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Mel'drin
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Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
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Basics

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Name: Mel'drin

Race: Sev'ryn

Date of Birth: Zi'da 42nd, Arc 700

Marks: None

Factions: None

Languages Spoken: Fluent = Common. Broken = Xanthea


Appearance

Mel'drin is a young man in his early twenties, standing at 5 feet and 7 inches tall with a muscular build that speaks to his years of hard labor as a field slave. His hair is pitch black, framing his sharp features, and his dark brown eyes seem to hold a depth of experience far beyond his years. His tan skin is a testament to the long hours spent toiling under the sun, and the stark white scars across his body are a reminder of his former masters. As a consequence of his bond with Vespera, his familiar, a tattoo depicting a long black snake curls around his right bicep and shoulder.

Despite his strength and resilience, Mel'drin carries himself with a tense energy, always ready to move at a moment's notice. He keeps his head low and blends into the crowd, perhaps a habit learned from years of hiding and avoiding the scrutiny of those in power. Yet, there is a quiet determination in his gaze, hinting at a fierce spirit that refuses to be broken by the injustices he has faced.


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Mel'drin
Approved Character
Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

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Miscellaneous

Events

Personality


Personality

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Ambitious, Analytical, Loyal

Mel'drin is a driven and ambitious individual, motivated by his aversion to feeling weak or powerless. He's fiercely independent and hates the idea of being at someone else's mercy. This desire for autonomy fuels his thirst for power, which he pursues with a calculating and strategic mindset. He's intelligent, quick-witted, and knows when to bide his time and when to strike, making him a formidable adversary to those who are fooled by his gruff facade.

Mel'drin's past experiences have instilled in him a deep-seated hatred for those who think themselves above the rest. He sees the world as divided into elites and everyone else, and his burning hatred for the former fuels him, even if it drives him to cruelty. Perhaps cruelty is exactly what it takes to survive.

Underneath his tough exterior, Mel'drin is fiercely loyal to those he cares about. Though he's loath to admit it, he has a strong sense of morality that drives him to stand up for the downtrodden.

Vengeful, Stubborn, Perfectionist


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Mel'drin
Approved Character
Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
Character Sheet
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Wealth Tier: Tier 5

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History


History

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Mel'drin was born into chains, a life of forced labor in the Eternal Empire.

No, not chains. The masters of the Empire used rope instead. One of the many "kindnesses" they thought to extend to those they saw as property. They never seemed to have the idea to free them though. They would pat themselves on the back at how civilized they were, but a slave is a slave all the same and Mel'drin had the scars to prove it.

Mel'drin learned to play their game. Look meek, keep your head down. But they never really broke him.

The gods did deign to give him some blessings: his family, and his community. They looked after one another, and were fiercely loyal. They were instrumental in giving him the chance to find his familiar (See Full Familiar Story Below). So he settled into a sort of peace. Tools get broken here or there, something foul makes its way into the masters' food, but nothing too blatant or frequent. It was best for everyone this way.

But peace is such a fleeting thing. One day, a stranger arrived at the fields in the middle of the night, seeking shelter with the slaves there. They took him in, mostly to hear news of the outside world. His name was Lodur, and he set about staying with them for a time. As he worked alongside Mel'drin and the other slaves, this newcomer spoke of freedom and the possibility of escaping the Empire's grasp. Mel'drin, who had always felt a burning desire to be free, was hopeful about the idea. However, the other slaves were either afraid or broken. Too disillusioned to believe in something so brazen as freedom.

Mel'drin believed. Lodur took a special interest in him, recognizing the passion behind the young mans eyes. Lodur revealed to Mel'drin that he possessed a rare gift, the magic of Attunement and Transmutation. Lodur had learned these skills during his time in the Empire, and he offered to teach them to Mel'drin. The young slave was eager to learn. This could be his ticket to freedom, a way to make his own destiny. He seized on it.

The first step; however, would require a ritual. One for every magic attached to his soul. Lodur explained the process would be dangerous, but Mel'drin continued, unperturbed. Attunement would be first. The magic of listening with ones soul. In order to be initiated, he would need to understand a strange melody. Lodur took them to a secluded area, insisting that they be undisturbed. Alone, Lodur sang the melody, one that Mel'drin can now sparsely remember. He did however, remember the sensation. As the melody became clear in his mind, his whole being was suddenly changed. It was ecstasy, and it was pain. Once it was done, he was a mage.

The new mage was given time to recover and train before the next initiation was attempted. This is where the real danger lied. Lodur explained to process fully before they began, but it did little to prepare the Sev'ryn. With a final confirmation from Mel'drin, Lodur launched a powerful blast of ether at he fledgling mage, piercing into his soul. Then came the pain. His body was being violently pulled away from the world, and he had to do everything he could to retain his form. It was an agonizing process, but he managed to fuse with the spark that had been injected into him.

Finally, the day came when Lodur and Mel'drin attempted to put their plans into action. They decided to kill their masters' family and flee. However, their plan went awry, and Mel'drin found himself faced with a difficult decision. He could either stay and fight, possibly dying in the process, or he could run away and leave everyone else behind. In the end, he chose the latter, knowing that he would never find true freedom if he was dead.

Though racked with guilt and on the run, Mel'drin is ready to start his journey. This time, on his own terms.


Familiar Story
A Serpent by the Flower
Story here

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Mel'drin
Approved Character
Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
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Wealth Tier: Tier 5

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Marks


Marks

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No Marks!

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Mel'drin
Approved Character
Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

Possessions


Possessions

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Inventory

Tier 3:
- Grossularite Garnet Pendant, a gift from his mother (Heirloom)

Tier 5:
- 2x Spear: Average
- 4x practical clothing, suitable for different weather (Hot, Cold, Outdoor-wear like a Cloak and gloves): Average
- Keeps some preserved food on him, just in case (salted meat): Average
- Studded Leather Armor: Good


Housing

A small, 3 room house on the outskirts of Scalvoris Town. Nothing fancy.


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Mel'drin
Approved Character
Posts: 37
Joined: Tue Mar 28, 2023 7:19 pm
Race: Sev'ryn
Renown: 15
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

Familiar Story




Magic
A quest for power

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Transmutation
Mutations
  • Witchmark - A Fire Lighted
    Though too dim to be seen in the light, the scars across Mel'drins body glow and flicker as if a white flame burns within him.
  • Competent - Dragons Breath
    The Dragon has a penchant for the destructive aspects of transmutation, particularly Corrosion. The Dragon urges Mel'drin to unleash this technique. If he fails to resist and uses Corrosion, he is met with euphoria and a rush of focus that allows him to concentrate on casting for a short time. If the mage is not careful, this could easily lead to an overuse of the technique, addiction, and overstepping. If he wants to have a chance to resist The Dragons influence, the mage will need to increase his Meditation or Discipline. Using Corrosion will let the urge abate for a time as well, but The Dragon will eventually hunger for more.

    Cosmetically, Mel'drins ether takes on the form and movement of an ephemeral white flame. This is most evident to those who can see or sense ether directly, but also becomes apparent with techniques just as Brilliance and Ether Missile where his ether becomes visible to the naked eye.

Attunement
Mutations
  • Witchmark - Puzzle Eyes
    If one looks closely, they will find that Mel'drins pupils and sclera are divided by a myriad of proportionate lines, almost as though the eyes were deconstructed and placed back together. These ‘Puzzle Eyes’ are the only way to identify an Attuner without magic or their own admission.

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