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21st of Ymiden 718

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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21st Trial, Ymiden, Arc 718
South Etzos
9th break
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He kept them in small groups, for he didn't want to burn his muscles out too fast. He knew that he could push himself and manage groups of a dozen or more, for most of a break, with pauses for breath and water in between. But that wasn't the point of the exercise. In fact, the "exercise" was more of an augmentation, if anything. It was the hobbling and exhaustion of his muscles; a way to instill a tremble of weakness into them, a tiredness to simulate how the fight may go, or may even begin.

Kasoria pinched his upper back muscles together. Two tight packs of cords and tendons met and everything from them to his fingers strained and clenched and heaved-

-as he lifted his chin up and over the top of the beam sitting atop his door-frame. He'd carved gouges in it arcs ago, for wide grips and narrow grips. Now he was doing the former, stretching his chest and back even more with his hands further apart. Sweat dripped and poured down him as he mentally counted and physically lowered himself back down.

All the way. Until your arms are slack. Otherwise it's sodding well cheating.

Tantos' voice, of course. The ever-present growl and grunt and bark across the sands of the training grounds. Pushing his recruits until they collapsed, and then pushing them just a touch harder when they recovered. Kasoria and all the other cadets thought it sadism, but he'd been wrong. Because once all the strains and stress and agony was over, Tantos invited them to do again what they'd started with, seasons before, when they'd first walked into the Academy.

They barely even sweated. Breezed through runs and calisthenics and drills without strain, sometimes without even thinking.

"That's the point," the old Blackguard had said, crunching an apple as his class listened. "Youse can always get better. But the gettin' there... that shite ain't easy."

"F... Four."

Kasoria managed to gasp out the word as his arms went slack and straight above his head. It bowed and slumped, but his grip did not fail. He breathed in once, twice, three times... and a fourth... enough time to beat down his pulse and numb the pain from Screaming to simply Growling. Then he pressed his muscles together again, lifting with his back, not his arms. They were just the hinges and the grips, his strength came from his chest and his back and up he went again-

-until his chin was raised over the bar, and once it was-

He let go. Fell not far at all, but further than some because he wasn't the largest of men. He hit the ground and bent his knees, left hand snapping down flat on the ground to steady himself-

Now for the second part.

-right hand going for a a throwing dagger from the brace strapped to his thigh. He rose and turned, using the simple movement of the former to draw the dagger from its sheath, gripped by it's small, balanced hilt. As he turned, his vision whirled but he still put up his arm-

-drew back the blade so it was next to his ear when-

-he stopping turning, and the practice dummy was in front of him, mute and faceless and scarred and standing with arms spread as if scorning his mere metal-

Now!

With a grunt and a blur of movement, he flung his arm out towards it. Let go of the knife when it and his hand and his arm eclipsed the dummy-

-blade twirling so fast for a trill that it was almost like a silver disc in the morning air-

THUNK

-before smacking into the torso of the target with a thick, bass sound that made the little killer grin. Hidden by strands of slick hair, his face was one of dark satisfaction. He'd only missed once and struck a limb twice; the other two times had been on target. One trial he knew his practice would mount, and his skill would increase. Then he could target the throat, the eyes, the heart, between the ribs... but for now, getting the damn thing into the trunk of his target was good enough. Especially when they'd likely be coated with something that would draw either quick slumber or quicker death from it.

Ain't done yet, he reminded himself, eyeing the handful of blades sticking out of the abused dummy. His right hand absently patted the brace on his thigh... and found straight, hard metal there. Five thrown. Five to go. Plenty to go.

Kasoria turned his back on the dummy, and reached up for the beam.
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You wouldn't always be so clever or so lucky to fight at your best. A myriad of problems and circumstances could conspire to see you less than fresh to the brawl. Not just wounded or distracted or surprised, but simply tired. Exhausted. Already drained and weakened. Kasoria didn't believe in avoiding that possibility; he trained for it as if such a brawl would be the rule, not the exception.

He lived in a world where death was both unfair and sleepless. That meant you planned for the worst, every waking trial.

His arms hated him. His shoulders despised him. His hands were ready to fall off and find a human who wouldn't abuse them so, but he ignored them all. He ground his teeth until his molars popped. Lifted himself up and clear over the beam, even though everything shook and trembled to do so. Then once he started lowering himself, he let gravity do the work. Let go of the beam before he'd even gone all the way back down to the ground-

-bare fleet slapping against the stones, falling into a crouch, shaky hands going for the ground and his blades just like before-

Just like before. And the time before that. Over and over. Until they're etched into your muscles.

Which were, unfortunately, beginning to betray him.

Kasoria drew and turned in the same motion, though it was less fluid than before. He lurched around rather than spun, hand shaking a little as he raised it to the side of his head. The knife-marked dummy was a pierced and pitted by blades in a half-dozen places. A couple of daggers lay on the cobbles, early misses that made him scowl even now. He flung out his hand and tried to follow the same steps as before, just faster-

Draw. Aim. Snap. Release.

CLANG

"Shite."

The dagger went wide, nicking a wooden arm and then spinning off to clatter into the wall. Kasoria stared at it for maybe the time it took to blink, then he reacted. Because a brawl wouldn't give you the luxury of shaking your head and sighing and kicking the dirt and moaning about you were tired. No, that time would only demand results, and if one avenue was unsuccessful-

You try again until the bastard falls.

-and he lunged forward, low and nasty, legs still as strong as they were a break ago-

-body twisting and pivoting as he got to the dummy, leg coming around in a sweeping kick that would take its legs out, if it wasn't hanging from the wall-

-following it up with a one-two punch to the kidneys as he rose, imagining flesh and soft organs pulped and exploding with pain as he did, finishing with-

-a slashing elbow strike from his left, rising body providing as much speed and power as his swinging arm. There was a hollow crack as bone met wood, and he barely noticed the pain. Just smiled at the sight of the wooden dummy shuddering and jinxing to one side for the moment. Yes, even tired and sweaty and trembling, he could do some damage.

Now he stood still. Enjoyed the luxury of just being so, letting the air fill and leave his lungs, breath after breath. He closed his eyes and eventually flt more beyond the air and sun. Something furry and questioning was at his shins. He looked down and a one-eyed lady looked back at him. The killer snorted and started yanking daggers out of the dummy.

"I know, I know," he muttered back, not immune to the most insidious and unhinged habit of cat owners the world over: talking to creatures that didn't even have voice boxes. "Time for work."

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  • Renown - 5 for training hard under supervision
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    1. Thrown (Throwing Knives): Turning and Throwing
    2. Thrown (Throwing Knives): Release When Hand, Blade, and Target Line Up
    3. Discipline: Sticking With Exercise For Seasons At A Time
    4. Endurance: Fighting Through Exhaustion to Throw Your Blades
    5. Strength: Pull Ups
    6. Tactics: One Stratagem Doesn't Work? Try Another
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