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24th of Ymiden 718

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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24th Trial, Ymiden, Arc 718
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There was nothing fair or chivalrous about it, and that was sort of the point, really. It was just a matter of perspective. To a noble warrior from Rharne or the Eternal Empire, where even those bloodthirsty bastards had a code of conduct, tossing a man down a flight of stairs without so much as a word would be considered the height of contemptible outrage. But to an Etzos guttersnipe like Kasoria, such a luxurious moral quandary was almost an alien concept. Oh, not completely. He was well-read, after all, and old enough to have learned about the different ways of other nations.

He just happened to think those ways were fucking stupid. He was a killer; he killed people. That was his job, his craft, his profession. He enjoyed a good scrap, pitting his skill and strength against a worthy opponent, but when it came to life and death... well, why take the chance? Why have it out with some plate-wearing, sword-swinging veteran of Fuck Knew how many battles in the Eastern Lands, like you were the same?

Kasoria wasn't the same. He didn't dream of being remembered in song or tavern tales or soldier's ballads. He didn't limit and stymie and hamstring himself with rules and codes of conduct when it came to mortal combat. He just wanted to do the job and go home.

So yes, he tossed the cunt down the stairs when he wasn't expecting it and stabbed him through the fucking backbone.

Took timing, though.

The sneak up the stairs was the longest part of the night. It was a brothel, after all: lots of foot traffic, never knew who might be ambling up or down them. So Kasoria kept it quick but careful, until he pressed his back against the wall at the top of them, trying to make his profile as small as he could. It wouldn't make a huge difference when The Moment came, but any advantage he could get, he would take.

His hands were empty He'd need them both for what he had planned. Without looking around, he gestured to the girl, and heard her walk back up the stairs. When she was a foot or two behind him, that's when he turned around. Looked into sullen, angry eyes above a bloody face and whispered, "Make it good."

And didn't she just?

She hollered and she wailed. She cried and she screamed. She cursed and she flung herself into the hallway, a handful of trills shaping her transformation from simmering anger to wild terror. Kasoria had to admit, it was impressive. He listened as she worked her spell. Heard her talk to Memmio, heard him deliver orders in that clipped, commanding tone. Then his feet were pounding down the hallway and Kasoria knew The Moment was on trills away-

When he saw the man at the top of the stairs, he knew that was it. Timing was all about The Moment, however many of them there might be on any particular job. For this one, Kasoria's arms were already moving by the time Memmio was in front of him-

-hands latching onto the sides of his breastplate, under his armpits, whole body pivoting, twisting, bending all muscle and will to heave this hulking bastard down the stairs-

-and then doing it with one leg on the top stair, as he stuck out his other one to trip the fucker up, letting go even as Memmio's stunned face whipped past him-

Then he was just two hundred pounds of metal-encased debris clattering and slamming and hammering down the stairs. Kasoria paused until the first, shattering impact, the one that saw his sword fly away, and then he was moving. Hustling down the stairs one at a time, feet moving fast and faster still, gladius unsheathed as he went-

-another crunch, something breaking, blood splattering the stairs before Memmio came to rest-

Tough fucker.

He was still trying to get up. Two or three trills after landing, with one arm useless and a leg twisted at an agonized angle, and the sellsword was trying to get to his feet. Kasoria found it... pretty impressive, actually. But that didn't stop him from standing over the helpless man, gladius raised high like an over sized dagger. He saw that spot he'd been looking for, above the armored back of the man, right below the head, and as Memmio tried to get up he dropped like a stone alone with the blade-

CRTHUNK

There really was no sound like it. It was wet and dry at once. It was thick and sharp at the same time. Even the feel of it was odd: so much resistance against his grip, almost equal to the steel of the blade, and yet a moment later, once all that pressure had been brought to bear, the gladius went through it like butter. Kasoria knew the backbone was hard, almost as tough as the skull, but it's rounded shape, it's size... it was a hard target. So he needed to be strong and precise but if he was-

It was worth the effort. Feeling one of the links crunch and snap and sever like a chicken bone shattered in half while still encased in fat and meat. The sight of Memmio's body falling into utterly stillness. Not even a twitch or a heave, just a death-like imobility... all save for his head. His face, still flushed and bloody, pumping air into his lungs with frenzied gasps. Trying to talk but suddenly unable to, pain and terror and shock and anger all mingling and congealing together like oils and refuse in a bucket.

Kasoria leaned over, and spoke those four words. He would have liked to say more. But this moment, this feeling... what more could he add to it, than what Memmio was feeling right now.

He twisted the gladius, two-handed, hard as he could. What was neatly severed became utterly ruined, hole ripped open below Memmio's head as he withdrew his sword. Kasoria stood and turned on the corpse of Memmi, storied and seasoned warrior, mercenary and Knight and warrior and lover and hero to drunks and killers and whores and faces that would never see Etzos. He turned and let such a noble soul die on the floor of a fuck-house in the Oh'Pee, and forgot about him.

This is what Etzos does to heroes, boy, he told himself as he started to march back up the stairs, into the hubbub and babble of concerned voices. It chews them up and kills them. Or it makes them villains.
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"Somethin' ain't right out there."

