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8th of Ymiden 718

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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8th Trial, Ymiden, Arc 718
South Ezos, Outer Perimeter
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"Where the fuck is Rhames?"

"Fucked if I know, Stacks."

"The fuck was that?!"

"S-Sorry, boss."

He wasn't a big man, but even Julie knew better than to get it wrong twice. In fact, Julie towered over the other man, topping him by a good half a foot, broader by a good twenty pounds at least... but the other slab of muscle watching the back door? He wasn't his friend. Baz was his name and he'd come up with Stacks, who hated being called that and had a reputation for taking the eyes and ears of people who used it. Usually Julie wouldn't be working for such a fucking loon, a bamhead who liked spilling blood as mich because it got his cock hard as because it paid, but... well, it was a lot of money.

For for only a few trials' work. So know the words, know your job, keep quiet otherwise, and then never even look twice at the little cunt ever again.

"Baz," Stacks growled, rubbing under his nose again, clearly in need of anothr pick-me-up. His long-time partner immediately stiffened to attention. "You hear shite from him?"

"Shoulda' been here, boss. I told him the when and where. Fuck knows where he is."

"Fuck's sake..."

Stacks didn't like unexpected shite like this. Not right before business, and the damned profitable kind, at that. But the suns had vanished, the moons were high, and the revelers were starting to carouse down the streets. Not for any particular ceremony or festival, although those days were always good for a pusher like him. But just... in general. Ymiden was here, the Hot Cycle had arrived! Cold and darkness was banished for another season or two, and the denizens of Etzos were celebrating heat and light and life.

Whatever the fuck ever, Stacks thought, managing to growl even in the confines of his shaved skull. Good a reason as any to get off yer face.

He cursed again, under his breath. Put his hands on his hips and drummed his fingers against his belt, the sword and dirk on display. Down the alley, he could see the street... or a microsm of it. A keyhole snap, a crack through a fence, dozens and hundreds of people going back and forth. Laughter and singing and cursing and all the heady, heaving sounds of a crowd looking to enjoy the night. He'd spent most of the last season putting the word around that come Ymiden, there'd be good product on sale from him. Less cuts, fatter packs, lower prices. Two of those were a flat out fucking lie of course, but they'd come anyway. They'd hear the word, take the bait, and come like good little fishies.

Because he had the Kat, the Score, the Ambie. Fresh from Ne'haer and Fucking Fates, he's sampled them himself. He knew how good the new product was, and how much he would make from the load.

Even more than usual, now he wasn't paying that old cunt Vorund.

Fuck him, he thought for the thousandth time, smirking at the notion of the wrinkled wanker going apeshit over his precious lost "taxes". He's getting old and slow and he's getting squeezed by those cunts in the north. Time to move on, lad. Greener pastures.

"Fuck it," he said, words final and foul at once. He spun back to the big lad he'd got minding the door and jabbed a finger under his chin. "Youse do yer job. Remember the knock, aye?"

"Twice, then once, then four times."

"Good. Check 'em all before they come in." Stacks spat to one side, barely missing Julie's boot. "Rhames don't wanna be on time, then he don't wanna get paid. Fuck him..."

Julies nodded like a broken toy and kept doing so until Stacks and his twice-as-large friend were back through the door. Then he relaxed and shook his head, tipping it back briefly to stare at the stars. Bright and sharp to his eyes, even with all the fetid foulness of Etzos spewed up into the sky, trying to choke them away.

"Five bloody trials," he whispered to himself, hearing the first footsteps coming. "Five trials, five hundred nels, and you're done."

He sighed, wishing he'd learned to go math or some shit, rather than just big a big, strong, dumb sod, and puffed himself up a little as the first furtive customer arrived. Had to look the part, after all.

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Rhames hadn't forgotten. He had't been sidetracked or distracted or, as Stacks thought for a brief moment, got himself perished by Vorund or some other big fish for the crime of a little free enterprise. Quite the opposite, in fact. If that had been the worry, he wouldn't have been standing in an alleyway a few streets from where Julie was doing his job, sucking on a cheap, chopped-up Euphoria taper, half-coughing the blue smoke into the air.

Something moved behind him. But before his ears caught the scrape and shuffle, his nostrils flared and his face crumpled.

