Patrick
Experience: 15
Knowledge: 10 Running 2 Tactics.
Renown: 20
Skill Usage: Appropriate to level
Loot/Losses: Any weapons you're carrying are confiscated, and in the safekeeping of the LK.
Injuries/Conditions: Some roughing up by the guards and LKs.
Consequences: You will be in jail indefinitely, at least a couple cycles until you make a return (if you do.)
Comments: I'm sorry to see you go, but that happens. I wish I had enough time to give you the plot you ought to deserve, but I had to take it one thing at a time. Patrick is one of the better written chaotic characters on site, and I enjoy his antics. Your action scenes are damned good, and your use of npcs as well. You'll be missed.
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Vivian
Experience: 15
Knowledge: 8 Leadership 4 tactics
Renown: 20
Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Conditions: none
Consequences: none
Comments: I really enjoy Vivian as the straight-laced law-enforcement/military type. She's made some great strides in this war, and you oughta be proud of the job you've done writing for her. Well done.
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Varlum
Experience: 15
Knowledge: Axes&Bludgeons 8 Tactics 4
Renown: 20
Skill Usage: Appropriate to level
Loot/Losses: none
Injuries/Conditions: none
Consequences: none
Comments: Varlum is just a beast. Freaking godzilla. The way he just mows into a scene and wrecks things without hesitation. I think he takes after his father more than he realizes. He better watch that temper, but now that Ralaith has his back, perhaps he will be a good influence on the berserking Ithecal.
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