Dangerous Maiden (Graded)

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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5th Trail of Cylus, Arc 718
Outside of Etzos


Neronin made his way along the dark southern road towards the old smith’s home. He was flanked by two Al’Angyryl fighters called Hoth and Mert. Hoth was tall and lanky. He carried a pair of dangerous looking daggers at his belt and wore a battered old set of leather armor. His black hair was pulled back into a loose tail and a slightly off center patch of beard made his face look even longer than it was. Mert was short for Merta. She was a shorter and stouter woman whose preferred weapon was a cudgel. She wore a leather jerkin with circular iron disks sown into it. Both were unwelcome on the venture, but they had insisted Neronin not go out alone. Neronin had begrudgingly allowed the pair to accompany him because they seemed the least opposed to walking with the necromancer.

Apparently the smith had stopped covertly repairing Al’Angyryl weapons and armor. Neronin was going over there to scare him back into order. Because apparently his duties called for bullshit like this. He sighed and let the cold of the Cylus mid morning seep into his body. It pained his lungs slightly but it soothed the necrotic spark within him. That had become, gradually, more important than his own bodily needs. The breaths that filled his lungs nowadays felt more labored.

When he turned a winding rocky corner in the road the old smith’s shop came into view. He was a family man, having raised three daughters and two sons. He made a modestly successful business repairing farming equipment. The only reason Neronin knew this was because Hoth wouldn’t close his mouth for the entire journey. The man had felt the need to explain the whole region to them as though they gave a damn. He had grown up there and knew of the smith by reputation. Neronin felt this whole ordeal was more of a diversion from his more important work, that of finding a way to separate himself from Vuda’s constrictive magic, or at least growing his own.

Neronin saw that the smith shop’s fire was on, smoke clouded grey against the black of the sky. The mage glanced at Hoth and Mert, both hefted their weapons. Neronin knocked on the door, gathering his weapon within him as well. There was a sound from within and Neronin strained to hear it. A muffled crashing and the sound of footsteps. Then nothing.

“Thander? Thander the smith? Are you here?” Neronin called in his usual cold voice. He let his eyes drift back to Hoth and Mert, frowning. No one could have warned the smith of their coming. They hadn’t exactly been scheming of this for trials on end. It had been a spur of the moment type of mission. Hoth drew the daggers from his belt at Neronin’s look and Mert moved over to the door.

The stout women slammed her foot into the door as Neronin moved out of her way. The wooden door burst back with a crash and Mert disappeared inside. Hoth quickly followed her with his daggers slightly raised. Neronin stepped in after them and found the two face to face with a slim, happy faced girl with her hands raised.

“Please, don’t attack! I’m just waiting for the smith!” She said in a shaky voice. She eyed their weapons apprehensively and Neronin saw a pale sheen of sweat beginning to form on her forehead.

“Where’s Thander, girl?” Hoth asked in a harsh voice he hadn’t been using on their journey over to the smith’s place. He had lowered his daggers and Mert was now moving around the smith’s shop, inspecting everything for signs of Thander. Neronin let his eyes drift to the door that lead into the smith’s living area and then back to the girl.

“I-I don’t know.” She responded to Hoth. “My father just sent me.”
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“How long have you been here girl?” Neronin asked, his eyes flickering back to her as he folded his arms over his chest. “Waiting here for Thander.”

“Only a few minutes, sir.” She mumbled, not meeting Neronin’s eye. He could see her hands were trembling.

“Put those away.” Neronin gestured to Hoth’s blades. “We’ve also got business with the smith, I’d advise you go home, lass.” Neronin let the cold tone of his voice and Hoth and Mert’s obvious viciousness underline the meaning behind his words. The mage stared at her expectantly. She did not move, her hands had stopped trembling and she was very still.

“What business do you have?” She asked in a quiet voice.

Hoth chuckled and Mert turned to raise her eyebrows at the girl. “Killin’ kind, girl.” Hoth said, grinning and showing his yellowed teeth. Neronin rolled his eyes. The brains in these thugs were truly abysmal. He would have to have a talk about this one with Mongrel or Maws. Where they found these characters, Neronin had no idea.

“Not necessarily. We’re here to check up on a contract he recently breached with us. That’s all.” Neronin corrected, his eyes on Hoth.

She said nothing. Just stood there with her hands up and her head down. The sheet of platinum hair covered her face and Neronin thought she might be in shock from Hoth’s words. It would have been better to keep a low profile and not alert the authorities in the area that Thander may be colluding with Al’Angyryl. But Hoth had to scare the girl. Now Neronin might be forced to kill the women.

“So you’re them then?” She asked, her voice no longer trembling.