What the fuck is-

The little man behind him smelled like shit. His clothes did, at any rate. Cat piss and dog droppings, enough to make Rhames back up a step and cover his face. Cold, calm, watchful eyes surveyed him from under a nest of hair that would have looked fitting on a baboon. He wasn't drunk, or swaying, nor did he have that bowl in his left hand extended for alms. He was just there.

"Fucking hells, mate, the fuck did you-"

"Silver for snow."

"Wh... What was that?"

The little man repeated it, eyebrows kicked up just a touch. Whether or not Rhames got the gesture, he probably got the way he dragged out the words a second time, as if talking to a child. "Silver. For. Snow."

Rhames licked his lips and nodded. That was the code. He wasn't told who would be meeting him, just that they would be meeting him. Someone that Vorund would send to handle Stacks and his stupid fucking idea. Handle everyone around him, too. The threat of which had motivated Rhames to drastically weigh his loyalties to a shiv-happy little cunt like Stacks against his own survival. It didn't take long. He'd walked into the right bar, told them that someone was being a cheeky cunt, and he was told, eventually, to be there, and waiting.

And not leave any fucking thing out, or they'd have his balls in a bag along with Stacks'.

"Y-Y'know the Ne'haer place just around the corner? Smiling Sam owns it?" A nod, and he continued. "S-Stacks is runnin' outta there. Got a couple of lads watching the back door, making sure people have coin and no weapons. Then-Then him an' a couple of others'll be downstairs, in the basement. Doling out the goods."

"How do you get in?"

Rhames blinked. That... That didn't sound like a drunk, or a junkie, or any vagrant he'd ever met. Sounded more like a teacher, or even a nob. Words clipped, accent precise, like he respected words enough to say them properly. Confusion swam in his eyes for long enough that the little man frowned, and he shook the thought away.

"Er-Er, yeah, sorry, er, it's a knock. Big man, Julie, he frisks ya, then he gives a two-one-four knock on the door. That's when they let you in."

"Why not just pay through the door?"

"Er... there ain't a slot in it. It's... just a door."

Kasoria blinked. Very slowly, and very catlike. Some days, he understood why the furry little buggers seemed to wear such contempt for his species. All this intelligence and ability and mastery of both creation and destruction, and they were still so fucking dumb sometimes. All the care that Stacks had taken, spreading word of his new business to just the right people; so well that Vorund had only just learned of it. Then staying underground for half a season, all to ensure he couldn't be tracked by all the eyes Vorund had on the street. And then, when it came to a perfect, secure locale for his business... he couldn't even find one that had a proper fucking slot on the door.

You get the money and the order, you knock, relay both through the slot, they give you the goods, you pass it on, customer leaves. Door never needs to be opened, place stays secure. And the little twat didn't even have the wit to do that.

"So... ah... that's... that's it, right?"

Kasoria turned his gaze back to the young, twitchy man. The traitor. The betrayer. Who'd handed his old pal to Bangun Vorund for a purse of gold and a promise of safety. Remembering the former, Kasoria pulled a purse from his pocket and held it out. His own payment from his master would be forthcoming, under the same conditions: do the job first, then you get paid. Rhames had done the job, but as he reached for the purse-

There was a blur, a slap, and a cry of coins shaken in a purse. Rhames nearly jumped in the air as the beggar's other hand snapped out like a snake's tongue, and grabbed his hand, pressing it around his reward. He swallowed and looked into Kasoria's eyes, sweat trickling down his face. Face going paler, paler, until it was like the moon dragged low and given the face of a man.

One not far from pissing himself. Good. Message sent.

"Good work."

He let go and Rhames took off. Kasoria could see the logic in killing the man - a traitor once will be thus twice, after all - but Vorund was still seeing further ahead than simple street mentality. It went deeper than that. If people knew of treachery or sedition against Bangun Vorund, he wanted them encouraged to come forward. Coin pressed into their hands, safety guaranteed to them and theirs, and bloody vengeance visited upon only the guilty. Now Rhames would spread the word, the message, the warning... and the generosity, the mercy, of Bangun Vorund.

Kasoria started walking, sliding into his shabby shuffle as he broke into the street. Shouldered and shoved and ridiculed by the crowds, hand flapping weakly in front of him with his little bowl.

Making his way towards the smell of Ne'haer food.
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Sometimes it didn't have to be complicated. Sometimes the simple, direct solution was the one called for. But you needed to get close enough to use it, of course. That's when the pantomime came in, and you only got that by watching, learning, and being willing to make yourself look like a bloody idiot.

