• Solo • Vella and Crav (Graded)

5th of Ashan 719

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Vella and Crav (Graded)

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5th Trial of Ashan, Arc 719
Etzos


Neronin rarely felt his stomach protest its lack of sustenance, but he felt this trial. He had spent nearly four days without food, searching for the damnable hunters who had made him their sport. It was rarely an issue anymore. He lived in a state of lack of food and sleep. It was the price of having such a strong necrotic spark. The dark presence in him hated the necessities of life and protested violently whenever he indulged, the result being intense abdominal pain usually. So Neronin had learned to exist on very little in a state of almost perpetual lethargy.

Neronin had finally caved and pursued a meal. Finding a likely source in the saddlebags of a recently arrived traveler to the Shaded Crow Inn in Etzos. The man had hurried inside to secure a room for the night, leaving his horse tethered in front for the time it took to secure a room. It had been enough. Neronin, being the master mage he was, ran forward and pilfered through his saddlebags looking for any food he could find. He came away with a few strips of dried meat and a stale loaf of bread, small and hard. Neronin tore open a portal and stepped through it with a resounding crack. He appeared again on the other side of the tavern, in the shadows behind a stack of crates and spare stable tools. He greedily tore at the bread with his mouth, doing nothing but savoring the food. Then he noticed that the courtyard of the tavern had a low, simple well with a bucket next to it.

Neronin could feel the spark in him violently swirling about in his soul, discontent with the food. He ignored that pain for the moment, knowing he needed the nourishment. Neronin dipped the bucket and then pushed his face into the dark water to drink. He was messy and noisy, gasping for air as he drank deeply. The cold water coursed down into his gullet and he felt the relief he needed shortly before the spark roiled again with anger.

After staggering next to the well in a state of bliss Neronin felt as though he was rejuvenated, or had slept for many breaks. He sighed contentedly and peeled back the packaging on the dried meat. He bit into it savagely, relishing the flavor as he munched. But voices brought him back to a state of panic. He sprinted from the small courtyard between the L shaped tavern, the stables, and the back wall towards the stack of crates and spare tools he had been lurking in.

Neronin peered out suspiciously, hunched over and still chewing on the meat. The voices resolved into a young woman and a heated man. The woman walked out into the courtyard from the inn’s kitchen and the man followed and slammed the door.

“Don’t talk to me like that in front of your father!” He said, and Neronin got the distinct impression this was a more private continuation of a previous conversation. She glared at him. She had the look of a distinctly rangy youth. Her beauty was of the warm and plain variety, and her thin frame meant she had spent at least some of her life without steady meals. The young man, on the other hand was round faced and carried more than a few extra pounds in his midriff, though his arms seemed strong enough. He was pacing in front of her as she gazed reproachfully at him.

“Don’t tell me how t’act in my father’s tavern, Crav.” She said, and Neronin was impressed to find more defiance than fear in her voice.
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Crav stepped forward with his finger out and hissed. “You aren’ his no more, Vella. You’re mine! He said so himself, said a girl like you’d be lucky to have a guy like me.” Crav was moving forward on her. His broad shoulders swayed with his steps, projecting a sort of menace common amongst young men his age who struggled for respect.

“Not on Aelig’s balls, Crav.” Vella hissed back. She leant forward and her blonde bun was coming undone in her rage. “No way I’m bedding down a great ass of a man like you th’rest of my life!”

Crav swung for her as Neronin grinned. This was indeed turning into one entertaining night. He chomped down on the cheese now, watching their struggling fight. The girl swung the bucket under her arm up at Crav as he swung his first. It hit his face and knocked him sideways. Neronin watched the man-child stumble.

The girl Vella seemed apprehensive at what she had done. She stood still, staring at the larger form of Crav as he slowly straightened and touched his eyebrow. His fingers calmer away bloody.

“You bitch! This will scar!” He shouted, his voice higher with rage. Neronin snorted softly. Such pathetic weakness.

“Good, it would have been a shame to ruin a perfectly good bucket for nothing.” Vella hissed and spat on the ground in front of her. She pointed back into the tavern where they both had come. “Now begone with ya, I’ve to fetch water.” Vella said dismissively. She turned her back on the man and began to lower her bucket to fill.

Neronin perked up for the first time in the whole exchange. He could tell by Crav’s stance that he was going to do something. He was hunched and his fists were balled. The mage bit off a huge chunk of the cheese in one bite and felt his eyes water as it caught in his esophagus. Neronin choked it down silently though and looked up to see the girl on the ground and the man kicking her, leaning over the well. Neronin moved without thought. A decent enough excuse, because if he had thought about it he would have called himself an idiot.

Neronin stepped out into the open, still struggling to swallow the cheese. His eyes were watering. He flicked a finger and the black ether of a Sap spell, shaped into a rough ball, shot from it. The spell struck the man, Crav, in the shoulder and the ether dispersed across his form and seeped into him in the blink of an eye. The man toppled to the ground, gasping. He really was a twerp, thought Neronin. Even a man of decent strength wouldn’t have been so affected by that tiny blip of a Sap. Perhaps that was why he so viciously dominated this girl?

“Who, by Cassions’ hairy ass, are you?” Crav said, getting to his feet. Neronin said nothing.

He coughed and choked. His throat was so dry from trials of not eating that he had barely built enough saliva to breath through the cheese in it. He held up a hand.