"Oh, you fucking think?!"

Denis Styes was in no mood for some daft sod stating the fucking obvious. Walter was probably just filling the silence, but why would that be something he'd need right now? Both men had blades in their hands - and one of them was fully clothed - but without an enemy, without a target, they were just... waiting for the door to open. Friend or foe, they couldn't tell. Because they couldn't hear the merks.

"They're not out there," Walter hissed, ear to the door, "Not Memmio, not Rubio. After that screaming and shite, it's just the punters and the girls."

"Lucille?"

"Nah, must still be downstairs. Wait... wait, there's something-"

There was a rapid knocking, and a woman's voice. Hesitant, scared, but urgent. "M-M-Mister Styes! You-You need to come out here, there's-there's your men, they're gone!"

Walter snapped his head around and found his boss pulling on his breeches and grabbing his shirt and hefting his short sword all at the same time. Which was rather impressive, really. But he didn't give him any orders, just focused solely on getting his clothes on. The woman he'd been enthusiastically plowing bits before was cowering on the bed, sheets pulled up to her throat like she had any modesty left to protect. Walter couldn't blame her, though. This night was turning from good to ratshit in short order, and she was in the middle of it.

Styes' lieutenant swallowed, and wondered what to do.

"M-Mister Styes? You-You really do need to come out! There's... There's blood down there!"

"Fuck's sake," Walter cursed, and unlocked the door. He opened it a crack and saw a flash of red hair a little bit below his eyes line. "Look, Mister Styes' is-"

CRACK

Should have spoken through the wood, boy.

That was just the opening Kasoria had been waiting for. Literally, in fact. Hammering on a locked door was one thing, and could have taken precious trills to knock down. More importantly, it would have given whoever was behind it all the time they'd need to stick a blade through his chest the moment it was open. But a door even partially open, well... it wasn't a door anymore, was it? Just a hinged piece of wood that could move freely-

-and by Fuck, did it move when Kasoria hurled himself against it from the other side of the hallway, landing foot first against the wood-

-smashing into Walter's face like a bludgeon to the skull, snapping his head back, knocking him flat on his arse-

"Fuck!"

That wasn't from the man with clothes on, Kasoria noted, but the half-naked one next to the bed. The whore screamed and Kasoria ignored them, moving fast and low as Walter tried to get back up. He was up into a sitting position when Kasoria got there, swinging at him with eyes wide and terrified-

-Kasoria's gladius swept down and parried the blow, knocking the blade away, right hand snapping out-

-another punch, nose breaking under his knuckles, making the man dizzy, glassy-eyed, and he didn't retract his fist, instead let his hand open and grip the side of the man's head-

CRACK

-smashing it into the wall and then letting Styes' underboss slide down into brief, blissful, painless unconsciousness. And speaking of the man in question-

"You fucking shit!"

No coward, that's for sure.

Styes flew at him, half-naked and raging and furious and probably knowing he was outmatched. But he didn't care. He knew death when he saw it; recognized a killer there with one goal in mind. Pleading and begging and threats and bribes wouldn't work. They'd just be a waste of breath and an affront to whatever dignity his last trills would have. No, better to go out this way. Swinging and slashing and with a thin wedge of hope-

Coming in hard and fierce, sword slashing down at Kasoria like the wrath of an old god-

CLANG

-stopped by his gladius, both men with their weapons above their heads, one blocking the other-

-Kasoria's left knee immediately hammering up between the older man's legs, knocking him back but not doubling him over. No, he'd had that happen before. After the first dozen times, dozen brawls, one grew what could be called calluses down there. Still fucking hurt, but it didn't stop him. Styes just staggered back and then came in again, thrusting for Kasoria's stomach-

Feint.

-trying to draw his gladius, and Kasoria obliged, free hand darting to his back as he let Styes think he'd won-

"Ha!"

The gangster pulled back his short sword and launched his real attack, a vicious swipe at Kasoria's left side that could have damn-near severed his leg-

But it never landed. His gladius was already swinging out in a silver flash as Styes made his play. Metal clanged on metal again, only this time it wasn't just a block. It was a parry, swords grinding together as Kasoria pushed them up and away, from the right to the left, in a circle, leaving Styes' left side open-

-as his right hand appeared again, filled with his karambit, darting up and then slashing down at Stye's open throat-

The whore screamed as a vicious, sickly ripping sound burst into the air like rotten fruit. Styes' eyes popped as his carotid was torn open, blood painting the blue walls a dark, evil red. He staggered, sword still gripped, but before he could even try to make a dying gesture-

-the karambit flashed again, backhanded, other edge of the weapon slashing open his jugular, yet more blood flowing and with an unholy yell Kasoria disengaged his parry, following the kaeambit with a much larger, much heavier blade-

The whore fainted as she heard that thick, wet, hard sound of a head being taken off at the shoulders. Cleaved and weakened by the karambit, the gladius was more than enough to finish the job. She collapsed onto the soiled sheets at roughly the same moment Styes crumpled onto the carpet, body twitching and hands shaking, like it was anxious to find out where its head had gone.