“Who’s that then, girl?” Mert asked, raising her cudgel slightly. But Neronin’s senses had already picked up the sense of danger. Something in the calmness of the girl’s voice made the deadened hairs on his head stand on edge.

“Al’Angyryl.” The girl said, whipping her hand out towards Mert. The next thing they knew, Mert was sporting a gash two feet long across her chest, neck, and face. She sputtered once and dropped her cudgel. The footpad slumped sideways and died in a crash of hammers and tongs. Neronin wasted no time in yanking Hoth in front of him as the girl sent another spell towards them. As he turned to flee out of the open door he felt a spray of blood coat the back of his head. Hoth’s head had been spun around, instantly killing him. Neronin felt a rush of wind as he slammed the door behind him and it exploded into splinters.

He tore away. He could hear her behind him and when she screamed “Stop, mage!” He turned to look at her. Somehow she was more cruel in her stance now, not at all the naive farm maiden she had been before, though her appearance hadn’t changed. She held her hands up, fingers splayed in an unnatural way. Her hair whipped around her head and wind coursed in tight circles about her, flickering her dress around violently.

“We heard there was a rogue mage muddling about in our territory. You and your little band of bandits have certainly been causing a lot of trouble for the Etzori.” She said, her voice cold and menacing now. She showed not a trace of the youthful fear she had shown before.

Neronin stared at her, his eyes narrowing in suspicion. “Who do you work for? Another crony of Vuda?” He asked.
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“Vuda?” She laughed. “You’re scope is a little small, there, hedge witch.” She said, her voice laced with a cruel mirth. “I am Coven. I work for Ellasin, a real necromancer.” She said. “The Etzori Coven is unhappy with your meddling distractions. Streetside murder? Banditry, really?” She scoffed and Neronin felt a flare of indignation. Who was this little shit to judge him?

“I don’t like your tone.” Neronin said, beginning to summon his abrogation spark. The ether radiated from deep within him. He brought up the Barrier, keeping it small enough to make the ether drain inconsequential. He didn’t know how long this fight would last.

The girl’s only response was a raising of a single brow as she too summoned her ether. “Why don’t you just make this easy and surrender?” She asked.

Neronin let the radiating ether coursing through his arm and out to the Barrier spell shimmer and change with his Nemesis. He subconsciously altered it even more to suit the air defiance he faced. He raised the Barrier just as the girl released his first salvo of wind attacks. They battered his Barrier hard and one even caught him in the shoulder, gashing his robe and arm. He gasped in pain and she laughed cruelly.

Neronin felt the edges of overstepping as he poured more ether into the battered Barrier. Her wind attacks seemed to do more damage than his previous experience. Perhaps this Coven mage had more bite than Vuda’s cronies? She did not pause in her assault, showing a fortitude he had not expected from such a slight lass. Her second volley of ether attacks rocked him to his core. The Barrier shattered on her last attack and Neronin toppled back.

“Your crap shields can’t hold me off, hedge witch.” She laughed, the wind around her picking up again.

Neronin felt rising panic in his chest. He turned over and rolled through a rupturing portal. He vanished in a crackling of green lightning, reappearing a hundred feet down the road. The girl screamed, her anger at his sudden flight must have meant she hadn’t known he had that particular magic. Neronin suspected that was the only thing that saved him.

The necromancer hastily flung a spreading cloud of Sap at the attacker, more to cloud his retreat than to slow her. Then he turned and fled through another rupturing portal. He repeated the blink four times until he finally felt he had made enough distance to retreat on foot.

So, there was a magical group called the Coven and they worked for a necromancer named Ellasin. Neronin felt a cold prickle of apprehension at the thought of another, powerful group of mages to contend with in Etzos.
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Name: Neronin

Knowledge:
Knowledge:
Abrogation: Defiance Nemesis: Wind Defiance
Abrogation: Nemesis Barrier can still be destroyed by higher power Defiance
Abrogation: Barrier will use less ether when smaller
Necromancy: Sap can serve as a smokescreen
Leadership: Commanding with silence
Leadership: Sacrificing a lesser man for yourself

Faction: The Coven
NPC: Ellasin: Leader of the Coven
NPC Ellasin: Necromancer
Location: Thander’s Smith Shop

Loot: NA
Injuries: Overstepping: As a consequence of forcing so much there into the shield, for several trials Neronin with have Misshape Shields
Renown: 10
Magic XP: Yes

Points: 10
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Comments: That was certainly interesting, I'm curious to see how far Neronin can run before this girl catches up with him. She clearly is out for his head and he barely got away this time! I like how quick you dipped into the action and kept it moving, great job :D

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