Review Request 2.1.1

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Xander Andaris
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Astedia] To protect
City/Area: Rynmere, Astedia
Notes/Warnings: Violence but nothing graphic really
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (longsword): Search for gaps in plate armour
Blades (longsword): Use force of arms and legs in a lunge/thrust
Blades (longsword): Behind the knee and under the arms are a good place to strike plate armour
Tactics: Make sure to appoint Sub-commanders
Tactics: Plan you attack ahead of time
Tactics: Take into consideration the climate and season

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, enforce a city law (+2), Kill a bandit x2 (Okay smuggler but Bandit I would say is close enough, +6) so +8 fame
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Thread Name: Relax, you're with good people now.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Surgery: Examining the physical changes to a mutant
  • Medicine: Mutation effects on the human body
  • Alchemy: Determining the use of a mutant's physical changes
  • Etiquette: Humanize the other party
  • Negotation: Not something for nothing
  • Storytelling: A young child's account of events
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: Not really sure on this one? Its something good but involves not so good people.
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -
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Sintih
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Meeting the Oakleigh Venoras
City/Area: Duke's Estate, Oakleigh, Eastern Settlements, Rynmere
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Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Tristan Venora

SKILL KNOWLEDGES--
Etiquette: Pointing at people and asking "what" they are is impolite!
Etiquette: Introducing people
Etiquette: Offering your guests something to drink
Politics: My appointment is controversial!
Politics: Getting to know your subjects better is a good idea
Sculpting: Making a realistic sculpture

OTHER KNOWLEDGES--
Atolini: Can be kind of rude sometimes
Hart: Good with people
NPC: Iemes, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Gallien, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Argun Doghar, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Thetfretr, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
Thetfretr: Deaf
NPC: Aukey Navok, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards

Hart

SKILL KNOWLEDGES--
Etiquette: Memorizing names
Etiquette: Recognizing your station
Persuasion: Knowing when to concede a point
Persuasion: Being empathetic
Drawing: Sketching with charcoal
Drawing: Drawing from life
Drawing: Speed drawing
Drawing: Starting with vague shapes to indicate a subject's form
Drawing: Refining detail from memory

OTHER KNOWLEDGES--
PC: Atolini Venora
PC: Sintih
NPC: Iemes, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Gallien, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Argun Doghar, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
NPC: Thetfretr, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
Thetfretr: Deaf
NPC: Aukey Navok, one of the Oakleigh bodyguards
Ulehi: The sound of the Yludih language

Sintih

SKILL KNOWLEDGES--
Etiquette: Maneuvering other people's family relations
Language: Common Sign
Language: Common Sign: Hard to keep up with a conversation
Language: Common Sign: Uses hands instead of words

OTHER KNOWLEDGES--
Iemes (NPC): Qi'ora
Iemes (NPC): From Nashaki
Iemes (NPC): Former Knight
Iemes (NPC): Thinks he's a ladykiller
Iemes (NPC): Worships Zanik
Iemes (NPC): Has no problem with Atolini's behaviour
Gallien (NPC): From Oakleigh
Gallien (NPC): Son of Heran Dreim
Gallien (NPC): Knows his way around.
Argun (NPC): Former arena fighter
Argun (NPC):
Thetfretr (NPC): You can call him Thet
Thetfretr (NPC): Used to work for the Iron Hand
Thetfretr (NPC): Deaf
Thetfretr (NPC): Wants to spread sign language to the Venoras.
Aukey (NPC): Former mercenary
Aukey (NPC): Oldest of the Sinra bunch
Aukey (NPC): Met U'frek once on the road.
Hart: Tristan's body double?
Hart: Tristan's brother
Hart: Interested in sign language
Hart: Not a Venora
Hart: Qy'ihadi by last name
Hart: Doesn't see himself as important enough
Hart: Interested in U'frek
Tristan: Artist
Tristan: Curious of everyone
Tristan: Controvorsial appointment as Duke
Tristan: Interested in sign language
Tristan: Worships Zanik
Tristan: Made a Sessfiend statue

