Careless Whisper

[Eclipse]

The reward is here. Finally.

In a world where darkness seems to consume, you find yourself trying to become the light.

Qit'ria

Pre-Review Checklist:

Requirements	* or X	Comments
Approved Character	*	N/A
Updated Thread List for Previous Season	*	Looks to be in order to me
Updated Skill Point Ledger (Raw, Adjusted,Tread Earned)	* * *	Will need updated with any new stuff but good!
Updated Purse (Seasonal Expense, Wage, Thread Deductions)	* * *	Might want to fix the coding there dear! And double check and make sure everything wage wise is up to date including (Waiting for submission) notes or something. <3
Updated Renown Ledger & thread table	*	Golden

Review Checklist:

Requirements	Fulfilment	Comment+
How many posts	5	Continued on in next thread!
Are all posts greater than 250 words?	Yes	N/A
Is the thread greater than 1500 words?	Yes	N/A

Reviewer's Overview

Woo! This was quite the thread! I love the way that Qit is changing even through out this thread! The feel that Qit gives off now is so much more gentle. I'm in love with it! I'm glad that you asked me to help you with your ideas! This was a great start to this series of event's to try and get the boils off of Qit, and the start of her greatest and maybe currently her most powerful friendship. I already am seeing Qit growing towards having more love for her original homeland. We will just have to see how everything moves forward from here on out! You have been telling me that you're enjoying things, and I'm glad to hear that, I'm sorry I was so slow with this but i wanted to make sure that I didn't just skimp you on anything and made sure that all my focus was here and nowhere else. Oh my goodness though. This journey started out amazing and I expect great things to come out of it not just for Qit, but for Desnind too!

Loot

Exp - 15 (5 of which can be used for magic)
Renown - 10 (Tunawa of Desnind Now call her Sister of the Lori)
Injuries - One less boil! Not really an Injury, but a healing of one huh?!
Minor Cuts and bruises from rocks and razor like leaves. 1-2 trials to heal.
Fatigue(minor) - actions may be slightly slower throughout the course of the rest of this quest line.
Loot - Vines of Lori - as a start the Vines will do as they will, but as Qit's bond with the Lori Spirit grows, so to will her control over the vines.
Zahasa's Feathers - Midnight black feathers will be found in Qit's bag, an apparent gift from either Zahasa or they just got stuck in her bag during the chaos.

Skill Knowledges

Caretaking -A Mother's Gentle Kiss Goodbye
Caretaking - Spirit's also need a little love
Meditation - Sharing with a Spirit
Meditation - Eye Shut, Breath Slow, Mind In Overdrive
Resistance - Pressing against Magic Wind
Resistance - Fighting the urge to vomit with the smell of flame and death
Becoming - Pick and Choose
Discipline - Watching wonder's yet still moving forward
Discipline - Not pulling away from a weird feeling (Turns out it's a gift!)
Caretaking - Splish Splash I Gave You a Bath
Caregiving: Protecting other's children
Animal Husbandry: Safety first, thoughts later

Non-Skill Knowledges

Spirits - Natural and Beautiful Magic
Spirits - Have Their Own Worries
Myself - I've lost a boil!
The Vines of Lori: These vines are a gift from the Induk of the Makubwa Lori. There are a lot of things that it can do, Qit only needs to learn how to use it. It will change it's shape to whatever form that she takes. Right now the only ability she know's that the Vines of Lori has is "The Shell" which is a cocoon like protection form that the Vines of Lori creates and will leave a partial shell as a strong protective fortress. (I suggest making a whole spot for it on your sheet, there will be many more abilities that this thing has to come.. Trust me)
Vines of Lori - The Shell Form
Vines of Lori - Time to Learn how to Control It
Vines of Lori - The warmth of a Hug
Zahasa's Feathers: These are beautiful silky black feather's. May be worth a lot as it is from a rare creature, or there is a possibility of there being an alchemical or decorational use for them.

Let me know if you have any questions! Of if you feel like there's something I missed!