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Rejection or reconciliation? [Vincent D'Ordyn]

50th of Vhalar 716

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Silence fell as Vincent’s fist hit his opponent’s jaw and sent him sprawling to the ground. Every part of Sabine was still – her breath, her gaze, the fingers that clutched the fabric of her skirt. She stared at the ring, willing the man to push himself to his feet and finish the job he’d started.

Willing him to finish the job she’d started.

He groaned, twitched, and attempted to rise to his feet. But he was swaying, and anyone who was paying close attention would see that his eyes were foggy and unfocused. He blinked sluggishly and took an unsteady step forward. If Vincent allowed him to stay standing, the man would lunge towards him one last time before being easily put down.

Should Vincent finish the fight, the spectators would erupt into cheers and Sabine would erupt like a volcano. As the man was dragged out of the ring by his friends, Sabine shoved her empty glass into the hand of the woman standing next to her and lifted her skirt to her knees to tie the fabric into a thick knot before pushing her way forward into the fighting ring.

That was the last time she allowed anyone else to fight her battles.

“One more?” It wasn’t a question. The demand was spat across the ring, revealing an ugliness that had come hand-in-hand with her anger.

Surprised laughter echoed around the room – this girl, this server, wanting to fight the strange man who had already beaten two fighters? In a skirt and corset, no less? It was a joke, surely.

How little they knew about Sabine Qe'azour.

“I’m next,” she insisted, balling up her fists and swallowing her uncertainty as she glared at Vincent's big, dumb, handsome face. Fury and stubbornness radiated from her in waves, even as the idiocy of her actions was reiterated by the crowd’s murmurs. “What the hell are you waiting for?”
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Vincent sighed as the man pushed himself to his feet, though he could see in the other man's eyes that he'd already won the fight. The man stepped up and made to strike at Vincent with a lunge, that Vincent easily evaded and with a small push, put the man off balance and on the floor again. "Stay down this time. For your own good." With that the crowd erupted into shout and cheer and calls for more, but Vincent was done, or at least he had thought he was. As he turned to pick up his shirt and armor a voice behind him froze him as surely as the winds of Oscillus.

"One more." Sabine spat the word at the back of his head, her voice filled with so much venom and anger. The crowd around them quited some, whispers here, murmurs there, and the odd chuckle were all that Vincent could really make out. "I'm next," She insisted further as Vincent turned slightly towards her and finally laid eyes on the tempest of rage that was Sabine at that moment. "What the hell are you waiting for?" She demanded.

"I'm not going to fight you Sabine. Not now, not tomorrow, not next season, or next arc, so I concede. The victory is yours." With that Vincent stood motionless and watched her, if she made a move towards him whether aggressive or not Vincent wouldn't move, and should she try to strike him her blow would land true where ever she aimed.

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The bastard wasn’t even going to let her fight him. He couldn’t even let her have that. Aggression mixed with disappointment, and she stepped forward to shove his chest with her palms. “Fight back.”

He didn’t move to retaliate or stop her or even to blink.

Sabine’s face reddened and she shoved him again – hard this time, enough to make him stumble backwards. “Come on. Fight back, you ass!” Don’t do this to me.

Again, there was no response from Vincent. She pressed forward and slammed her palms against him again and again and again. “Please. Just fight back!” Frustrated tears welled up behind her eyes and she shoved his chest one last time, this one weaker than the last. “I trusted you…” The words betrayed the hurt that had been masked by trials of anger. She blinked to keep the tears at bay before turning and half-running out of the ring.

Sabine pushed her way through the crowd, unable to hear anything but the ringing in her ears and the pounding of her heart. She near-sprinted down the stairs, shoving her way past surprised patrons and nearly sending two of them tripping down the steps to their deaths.

“Hey, Lowtown.” Bennett stood at the bottom of the stairs with a mixture of mild concern and amusement filling his features. “You ok?”

She ignored him, pushing away the arm he’d held out to stop her, and instead headed straight for the door.

“Sabine?” Moira's voice rang out over the tavern din. “What are you-“ Her question was cut off as the door swung shut, sending Sabine alone into the night.

A soft breeze hit her face, but did nothing to cool the heat on her cheeks. She ran one hand through her hair as if to rip it from her head, and slammed the other against the wall.

Why had she let him get to her?

Why had she let herself care?