Loot: A long term, stable job?
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Tristan: Hiring a company of guards (as opposed to just one of them)? Showing of a masterpiece of art?
Sintih: Getting hired by a Duke? Running a business (it is part of Sin's business to talk with clients)? Supporting a popular cause (for Rynmere)? Opposing a popular cause (For Oakleigh)?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Velaine Krome
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Chrysalis
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Velaine Krome
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
  • Discipline: Composing Yourself in the Face of Anxiety
    Discipline: Unflinching Before an Intimidating Man
    Politics: Pushing Aside Your Needs for the Family
    Politics: Improvising during Negotiations
    Politics: Nel for Marriage
    Politics: Being Blunt Works Too
    Politics: Knowing When to Back Down
    Politics: Joining of House Krome and House Endor
    Psychology: Reading the Mother and Son Relationship
    Psychology: Alcohol Dulls Your Mind
    Etiquette: Playing the Proper Noblewoman
    Etiquette: Excusing Yourself Before Getting Too Intoxicated
    Leadership: Taking Your Marriage Negotiations in Your Own Hands
    Leadership: Standing Up to Your Mother
Non-Skill Knowledges:
  • Nathaniel Endor: Not Unlike a Bear
    Nathaniel Endor: Foreman
    Nathaniel Endor: Scarred Hands
    Nathaniel Endor: Thinks You’re Unique
    Nathaniel Endor: Your Betrothed
    Maderson Endor: Fond of Her Son
    House Endor: Solution to Krome’s Problems
    House Endor: Offers Nel for Your Hand in Marriage
    House Endor: Brutal Mines
    House Endor: Uses Criminals as Miners
Loot: Nope!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah!
Fame: Positive, maybe? Being betrothed and all?
Collaboration: Yeap!
Magic EXP: No
Nathaniel Endor
Requested Rewards:
Requested Skill Knowledges:
  • Politics: Negotiating a Betrothal
    Politics: Being a Part of Negotiations
    Politics: The Benefits of House Endor's Mines
    Politics: House Krome has Furs and Men
    Politics: Aligning Houses Together
    Politics: Marrying for the Good of Your Family
    Business Management: Explaining the Business to Another
    Business Management: Trading Money for Power
    Business Management: Mining and How it Aids Rynmere
    Etiquette: The Formal Bow
    Etiquette: Acknowledging Your Elders
    Etqiuette: Excusing One's Self
    Psychology: Assessing the Mother/Child Relationship
    Seduction: Proximity to a Woman
Requested Misc. Knowledges:
  • House Krome: Lady Titania Velaine Krome
    House Krome: Baroness Sophia and Baron Cameron
    House Krome: Travel is 8 Trials
    Velaine Krome: Hates the Name Titania
    Velaine Krome: Betrothed to Nathaniel Endor
    Velaine Krome: Lightweight Drinker
    Velaine Krome: Not an Agreeable Woman
    Velaine Krome: Not Disappointing
    Location: Fort Krome
Loot: Nope!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah!
Fame: Positive, maybe? Being betrothed and all?
Collaboration: Yeap!
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Just after, just before
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none.

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skills:
Cooking: Don't put tomatoes in a cast iron pan (or pot!)
Discipline: Sitting still
Psychology: Relationships are weird
Psychology: Relationships have rules
Rhetoric: The Monkey Analogy
Arlo
Caregiving: Dealing with a difficult patient
Cooking: Barley and Mushroom Soup
Cooking: Chicken Broth
Cooking: Add meat to soup for extra flavour
Cooking: Don't cook tomatoes in a cast iron pan
Logistics: Planning for an absence
Persuasion: Backup is good
Psychology: Relationships are weird
Psychology: Relationships have rules

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yeppers
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 107
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Warren
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Profession: Bounty Hunter
Renown: 35
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Money's Worth
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Warren
Skill Knowledge:
Negotiation: Offer Manual Labor In Exchange For Free Transportation
Unarmed Combat: How To Disarm Someone With A Knife
Navigation: Never Take Shortcuts Unless You Know Where You’re Going
Negotiation: Sometimes, You’ll Never Win
Detection: Spotting A Familiar Face Through One’s Peripherals
Caregiving: Laying Down The Ground Rules
Resistance: High Tolerance For Alcohol
Gambling: How To Play Poker
Gambling: Knowing When To Raise and Fold
Detection: Knowing When You’ve Caused A Tense Situation
Unarmed Combat: Using Momentum To Pin An Opponent
Unarmed Combat: Wait Them Out, They’ll Get Tired
Unarmed Combat: How To Roll An Opponent Into A Pin
Strength: Dodging A Wrathful Naerikk
Endurance: Using Your Strength For Long Periods of Time