Crav moved towards him. “Look, you. There ain’t no easy gold here, why don’t you just scatter before I scatter you.” Clever. Neronin coughed and let his hand fall, watching Crav approach.

The mage gasped, and cleared his throat loudly. “Oh, finally.” He said as Crav reached him. Neronin held up his hand and tapped Crav’s chest before the man could land his first punch. He slumped to the ground again, this time with the full force of a real Sap spell. Neronin had stepped over him and walked up to the girl before Crav had regained enough strength to stagger to his feet again. “I had cheese...in my throat.” Neronin explained to the girl as he helped her up to lean against the well. “Or I might have helped you sooner.”

“Wha-“

“Who are you?!” Crav shouted, approaching again, but apprehensively.

Neronin didn’t answer him. “You, ah, need this fellow around?” He asked the girl, his eyes going to her hidden torso. Crav had been careful not to mark up his boss’s daughter in sight. Neronin knew the type. Big men with complexes who beef up their inner image by beating on innocents. Cowards. Neronin hated privileged cowards. “Because...” The mage let the word hang in the air between the three of them.
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“He’s our stable hand.” The girl said simply, staring up at Neronin with a baffled look on her young face. Well, Neronin thought, she was probably only a few years his junior. Certainly he didn’t look that young anymore though.

“Right, but how hard are those to come by.” Neronin said, nodding as if coaxing her to his initial conclusion.

Crav was watching their exchange with a pulsing vein in his temple. His face was slowly turning a deep, ugly red. “That’s it-“ He started for Neronin. Neronin was ready though. He hadn’t spent nearly a year running dangerous combative missions with Al’Angyryl for nothing. Even though he didn’t have melee experience, he had magic. The mage flickered with green static and stepped through a jagged, ripped portal. Coming out behind Crav he summoned his Haunt, pulling the monster from his own shadowy aura. The thing ripped itself from the ground with long, thin claws and stood trembling with anger in front of Neronin.

This time the haunt was tall and thin. The indistinct, ethereal edges of its shadowy joints gave off a dangerous vibe of potential threat. Crav stared up at it, his face shifting from fury to fear in moments. The haunt’s long, shadowy head stared back with green eyes flickering like a cat’s in torchlight.

It moved. The thing had grabbed Crav before he could flinch away in fear. It raised him up and tossed him towards the well. Crav yelped as he went flying. He fell into the well with a lot of scraping and a resounding splash. Neronin let the Haunt fade back to shadow and disperse. He walked past the screaming girl as if he didn’t hear her and bent over the well. Crav was scratching at the circular wall an arms length down.

“Help please!” He gasped, apparently the man didn’t know how to swim.

Neronin reached down and pushed his head underwater. He released the ether from his final spark, the Abrogation spark. It formed a shimmering shield at the surface of the water. Neronin watched the man struggle against it, unable to breath.

Then a bucket slammed into the side of Neronin’s head.

He reeled, his shield disappearing as he lost focus. “What the-“ He yelled in anger.

Vella stood there, wielding the bucket handle with both hands. Her chest heaved as she stared at Neronin. “What do you think you’re doing, monster?!” She spat at Neronin as Crav’s soaked arm appeared on the edge of the well. He was hauling himself out.

“Me? I was saving you from that pathetic excuse for a man.” Neronin said, still holding the now swollen side of his face. “He would have beat you to death.”

“I don’t need your help, magician!” Vella said, and kicked out at Crav. The man fell back into the well again.

“He’s a fool. Who cares?” Neronin asked, confused as to why she was so angry. Crav could have beat her to minced meat.

“You think that gives you the right to come in and murder?! Crav may be a lecherous imbecile, but he’s no murderer.” Vella said. “Would were eager to kill him! What gives you th’right.”

“I-“ Neronin began. He paused. Why the heck was he answering this nobody girl. He had attempted to save her on a whim. It hadn’t even been a plan. He just acted. There was nothing special about her, save her attitude. But that was it, wasn’t it. Her attitude. She was tough and an underdog. She didn’t take handouts, even when it meant Neronin would have stopped her torment forever. He grinned savagely. “Have it your way.” He said and turned to retrieve his stolen food. She continued to curse at him until he stepped through a crackling portal and was gone.

Murderer. Neronin stared at the dark sky after he stepped out of the crackling portal across town. Yes, murderer occasionally. Killer would be a more apt description though. He had killed when he needed to for the most part. But he had only ever existed in a world of bloodshed. Killing had been a necessity to break from the confinement of his situation. Those in his life had expected him to be a victim of their cruelty. But Neronin was no victim, and he met cruelty with his own.

The mage found himself grimacing. Her audacity in judging him when she lived in the same harsh world. Didn’t she know that no one cared about her morality? It wouldn’t save her from abuse or a life under the thumb of some man who thought himself her better. Only strength could do that for her. Only strength could do that for Neronin. He spat to the side and embraced the aching anger of his spark. It brought him back to a keen awareness, there in the darkness of night. He turned and walked on, prowling for his hunters.
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Abrogation: Using a shield to keep someone underwater
Abrogation: Forming a shield to cover an opening
Abrogation: casting a shield over water
Stealth: Finding a place to hide
Stealth: Waiting for witnesses to depart

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Comments: A wonderfully well-written thread; it takes me back to see Neronin's adventures in Etzos. Also, I'm definitely using 'Cassion's hairy ass' in-thread. Thanks. 8-)


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