The door opened and light spilled from the tavern as two drunk, giggling women left the establishment. Sabine clenched her jaw and shifted away from the light, moving towards the alley that lay between the Bronze Boar and its neighbour. Once there, she leaned heavily against the wall and sunk to the ground. She undid the knot in her skirt and pulled her legs to her chest, resting her chin against her knees as the tears finally spilled over.

Fuck.
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Vincent watched as Sabine left the ring and ran for the steps down into the tavern. At first he let her, he didn't know what he could say to her that would soothe the hurt, and anger that he had seen in her eyes. Though as she disappeared down the stair, he realized that at that moment, what he had to say didn't really matter. He couldn't simply let her vanish again.

Running back to the pile of stuff he had left in one corner he quickly gathered his gear and ran for the stairs. Not wanting to waste time walking around to the top of the stair, he placed his hand on the railing, and vaulted over the small wall. Landing heavily at the base of the stair, a few feet from Bennett. He had just enough time to see Sabine exit the Bronze Boar before the crowd blocked his sight and Bennett gave him a strange look. "It went that well, huh?" Bennett asked, seeing the look on Vincent's face.

"Other time Bennett." Vincent said, heading for the door, with a small wave to his friend.

"I'll hold you to that Gray."

With that Vincent follow two giggling women who were obviously deeper into the cups than they probably need to be. As he made it outside though, he cast around looking for Sabine, and caught sight of her as she rounded the corner into an alleyway. Taking a quick trill to put his tunic back on Vincent strode over to the corner near the alley and caught sight of her sitting on the ground, he face buried in her knees.

'I've done nothing but brought her more pain.' He thought as he slipped up to the wall just outside the alley and slid down it until he too was in a sitting position. "When I left you on that boat, I did it to save you from the pain that was sure to be present on that battlefield. Though, it seems that in the end, all I did was leave different wounds. I'm sorry for that. Truly, I am. If you want to hit me, if that's what it take to salve the wounds that I have caused, then do so, but don't expect me to fight back. I deserve your ire, and probably worse."

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Her sniffling stilled as his voice floated around the corner like an unwelcome fog - slow and unwavering. She sucked in a shaky breath and wiped at her eyes in a futile attempt to hide evidence of her tears. He didn’t deserve to see her like this, not at her most vulnerable. He’d lost that privilege the moment he had decided to leave her behind, the moment he had decided that he was better off without her.

Sabine’s fingernails cut into her palm as she listened to him explain why he’d left her. The irony was immediately apparent; he’d left to ‘save’ her from harm and, in doing so, had left her bleeding and broken on the ship.

She wanted to cover her ears, to scream, to run as fast and as far away from the alley as she could. What, exactly, was she meant to do with his apologies? Tell him that it was okay, that all was forgiven?

It wasn’t okay.

He wasn’t forgiven.

An ache welled in her chest. It wrapped itself tightly around her heart and wound its way around her ribs before finally settling in the pit of her stomach.

Sabine raised her head and released a bitter laugh. “If hitting you could heal what you did to me, I would have done it the moment I saw you at the docks.” She clutched at a strand of hair and pulled it tight, as if the pain of the moment would release her from the pain in her soul. “You thought you were saving me from the battlefield? Immortals, Vincent, that wasn’t your choice to make!”

Her voice grew louder as tears continued to roll down her cheeks. “You left me. You lied and you left me. You left me alone, and you left me behind.” A long pause. “I was meant to help in the medical tent. The medical tent. I wasn’t even going to fight on the damn battlefield.”

She scowled. “You think I’m a fucking stranger to pain? To wounds? I survived Lowtown, didn’t I? I survived the shadow attack. I survived you leaving.” My father leaving. “That’s what I do. That’s what a Qe’azour does.

“We survive.”

Sabine broke off and glared at the ground. She wasn’t even sure if Vincent was still there, if he was still listening.

“I just… I don’t know how we’ll survive this.”

This time, she wasn't talking about her family.
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As Sabine's words came around the corner Vincent's mouth fell in a hard frown. For a moment he sat silently, looking up at the sky and the pale moon that shone down on them like a ghostly watcher. After what felt like breaks had passed, though maybe only a handful of bit had Vincent finally spoke again. "It's ironic. I betrayed you, and at the same time did my best to keep a promise I made you. Do you remember? When we met at The Olde Inn? I promised to protect you to the best of my ability, to ensure that no harm came to you as best I could. I was torn in two that day on the boat. I wanted to bring you with me, I wanted you by my side, but at the same time I knew if I did there was no guarantee that I could keep that promise. That I could keep harm from coming for you, to be sure that you could return to your family. See them again, be with them, be alive with them. That fear of my possible failure drove me to leave you there. In the end I was a coward."

