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Enrick
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Profession: Fisherman
Renown: +50
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:54 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Ice Cold Competition
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language
Requested Rewards:
Freya
Skill Knowledge
  • Endurance: Fishing Within The Frigid Cold of Cylus
  • Gambling: Competition Isn’t Justly So Without A Wager
  • Fishing: Ice Fishing, Uses A Saw To Cut The Hole
  • Fishing: Using Blood To Bait The Water
  • Fishing: Tire The Fish Out To Help Catch It
  • Fishing: When It’s A Way of Life, You Learn Tricks Quickly
  • Fishing: Kick A Fish In The Head To Humanely Kill Them
  • Gambling: Raise The Stakes When You Have A Chance To Win
  • Gambling: Don’t Set Yourself Up To Lose
  • Gambling: There’s No Such Thing As Luck
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Enrick: A Biqaj
  • Enrick: Doesn’t Really Know Rakahi
  • Enrick: Is A Good Fisherman
  • Enrick: Hangs Around Humorous People
Enrick
Skill Knowledge
  • Fishing: Competition Between Fishermen
  • Endurance: Fishing Within The Frigid Cold of Cylus
  • Strength: Breaking Ice With An Ice-Pick
  • Fishing: Ice Fishing in the Cold
  • Rhetoric: Giving and Receiving Verbal Teases
  • Fishing: Using Blood To Bait The Water
  • Fishing: Picking Up New Tricks
  • Fishing: Conditioning To Your Rods
  • Fishing: Checking Your Line Often
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Personal: Competitive Fishing With Mates
  • Freya (Aphina): A Fine Fishing Partner
  • Freya (Aphina): Quite the Gambler
  • Freya (Aphina): Is Biqaj as Well
  • Freya (Aphina): Means Well Usually
  • Freya (Aphina): Is A Sailor
Loot: 200 GN to split between Enrick and Freya (100 GN each)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: +5 Renown for hustling Enrick’s friends in a competition and coming out on top as a better fisherman.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Enrick
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Profession: Fisherman
Renown: +50
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 7:14 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Seaside Fishing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language
Requested Rewards:
Qit
Skill Knowledge
  • Acrobatics: Leaping from one leg
  • Acrobatics: Leaping out of the water
  • Acrobatics: Jumping from a ship's rail
  • Acrobatics: Vertical leaps are harder than horizontal
  • Climbing: Pulling yourself up and over a rail
  • Endurance: The sting of ocean water on eyes
  • Hunting: Irrawaddie Kill
  • Polearms (Spear): Repeated thrusts
  • Stealth: Swimming below the surface
  • Swimming: Using your momentum from a jump to go forward
  • Swimming: Treading water
  • Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Haymaker punch
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Enrick: The fisherman with a horrid accent
  • Enrick: Broke my harpoon
Enrick
Skill Knowledge
  • Sailing: Tying a Sailor's Knot
  • Sailing: Loading Up for Trips
  • Negotiation: Setting Terms for Tourists
  • Sailing: Ferrying Passengers
  • Research: Gathering Intel on Creatures
  • Sailing: Utilizing Wind Currents
  • Sailing: Utilizing Water Currents
  • Navigation: Using the Sun to Determine East or West
  • Acrobatics: Vaulting
  • Swimming: Using Your Arms and Legs
  • Swimming: Time Your Breaths Properly
  • Endurance: Swimming In Open Waters
  • Endurance: Taking Hits From A Woman
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Personal: Enrick the Ferryman?
  • Fauna: The Irrawaddie
  • Fauna: Irrawaddie Are Both Playful and Gentle
  • Qit'ria: A Foreign Huntress
  • Qit'ria: Speaks Poor Common
  • Qit'ria: Hired You as a Ferryman
  • Qit'ria: Enjoys Killing Things
  • Qit'ria: Is Sev'ryn Also
  • Qit'ria: Punched You In Anger
  • Fauna: The Sea Wolf
Loot:
Qit
Four 3 Harpoons
-35 Gold Nels
Enrick
+10 Gold Nels
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: +5 Renown ferrying (Enrick) and +5 for the hunt (Qit)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Enrick
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Profession: Fisherman
Renown: +50
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 10:16 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Things That Don't Exist
City/Area: Scalvoris (Almund)
Notes/Warnings: Nothing usual/unusual, friendly banter is all. :)
Requested Rewards:
Nalin
Skill Knowledge
  • Socialization: Taking their word for it.
  • Socialization: Inviting them in.
  • Socialization: Actions as well as words.
  • Discipline: Trying to tell her no
  • Discipline: Struggling to not just ... and ignore the door
  • Discipline: Getting the door instead of what you want to do
  • Discipline: Maybe it's okay to give in a little?
  • Caregiving: Sometimes, they can't have it their way
  • Etiquette: Making sure the guest is well and cared for
  • Etiquette: Apologizing for the rudeness of family members
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Lavender: More clingy than need be
  • Lavender:Wants more time with me
  • Lavender: Doesn't really like Enrick
  • Lavender: Maybe she just doesn't want to stink like fish?
  • Enrick: Tried to Sign, was an epic failure
  • Enrick: Doesn't think he's nice
  • Enrick: Had a blackout?
  • Enrick: Came to visit!
  • Enrick: Fishes!
  • Enrick: Offered Lav a job!
Enrick
Skill Knowledge
  • Etiquette: Remembering Your Please and Thank You
  • Etiquette: Manners in the Comfort of Other's Home
  • Discipline: Respect Other People's Privacy
  • Discipline: Kindness Goes A Long Way
  • Persuasion: Offering An Opportunity When You Can
  • Linguistics: Terrible With Gestured Common
  • Linguistics: Memorizing Signed Gestures
  • Linguistics: Learning How To Gesture Common
Non-Skill Knowledge
  • Nalin's Home: The Marit Residence
  • Lavender: Formally Introduced
  • Lavender: Spunky In Her Own Right
  • Nalin: Tries A Lot
  • Personal: Making An Effort To Help Others
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Graders discression
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Sephira
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Posts: 372
Joined: Fri Dec 22, 2017 6:40 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Flame Element
Renown: +230
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:16 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Faldrass]Forever Reaching For
City/Area: Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Nalin

