The Founding of Shellknight Lodge

41st of Ymiden 721

A small island with an active volcano, Faldrass is the home to Saoire's school and to the Faldrass Induk.

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Re: The Founding of Shellknight Lodge

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Kisaik:

Knowledge:
Woodworking: x5
Meditation: x2
Alchemy: Using alchemy in home improvement.
Alchemy: Mixing a fire-resistant, fire-warded coat of paint.
Alchemy: Applying fire-resistant paint to an already fire-resistant wooden roof panel.

Loot: A fire resistant roof for Shellknight Lodge. Kisaik is now Song-Forged.
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Vega:

Knowledge:
Engineering x 3
Woodworking x 3

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: A headache.
Renown: 5
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
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Comments: I like that Kisaik and his associates aren’t just building a zoo, but an actual home for turtles. I enjoyed reading about all the things that went into planning that, and I found the way that Kisaik uses alchemy interesting. It’s a bit less scientific than a certain professor’s and more adventurous – and highly creative and effective. Kisaik has become quite a skilled alchemist. I love that he pulled the tools that he needed out of his hat!

Vega and Kisaik get along so well. I really liked the way they interacted with each other. It’s obvious that they are friends and trust each other. Their dialogue was so entertaining that I smiled pretty much throughout the thread. Reading Kisaik and Vega made me happy. There was a perfect mixture of crafting as well as more personal topics!

I liked the way Vega compared the worms in Hopetoun Hole to little stars, and I was quite surprised when she mentioned the Forged to Kisaik. Her diri made me laugh. Jeff is such a funny creature! I agree that he’s totes emosh, but he’s entertaining to read, and I understand why Vega is fond of him. I love that he kind of looks like a giraffe, by the way!

I’ve never read a Forged initiation before, at least not one that was done by a PC. I like how you described the process, Vega. The vow that Kisaik made to Sweetwine was heartfelt and passionate. You did a great job at describing that impactful event in my opinion.

I also appreciated the mention of Devin and his benches. Reading that was a pleasant surprise!

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