"Then there was Triedhart itself." Vincent continue after a bit, his eyes pulling away from the moon to stare across the road in front of him, though he wasn't truly looking at the building across from him. He was looking beyond that. Into the memories of the nightmare that had been the Immortal War. "For all the Immortal's that had gathered there, nothing was sacred. The white snows that seemed so pure, stained red and black till I almost forgot snow was supposed to be white. The Naerikk were viscous, they spared none, showed no remorse, and asked for no mercy. No where was safe, ever. Not even the medical tents. Even they were attacked at one point during the fighting." Vincent's hands tightened into fists as the memory of his fight with the invincible beast played out in his mind, the things teeth gleaming like daggers as they reached for his throat. "I...I...even I wasn't prepared for what I found there. "If you must hate me, then hate me. If you curse my name and wish to be done with me, then you only need say so and I will disappear. If that is the cost of making sure that you live, that you can return to your family and embrace them once more, than it is a price I am willing to pay a thousand times over and then some."

You have so many reasons to live. Vincent thought as he draped his arms over his knees and rested his head on his forearm's. I barely had one. A familiar numbness spreading through his core for the first time in seasons.

With that Vincent would fall quite. If Sabine spoke again he would listen. If she stood up and walked away he let her.
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His silence dragged on for what felt like trials, widening the deep chasm that lay between them. It continued to grow until, finally, he spoke. He spoke words of promises, of oaths, of days long since past when they were both in Rynmere.

And then he spoke of Treidhart. Treidhart, where the Immortals’ War had taken place, where Ethelynda had stolen him away to fight a battle at her side, where he had gone after leaving her behind. He spoke of the attacks, the blood, the deaths, the danger, of all the reasons that he was right to go without her.

Sabine couldn’t keep her expression from darkening in horror at his description of the war, at what he had been put through. She could hear the crack in his voice, the way he swallowed back his own dread from those terrible nights. She could almost see his face – pained and broken as he spoke of what he’d been through.

And yet.

“I don’t hate you,” she said. The words were quiet, involuntary, unplanned, and she was surprised to realize that they were true.

She didn’t hate him.

She just wished, desperately, that he had chosen differently.

“I don’t hate you,” she repeated, “but that will never make what you did okay. If protecting me means taking away my power to choose, if it means stealing my freedom, then I don’t want you to protect me ever again.”

I’m not your sister. She bit the words back, knowing almost instinctively the cruelty they would cause.

They sat quietly for a time, long enough for her tears to dry and her expression to grow sombre. There was a part of her that did want to curse Vincent’s name, that did want to be done with him. It was the same part that loathed herself for trusting him, for caring about him, for letting him into her life long enough to hurt her.

But there was another part of her, one that remembered the tentative friendship they’d built in the smugglers’ home. It was the part of her that was still grateful for his Lowtown rescue, his trust, his kindness. It was the part that enjoyed – that craved - the companionship that this strange, private, warrior of a man had offered her.

It was the part of her that missed him.

Sabine shook her head and pushed herself to her feet. Dirt fell from her skirt as she brushed it away. She inhaled softly, as if to brace herself for what she would see, and returned to the street, leaving the alley behind.

He sat around the corner, with his knees pulled to his chest and his back to the wall. His hair was mussed and his face, what little she could see of it, was tight. Moonlight shone down on them both, giving him an unearthly paleness and her a glittering gaze. She looked down at him, her biqaj face filled with a regretful glow.

“There’s never going to be a guarantee, you know.”

You won’t always be able to save me.

Her footsteps sounded against the rough stone as she walked away. Light would spill out of the Bronze Boar as she returned to finish her shift, flooding onto the walkway and rivaling the moon for Vincent’s attention. Though Sabine’s shoulders were still stiff, her body was no longer filled with anger simmering beneath her skin. Instead, she felt tired, as if she had fought a long, arduous battle that had ended in a stalemate.