Walter found out first. He was just coming around as something almost round and oddly familiar rolled over to where he was laying... and looked back at him.

"... f-fucking CUNTSHIT!"

Hmm. New one.

It was hardly a warcry. More an explosion of primal terror that got some modern cursing attached to it. Walter scrambled away from his master's head and didn't even try to find his sword. His body fled but his eyes were fixed, wide and disbelieving, mouth open but teeth clamped shit, bile threatneing to spill out from behind them. Kasoria walked over, taking his time, and decided this was the perfect moment.

"You remember me?"

Walter didn't asnwer. Kasoria rested his foot on the head, and the man eventually looked up.

"Do you. Remember. Me?"

"Y... Yes! The-The-The bar-bartender."

"Good. Remember what offer Vorund made your boss? The new rate?"

"Um... Um... Fuck... Um-"

"I'm not in the mood to wait, boy," the killer said, wiping his blades one by one on the bloody bed sheets, and sheathing... the gladius. But not the other one. Which was flipping over and over in his grip, one end hooked around his thumb, drawing Walter's terrified eyes with the constant movement. "So try harder or-"

"F-Forty percent! W-Was twenty-five, now for-"

"Thirty-five, for you."

"For... what?"

Kasoria smiled. The questions were a means to focus the little louse on the present, not the bloody past. But that last statement, ah, now he could see the man's true nature. Future profits. Future status. Future deals. Even with his face banged up and his master dead and the murderer looming over him, Walter was still open to a new angle. Kasoria took his foot off the head.

"Forty was the offer Vorund made to him. You're the boss now. So for you? Thirty-five. You pay every season, just like Styes. Any bits of work we need done down on your patch, do do for us, just like Styes. One change, though: Lucille doesn't run this place anymore. The redhead, Edri? She does."

"I... Okay. I-I understand."

Kasoria nodded, and felt saying more would be... excessive. He couldn't stay around all night, after all. Not with blood and bodies and people already starting to make their exits from the brothel. He turned on his heel and walked out of the bedroom, leaving whore and headless corpse and heir apparent to... whatever. He really didn't care. But there was one last-

"What in the bloody hells is going on?!"

Ah. Right.

A woman was tramping down the hallway like a force of feminine nature. Stern lines on her face but still radiant with power, with life, with power. The determination and will to turn being a fuck-hole into being a businesswoman, and running it damned well. The scared, milling girls in the hallway parted before Miss Lucille, and she marched by them without so much as a sideways glare. Fixed one on Kasoria instead, walking towards her with his karambit still in hand.

"Are you mad?! This is a brothel! You don't do that business in here!"

Kasoria looked past her. To the woman standing just to her right. With red hair and expectant eyes.

"Oi?! You will damn well listen to-"

He didn't listen. He didn't even slow down. His karambit lashed out like it was part of him, precise and brutal and without remorse. Carotid and jugular, right and left, one and two. Just like he'd practiced at home a thousand times with a wooden dummy. Only now it was an old and venerable woman who was cleaved open instead. Her tirade ceased as her arteries opened. She staggered to the side, shoulder thumping into the wall, out of Kasoria's way.

Who kept moving even as she died behind him, choking out her fury and outrage into bloody froth. He looked at Edri one more time, eyes no different than when he'd talked to her when he was putting his boots back on.

"A deal's a deal. Good luck. Don't fuck it up."

He didn't need to add the for else. The girls and their new madam watched the man go, all but one quaking with fear. They watched until their eyes were useless, so listened to him vanish down the stairs. Edri thought she heard him close the backdoor behind him, too, and then there was movement to her front... and Walter was shaking before her. Face white. Eyes wide, but... thinking once again.

She walked over to him. Face far calmer than his. Until he looked at her and she nodded.

"Time to clean this up. We want to be open for business by tomorrow night."

Walter paused for a long, crucial moment. This could be it, Edri thought. He might just kill me for my betrayal. But that would imply loyalty to Styes, and did he really have it? Or would have have done the same thing? She thought this in those two or three trills, until Walter gave her an answer with the merest look over his shoulder... and then a firm nod.

"Aye. New day. New orders. I'll have some lads cart the bodies away. Put the girls to cleaning."

Edri smiled. "Yes, boss."

Walter smiled back. "On yer way, Miss Edri."
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It never ceases to amaze me and especially here with your novel quality writing. I personally loved this piece, honor and valor who needs it when you have timing and precision. I do say from my last experience reading one of your pieces I must say you've made very good strides and improvements with your npc and how you captured the essence of the ambush was spectaculor.


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Blades (Gladius): Stabbing Through the Spine
Blades (Gladius): Circular Parry
Discipline: Holding Up Your End of The Deal 
Negotiation: Lower Rate To Mollify the New Boss
Stealth: Pressing Yourself to a Wall to Minimize Your Profile
Tactics: Waiting for the Door to Open Before Kicking It Down

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NPC Walter: New Boss of Styes' Firm
Location: Yaralon, City of Mercenaries
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