• Solo • 1.2 The Northside (Graded)

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Llyr Llywelyn
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1.2 The Northside (Graded)

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The Northside Orphanage
2 Vhalar, Arc 719

Llyr left the Commercial Ring by the time the sun had warmed Etzos. He still adjusted his coat so it fit tightly over him, though. The walk wasn’t too far and he enjoyed the momentary solitude all the same. Over the trials of the last season, Llyr started to get more and more accustomed to being by himself. Before he’d arrived to Etzos, he’d never been by himself… ever. He’d always had his father. Always had chores to accomplish while he cared for the aging man and attended to the family business. It’d only been in the moments around dawn that he managed to steal privacy in the darker, forgotten, and abandoned districts of Quacia where humans were few and rats were plenty.

Even in the season or so of solitary confinement, he hadn’t been truly alone. His father had served as his jailer and provided him with company in the form of Intended, or the targets of their clients in the torture business. But there’d been long stretches where the targets weren’t alive. That was worse than the periods of time when he was actually alone. The stench made it locked in his mind, nibbling at his thoughts during odd unconnected moments in a way that he could have sworn there was a corpse at his feet - or that he were a corpse himself - though such scents were nothing more than mere memory.

No matter how he adjusted his mask, as he walked through the North Outer Perimeter of Etzos, that stench returned to him. He dryly swallowed. Cold sweat gathered on his skin, but he otherwise ignored it. In enough bits, the scent would fade. Llyr paced along the winding streets in search of the location that his contact, Lochlann, had given him. His thoughts tilted, and he wondered in the sort of unrestrained way about whether he was a corpse or not. Would he know? Had the necromantic Revenants known what they were? He supposed so, as that had been part of what fed their anger. What if he were a thrall though? Merely following the whims of something or someone else, treated like a puppet for their amusement…

Llyr shivered. He glanced up at the clear blue sky. How could he ever know? Perhaps his thoughts were proof. Perhaps because he could think about it, and inquire about it, that meant he had freedom of choice. “And why would anyone want to send a thrall to an orphanage?” he murmured while he walked. He added, as if in conversation with himself, “Then again, why would anyone treat thralls like servants… what an absolute waste of the dead.”

“Excuse me?” asked an Etzori woman who approached from the opposite direction.

The tall biqaj looked down at her with his eyes of gray. He replied in his southern accent, “I said, what an absolute waste of the dead. There are so many better things to use corpses for than dusting and tidying a house.”

“…right then, love.” She distanced her walk and hurried her steps to continue far away from the foreigner.

Llyr clasped his hands behind him and continued on his own path. He observed the sky now, and let his thoughts flit about without regard to control any of them. He fiddled with the Ring of Paradigm on his pinkie finger, that kept his sparks suppressed. No halo hovered above him, nor did his wings show behind him. His mutations remained closed off and he walked through the streets of Etzos looking like any regular person might.

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The Northside Orphanage stood out among the buildings around it, but not in a garish way. Llyr entered into a front lobby that was sealed off from the rest of the estate by a heavy stone wall and two doors opposite one another. A small glass window granted a peek beyond, which he saw a young woman walking back and forth with scrolls in her arms.

Llyr approached, then lightly rapped his knuckles on the glass.

She looked over, not startled but a faint frown appeared on her thin dark eyebrows and dusky skin. The worker set the scrolls down, then pointed to the left door and walked out of sight. The door opened in the next bit and she entered the front room. The brunette said, “We don’t have any coin to give for jobs.”

“I’m not here for coin,” said Llyr. When the woman gave him a glance over, he added, “I’m here because I’d like to help if I can. I have a reference…”

He lowered his mask first, out of politeness, then felt around the pockets of his coat before he took out a sealed wax envelope. Llyr handed it out for her to take, but she waved a hand in dismissal.

“Stay here.” She muttered in Ith’ession. His casual language lessons with Clover, and breaks spent on translating texts from Ith’ession to Common, had paid off though. He understood it to be: Damn foreigners.

Have there been other foreigners who have come around?” he asked in the Etzori language, though his accent stilted much of it.