A battle that, in the end, no one won.
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Why you so mean to poor Vinnie D: It's not like he locked you in a room and absconded away with a giant snake person -the real sexy lady in his life- to go fight the forces of evil.

Your descriptions are impeccable, your ability to immerse the reader into the rage and the insecurity and the spite and the totality of the sheer emotional dynamite that is Sabine Quzar and her volatile relationship with the much prettier Vincent.
I'mnotclickingyourprofileagainjustogetthecorrectspellingofthatsurname.

I admit I laughed everytime one of her feeble attempts to get back at him failed.

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XP: 15/15 (Cannot be used for Magic)

Fame: -4 in total for making a scene several times and general discourtesy to the paying patrons of Rharne (Rood, lady =/)

Loot/Injuries/Overstepping

+15 GN for blue collar services

- 5 GN for placing a bet against a guy with, like, a bazillion points in Unarmed Combat in a brawl.

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Skill Knowledge
Intimidation: How To Glare
Intimidation: Crossed Arms Make You Look Less Friendly
Intimidation: How To Wield Sarcasm As A Weapon
Intimidation: Use Curse Words To Make Your Point
Intimidation: Use Anger To Intimidate
Intimidation: Use Bravado To Intimidate
Persuasion: Use A Promise To Persuade
Persuasion: Sometimes Means Resorting To Begging
Discipline: Bite Your Tongue
Discipline: Conjure Relevant Memories To Control Your Emotions
Detection: Being Intensely Aware Of A Person’s Presence
Gambling: How To Make A Bet
Unarmed Combat: How To Shove Your Opponent
Rhetoric: How To Explain Your Point Of View

Non-skill Knowledges
Location: Earth Quarter
Bronze Boar: Second Floor Is A Fighting Arena
Rharne Holiday: Beer Festival
Race: Naerikk
Naerikk: Vicious
Moira: Head Server At The Bronze Boar
Bennett: Living In Rharne
Bennett: Calls You ‘Lowtown’
Vincent: Good Actor
Vincent: Concerned About Appearances
Vincent: A Skilled Fighter
Vincent: Refuses To Fight You
Vincent: Wants To Protect You
Vincent: Has A Fear Of Failing To Protect You
Vincent: The Story of Treidhart
Vincent: The Reasons He Left You During Vhalar 716
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For any prophet looking at this, I understand that Vincent's actual place in the review queue is a little down the line, but since I was reviewing the exact same thread with Sabine in it on page 31, I figured I'll throw his in too. If there's some breach of reviewer etiquette or whatever you call it, please inform me.

Anyway...

Love you too, Vince, and I'm not just talking about the fact that you took off your shirt (Squee). I sympathized with his choice to leave Sabine behind before Treidhart; he was facing two bad decisions either way he went, and now he's paying the Sabine-scorned price for it.

You were the straight man of the dramedy duo to Sabine's scorn and rage, and it worked beautifully. You blocked her outlet for carthasis at every turn, you drove her to her breakdown in the cage which, in time, led to that final little moment in the last 2 or 3 posts. Lovely descriptions, great thread, I leave satisfied and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Keep the shirt off please.

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XP: 15/15 (Cannot be used for Magic)

Fame: +4 for winning two brawls
-5000 for losing one to a little lady

Loot/Injuries/Overstepping

+15 GN for being muscle for the booze fest

-1 GN to compensate for Sabine's clearly uncontrollable deviance

One split lip that has long healed by now

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Unarmed Combat: Predicting an opponent's actions
Unarmed Combat: Forcing an enemy to keep their guard up
Unarmed Combat: Quick punches
Unarmed Combat: Guard Breaker
Unarmed Combat: Use your legs to get more power
Discipline: Controlling your emotions in a fight
Discipline: Not letting taunts sway your position
Etiquette: Not finishing a fight that’s already won
Etiquette: Not fighting when you're in the wrong
Persuasion: The Truth

Non-Skill Knowledges
Location: Bronze Boar
Location: Bronze Boar Fighting Ring
Rharne: City of brawlers
Rharne Holiday: Beer Festival
Sabine: Feels betrayed
Sabine: Still mad
Sabine: Makes bad deals where you’re concerned
Sabine: Wanted to fight you
Sabine: You made her cry, again.
Sabine: Doesn’t hate you
Bennett: Helped you get a job
Bennett: Thinks Sabine is too much fire for you
Bennett: You owe him a story
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