Chocolate, cakes and what the future holds

4th of Ymiden 718

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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Chocolate, cakes and what the future holds

4th of Ymiden, 718


The trial was pleasantly warm, the sun shining through the stained glass windows, but not nearly intense enough to make him feel uncomfortable. Mia was half-walking, half-skipping by his side, body turning left and right to look at the designs in the windows. The girl had been insufferably insistent that he accompanied her to the opening of a bakery or something like that, and, after a while, Rovy just accepted. It was strange, how she was able to talk to anyone, waiving in greeting to whomever looked her way, even though he was sure she couldn't know half of those people, specially since even her didn't visit the Glass Quarter often.

Rovy was doing the exact opposite, curling in around himself and trying to look smaller. He knew his arms were covered, knew his hair was hiding away the feathers in his ears, and he knew that no one was looking closely enough to notice his eyes, but the few encounters he had when people did notice were often not pleasant, and he would rather stay safely tucked away in the farm than to visit Rharne just for fun. Specially so soon after the festival.

He was there, though, and all he could do was try to hide away while Mia kept drawing attention to her. Rovy couldn't really bring himself to scold her, though, not when she looked so happy. Not that Mia ever looked anything but.

"Here we are, Vy!" she said, pointing towards a bunch of tables shoved together and displaying a fine variety of sweets. Or at least that was Rovy thought they were, considering he couldn't identify the shapes of half of them. "They're all free samples! What do you want?"

"Don't call me that." he asked, another futile attempt of making the girl drop the stupid nickname. He looked at the table, briefly, before shrugging. "I don't really like sweets, so don't worry."

"You what?" Mia frowned in confusion, before grabbing a handful of different samples of rounded candies that looked like chocolate. "But you always eat when grandpa makes them."

"Doesn't mean I like them."

His only answer was an unimpressed raised eyebrow and a shove on his back. Rovy rolled his eyes and allowed Mia to guide him away from the crowd trying to grab something from the tables, for which he was grateful. What he wasn't grateful for was when the girl shoved one of the rounded things on his hand.

"Try it. It's chocolate with..." she popped one that looked just the same to the one she had given him in her mouth. "... hmmm. Lemon."

He thought about arguing, but then, Mia would just insist until he tried one, and he was never one to say he didn't like something he never even tried. So instead, he muttered a "Don't talk with your mouth full." and took a small bite from the round chocolate. His nose twisted itself all of his own. "Way too sweet."

"... How is that even a problem? Here, try this one, is hazelnut bonbon." she shoved another one on his hand, took the lemon bonbon and ate the rest of it. She chewed away at it, a thoughtful look on her face. The same look she always had when she thought of a way too personal question to ask.

"Still too sweet, Mia. And what is it?"

"Really, you're worst than grandpa sometimes. Here, this is a praline." another piece of chocolate was shoved towards him, this time shaped like a small triangle. "You have been staying with us for, what, two arcs now? Don't get me wrong, I love you and all, you're my lil' brother, but... Don't you have dreams of your own? Plans? You know, that does not involve the farm?"

Rovy tried to mask the pang he felt at the words by shoving the praline on his mouth. He regretted it instantly as he felt pure sugar fill his mouth. "Mia, this is even worst! What is even the difference between a bonbon and a praline? The shape?"

"They're completely different! And don't you change the subject, young man." she exclaimed, in an eerily flawless mimic of Whalen.

"I feel like I shouldn't have to point out I'm older than you. And no, I don't have dreams nor plans. Those are useless pursuits, and I'm happy where I am."

Mia's expression turned pensive, and she grew quiet as she slowly finished the rest of bonbons or pralines or whatever they were called. Rovy sighed, scratching his neck as he looked around, watching people come and go, basked in the colorful light reflected by the windows of the Quarter. It painted a beautiful picture on the streets, and even though Rovy didn't care much about it, even him couldn't deny that it was very different from the other Quarters. It was... a nice atmosphere.

It didn't serve to calm the nervousness in his chest, though.

"Wait here. I'll grab something you might like." he turned to Mia again as she spoke, and nodded, although she didn't exactly waited for confirmation before making her way back to the table.

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It was easier, to be left alone for a moment. Rovy sighed, leaning against the wall behind him and raising his eyes to the sky for a brief moment. He wouldn't read more than what there really was in Mia's words, but, even so, there was that underlying fear that he wouldn't be able to stay. He didn't like Rharne, not really. There was nothing in the city for him, only side glances and quiet words from people who didn't want to know him and who he didn't want to know. And yet, he hadn't left. He loved the farm, he loved Whalen's warm and silent companionship, and he loved the happy and bordering on innocent trust on Mia's eyes. He didn't want to leave, not when he had found a place that was as close to home as he thought he could get, after everything.