6 posts total = 11 knowledges
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: A ball to the gut
Caregiving: Giving someone with special needs a chance for normality
Caregiving: Letting them know you care
Caregiving: Play with them, even if they aren't yours to take care of!
Strength: GOOOAL..EEEE
Teaching: Helping Adjust hands to make signs correct
Teaching: Try again, but watch me first
Socialization: All languages matter
Socialization: Including others
Socialization: The "Shut up" Glare
Seduction: Knowing just how to tease (With words)

Non-skill Knowledge:
Lavender: I can still surprise her
Lavender: Likes people trying to understand her
Lavender: Pouty as always
Lavender: Might not really hate Sephira After all
Sephira:cute kid
Sephira: All alone
Sephira: Makes up games
Sephira: Her ball
Sephira: Want's to play
Sephira: Want's to learn Sign
Sephira: Wants to invite Lavender to have fun
Sephira: Has a great smile!
Sephira: "You Speak funny"
Faldrass: A boat ride away
Faldrass: The sandy beach

Sephira

6 posts total = 11 knowledges
Acrobatics: Kicking a ball across the beach
Detection: Noticing that Lavender does not speak
Detection: Noticing Lavender's dark eyes
Detection: Watching siblings have an unspoken conversation
Etiquette: Putting your best foot forward with an introduction
Etiquette: Asking others to join in the fun
Linguistics: Common Sign: Talking with your hands
Logistics: Defining the rules of the game
Socialization: Asking for a stranger to kick the ball back
Strength: Kicking the ball through the goal
Strength: Lifting the ball

Non-Skill Knowledge
Lavender: As stubborn as they come
Lavender: Pale skin and dark eyes
Lavender: Does not like sharing her big brother
Nalin: An excellent big brother
Nalin: Patient with his sister
Nalin: Kindhearted




Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Not really
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Ivanthe
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Posts: 84
Joined: Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:40 am
Race: Human
Renown: +35
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 8:20 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Ratfinder
City/Area: Etzos and just outside the gates
Notes/Warnings: none. Sneak but no stab.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Empathy: using surprise to your advantage
  • Empathy: the truth is in the feeling
  • Empathy: the color of horror
  • Stealth: keeping your distance
  • Stealth: learning by watching
  • Stealth: being small helps
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: yes
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Tio Silver
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Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:04 pm
Race: Yludih
Profession: Pirate Captain
Renown: +392
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Mon Apr 16, 2018 10:00 pm

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: My Apprentice
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Running an initiation
Necromancy: Animating a thrall without controlling it
Necromancy: Passing the spark to another
Teaching: Running a necromancy initiation
Teaching: Seeing what your student could become one day
Teaching: Balancing pride with caution

Prophecies: Tio's Prophecy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy
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Patrick
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Posts: 1119
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:39 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Trouble
Renown: +200
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 8:36 am