Fortunately, all three were within his range.

"Fuckin hells, mate, I can smell youse from here!"

Julie pulled up his shirt and tried to cover his nose as best he could as something ragged and rancid and lurching like a one-legged seagull came tottering up the alley. Fuck, he didn't need this. Fucking derelict like this, stinking to high heaven, would chase away all the likely punters. No-one liked to score from a place that smelled like the inside of a dead whale. But he still managed to could and hold out a hand, remembering his job and not acting like a cunt while doing so.

"Look, mate," he said as the little man stopped in front of him, waving a begging bowl in front of his face. "I 'aven't got any - kf! - coin, and me boss, he won't-"

Then the bowl dropped. Not by accident. By design. That alone was enough to make Julie frown, and the words stopped-

-as the bowl fell-

-and there was silver that was not silver under it-

-but before copper and wood could clatter onto the cobbles the beggar moved and he was-

SHHHK

Not a beggar. Too smooth. Too precise. Curved blade held like a sword, sweeping horizontally like a farmer slicing a fat pile of grapes from off the vine. Only it wasn't grapes, though what came out was gushing and red. Julie's mouth worked again and he felt that sheer, bright pain in his throat. Shoved a hand out of instinct into his thick neck and... and it was wet. And boiling hot. Steaming, almost. He pulled it away and his hand was gone, just gone, drenched and vanished in sticky, shiny blood and fuck he could see his face in it and fuck it was still going and gushing and-

Kasoria's backhand widened the cut across his throat into a gash. Transformed the spray into a torrent. He stepped back and gone was the stagger and quake of a beggar. He was light and quick as a bird, but not enough to avoid the spray that painted his shoes. He grimaced and watched Julie drop to his knees, joints cracking hard onto the cobbles but he was past caring. He was too busy uselessly pressing both hands to his throat, not even slightly stemming the river of crimson gushing down his chest, soaking into his trousers... starting to pool on the floor.

The assassin cocked his head, and heard no screams. Just gurgling. He bent down and picked up his bowl, and pocketed it. A fine distraction, he thought. Just a beggar with his bowl; who would think to wonder what was under it? The man tried to speak and Kasoria just blinked.

What words would they exchange, after all? What could be said to justify or reverse what had been done?

Big Julie fell forwards and lay still. Kasoria knew he wouldn't be getting up again. He stepped over the twitching corpse and rapped on the door, just as he'd been shown. Twice... then once... then four times.

He stepped back, a ragged little man with bloody shoes and a bloody blade and a face carved from ice and granite. Closed his eyes and listened. A chair scraping across stone. Two voices. One older, deeper. The other sleepy, talking with a yawn. Bolts being pulled from the door. The lock catching, lifting.

His eyes snapped open as the light from inside hit his face, and then he moved.

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"Whadaya nee-"

The opening trills were when he did some of his best work. Those frantic, speechless, stunned, frozen handful of moments where people simply had to process what was going on. But that was because they were not the architects of that time. They simply didn't understand such madness, such violence, exploding around them. The old and grizzled, they reacted faster. They knew the music if not the steps, for all dances were different. But the architect... he was always a step ahead.

"Fuck-!"

And Kasoria showed no mercy, for none had been allowed him.

The moment the door opened, he reared back and launched a kick powered by his hips and back, just under the handle. Physics did most of his job, not to mention Larry simply not expecting to have the door break his nose like a bludgeon. He'd lurched up from his seat, put down his supper, and was already trotting out the same question he'd been asking all night. All quiet and reasonable.

The boy hadn't even looked up when he'd heard the knock. He was just a runner, after all. A human hunting dog, carrying coin down to the basement, and returning with vials and packages and rude little envelopes. He'd get up once he heard the order, he decided. For now, he wanted to finish picking his toes with-

CRACK

"Sh-Shit!"

Then the door exploded inward and Larry's head snapped back. His nose was a crushed, ugly, red-spitting smear across his face. He tumbled back into his chair, blinded and blinking and groping to stay on his feet. Samson jumped up and his mouth opened to curse again, and before he could-

Something small and hairy and smelly darted through the doorway. Samson's eyes widened as he just... did it. He didn't posture or vow, make speeches or cry out to whatever he worshiped. He just swept in through the door he'd kicked open, black eyes focused on the stricken Larry, and only then did Samson notice the curved blade in his hand, already dripping with blood-

SHKKKK

"N-No-!"