Another sigh. It was useless to dwell on such thoughts. If they wanted him out, he'd leave. If not, he'd stay. There wasn't much to think about, really.

Rovy was almost grateful for Mia's return, despite the fact that she shoved another one of those bonbons of her on his hand, while she herself was now enjoying a rather generous piece of cake. Sometimes Rovy thought she would put sugar on soup, if Whalen allowed her to.

"Dreams are not useless, Vy." she picked up, as if they hadn't even been interrupted, and Rovy almost groaned in frustration. "What would you like to do, if you had the chance? Anything."

"It doesn't matter, Mia. If I want to do something, and I can't, I'll do it. If I can't, what's the point of thinking about it?"

"It's called making plans, Rovy, and normal people do that." Mia rolled her eyes, something that would've been more effective if she didn't have a huge amount of cake in her mouth. "There's nothing wrong with it. If you know what you want, you can work towards getting it. So, just answer me and stop being such a killjoy."

They stared at each other, unblinking, for a long while, before Rovy finally grunted. "Ok, fine, whatever it takes for you to stop annoying me." despite his words, the mixed blood grew quiet for a while, Mia waiting patiently for him to finish his thoughts. Good to know that when it suited her, Mia could be the most patient person in all Idalos. "I don't really... I just want to stay at the farm."

The silence grew again, seemingly not to be broken even by the excited chatter that went on around them. When Mia spoke again, it was with a soft smile on her face.

"I think grandpa wants you to inherit the farm. You know, when he can't work on it anymore."

The thought gave him a warmth so different from the sun's, and so more pleasant. He shook his head, though. "I couldn't, Mia. He's your grandfather. The farm should be yours."

Rovy liked to think that he knew Mia well enough. Two years was too short a time to really know someone, and he still thought that the girl and her grandfather were crazy to have accepted him inside their family so easily. But they had, and Rovy didn't have it in him to shove them away. In the end, he had stayed, accepted it, and tried his best to live up to their expectations and hopes. Even so, Mia was a simple enough eighteen arcs old to get to know. She had a surprisingly maturity to her when she wanted to, but mostly, the girl only wanted to live life in the best way possible. All that, to say that he definitely didn't expect her to laugh at his words. He had expected denial, or sentimentalism, but not her clear, very amused, very loud, laugh.

"Me? Are you serious? The goats would die before the season ended, and Shrimp might actually ran away. I don't even want to spend my life tending to a farm. I'm destined to greatness, I want something better than a farm. No, not me." Mia managed to breath out. Rovy still didn't get what was so amusing, but before he could reply, the girl continued. "Besides, you are his son, as far as he is concerned."

These words were what shut him up, made his eyes water and his chest to become pleasantly tight. It wasn't a matter of what he thought he deserved, because Whalen and Mia did, and what they thought was way more important to him. He cleared his throat, looking anywhere but at her.

"So, what do you say? Will you say yes, if he asks you to take care of the farm?" Mia waited until he nodded, this time, to keep going. "And what, may I ask you, will be your plans and dreams for the farm?"

Rovy knew what she was doing, the subtle and harmless manipulation, to make him talk about hopes and dreams and whatever useless concept Mia always seemed to hold close to her heart. He had managed to avoid answering her with a straight enough answer, and he still didn't know why she wanted to rip it out from him, but, right then, he didn't care as much.

"Perhaps buy more goats? Expand it a bit. Cows, as well. I like Whalen's cheese." he shrugged, feeling strangely calm. "And a garden or a plantation of some kind would be nice as well. Your grandmother wanted something like that, before she passed, didn't she?"

Mia didn't answered with nothing more than a smile. She rested her back against the wall as well, leaning and touching her shoulder against his, in a gesture that was indeed comforting. Rovy finally popped the last bonbon Mia had given him in his mouth, surprised to feel it wasn't nearly as sweet as the rest. Still not his choice of food, but still...

"This is nice."

"Dark chocolate. Really, Rovy, you birds are so weird."

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Rharne: Glass Quarter
Dark chocolate: Not too sweet
Sweets: are unpleasant
Mia: Likes sweets
Mia: Friendly to strangers
Mia: Asks too many questions
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Grammatically, you had a smattering of errors which were mostly conjugations; for example, where you should have used "worse" you wrote "worst". They were pretty small and didn't detract a whole lot, but there were enough it was a little distracting. If you have the time to proofread after you've posted, I'm sure that would be more than enough to clear these little things up! As for the story, it was a sweet (AHAHAHA. GET IT.) look into his relationship with Mia and a good seed of development for him to grow into something different than what he is now. I couldn't relate to not liking sugar, but I think you wrote both the suger-lover and the more sensative pallate well. It was an enjoyable read!
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