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: When the Night Falls
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Language, Dark themes
Requested Rewards:
None - This is a Sessfiend Transformation
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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OOC Note: As of Ashan 717 Patrick has been cursed with Sesser, therefore once a season he's at risk of turning into a Sessfiend. Should the occassion actually come to occur, PC's are warned to consider the extreme risk of injury and even their life; before proceeding to participate in the event. Looking forward to the potential plots and threads to come!
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Padraig
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Posts: 945
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:22 pm
Race: Human
Renown: +544
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 2:15 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: We'll give you freedom from the human trap
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A bit grim in places.
Requested Rewards:


Faith


Knowledge: (9 posts = 14 knowledge)
Intelligence: Gather as much information from where you are before moving on
Investigation: Understanding what has been done can lead to understanding why
Blades: Sword: Deflecting a blow to allow another to strike
Blades: Sword: Fighting cooperatively requires specific focus
Blades: Sword: How to break an impasse of three
Zuuda Mark: Ectoplasmic Blood: Useful in a tight spot
Zuuda Mark: Ectoplasmic Blood: Can drain you of blood too quickly
Zuuda Mark: Sever the Imposter: Works well against soulstones
Zuuda Mark: Sever the imposter: Can distract, even if that's all it does




Loot: 1 x soulstone (Alexander). Collection of books and journals on necromancy and Famula, detailing experiments on twins and other vile-ness. Various lab equipment etc.
Also - Faith is using this story as a means of gaining her Renown Tier Rewards. This means that the glowing orb, the two rings and the cooking pot are those. They are detailed in my CS and approved via the PSF.
Injuries/Overstepping: Tiredness, exhaustion from blood loss, over using of mark ability, a number of minor cuts and bruises etc.
Renown: She's at maximum.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no



Padraig


Knowledge:
Alchemy: Crafting on the fly can lead to unexpected results
Blades: Longsword: Sweeping arc to take off the head
Blades: Longsword: Use combined tactics to force your opponent's hand
Blades: Longsword: How to break an impasse of three
Blades: Longsword: Decapitation strikes require enormous strength
Blades: Longsword: Using your strength to push through an attack
Discipline: Not allowing fear or panic to show
Discipline: Use shouting to focus yourself
Discipline: Continuing to fight while in pain
Endurance: A sword through the shoulder
Endurance: Not giving in to pain
Endurance: Your attacker twisting a blade inside you
Endurance: Blood loss
Strength: Putting all your strength into an attack
Strength: Fighting an opponent who has supernatural strength.

Loot: Padraig is using this story as a means of gaining his Renown Tier Reward. This means the goggles. They are detailed in my CS and approved via the PSF.
Injuries/Overstepping: Puncture wound through the shoulder - will leave a scar. But he knows a good medic. Cuts and bruises, blood loss etc.
Renown: Yes please - this is a major impact thread in Scalvoris.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Aegis to Review as this is a major impact thread in Scalvoris
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Kasoria
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Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Human
Profession: Problem-solver
Renown: +215
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 8:15 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: III. Vici
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Throwing Knives): Backhanded Throw
Blades (Throwing Knives): Throwing Two Knives at Once
Cooking: Preserving Food in a Sealed Vase
Discipline: Training for Muscle Memory
Discipline: Sharpening Your Weapons After Use
Deception: Conceal Your Weapons As Much As You Can


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Sinnammyn
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Posts: 152
Joined: Sun May 22, 2016 1:04 am
Race: Tunawa
Renown: 0
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 10:24 pm

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: With an outstretched hand.
City/Area: Venora
Notes/Warnings: Unfinished/Abandoned
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: 3 posts= 8 knowledges
Skill Knowledges
Socialization: Visual Queues as well as verbal.
Mount(Flying): Stubborn Mounts, just need a few extra directions
Navigation: Trying to find a place you've been before in perpetual night.
Navigation: Flying makes things just a tad easier.
Animal Husbandry: Praising for a good job even when frustrated with time taken
Animal Training: Pushing just a bit further to get the result you need
Animal Training: Well deserved rest.
Psychology: Non-Verbal Queue. Bijaq. Changes in the eyes.

Non-skill Knowledges
Oliver: Allowing me to stay with him
Oliver: Remembers me
Oliver: Was injured.
Oliver: Adding more pain.
Oliver: Doesn't see how strong he is.
Oliver: Doesn't falter but...
Oliver: Kind, but hiding something
Avery: Total Brat in winter.

Loot: Temporary new home?
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probably not.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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