Review Request Thread 2.1.8

[Cervantez]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: ☠ Sword in the Bone ☠ Ch.4
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes: Keep critique to the story please
Requested Rewards:

Negotiation: Explaining what you want
Negotiation: Dealing with difficult people
Socialization: Dealing with the people of your city
Detection: Noticing when something is off
Logistics: Preparing for a perilous journey
Mounts{Massibex}: Fitting armor to your Hound

Loot:
- box of 20 throwing knives
- Chanfron, criniere, croupiere, flanchard, peytral all of good quality & a caparison for Njama
- 5x Ivorian Kora Sap, 2x Whitemoss, & a medkit
- Deducting 347gn from the coin purse

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (No)

[Zana]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Encounter With A Corpse
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Dead man, poisoned rodents.

Requested Rewards:

Doran

Knowledge:
Chemistry: An embalming agent prevents decomposition
Chemistry: Determining calcium content
Medicine: Wear protective gloves when examining a dead body
Medicine: Don't touch your face while wearing contaminated gloves
Medicine: Examining a dead body
Medicine: Some beneficial substances can be lethal in higher doses
Medicine: There are some things medicine can't fix
Poisons: Rubberlegs
Poisons: Most poisons eventually wear off
Research: Using lab animals to test a potion
Research: Using several test subjects to make sure something isn't coincidence

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Zana

Knowledge:
Alchemy: Can create antidotes
Alchemy: Primers can be a matter of taste
Alchemy: Different types of the same substance (eg: milk) might be more or less effective
Alchemy: Test and re test
Chemistry: PH levels are a fundamental
Chemistry: Determining calcium content with acid
Chemistry: Always wear protective clothing, even if it isn't fashionable
Poisons: Rubberlegs
Poisons: Most poisons eventually wear off
Poisons: Dosage can be lethal or non lethal
Poisons: Test poisons - and antidotes - on creatures you don't like.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes please
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: N/A

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: III. Gentleman Callers
City/Area: Bolstrum, south of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some bad language, not much (relatively)

Moving along! Time to be all sneaky again...

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Detection: The Sounds and Smells of a Bath Being Run
Lock Picking: Scrubbing Pins to Align Them
Lock Picking: Layout of a Pin Tumbler Lock
Lock Picking: Start with the Furthest Pin in a Lock, then Move Backwards
Philosophy: "A Thing Unfinished Has No Worth"
Stealth: Cast No Shadows

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Yanahalqah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Alice in Waterstreet
City/Area: Andaris, Waterstreet
Notes/Warnings: Violence.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Dagger: Downward stab
Blades: Dagger: Targeting the back of the neck
Blades: Dagger: Severing the spinal cord
Strength: Using enough force to crush the windpipe
Strength: Putting your strength into a blow
Strength: keeping someone pinned to the ground
Intelligence: comparing multiple sources to determine if information is accurate
Unarmed combat: redirecting a stabbing attack

Loot:
Renown: Probably
Collaboration: (Yes)

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tired of Sleeping
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
None.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Max
Collaboration: Nope

[Max]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Where's Francis?!
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Lots of violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Repeating the Question
Interrogation: Cooperate or Die
Interrogation: Stating What You Already Know
Interrogation: Using Others to Bait a Response
Interrogation: Explaining What Will Happen If You Don't Cooperate
Tactics: Burning a Ship to Send a Message

Non-skill:
Spiteful Acid: Burns the Face of Those Worthy Your Ire

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor
Renown: Small. Beating a crew of men.
Collaboration: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: IV. Silk and Parchment
City/Area: Bolstrum, south of Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Some foul language and bloodshed (heh, pun sorta intended...)

Sometimes, I need to remind people that this is NOT a good man.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Karambit): Thumb-ring Critically Enhances Punches (at a price)
Blades (Karambit): Slicing Lengthwise Down Limbs and Through Arteries
Deception: Staging a Bathtub Suicide
Interrogation: Appearing Too Informed To Lie To
Intimidation: Replacing Fear of Others With Fear of YOU
Philosophy: Empty Apologizes are Useless and Insulting

Loot: No - well, the ledger, but that's more for Storytelling Purposes
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: V. Scuttler
City/Area: Bolstrum, south of Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Some Foul Language and Violence

Wow. Five parts, and I still have two to go. But we ARE nearing the end!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Climbing: Using all Four Limbs to Brace and Heave
Climbing: Finding Solid Handholds
Detection: Smelling Booze on a Person
Stealth: Breathing Slow, Shallow, and Silent
Tactics: Attacking From Behind
Tactics: Distracting an Enemy With a Thrown Item

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos Culture: Everyone Expects Graft During a Business Venture

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: VI. Blood and Lies
City/Area: Bolstrum, south of Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Some Violence and Foul Language

Y'know, the little monster is rather proud of this... and so am I. One more to go!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Twisting in Mid-Air
Acrobatics: Swinging Legs Up and Onto a Wall
Deception: Forging a Suicide Note
Deception: Removing Evidence from a Fake Suicide, That Would Suggest Otherwise
Medicine: Knowing Where the Ribs Are (and the gaps between them)
Stealth: Stopping a Victim from Crying Out

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: VII. Promotion and Politics
City/Area: Bolstrum, south of Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Some Foul Language

The marathon is OVER! Just an epilogue really, hope you like it.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acting: Adopting a "Middle-Class" Accent
Deception: Traveling Under a False Name
Disguise: Playing the Quiet Bookworm
Intelligence: Just Shut Up and LISTEN
Philosophy: The Dead Don't Hear Us
Politics: Resolving a "Problem" Without Causing a Scandal

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Not Suspected for the Deaths of Yancy, Pelham, and Mary
NPC Vorund: Doesn't Hire Amateurs As Security for His Businesses

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No