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: City of Independence
Lianna: Warren Is A Caretaker To Her
Lianna: Warren Is A Protector To Her
Navyri: Now A Winged Monstrosity
Navyri: Has No Family
Navyri: A Selfish, Wrathful Individual
Navyri: A Good Hostess

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Scratch marks on his cheek - 10 Trials
Fame: -4 For causing a scene.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Navyri
Skill Knowledge:
Deception: Pretending To Drink Alcohol
Deception: Lying About Who You Know
Discipline: Try Not To Slam Doors
Gambling: Keep Track of Cards Played
Resistance: Liquor Is More Potent Than Ale
Resistance: The Heat Of Alcohol in Your Stomach
Resistance: Feeling Light-headed From Good Bud
Unarmed Combat: The Element of Surprise
Unarmed Combat: Aim for the Face
Unarmed Combat: The Back of The Knee is Vulnerable
Unarmed Combat: How To Resist A Strong Grip
Strength: Pushing Back Against a Stronger Opponent
Strength: Necessary for Wrestling
Endurance: Getting Pinned Repeatedly
Endurance: Having Your Wings Stepped On

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Warren Kade: Cares for Lianna
Warren Kade: Does Not Want to Get Married
Warren Kade: A Terrible Bounty Hunter
Warren Kade: The Most Considerate Asshole
Warren Kade: Enjoys Shots
Warren Kade: Likes to Gamble
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe a few bruises - 5 trials
Fame: +2 For Good Hosting, -5 For Attacking A Man In His Room!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In the middle of the night, I go walking in my sleep
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: none.

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skills:
Fieldcraft: Keeping the camp warm with yellow dragon wood
Fieldcraft: Wrapping up against the cold
Meditation: Try to find the space of inner calm
Meditation: Hard to meditate when you're warm, comfortable and tired.
Arlo
Skills:
Endurance: Sudden cold is a shock
Investigation: Putting together historical clues
Investigation: Identifying patterns of behaviour
Storytelling: Giving a flippant overview.
Storytelling: Provide a summary of important points
Storytelling: The tale of your meeting with Cassion

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 111
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Nightshade Eld
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Profession: The Best Hero
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Unbearable
City/Area: Outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I fought a bear. Nothing graphic. But I fought a bear. Job thread!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Getting the Enemy to Kill Themselves
Blades: Feather Blades
Blades: Feather Blades are Good for Trapping the Enemy
Field Craft: Making Bear Jerky
Shield Combat: Wing Armor
Shield Combat: Careful Not to Hurt Yourself on Wing Armor


Loot: Roughly Cut Bear Pelt. 260 Pounds of Bear Jerky.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruising from getting basically punched. By a bear.
Fame: +1 Good Deed.
+2 Kill a Monster (I'm counting the bear as a monster)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 106
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Nightshade Eld
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Lost without a Map
City/Area: Outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledge-
Cartography: Protecting Maps Properly
Cartography: Working on a Foggy day is Hard
Cartography: Knowing Direction by Instinct
Cartography: Making Stuff Up is a Bad Idea
Flying: Fog makes Wings Damp
Flying: Fog is the Bane of Flight

Loot: Naaaah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: I don't think so, but if you see any I won't turn it down.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 83
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Darcyanna Venora
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Profession: It's all too much for me
Renown: 121
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Goner
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Musical Instrument (Piano): Playing your own compositions
Musical Instrument (Piano): How to play quietly for ambience
Musical Instrument (Piano): How to play for dancing
Musical Instrument (Piano): Keeping three-time
Politics: Listening to the boring stories to keep up appearances
Medicine: Reevi is an excellent muscle relaxant

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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