Freshened anew as the stranger swiped at the side of Larry's neck. The blade was a queer one, twisted down and yet forwards, and Samson's face paled down to chalk as he saw the side of Larry's neck gashed open as if struck by an ax. Blood sprayed out and his eyes popped, slapping a hand to an artery that was severed no matter how hard he pressed and-

SHKKKK

The stranger finished him with a backhand. Slashing sideways across the front of his throat, and now it seemed Larry barely had a neck left. It all seemed ripped up and bleeding and gaping to Samson's young eyes. He reached out to the boy, who just sank down as his legs failed him. Knife tumbling from his hands and clattering and the noise, the noise-

Drew that fucking bloody thing in the doorway. Who marched over him without even watching Larry die, the old boy just hissing his life out in the back of this dirty sodding spoon. Already forgotten. A problem solved and consigned to history. The stranger walked over to him, instead, and he lunged towards him-

Stopped. Just before his face.

"You get one chance," said a voice as far and cold as the stars. "How many are there? And where's Stacks?"

"He-He-He-He's the-the-there! D-Down there!" Samson didn't so much as point down the stairs as he did flail in the general direction of them. Kasoria flicked a glance their way and then looked back to the boy. "H-He's... He's-"

"Hurry the fuck up, boy."

"B... Bazza. Big Bazza, he's-he's down with him. And, ah, ah, ah, couple of other lads, I think. J-Just helpers, n-not muscle." Samson managed to smile hopefully, desperately. He tapped his chest, almost clawed at his own breast. "Like m-me, see? I-I-I'm just a run-"

SHUNK

Mercy that night was not life, but swift death. That was what Kasoria granted. His arm drew back and slammed forward, punch capped by the cruel, curved karambit. The point slammed into Samson's eye and popped it, spewing effluence over his hands as he kept going-

-blade ripping through socket and muscle and brain in a broken trill. Before the boy could scream. Mouth twitching and working. Words stumbling, half-formed and never to be translated by any caring mind, still trying... failing... until he ripped the blade free, and Samson slid to his peace on the floor.

Stacks wanted freedom. To prosper and to thrive. He'd gained it. Just like he'd lost the protection of a master, the moment he made that decision. Kasoria looked down those stairs and heard the echoes of chatter and laughter. His nose wrinkled at the scent of a dozen herbs and concoctions, all designed to warp the mind and fool the senses.

The karambit twirled around his thumb, then slapped back into place. There was no such thing as free, in their world. Everyone paid their dues. One way or another.

He started down the stairs, into the darkness, leaving naught but the torn and stiffening in his wake.

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Blades (Karambit): Ideal Close-Quarters Weapon
Blades (Karambit): Long Enough to Impale the Brain (Through the Eye)
Deception: Using a Begging Bowl to Hide a Weapon
Intelligence: Using Code to Identify Yourself
Intimidation: Holding On to Send a Message
Intimidation: Using an Almost-Strike to Break a Victim

NPC Bangun Vorund: Knows How to Both Intimidate, and Encourage
NPC Bangun Vorund: Shows Mercy, But Only With Reason
NPC Rhames: Small Fry, But Smart Enough to Know Not To Cross Vorund
NPC Stacks: Freelance Dealer, Nutjob, Former "Client" of Vorund

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Renown: N/A - I wanted to give him renown for letting the rat run free, but it was in the name of Vorund.

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Oh man, oh man, oh man. I was looking forward to this thread all evening, and you didn't disappoint (like you've ever disappointed lol). First? That song was 10/10 prime haha. You set everything up so efficiently, portraying Stack's subtle nervous boredom and the mundanity of the situation as according to the others. As always, excellent mix of dialogue, description, and action - oh man, action. So first, never before have I been so excited to see training solos pay off haha. I was sad he didn't do the whole 4 step strike, but man. When you see practice pay-off, it's really, and I mean really satisfying. Also, I definitely out loud shouted "No!" when he killed the runner haha. I don't know what I was expecting, but I just so low-key thought he'd live haha. Man. While I'm sure there's stuff you personally work on improving with every post, you are what people should work on aspiring towards. Very much looking forward to the conclusion!
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