“Not often, no. We’re not the central orphanage, taking whoever as volunteers,” she answered in common, only seeming vaguely surprised that he knew enough ith'ession to respond. “At Northside, we’re careful about who we let come and go, especially these trials after the overflow from central, sending their lot our way even though they can’t pay. We’ve got so many unregistered orphans to process still and most of these kids will be working for half their lives with the number of medical issues they acquired during their time at central. Regardless of numbers, we can’t have children vanishing over night and not knowing who was about.”

“Vanishing?” Llyr’s voice broke in pitch slightly. He grimaced. “Why would anyone... My apologies, I didn’t mean to bother you, ma’am. I’ll figure out another way to aid, when I am able.”

“Wait,” said the woman before he could start away. She gestured for him to sit on a bench. “One moment.”

Her heels clicked against the polished stone floor while she retreated past the door. It heavily shut behind her.

Within bits, another woman appeared, older by many arcs and holding a shawl tightly around her shoulders. She spoke in a voice that didn’t have an Etzori accent but had the barked tone of someone familiar with the cadence regardless. “You there, you’re the boy looking to help?”

Llyr stood, brushed off his coat and fixed his sleeves, then he nodded. “Yes, ma’am. I am. My name is Llywelyn. I have a reference letter here to confirm my nature. I’ve come to offer myself for whatever might need done around here.”

“Not for coin?”

“No, ma’am. I had a job so I am not currently in need. At Tr-”

“At Trust and Fair,” she finished for him. She pocketed the sealed reference when he handed it over. “I am Housemother Miller. Come along then.” She led past the door. They went through what looked to be an office room with a couple tables and a few chairs. She walked swiftly, took out a ring of keys, and opened another door which led into an actual corridor of the main estate.

She pointed at rooms while they walked down the hall. “Those are the offices, that hall leads to the worker rest quarters if you need to eat or get away from the children. That is the washroom, for adults only. That is the records room, you are not allowed in there. That is the visitation room, where we have the children meet potential parental matches or where we discuss matters with those who cannot care for their offspring anymore.”

Llyr felt whiplash in his neck while he looked back and forth at all the spots she pointed. They reached a stairwell and she led to a floor that spanned out with a couple long tables.

“This is the mess hall. It is where all meals take place. There are two a day, morning meal and afternoon meal. Each child gets one plate, only one, no seconds ever. Water is all we have to drink, but it’s fresh water and clean. Provided by the city guards themselves on the good trials.” The matron turned around and said, “This isn’t one of those. They’re all tied up with nonsense. But the squeaky wheels gets the grease. If you could… we need a few barrels collected by meal time…”

“You require me to carry water from the nearest cistern to here?” he clarified, surveying the dining hall. Despite the tables and their benches, it somehow felt barren. He realized it was because there wasn’t a single item of decor on the walls or floor, only bare stone.

“If you would,” said the woman.

“I shall,” agreed Llyr. He smiled in a polite manner, happy to find some service to provide while also observing the woman. “Is there anything else?”

“You can call me Madam Miller, most everyone else in this city does. I handle three sun shifts for Northside every fourth-count trial or so.”

“Pleasure to meet you, Madam Miller,” he said in automatic tone, though he already had an approximation of who she was and her schedule at Northside. Lochlann had been very helpful in acquiring that information. “Are there water buckets and a shoulder pole for use?”

“Yes, I’ll show you where we keep them and where the barrels you’ll be filling are. Pick up your feet, boy. You’ll never get the water in time going at that pace.”

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Re: 1.2 The Northside



Llyr Llywelyn

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Knowledges:

Skill:
Business Management: Scouting a potential employee.
Intelligence: Scouting a potential contact.
Etiquette: Introducing yourself to a business with a reference letter.
Etiquette: Letting them know you know their native language.
Etiquette: Maybe don't murmur about the undead while walking on public streets.
Tactics: Consequentialism: Utilitarian Volunteering.

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NPC - Madam Miller: Works as Housemother at The Northside Orphanage.
NPC - Madam Miller: Knows more than she lets on.
Etzos: Location: The Northside Orphanage (North OP).
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Renown: +5 volunteering

EXP: 10

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Interesting take on the dead. I wonder what Llyr would want to do with the dead if not use them for chores? I liked that you added an NPC who heard his ramblings since it showed just how different Llyr was from the native population. Good on Llyr for working as a volunteer and not requiring pay… I wish I knew the motivations for his actions which is my only complaint. I can see why the NPCs were suspicious of his intents since I would be suspicious too! Enjoy the rewards.

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