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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Try it till it sticks!
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Tactics: A winning plan from failed attempts
  • Hunting: Raptors used to get prey from above
  • Alchemy: Quick drying glue when exposed to heat
  • Alchemy: Solvents made for different glues
  • Chemistry: A mix of two metals can result in corrosive acid
  • Chemistry: Use an alkaline solution to neutralize acids
Loot: These things were used for another thread, the money stuff were all concluded in that one.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -

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Toan
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Step One: Gathering Intel
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Severely lacking moral convictions
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Pick pocketing: Sizing Up Your Mark
  • Pick pocketing: Timing is Key
  • Pick pocketing: Grabbing Whatever is Easy
  • Pick pocketing: Distractions Are Everything
  • Intelligence: Paying Well for Information
  • Intelligence: Rumor and Gossip Are Useful
Non-skill Related
  • Personal: Lacking In Morality
  • Etzos: The Commercial Circle
  • Quest: The Plot to Ruin Negial the Black Guard
  • Faction: The Black Guard
  • Etzos: The Citadel
Loot: Up to the reviewer I believe
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Neeeeegative, get me to infamy with them purse nabbing skills
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Toan
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Step Two: A Door and a Window
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: The plot thickens
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Navigation: Remembering Paths Within the Underground
  • Deception: Avoiding Honesty As Much as Possible
  • Deception: Sharing Only What Needs to Be Known
  • Negotiation: Bartering For a Fair Cut
  • Negotiation: Learning to Sweeten Deals
  • Negotiation: Taking Initiative With Business
Non-skill Related
  • Personal: Asking An "Old Friend" For Favors
  • Etzos: The Underground
  • Dallen: Interested In Your Arrangements
  • Dallen: Is Invested in You
  • Sleep Rot: A Drug Meant For Sleeping
Loot: 1 Map of the Citadel, 1 Map of the Underground
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Toan
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: The Heist: Ellen'wyn's Pendant
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mayhem ensues
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Deception: Spiking Drinks With Drugs
  • Deception: Using Innocents To Do Your Dirty Work
  • Acting: Playing It 'Natural' In Stressful Situations
  • Acting: Remember To Look Uninterested
  • Acting: Smiling Helps Out A Lot
  • Intelligence: Whores Are Reliable Sources Also
Non-skill Related
  • Personal: Remembering the Plan
  • Location: The Cow and Corset (Etzos)
  • Quest: The Plot to Ruin a Black Guard Completed
  • Eztos: The Hall of Rule and Reprimand
  • Quest: Ellen'wyn's Pendant Complete
Loot: +Black Guard Attire, -1 Map of the Citadel, + A handful of accessories: A few rings and pendants, + Ellen'wyn's Pendant
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Drugging and shaming a Black Guard, stealing his uniform, breaking an entry, lying to an officer, entrapping said officer, and evading the law.... Somebody's being a bad boy in this thread.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Celeste Andaris
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Blueprints for the Future
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Celeste Andaris

Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Consider your audience when choosing your clothing
Intelligence: Gather background information on other nobles
Intelligence: Observe, question and then observe more.
Intelligence: Casual questions
Politics: Use the past as a means of connecting
Politics: Never miss an opportunity to point out your strengths
Politics: Never miss an opportunity to point out another's failings
Politics: The art of the subtle dig

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes


Xander Andaris

Knowledge:
Etiquette: Small talk
Etiquette: It is acceptable to tease friends, just a little
Etiquette: Come to greet old friends
Etiquette: Do not interrupt the flow of conversation
Politics: The secret to a good entrance
Politics: Maintain alliances
Politics: Show interest in the hobbies of your allies
Politics: Reaffirm old alliances.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
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Celeste Andaris
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: My Frustrations
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Discussion about a very difficult childhood.
Requested Rewards:

Xander Andaris

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge max)
Discipline: Not showing your frustrations until you are alone.
Discipline: Not shouting when you really, really want to.
Discipline: Walking away rather than saying something you'll regret
Discipline: Holding on to your temper
Discipline: Focus on one piece at a time, when the big picture is too much.
Politics: An outdated system
Politics: Like a game of poker?
Politics: Do you have to know the rules of the game to play it?
Politics: Playing along can destroy you
Politics: The current system is destroying Rynmere
Politics: Politics can lead to bloodshed

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes


Celeste Andaris

Knowledge: (6 posts = 11 knowledge max)
Discipline: Not showing your frustrations even when you are alone.
Discipline: Not shouting when you really, really want to.
Discipline: Not walking out, or saying something you'll regret
Discipline: Holding on to your temper
Etiquette: Listen to his frustration
Intelligence: Observe others to learn their "tells"
Politics: Sometimes, you have to point out flaws
Politics: Like a game of poker
Politics: You have to know the rules of the game to play it
Politics: Playing along is being smart
Politics: Politics can minimise bloodshed

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes

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Virikai Talius
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Making the Grade
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: (None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge (Skills):
  • Medicine: Medicinal Properties of Herbs and Plants in Herbalism
    Medicine: Decoctions in Herbalism
    Medicine: Infusions in Herbalism
    Medicine: Tinctures in Herbalism
    Medicine: Using the Whole Plant in Herbalism
    Research: Ask Questions of Lecturers
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Something positive for being a Teacher's Pet?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Virikai Talius
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: An Unknown Booked Conversation
City/Area: Viden Academy, Viden
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge (Skills):
  • Etiquette: Polite Civility
    Politics: Acquiescing an Argument
    Politics: Aristocrats Must Marry Well
    Politics: Family Matters are Private
    Politics: Remember Your Station
    Politics: Respect the Will of Your Father
    Research: Productive Use of Resources
    Research: Time Management
Knowledge (Other):
  • Raven Talius: Sister
    Raven: Dedicated to her Studies
    Raven: Spirited
    Raven: Studies Lingistics
    Raven: Will Not Accept her Status
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Tio Silver
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tio's Raging Giant Snake
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence against snakes.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Fieldcraft: Pitfall traps
Fieldcraft: Dangerous creatures live in caves
Ranged Combat: Throwing a javelin
Riding: Holding on to a horse for dear life
Riding: Being the bait
Riding: Outrunning a giant snake


Loot:
- 1 Scalv Ziemia Fang
- 1 Scalv Ziemia Eye
- 12 Scalv Ziemia Scales
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: However much seems relevant for hunting a giant snek.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Vorval
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: (Bad Business)
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City/Area: (Etzos)
Notes/Warnings: (Foul Language, Violence)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management; Dont Do More For Less

Business Management; Make Damn Well Sure You Have The Payroll.

Business Management; If coins are not available take what you can get.

Business Management; Looking at the bigger picture and taking losses for future gains.

Leadership; Taking charge and coming up with a plan.

Leadership; Helping a side tracked partner through troubled water so they may continue with the task.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: (Nupe)
Fame: Unsure
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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