be fed anyway – before he walked upstairs again in order to see how Ayla and his mother were doing now. He thought that he had heard voices.

He found his mother Shannon, formerly a Baroness of Rynmere, sitting in her chair a book in her lap, reading a story to her granddaughter. She enjoyed the fact that she could finally spend time with her only grandchild after having been away from her for such a long time.

Ayla was sitting on the floor in front of her grandmother, one of her dolls in her lap, and listening attentively.

When she noticed Tristan, she exclaimed, “Daddy, come and listen to the story, too!”

Of course, Tristan obeyed, and sat down next to his daughter on the floor before he gently put an arm around her. His family were the reason why he was doing everything. He wanted to give them a new home, to replace the kingdom that had been lost.
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Player Name: Tristan Venora

Points awarded: 10
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

Alchemy: A potion that boosts your immune system
Alchemy: Making potions sparkle
Etiquette: Don’t do business in the hallway!
Medicine: Hygiene is important
Medicine: Alcohol is bad for children
Stealth: Walking on your tiptoes

Renown: 5, it seems that if the potions impressed her, they'll spread their popularity by word of mouth.
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: Another nice and peaceful thread. I enjoyed this one too.

The ingredients that Tristan uses for his potions sound very nice. I particularly like the choice of orange peel oil. It's a potent essential oil iirc. He seems to enjoy the fragrant ingredients, which is not a problem by me! There was a good mix here of Tristan doing his job, and interacting with his customer Mrs. Sands. Hopefully she finds his product satisfactory!

I thought it was funny that Mistral isn't a very friendly cat. I didn't know that about him. I wonder if Tristan still has that recipe for cat-speech tonic? Maybe Mistral can tell Tristan what's bothering him sometime!

I really liked the way you closed this story, by comparing the home he's creating for his family to their own little kingdom. I thought that was poignant.

Great writing, enjoy the rewards.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!
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