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Varlum
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Re: Forging Forges Friendships Too


"Well I ought to be honoured to be the first to make the comparison" he teased and grinned. When Varlum had complimented her company he had meant it, she was a pleasure to spend time with. Maybe her future didn't lie in a forge, maybe she'd discover it didn't end up anywhere close to what she expected it to. But more important than any of that was now. What she was doing, throwing herself into everything to try and learn, finding herself. Varlum knew firsthand how hard that could be. Starting as a small-time Smith and being abducted out of Ivorian, kidnapped and beat, having to fight in a way he hadn't before. He'd seen wars up close and personal - but this was different. All of this was different. Yet he had adapted, at least he thought he had.

At her joke of a high tea Varlum couldn't help but smirk. "I wouldn't know, can't say I get invited to those. Something about bad table manners" he teased back, before glancing to the metal being shaped. It wasn't the worst shaping he'd seen, but perhaps the Forge took a little more than just a few hammer swings to get used to. Immortals knew Varlum had been working in one for a long time before ending up where he was now. It had taken a long time for him to get truly used to making his own weapons. Now he could craft with some ease, but it was still a relatively new territory for him. Perhaps the two of them would find more comfort outside of a forge rather than in it.

Once she'd made good progress and pointed out the bumps kept coming, Varlum chuckled. "I think it's safe to say we did enough here" he nodded, gesturing another one of the Smiths over. "Try to recover it if you can, I promise she didn't do too much damage" he teased, taking Elisa outside the forge and to the outside of Storm's Edge, glancing up at the sun. "You got anything else to do today? I'm thinking of resting after some food. If you'd care to join me and can forgive my poor table manners, that is."

"That work for you?"
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Re: Forging Forges Friendships Too

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Varlum:

Knowledge:
Smithing x7
Teaching x3

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Elisabeth:

Knowledge:
Strength x 5
Endurance x 5

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Mostly appropriate to level. I can’t help but wonder about Elisa’s “homework” though, especially considering that she has 0 Smithing. Did she actually research those things in a thread beforehand?
Points: 15
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Comments: I don’t think that there‘s anything snooty about preferring weapons that are of a higher quality. On the contrary, Varlum is quite reasonable in my opinion. As he concluded himself, he can protect more people if he has the best gear. I like in how much detail you described why he wanted to make his own equipment – and why he didn’t “sign” his creations!

I was rather surprised about Elisa’s interest in smithing, but then again, she’s a young woman who is curious about the world and wants to learn as much as possible. The little story about cutters and burners and how Elisa was firmly in the “burner” category amused me. I have to admit, I agree with her. That does not bode well for her … in a forge!

In the end, she handed herself surprisingly well though!

Varlum, you write a smith very well, and you made the lesson entertaining. Elisa was an attentive student. That being said, I enjoyed Varlum’s and Elisa’s banter. They do seem like they will be (or already are?) great friends. I like that they didn’t just talk about smithing, but ended up having a deep conversation. That really added to the thread in my opinion!

The ending was a bit abrupt. It almost felt as if there should have been more. It makes me wonder if there will be another thread after this one …

If that's the case, I look forward to it!

Anyway, enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: Varlum, I would have added “Teaching” to the list of skills used as your PC taught Elisa something about smithing.
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